Run: 2026-10-07-01M4AVMBSHEJ5Y0EWHVGZDD3JY

Run Details

Duration:
25.0s
Cost:
$0.021617
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came just as Rory was wiping grease from her hands onto her already-stained jeans. Three sharp raps, then a pause, then two more. A rhythm she knew. She froze, the dishcloth still pressed between her fingers. Ptolemy, the tabby, lifted his head from the armchair, ears twitching. Another knock. Patient. Insistent. Rory exhaled through her nose, tossed the cloth onto the counter, and moved to the door. The three deadbolts gleamed under the dim hallway light as she undid them one by one, the metal cool against her fingertips. She didn’t bother with the chain. The door swung open. Lucien stood there, impeccable as ever in a charcoal suit, the collar of his shirt crisp against his throat. The heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—fixed on her with an intensity that made her pulse jump. His cane, ivory handle glinting, rested against his shoulder like an afterthought. “You look like you’ve been wrestling with a deep fryer,” he said. Rory leaned against the doorframe, arms crossed. “And you look like you’ve been avoiding my calls.” A flicker of something—amusement, maybe—touched his mouth. “I’ve been busy.” “Too busy to answer a single text?” He shifted his weight, the cane tapping once against the floor. “I needed time.” “Time.” She let the word hang between them, bitter as old coffee. “Funny. I needed answers.” Ptolemy chose that moment to slink between her legs, tail brushing her ankle. He eyed Lucien with the suspicion of a creature who had seen too many humans come and go. Lucien’s gaze dropped to the cat, then back to her. “May I come in?” Rory stepped aside, but not far. He had to brush past her to enter, close enough that she caught the scent of him—bergamot and something darker, like gunpowder and old books. The flat was small; his presence made it smaller. He took in the chaos—the stacks of books, the scrolls pinned to the walls with knives, the takeaway containers littering the coffee table. “Still living like a scholar with a hoarding problem, I see.” “Still dressing like a man who irons his socks, I see.” That earned her the ghost of a smile. He moved to the centre of the room, as if testing the space, then turned to face her. The light from the single lamp cast shadows under his cheekbones. “You left,” she said. “You knew why.” “Did I?” She crossed her arms tighter. “Because last I checked, people who care about each other don’t just vanish into the night without a word.” His jaw tightened. “It wasn’t that simple.” “Then explain it to me.” She gestured to the armchair, the only seat not buried under papers. “Or are you here to give me more of your usual cryptic bullshit?” Lucien lowered himself into the chair with the grace of a man who had spent a lifetime perfecting the art of sitting. Ptolemy hopped onto the windowsill, watching them both with unblinking yellow eyes. “I had to tie up loose ends,” he said. “People were asking questions. Dangerous ones.” “And you couldn’t tell me that?” “Would you have let me go if I had?” She opened her mouth, then closed it. The truth was, she wouldn’t have. She would’ve argued, would’ve found a way to keep him there, consequences be damned. “No,” she admitted. “Exactly.” He leaned forward, elbows on his knees, the cane now resting between his palms. “I wasn’t about to let you walk into that fire with me.” “So instead, you walked out and left me in the dark.” “Better the dark than the flames.” Rory barked a laugh. “Spare me the poetry, Luc. I’m not in the mood.” He studied her, the amber eye sharp, the black one unreadable. “You’re angry.” “Damn right I’m angry.” She pushed off the doorframe, pacing the limited floor space. “You don’t get to decide what’s best for me. Not after everything.” “After everything,” he repeated, voice low. “What does that mean, Rory?” She stopped, glaring at him. “You know what it means.” A muscle in his cheek twitched. “Do I?” The air between them thickened, charged with all the things they’d never said. The almost-kisses, the half-finished confessions, the way his hand had lingered on her wrist that one night in the rain, his thumb tracing the crescent scar there like it was a map to something he couldn’t name. She turned away, snatching a half-empty bottle of wine from the counter. “Want a drink?” “It’s nine in the morning.” “So?” He sighed, but when she poured, he didn’t stop her. She handed him the glass, their fingers brushing. A spark. A reminder. She took a long sip, letting the alcohol burn away the tightness in her throat. “Why now, Luc? Why show up today?” He swirled the wine, watching the light catch the liquid. “Because the loose ends are tied. Because it’s safe.” “Safe for you, maybe.” “For both of us.” She wanted to believe him. God, she did. But the hurt was still there, a bruise that hadn’t faded. “And what if I don’t want you here?” His gaze snapped to hers, the black eye dark as a starless sky. “Do you?” The question hung between them, raw and unfiltered. Rory looked away first, her throat tight. “That’s not the point.” “Then what is?” She set her glass down with a clink. “The point is you don’t get to waltz back in here like nothing happened. Like you didn’t leave me wondering if you were even alive.” He stood abruptly, the cane thudding against the floor. “I did what I had to do.” “And what about what *I* had to do?” Her voice cracked. “What about the nights I lay awake, jumping at every damn noise because I thought someone was coming for *me* next? What about the fact that I had to hear from *Silas* that you were still breathing?” Lucien’s expression darkened. “Silas has a big mouth.” “And you have a small heart.” That hit. She saw it in the way his shoulders tensed, in the way his knuckles whitened around the cane. For a moment, she thought he might walk out again. But then he set the cane aside, stepped forward, and cupped her face in his hand. His palm was warm, calloused. A fixer’s hand. A liar’s hand. “You think I don’t know what I did to you?” His voice was rough. “You think I don’t lie awake at night, hearing the way you sounded the last time we spoke? The way you *breathed*, Rory. Like I’d taken something from you.” She wanted to pull away. Wanted to tell him he had. But his thumb brushed her cheekbone, and the touch undid her. “You did take something,” she whispered. “I know.” His other hand found her waist, pulling her closer. “And I’m sorry.” The words were a knife twist. Not because they were empty, but because they weren’t enough. Not yet. She swallowed. “Sorry doesn’t fix it.” “No.” His breath was warm against her forehead. “But it’s a start.” Ptolemy chose that moment to leap onto the table, knocking over a stack of books with a crash. They both jumped, the moment shattered. Rory stepped back, her face hot. “You should go.” Lucien didn’t move. “Is that what you want?” She wanted to say yes. Wanted to be strong, to hold onto the anger because it was safer than the alternative. But the truth was, she’d missed him. Missed the way he looked at her like she was the only thing in the room worth seeing. Missed the way he made her feel—alive, in a way she hadn’t been since she’d left Cardiff. “No,” she admitted, voice barely above a whisper. He exhaled, slow and controlled, like he’d been holding his breath for weeks. “Then let me stay.” She should’ve said no. Should’ve made him work for it, made him grovel. But the words died in her throat. Instead, she turned and grabbed the wine bottle again, pouring another glass. “You’re sleeping on the couch.” A smile tugged at his lips. “I’ve slept in worse places.” “And you’re telling me everything. No more secrets.” His smile faded, but he nodded. “Everything.” She handed him the glass, their fingers lingering this time. The air between them was different now—lighter, maybe. Or maybe it was just the wine. Ptolemy, seemingly satisfied with the chaos he’d caused, curled up on the scattered papers and began to purr. Rory took a sip, watching Lucien over the rim of her glass. “Start talking, Frenchman.” He took a slow sip of his own, then set the glass down. “Where do you want me to begin?” She leaned against the counter, arms crossed. “How about the part where you disappeared without a word?” His jaw tightened, but he didn’t look away. “I had a lead on the people who were after me. If I was right, they were closing in. I couldn’t risk them using you to get to me.” “And you couldn’t have *told* me that?” “I could have.” He rubbed his thumb along the rim of the glass. “But you would’ve insisted on coming with me.” “Damn right I would’ve.” “And I couldn’t let you do that.” “Because you don’t think I can handle myself?” “Because I *know* you can.” His voice was sharp. “And that’s the problem. You would’ve walked into that fight without hesitation, and I couldn’t—*wouldn’t*—let you do that for me.” She stared at him, the weight of his words settling over her. “So what, you just decided to play the martyr?” “No.” He stood, closing the distance between them again. “I decided to play the man who’s in love with you.” The words hit her like a punch to the gut. She’d known, in some part of her, that it was there. But hearing it—hearing *him* say it—was different. Her breath caught. “You don’t get to drop that on me like it’s nothing.” “It’s not nothing.” His hand found hers, squeezing. “It’s everything.” She wanted to pull away. Wanted to tell him he didn’t get to say things like that after what he’d done. But the look in his eyes—raw, unguarded—held her there. “You’re an idiot,” she said, but there was no heat in it. “And you’re stubborn.” “And you’re a coward.” He flinched, but didn’t deny it. “Maybe. But I’m here now.” She looked down at their hands, his long fingers laced with hers. The crescent scar on her wrist was a pale mark against her skin, a reminder of a time before him. Before all of this. “Yeah,” she said softly. “You are.” Ptolemy stretched, tail flicking, as if to say *finally*. Lucien’s thumb traced the back of her hand, slow and deliberate. “So. Truce?” She wanted to hold onto the anger a little longer. Wanted to make him suffer, just a bit more. But the truth was, she was tired. Tired of fighting, of wondering, of the empty space he’d left behind. She sighed, squeezing his hand back. “Truce. But you’re still sleeping on the couch.” His grin was quick, bright. “Deal.” She rolled her eyes, but she didn’t let go of his hand. “And you’re buying me dinner.” “Done.” “And you’re telling me the rest. *All* of it.” His expression sobered, but he nodded. “All of it.” She took a deep breath, then another sip of wine. The flat felt smaller, warmer, with him in it. The books, the scrolls, the chaos—it all seemed a little less overwhelming. “Good,” she said. “Now start talking.”
created_at"2026-10-07T09:38:05.754Z" 10/7/2026, 9:38:05 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences100
tagDensity0.21
leniency0.42
rawRatio0.048
effectiveRatio0.02
94.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1935
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.82% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1935
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"intensity"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"glinting"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"unreadable"
count1
6
word"charged"
count1
7
word"tracing"
count1
8
word"reminder"
count2
9
word"shattered"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"intensity"
1"pulse"
2"glinting"
3"flicker"
4"weight"
5"unreadable"
6"charged"
7"tracing"
8"reminder"
9"shattered"
10"whisper"
11"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of his words"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences142
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences142
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences219
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans10
markdownWords10
totalWords1922
ratio0.005
matches
0"I"
1"me"
2"Silas"
3"breathed"
4"told"
5"know"
6"wouldn’t"
7"him"
8"finally"
9"All"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions26
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount1284
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.62
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory8
Ptolemy6
Lucien8
Cardiff1
Wanted4
persons
0"Rory"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Lucien"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences102
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if testing the space, then turned to face her"
1"Ptolemy, seemingly satisfied with the"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1922
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences219
matches
0"chose that moment"
1"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs111
mean17.32
std12.56
cv0.725
sampleLengths
029
120
24
344
44
546
612
716
810
97
1014
1116
1231
1314
1440
1534
1611
1737
184
193
2026
217
2230
2334
2415
256
269
2727
283
2927
3011
316
3214
3313
3426
3511
3610
378
3850
3915
405
411
4222
4322
4419
454
464
4727
4815
4919
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences142
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs254
matches
0"was wiping"
12.39% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences219
ratio0.046
matches
0"The heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—fixed on her with an intensity that made her pulse jump."
1"A flicker of something—amusement, maybe—touched his mouth."
2"He had to brush past her to enter, close enough that she caught the scent of him—bergamot and something darker, like gunpowder and old books."
3"The flat was small; his presence made it smaller."
4"He took in the chaos—the stacks of books, the scrolls pinned to the walls with knives, the takeaway containers littering the coffee table."
5"Missed the way he made her feel—alive, in a way she hadn’t been since she’d left Cardiff."
6"The air between them was different now—lighter, maybe."
7"But hearing it—hearing *him* say it—was different."
8"But the look in his eyes—raw, unguarded—held her there."
9"The books, the scrolls, the chaos—it all seemed a little less overwhelming."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1301
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount46
adverbRatio0.035357417371252885
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.005380476556495004
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences219
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences219
mean8.78
std5.99
cv0.682
sampleLengths
016
19
24
39
411
52
61
71
816
922
106
114
1219
1315
1412
1512
167
179
187
193
207
2111
223
2312
244
2513
2618
2710
284
296
3025
319
3223
3311
3411
358
3618
3711
384
393
407
4119
423
434
4417
4513
4622
4712
489
496
45.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.3059360730593607
totalSentences219
uniqueOpeners67
26.04% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences128
matches
0"Instead, she turned and grabbed"
ratio0.008
23.13% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount63
totalSentences128
matches
0"She froze, the dishcloth still"
1"She didn’t bother with the"
2"His cane, ivory handle glinting,"
3"He shifted his weight, the"
4"She let the word hang"
5"He eyed Lucien with the"
6"He had to brush past"
7"He took in the chaos—the"
8"He moved to the centre"
9"She crossed her arms tighter"
10"His jaw tightened."
11"She gestured to the armchair,"
12"She opened her mouth, then"
13"She would’ve argued, would’ve found"
14"He leaned forward, elbows on"
15"He studied her, the amber"
16"She pushed off the doorframe,"
17"he repeated, voice low"
18"She stopped, glaring at him."
19"She turned away, snatching a"
ratio0.492
45.94% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount106
totalSentences128
matches
0"The knock came just as"
1"A rhythm she knew."
2"She froze, the dishcloth still"
3"Ptolemy, the tabby, lifted his"
4"Rory exhaled through her nose,"
5"The three deadbolts gleamed under"
6"She didn’t bother with the"
7"The door swung open."
8"Lucien stood there, impeccable as"
9"The heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—fixed"
10"His cane, ivory handle glinting,"
11"Rory leaned against the doorframe,"
12"A flicker of something—amusement, maybe—touched"
13"He shifted his weight, the"
14"She let the word hang"
15"Ptolemy chose that moment to"
16"He eyed Lucien with the"
17"Lucien’s gaze dropped to the"
18"Rory stepped aside, but not"
19"He had to brush past"
ratio0.828
39.06% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences128
matches
0"Before all of this."
ratio0.008
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The heterochromatic eyes—amber and black—fixed on her with an intensity that made her pulse jump."
77.38% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he repeated, voice low"
1"she admitted, voice barely above a whisper"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she admitted (admit)"
1"he repeated (repeat)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"she admitted (admit)"
4"His voice (his voice)"
dialogueSentences100
tagDensity0.11
leniency0.22
rawRatio0.455
effectiveRatio0.1
84.2703%