| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 83.58% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 609 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 1.48% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 609 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "glinting" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "perfect" | | 9 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 10 | | markdownWords | 15 | | totalWords | 603 | | ratio | 0.025 | | matches | | 0 | "Not supposed to do that." | | 1 | "wrong" | | 2 | "there" | | 3 | "figure" | | 4 | "repelled" | | 5 | "spoke" | | 6 | "pressure" | | 7 | "in her" | | 8 | "ached" | | 9 | "laughed" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 0 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 99.32% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 7 | | wordCount | 592 | | uniqueNames | 2 | | maxNameDensity | 1.01 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.993 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 94.44% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "spirals that seemed to writhe when she looked too long" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 603 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 17.74 | | std | 14.94 | | cv | 0.842 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 43 | | 1 | 5 | | 2 | 47 | | 3 | 33 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 26 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 46 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 32 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 30 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 35 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 38 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 34 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 30 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 9 |
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| 96.71% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "were crushed" | | 1 | "were planted" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 97 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 84 | | ratio | 0.083 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant around her neck, usually cool against her collarbone, pulsed once—warm as a living thing." | | 1 | "Just the grove, just the flowers, just the—" | | 2 | "The air smelled wrong—too sweet, like rotting fruit masked with honey." | | 3 | "The voice—if it was a voice—hadn’t come from any direction." | | 4 | "The scar there—old, forgotten—*ached*." | | 5 | "And then—" | | 6 | "But her feet were planted in the crushed flowers, and her torch illuminated the single, perfect footprint in the soil—too large to be hers." |
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| 82.32% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 598 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.06020066889632107 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011705685618729096 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 84 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 84 | | mean | 7.18 | | std | 4.92 | | cv | 0.686 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 47.62% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.35714285714285715 | | totalSentences | 84 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the grove, just the" | | 1 | "Just the rustle of leaves" | | 2 | "Just a smooth, featureless expanse" | | 3 | "Then it *spoke*." |
| | ratio | 0.061 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "She exhaled through her nose," | | 1 | "She fumbled for her torch," | | 2 | "Their petals shivered, though there" | | 3 | "She’d been here before, but" | | 4 | "Her pulse hammered in her" | | 5 | "She forced her legs to" | | 6 | "Her skin prickled." | | 7 | "She pressed her fingers to" | | 8 | "She jerked back, torch swinging" | | 9 | "It was just *there*, inside" | | 10 | "She turned toward the door," | | 11 | "They circled her now, their" | | 12 | "It *repelled* the light, as" | | 13 | "She backed up, but the" | | 14 | "It was *in her*." | | 15 | "She didn’t remember moving." | | 16 | "Its warmth lingered." |
| | ratio | 0.258 | |
| 43.33% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | | 0 | "The oak door groaned shut" | | 1 | "She exhaled through her nose," | | 2 | "The pendant around her neck," | | 3 | "She fumbled for her torch," | | 4 | "The beam flickered to life," | | 5 | "Wildflowers, impossible in their vibrancy," | | 6 | "Their petals shivered, though there" | | 7 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 8 | "She’d been here before, but" | | 9 | "A twig snapped." | | 10 | "Rory spun, torch slicing through" | | 11 | "Her pulse hammered in her" | | 12 | "The pendant pulsed again, its" | | 13 | "She forced her legs to" | | 14 | "The air smelled wrong—too sweet," | | 15 | "Her skin prickled." | | 16 | "The torchlight caught something at" | | 17 | "Rory crouched, sweeping the beam" | | 18 | "The flowers here were crushed," | | 19 | "She pressed her fingers to" |
| | ratio | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 66 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 85.71% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 25 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed ahead, their ancient oak surfaces carved with spirals that seemed to writhe when she looked too long." | | 1 | "It was just *there*, inside her skull, a sigh of syllables that made her teeth ache." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |