| 75.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Her voice sounded too [too]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.375 | | leniency | 0.75 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |
| 90.97% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1108 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1108 | | totalAiIsms | 32 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "warmth" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "wavering" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "footsteps" | | 8 | "scanning" | | 9 | "comforting" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "predator" | | 12 | "flickered" | | 13 | "searing" | | 14 | "trembled" | | 15 | "rhythmic" | | 16 | "methodical" | | 17 | "beacon" | | 18 | "pounding" | | 19 | "pulsed" | | 20 | "familiar" | | 21 | "echoed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 138 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 138 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 148 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 26 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 79.89% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 12 | | markdownWords | 66 | | totalWords | 1099 | | ratio | 0.06 | | matches | | 0 | "Malphora." | | 1 | "“You shouldn’t have come, little thief.”" | | 2 | "“Isolde.”" | | 3 | "“And you are trespassing.”" | | 4 | "“The Heartstone.”" | | 5 | "“Stolen from my kin. Did you think it would lead you to safety?”" | | 6 | "“Given. Taken. Does it matter? It is Fae. And it is mine.”" | | 7 | "Things." | | 8 | "“Run, little thief. See how far you get.”" | | 9 | "“You cannot leave. Not yet.”" | | 10 | "thunk." | | 11 | "“Time moves differently here. And you, little thief, are out of it.”" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 31 | | wordCount | 1013 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.58 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 1 | | Aurora | 16 | | Isolde | 6 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.71 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 57.41% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as if warning her" | | 1 | "as if recoiling" | | 2 | "seemed woven from the darkness itself, shifting like smoke" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.73 | | wordCount | 1099 | | matches | | 0 | "not comforting now, but urgent" | | 1 | "Not much, but better than nothing" | | 2 | "Not towards her, but around her, a slow, deliberate circle" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 148 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 47 | | mean | 23.38 | | std | 17.14 | | cv | 0.733 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 79 | | 1 | 60 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 43 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 38 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 37 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 47 | | 12 | 50 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 48 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 1 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 44 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 39 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 27 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 37 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 39 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 51 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 31 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 8 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 138 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 174 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 27.03% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 148 | | ratio | 0.041 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d come here for answers, drawn by the pendant’s pulse—faint but insistent, like a second heartbeat." | | 1 | "The grove stretched empty behind her, the standing stones—carved with spirals and runes—marking the boundary like teeth in the earth." | | 2 | "A figure—tall, too tall, its limbs elongated like stretched taffy—stood between the trees." | | 3 | "A sound cut through the silence—a wet, clicking noise, like bones snapping in sequence." | | 4 | "Her dress—if it was a dress—seemed woven from the darkness itself, shifting like smoke." | | 5 | "*Things.* Their forms twisted, half-seen in the dim light—elongated limbs, too many joints, eyes like polished obsidian." |
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| 96.51% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1023 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 45 | | adverbRatio | 0.04398826979472141 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004887585532746823 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 148 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 148 | | mean | 7.43 | | std | 4.71 | | cv | 0.635 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 45.72% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.3108108108108108 | | totalSentences | 148 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "Just the soft thud of" | | 1 | "Just the trees, their bark" | | 2 | "Probably a fox." | | 3 | "Just the wind, if there" | | 4 | "Just the creeping certainty that" | | 5 | "Then, a voice." |
| | ratio | 0.051 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d come here for answers," | | 1 | "She stepped over a root," | | 2 | "She turned slowly, scanning the" | | 3 | "She exhaled, forcing her shoulders" | | 4 | "Her fingers tightened around the" | | 5 | "She spun, heart hammering." | | 6 | "Her voice sounded too loud," | | 7 | "She turned back towards the" | | 8 | "She took a step forward." | | 9 | "It curled around her, cold" | | 10 | "She swatted at the air," | | 11 | "She forced herself to move," | | 12 | "She knew it." | | 13 | "It didn’t move." | | 14 | "she demanded, voice steadier than" | | 15 | "She took a step towards" | | 16 | "She hesitated, then reached into" | | 17 | "Her blood turned to ice." | | 18 | "She turned with it, chain" | | 19 | "It came from the darkness" |
| | ratio | 0.274 | |
| 28.38% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 101 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oaks of Richmond" | | 1 | "Aurora adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "She’d come here for answers," | | 3 | "The Fae Grove was supposed" | | 4 | "The air smelled of damp" | | 5 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colours," | | 6 | "She stepped over a root," | | 7 | "The silence pressed in, thick" | | 8 | "A twig snapped behind her." | | 9 | "The sound was too deliberate," | | 10 | "She turned slowly, scanning the" | | 11 | "She exhaled, forcing her shoulders" | | 12 | "Richmond Park was full of" | | 13 | "Her fingers tightened around the" | | 14 | "The warmth flared, not comforting" | | 15 | "She spun, heart hammering." | | 16 | "The grove stretched empty behind" | | 17 | "Her voice sounded too loud," | | 18 | "She turned back towards the" | | 19 | "The flowers here grew thicker," |
| | ratio | 0.863 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The flowers here grew thicker, their stems twisting together like grasping hands." | | 1 | "The flowers at her feet trembled, their petals curling inward as if recoiling." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "she demanded, voice steadier than she felt" | | 1 | "She spread, the sleeves of her dress rippling like water" |
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| 87.50% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.063 | | leniency | 0.125 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |