Run: 2026-10-07-01M4AVKP05YQGAKSZE8G9T9NKM

Run Details

Duration:
4m 18s
Cost:
$0.037109
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven's Nest smelled of stale hops and antique wood polish. Green neon seeped through the front windows, casting a sickly glow over the mahogany bar and the walls papered with yellowed maps and black-and-white photographs of strangers. A saxophone wept from the speaker in the corner, repeating a looped phrase that had ended its life decades ago. Rory sat on a chrome stool behind the bar, though she did not work the taps tonight. She wore a faded Golden Empress polo shirt, sleeves rolled to her elbows, and jeans soft at the knees. Her black hair hung straight and heavy to her shoulders, framing a face that had lost its softness. She held a pint glass in one hand and a rag in the other, turning them over and over, though the glass gleamed spotless under the dim light. The crescent scar on her left wrist caught the neon when she shifted her weight. The door opened. Wind rushed in, carrying rain and the scent of wet pavement. Rory did not look up. She heard the bell chime, tinny and bright above the music. Then came the click of heels on the floorboards, slow, deliberate. Eva stood in the doorway, water dripping from the hem of her camel coat onto the welcome mat. She had changed. Rory saw it in the way Eva held her shoulders, pulled up and tight, as if bracing against a wind that blew only for her. Her hair, once a wild cascade of auburn that tumbled past her shoulders, was scraped back into a severe bun that exposed the sharp angles of her face. She wore cracked leather gloves and carried a canvas tote that sagged with the weight of paperbacks. But it was her eyes that struck Rory—hazel, narrowed now, guarded, carrying a weight that had not been there in Cardiff. "Rory." Rory set the glass down. The rag hung limp. She turned on the stool, swiveling to face the doorway. "It's Laila." Eva's mouth twitched. She closed the door behind her, the latch clicking shut. She walked to the bar, her boots thudding against the wood. She stopped two feet away, close enough that Rory smelled peppermint and something underneath, metallic and sad. "Three years. Three years since you boarded that train. Three years of silence." Rory touched her wrist, her thumb finding the pale crescent. "I could not call. Not without risk." Eva laughed, a sound like breaking glass. She leaned forward, elbows on the polished wood. Patrons at the corner tables glanced over, then looked away, sensing a private war. Silas, in the far corner, stopped wiping the whiskey bottles. His hazel eyes, pale and sharp, tracked the exchange. He reached for a tumbler, his fingers brushing the silver signet ring on his right hand, but he did not move to intervene. "You left me on that platform. You left your books. Your graduation gown. You left everything except your pride and your bruises." "I left because I had to. Evan—" "Evan is a footnote." Eva's voice rose, then she caught herself, glancing at Silas. She lowered it, but the words hung sharp and jagged in the air. "I waited for you. I waited for months. I told everyone you would return. I told your mother you would return. I was twenty-two and lying to your parents because I was too stupid to see you were never coming back." Rory picked up the glass. She turned it in her hands, watching light refract through the crystal. "I know." Eva reached into her coat pocket. Her gloved fingers were clumsy, stiff from the cold. She pulled out a photograph, creased at the edges, soft with handling. She slid it across the bar. It landed in front of Rory with a soft slap. Rory looked down. Cardiff University, summer, two girls in mortarboards and gowns, arms linked, grinning at the camera. Eva's smile had been wide, gap-toothed, unguarded. Rory's had been tight, her eyes already searching for the exit. "Evan came into the shop last week. The bookshop on City Road. He asked if I had heard from you. Said you owed him money. Said you had stolen something." Rory's fingers curled around the glass. The scar on her wrist turned white. "He lies." Eva looked up. Her eyes glistened, but she did not blink. "But you do not care, do you? You do not care what he says about you now. You have built a new life. Laila. Delivery driver. Living above a spy's bar." She spat the last word, or it was the shape of it. "You have become someone I do not recognise." Rory set the glass down. It rang against the wood. "I had to become someone else. Aurora was going to marry him. Aurora was going to study law and pretend everything was fine. Laila gets to breathe." Silas moved. He limped across the floor, his left leg dragging, the knee stiff from old injury. He set two tumblers of whiskey on the bar between them. The amber liquid caught the green neon light. "On the house. For old friends." Eva did not look at him. "We are not friends, Silas. We were children playing at being adults." Silas nodded at the photograph. "And now you are women playing at being strangers. Sit. Talk. Yell. I have thick walls and a licence that covers emotional disturbances." Eva sat. The stool creaked under her weight. She picked up the whiskey, swirled it, set it down without drinking. She looked at Silas. "You knew her. Before. In Cardiff." Silas poured himself a drink, watching Rory over the rim of his glass. "Not before. After. She came here broken. I gave her a room and a job. She gave me peace, of a sort." He looked at Rory, at the scar on her wrist, at the way she held herself rigid, like a wire pulled too tight. "She has changed, Eva. You should see that. Not the name. The marrow of her." Eva studied Rory. She looked at the black hair, the flat blue eyes, the delivery polo, the way she stood behind the bar as if it were a wall between her and the world. "I see it. She has hollowed out. She used to fill a room. Now she barely takes up space." Rory's voice was small, uncertain. "I take up space." Eva was quiet for a long moment. The jazz record skipped, repeating the same mournful saxophone note. Rain lashed the windows. Outside, the green neon sign flickered, buzzing, casting shadows that danced across the maps on the wall. "I married David. The accountant. We have a flat in Cathays. A cat. We eat in silence. I think about you every day. I wonder if you are dead. I wonder if you ever think about the girl you left behind." Rory looked at the photograph. At Eva, young and fierce and certain. She thought of the night she left, the train pulling away from Cardiff Central, Eva's hand waving until the platform disappeared into the dark. She thought of the years since, the silence, the guilt that had calcified into something like scar tissue. "I think about it. I am sorry. For not writing. For disappearing." Eva stood, pulling her coat tighter around her shoulders. She picked up the photograph, folded it, and put it back in her pocket. "Sorry does not bring my friend back. I should go. David expects me. Dinner at seven. We sit in silence." Rory started to speak. "Do not." Eva held up a gloved hand. She did not look at Rory. She looked at the bar, at the empty stool, at the life she had built while Rory had built hers elsewhere. "The scar. You still have it." Rory touched her wrist. The crescent was smooth, pale, a permanent reminder. "Yeah." Eva walked toward the door. "Keep it. Remember what you survived. And who you left behind." The bell chimed. Eva stepped out into the rain, the green neon light washing over her as she closed the door behind her. The warmth rushed out, replaced by a cold draft. Silas poured himself another drink. He looked at Rory, at the empty space beside her, at the photograph-shaped absence where Eva had sat. "She has changed too. You both have. The question is whether you can meet in the middle before the ground shifts again." Rory picked up the rag. She started wiping the bar, though the spot gleamed clean. She wiped harder, her thumb pressing into the scar on her wrist. "I do not know how." Silas sighed. "We will figure it out." But he sounded tired, and Rory did not believe him. She kept wiping. The neon buzzed. The rain fell.
created_at"2026-10-07T09:37:43.44Z" 10/7/2026, 9:37:43 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.156
leniency0.313
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1462
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.96% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1462
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"weight"
count4
1
word"silence"
count4
2
word"crystal"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"reminder"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"silence"
2"crystal"
3"flickered"
4"reminder"
5"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences98
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences125
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1461
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
28.88% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions61
wordCount1032
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.42
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Golden1
Empress1
Eva19
Rory25
Cardiff3
Silas8
University1
Central1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
4"Silas"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore0.289
windowScore0.333
77.54% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if bracing against a wind that blew only for her"
1"something like scar tissue"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1461
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences125
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean25.19
std27.97
cv1.11
sampleLengths
0155
141
2112
31
419
52
641
713
810
97
1071
1122
127
1368
1417
152
1679
1730
1813
192
2011
2151
2210
2327
2436
256
266
2712
285
2923
3024
316
3213
3360
3434
3519
365
374
3838
3941
4054
4112
4223
4320
444
4541
4612
471
485
4911
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"was scraped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs183
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences125
ratio0.008
matches
0"But it was her eyes that struck Rory—hazel, narrowed now, guarded, carrying a weight that had not been there in Cardiff."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1037
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.01639344262295082
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0019286403085824494
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences125
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences125
mean11.69
std9.02
cv0.772
sampleLengths
011
127
220
317
419
518
628
715
83
911
105
1111
1211
1318
143
1525
1628
1717
1821
191
205
214
2210
232
243
2510
2611
2717
2813
2910
307
317
328
3314
3410
359
3623
3722
387
3914
4013
4141
425
4312
442
456
469
4712
486
4910
41.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.248
totalSentences125
uniqueOpeners31
35.09% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"Then came the click of"
ratio0.011
60.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences95
matches
0"She wore a faded Golden"
1"Her black hair hung straight"
2"She held a pint glass"
3"She heard the bell chime,"
4"She had changed."
5"Her hair, once a wild"
6"She wore cracked leather gloves"
7"She turned on the stool,"
8"She closed the door behind"
9"She walked to the bar,"
10"She stopped two feet away,"
11"She leaned forward, elbows on"
12"His hazel eyes, pale and"
13"He reached for a tumbler,"
14"She lowered it, but the"
15"She turned it in her"
16"Her gloved fingers were clumsy,"
17"She pulled out a photograph,"
18"She slid it across the"
19"It landed in front of"
ratio0.4
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount89
totalSentences95
matches
0"The Raven's Nest smelled of"
1"A saxophone wept from the"
2"Rory sat on a chrome"
3"She wore a faded Golden"
4"Her black hair hung straight"
5"She held a pint glass"
6"The crescent scar on her"
7"The door opened."
8"Wind rushed in, carrying rain"
9"Rory did not look up."
10"She heard the bell chime,"
11"Eva stood in the doorway,"
12"She had changed."
13"Rory saw it in the"
14"Her hair, once a wild"
15"She wore cracked leather gloves"
16"Rory set the glass down."
17"The rag hung limp."
18"She turned on the stool,"
19"Eva's mouth twitched."
ratio0.937
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
ratio0
63.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Her black hair hung straight and heavy to her shoulders, framing a face that had lost its softness."
1"Rory saw it in the way Eva held her shoulders, pulled up and tight, as if bracing against a wind that blew only for her."
2"Her hair, once a wild cascade of auburn that tumbled past her shoulders, was scraped back into a severe bun that exposed the sharp angles of her face."
3"Outside, the green neon sign flickered, buzzing, casting shadows that danced across the maps on the wall."
4"She thought of the night she left, the train pulling away from Cardiff Central, Eva's hand waving until the platform disappeared into the dark."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She spat (spit)"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.031
leniency0.063
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.063
82.1717%