Run: 2026-10-07-01M4AVP65HJVHNW66YC3QX7YQZ

Run Details

Duration:
15.5s
Cost:
$0.014559
Provider:
Mistral

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain hammered against the window, a relentless staccato that matched the unease coiling in Rory’s stomach. She wiped her hands on her jeans, the scent of curry and old paper thick in the air. Eva’s flat was a labyrinth of knowledge, every surface groaning under the weight of books and scrolls. Ptolemy, the tabby, slunk between stacks, tail flicking as if sensing the storm outside—or perhaps the one brewing inside her. A knock at the door. Rory froze. Eva was still at the library, wouldn’t be back for hours. The knock came again, sharper this time, insistent. She moved through the clutter, her boots scuffing against the worn floorboards. The peephole offered a distorted view: a figure in a charcoal suit, rain-slicked and immaculate, despite the downpour. Her breath hitched. No. Not him. But the knock came a third time, and she had no choice. She undid the first deadbolt, then the second, her fingers trembling only slightly. The third lock clicked open, and she pulled the door inward. Lucien Moreau stood there, cane in hand, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—fixed on her. Rain dripped from his platinum hair, but his expression was dry, unreadable. “You’ve been avoiding me.” Rory leaned against the doorframe, arms crossed. “Funny how that works when you don’t call ahead.” A smirk tugged at his lips. “Would you have answered?” She didn’t. The silence stretched, thick with the weight of months gone by. The last time they’d seen each other, words had been thrown like knives, and the wounds hadn’t quite scabbed over yet. Lucien stepped forward, forcing her to retreat or be bowled over. She stepped back. He entered, shaking the rain from his coat with the practised ease of a man who never let the elements ruffle him. “You look well.” “Liar.” She shut the door, the three deadbolts clicking back into place like punctuation on a sentence neither of them wanted to finish. He glanced around the flat, taking in the chaos with a raised eyebrow. “Eva’s still hoarding knowledge like a dragon on gold, I see.” “She’s not here.” “I know.” His gaze flicked back to her, lingering on the crescent scar on her wrist before meeting her eyes. “I came to see you.” Rory’s pulse spiked. She turned away, busying herself with the kettle, though her hands were steady. “Tea?” “You’re stalling.” The kettle hissed as she filled it, the sound sharp in the quiet. “And you’re being presumptuous.” Lucien moved closer, his cane tapping lightly against the floor. “Am I? Or am I just the only one willing to say what we’re both thinking?” She spun around, the kettle forgotten. “And what’s that, Luc?” His jaw tightened at the nickname, the one he’d told her not to use in public. “That you ran. That you left things unfinished.” The words hung between them, heavy as the rain-soaked air. Rory gripped the edge of the counter. “I left because it was the only way to finish it.” A laugh, low and humourless, escaped him. “Bullshit. You left because you were scared.” Her fingers curled into fists. “And you stayed because you’re a coward.” The air crackled. For a moment, she thought he might walk out, slam the door behind him, and leave her to the storm and her regrets. But he didn’t. Instead, he closed the distance between them, his free hand reaching out, brushing a strand of hair from her face. His touch was warm, despite the cold rain outside. “You think this is easy for me?” His voice was rough, the polished veneer of the fixer cracked. “You think I don’t lie awake wondering what the hell I did wrong?” Rory’s breath caught. She wanted to pull away, to put space between them, to pretend this didn’t matter. But her body betrayed her, leaning into his touch just slightly. “You didn’t do anything wrong, Luc. That was the problem.” His hand dropped, and he stepped back, the mask sliding back into place. “So it’s my fault I didn’t give you a reason to stay?” “It’s no one’s fault.” She turned back to the kettle, flipping it on with more force than necessary. The water inside began to tremble. “Some things just… don’t work.” “Or some people just don’t try.” The words stung. She whirled around, the tea forgotten. “You think I didn’t try? You think I didn’t—” She cut herself off, pressing her lips together. The past was a minefield, and she was tired of dancing through it. Lucien’s gaze was unrelenting. “I think you gave up. And I think you’re still lying to yourself about why.” The kettle whistled, shrill and insistent. Rory grabbed it, pouring the steaming water into two chipped mugs with more force than necessary. The tea bags bobbed violently. “You want tea or not?” He didn’t answer. Instead, he reached into his coat, pulling out a folded piece of paper. “I have something for you.” She set the mugs down, wary. “What is it?” “A job.” He held it out. “High pay. Low risk. And it’s in Cardiff.” Her stomach twisted. Cardiff. Home. The place she’d fled from, the place she’d sworn she wouldn’t return to until she was sure Evan was out of her life for good. She didn’t take the paper. “Why would I want that?” “Because it’s a chance to go back on your terms.” His voice softened, just a fraction. “Because it’s a chance to stop running.” Rory stared at the paper, then at him. The rain had stopped, but the air still hummed with tension. “And what do you get out of it?” Lucien’s smile was slow, knowing. “The satisfaction of knowing you’re not hiding anymore.” She wanted to argue, to tell him he was wrong, that she wasn’t hiding. But the words stuck in her throat. Because he was right. She had been hiding—from Evan, from her past, from the way Luc made her feel like she was both the smartest and the most reckless person in the room. She reached out, her fingers brushing his as she took the paper. A spark, static or something else, jumped between them. “This doesn’t change anything.” “No?” His thumb traced the back of her hand, a fleeting touch. “Then why are you still holding my hand?” Rory looked down. She was. She pulled away, unfolding the paper with deliberate care. The job details were vague, but the location was clear: Cardiff University. Her old stomping grounds. Her escape route. She exhaled, long and slow. “You’re a bastard, Luc.” “And you’re welcome.” He leaned against the counter, watching her. “So. Are you in?” She wanted to say no. Wanted to crumple the paper, toss it into the bin, and tell him to leave. But the truth was, she was tired of running. Tired of looking over her shoulder, tired of letting fear dictate her steps. She met his gaze, the challenge in his eyes mirroring the one in her own. “On one condition.” “Name it.” “You come with me.” A beat of silence. Then, the ghost of a smile. “I was hoping you’d say that.” Rory folded the paper, tucking it into her back pocket. The tea had gone cold, but neither of them reached for it. The storm outside had passed, but the one inside was just beginning. Lucien’s cane tapped against the floor as he pushed off the counter. “When do we leave?” She almost laughed. Almost. “You’re that eager to get back into my bad books?” “Rory,” he said, his voice low, “I never left them.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
80.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"His gaze flicked back [back]"
1"She turned back [back]"
2"His voice softened just [just]"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.3
effectiveRatio0.12
88.14% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1265
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.66% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1265
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"stomach"
count2
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"unreadable"
count1
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"eyebrow"
count1
5
word"flicked"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"dancing"
count1
8
word"tension"
count1
9
word"traced"
count1
10
word"fleeting"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"weight"
2"unreadable"
3"silence"
4"eyebrow"
5"flicked"
6"pulse"
7"dancing"
8"tension"
9"traced"
10"fleeting"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences101
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences141
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1261
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
97.86% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount959
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.04
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory10
Moreau1
Evan2
Luc1
Cardiff2
University1
Lucien6
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Evan"
3"Luc"
4"Lucien"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore0.979
windowScore1
76.47% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if sensing the storm outside—or perhaps the one brewing inside her"
1"quite scabbed over yet"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1261
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences141
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean22.93
std14.33
cv0.625
sampleLengths
072
15
221
333
43
536
631
716
810
934
1039
1123
1224
133
1425
1517
162
1717
1826
1910
2024
2128
2214
2312
2458
2531
2639
2725
2829
296
3039
3119
3232
3321
349
3514
3640
3723
3827
3913
4054
4125
4220
4333
449
4514
4642
4718
482
494
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences101
matches
0"been thrown"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs181
matches
0"wasn’t hiding"
1"was just beginning"
82.07% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences141
ratio0.021
matches
0"Ptolemy, the tabby, slunk between stacks, tail flicking as if sensing the storm outside—or perhaps the one brewing inside her."
1"Lucien Moreau stood there, cane in hand, his heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—fixed on her."
2"She had been hiding—from Evan, from her past, from the way Luc made her feel like she was both the smartest and the most reckless person in the room."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount965
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.0383419689119171
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0051813471502590676
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences141
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences141
mean8.94
std5.8
cv0.649
sampleLengths
017
118
217
320
45
52
611
78
812
918
103
111
122
1312
1413
1511
1615
1712
184
197
209
216
224
232
2411
2521
2611
273
2822
293
3023
3113
3211
333
3420
355
363
3713
381
392
4013
414
4210
4316
446
454
4616
478
4810
497
46.34% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3120567375886525
totalSentences141
uniqueOpeners44
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences93
matches
0"Instead, he closed the distance"
1"Instead, he reached into his"
2"Then, the ghost of a"
ratio0.032
52.26% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount39
totalSentences93
matches
0"She wiped her hands on"
1"She moved through the clutter,"
2"Her breath hitched."
3"She undid the first deadbolt,"
4"She stepped back."
5"He entered, shaking the rain"
6"She shut the door, the"
7"He glanced around the flat,"
8"His gaze flicked back to"
9"She turned away, busying herself"
10"She spun around, the kettle"
11"His jaw tightened at the"
12"Her fingers curled into fists."
13"His touch was warm, despite"
14"His voice was rough, the"
15"She wanted to pull away,"
16"His hand dropped, and he"
17"She turned back to the"
18"She whirled around, the tea"
19"She cut herself off, pressing"
ratio0.419
24.52% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences93
matches
0"The rain hammered against the"
1"She wiped her hands on"
2"Eva’s flat was a labyrinth"
3"Ptolemy, the tabby, slunk between"
4"A knock at the door."
5"Eva was still at the"
6"The knock came again, sharper"
7"She moved through the clutter,"
8"The peephole offered a distorted"
9"Her breath hitched."
10"She undid the first deadbolt,"
11"The third lock clicked open,"
12"Lucien Moreau stood there, cane"
13"Rain dripped from his platinum"
14"Rory leaned against the doorframe,"
15"A smirk tugged at his"
16"The silence stretched, thick with"
17"The last time they’d seen"
18"Lucien stepped forward, forcing her"
19"She stepped back."
ratio0.871
53.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"Because he was right."
ratio0.011
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The rain hammered against the window, a relentless staccato that matched the unease coiling in Rory’s stomach."
1"Ptolemy, the tabby, slunk between stacks, tail flicking as if sensing the storm outside—or perhaps the one brewing inside her."
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said, his voice low,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.02
leniency0.04
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.3693%