| 80.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "His gaze flicked back [back]" | | 1 | "She turned back [back]" | | 2 | "His voice softened just [just]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 50 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0.3 | | effectiveRatio | 0.12 | |
| 88.14% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1265 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 44.66% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1265 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "stomach" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "unreadable" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "eyebrow" | | 5 | "flicked" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "dancing" | | 8 | "tension" | | 9 | "traced" | | 10 | "fleeting" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 101 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 101 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 141 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1261 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.86% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 959 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.04 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 10 | | Moreau | 1 | | Evan | 2 | | Luc | 1 | | Cardiff | 2 | | University | 1 | | Lucien | 6 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Luc" | | 4 | "Lucien" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.979 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 76.47% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if sensing the storm outside—or perhaps the one brewing inside her" | | 1 | "quite scabbed over yet" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1261 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 141 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 55 | | mean | 22.93 | | std | 14.33 | | cv | 0.625 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 72 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 33 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 36 | | 6 | 31 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 34 | | 10 | 39 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 58 | | 25 | 31 | | 26 | 39 | | 27 | 25 | | 28 | 29 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 39 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 32 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 40 | | 37 | 23 | | 38 | 27 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 54 | | 41 | 25 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 33 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 42 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 101 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 181 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn’t hiding" | | 1 | "was just beginning" |
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| 82.07% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 141 | | ratio | 0.021 | | matches | | 0 | "Ptolemy, the tabby, slunk between stacks, tail flicking as if sensing the storm outside—or perhaps the one brewing inside her." | | 1 | "Lucien Moreau stood there, cane in hand, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—fixed on her." | | 2 | "She had been hiding—from Evan, from her past, from the way Luc made her feel like she was both the smartest and the most reckless person in the room." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 965 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.0383419689119171 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0051813471502590676 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 141 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 141 | | mean | 8.94 | | std | 5.8 | | cv | 0.649 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 22 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 46.34% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.3120567375886525 | | totalSentences | 141 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, he closed the distance" | | 1 | "Instead, he reached into his" | | 2 | "Then, the ghost of a" |
| | ratio | 0.032 | |
| 52.26% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "She wiped her hands on" | | 1 | "She moved through the clutter," | | 2 | "Her breath hitched." | | 3 | "She undid the first deadbolt," | | 4 | "She stepped back." | | 5 | "He entered, shaking the rain" | | 6 | "She shut the door, the" | | 7 | "He glanced around the flat," | | 8 | "His gaze flicked back to" | | 9 | "She turned away, busying herself" | | 10 | "She spun around, the kettle" | | 11 | "His jaw tightened at the" | | 12 | "Her fingers curled into fists." | | 13 | "His touch was warm, despite" | | 14 | "His voice was rough, the" | | 15 | "She wanted to pull away," | | 16 | "His hand dropped, and he" | | 17 | "She turned back to the" | | 18 | "She whirled around, the tea" | | 19 | "She cut herself off, pressing" |
| | ratio | 0.419 | |
| 24.52% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 81 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain hammered against the" | | 1 | "She wiped her hands on" | | 2 | "Eva’s flat was a labyrinth" | | 3 | "Ptolemy, the tabby, slunk between" | | 4 | "A knock at the door." | | 5 | "Eva was still at the" | | 6 | "The knock came again, sharper" | | 7 | "She moved through the clutter," | | 8 | "The peephole offered a distorted" | | 9 | "Her breath hitched." | | 10 | "She undid the first deadbolt," | | 11 | "The third lock clicked open," | | 12 | "Lucien Moreau stood there, cane" | | 13 | "Rain dripped from his platinum" | | 14 | "Rory leaned against the doorframe," | | 15 | "A smirk tugged at his" | | 16 | "The silence stretched, thick with" | | 17 | "The last time they’d seen" | | 18 | "Lucien stepped forward, forcing her" | | 19 | "She stepped back." |
| | ratio | 0.871 | |
| 53.76% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain hammered against the window, a relentless staccato that matched the unease coiling in Rory’s stomach." | | 1 | "Ptolemy, the tabby, slunk between stacks, tail flicking as if sensing the storm outside—or perhaps the one brewing inside her." |
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| 75.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "he said, his voice low," |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 50 | | tagDensity | 0.02 | | leniency | 0.04 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |