| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.52 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.16% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1131 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1131 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "echoed" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "flickered" | | 8 | "gloom" | | 9 | "wavered" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "glint" | | 12 | "stomach" | | 13 | "whisper" | | 14 | "oppressive" | | 15 | "weight" | | 16 | "raced" | | 17 | "echoing" | | 18 | "pounding" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 140 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 140 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 152 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 42.58% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 19 | | markdownWords | 88 | | totalWords | 1118 | | ratio | 0.079 | | matches | | 0 | "Don’t trust the dark here." | | 1 | "Midnight, at the centre of the Grove. Alone." | | 2 | "“Little thief.”" | | 3 | "“You took what wasn’t yours.”" | | 4 | "“Given,”" | | 5 | "“Stolen. The same, in the end.”" | | 6 | "“The stone. The heart. The debt.”" | | 7 | "“Not ours,”" | | 8 | "“But not yours, either.”" | | 9 | "“You carry the scent of the Hel-portal. The scent of the thief.”" | | 10 | "“Liar.”" | | 11 | "“The Grove knows. The stones know. The dark knows.”" | | 12 | "“Clever little thief,”" | | 13 | "“But light does not last.”" | | 14 | "“No escape,”" | | 15 | "“The Grove does not forget.”" | | 16 | "“You cannot hide,”" | | 17 | "“The debt will be paid.”" | | 18 | "“We will find you.”" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 26 | | wordCount | 1014 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.18 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Grove | 8 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Silence | 1 | | Fae-touched | 1 | | Good | 1 | | Aurora | 12 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.908 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "appeared ahead the boundary of the Grove" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.894 | | wordCount | 1118 | | matches | | 0 | "not the gentle pulse from before but a sudden, almost painful heat" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 152 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 53 | | mean | 21.09 | | std | 12.77 | | cv | 0.605 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 62 | | 1 | 40 | | 2 | 38 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 35 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 35 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 41 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 25 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 41 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 50 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 24 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 28 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 27 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 38 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 36 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 25 | | 43 | 22 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 26 | | 47 | 22 | | 48 | 24 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 140 | | matches | | |
| 50.19% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 178 | | matches | | 0 | "was draining" | | 1 | "was gaining" | | 2 | "was going" | | 3 | "was holding" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 152 | | ratio | 0.066 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled of wet moss and something sweeter—wildflowers, though it was late autumn outside the Grove." | | 1 | "Eva’s warning echoed in her skull: *Don’t trust the dark here.* But the note had been clear—*Midnight, at the centre of the Grove." | | 2 | "A shape—tall, too tall, its limbs too long—darted between the trees." | | 3 | "The beam of her torch caught the glint of eyes—dozens of them, low to the ground, blinking in the undergrowth." | | 4 | "But this—this was something else." | | 5 | "The unknown benefactor, the way it had appeared in her flat one night, the way it reacted to the Grove—none of it made sense." | | 6 | "Its face—if it had one—was a shifting mass of shadows, save for two hollow pits where eyes should be." | | 7 | "So this thing—whatever it was—knew about that." | | 8 | "She barely had time to jerk back before its fingers—long, gnarled things, like twisted roots—scraped the air where her throat had been." | | 9 | "The air changed instantly—cooler, sharper." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1029 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.0369290573372206 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006802721088435374 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 152 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 152 | | mean | 7.36 | | std | 5.08 | | cv | 0.69 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 6 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 43.42% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.2894736842105263 | | totalSentences | 152 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the skeletal fingers of" | | 1 | "Probably a fox." | | 2 | "Just the rustle of leaves," | | 3 | "Then, from the darkness, a" | | 4 | "Just the trees, the shadows," | | 5 | "Then, from the darkness, a" |
| | ratio | 0.053 | |
| 85.49% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 38 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "She shouldn’t have come at" | | 2 | "She forced her shoulders down." | | 3 | "She turned slowly, scanning the" | | 4 | "Her pulse thudded in her" | | 5 | "She clenched her fist around" | | 6 | "Her voice sounded thin, swallowed" | | 7 | "She turned back towards the" | | 8 | "Her torch flickered as she" | | 9 | "She hated the tremor in" | | 10 | "Her skin prickled." | | 11 | "She took a step forward." | | 12 | "She knew this place was" | | 13 | "Her voice came out sharper" | | 14 | "It wasn’t hers." | | 15 | "She knew that." | | 16 | "she said, chin lifting" | | 17 | "Its skin was the colour" | | 18 | "Its face—if it had one—was" | | 19 | "It tilted its head, the" |
| | ratio | 0.336 | |
| 44.07% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 94 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oaks loomed like" | | 1 | "Aurora stepped over the last" | | 2 | "The air smelled of wet" | | 3 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 4 | "She shouldn’t have come at" | | 5 | "Eva’s warning echoed in her" | | 6 | "The trees seemed to lean" | | 7 | "She forced her shoulders down." | | 8 | "The Grove was just a" | | 9 | "A strange one, sure, but" | | 10 | "A twig snapped behind her." | | 11 | "The sound was too sharp," | | 12 | "She turned slowly, scanning the" | | 13 | "Richmond Park had plenty of" | | 14 | "Her pulse thudded in her" | | 15 | "The pendant’s warmth flared, not" | | 16 | "She clenched her fist around" | | 17 | "Her voice sounded thin, swallowed" | | 18 | "She turned back towards the" | | 19 | "The note had mentioned a" |
| | ratio | 0.832 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 113 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Behind her, the creature halted at the boundary, its form writhing, as if the Grove itself was holding it back." | | 1 | "She ran, her boots pounding against the path, the pendant still burning against her skin." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "it hissed (hiss)" | | 1 | "it agreed (agree)" | | 2 | "she lied (lie)" | | 3 | "it spat (spit)" | | 4 | "it whispered (whisper)" | | 5 | "it hissed (hiss)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 25 | | tagDensity | 0.32 | | leniency | 0.64 | | rawRatio | 0.75 | | effectiveRatio | 0.48 | |