| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.55 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 93.89% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 819 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 75.58% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 819 | | totalAiIsms | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "sense of" | | 2 | "shimmered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 819 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 71.32% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 25 | | wordCount | 699 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.57 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Nyx | 4 | | Aurora | 11 | | English | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Isolde | 6 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.713 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 91.86% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite follow with her eyes" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 819 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 31.5 | | std | 26.64 | | cv | 0.846 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 68 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 57 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 79 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 77 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 89 | | 14 | 54 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 76 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 32 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 47 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 31 | | 25 | 5 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 112 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 701 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 19 | | adverbRatio | 0.02710413694721826 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0042796005706134095 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 68 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 68 | | mean | 12.04 | | std | 8.06 | | cv | 0.669 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 1 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 36 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 31 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 29 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 25 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 82.35% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.5294117647058824 | | totalSentences | 68 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 69.44% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere to her right, water" |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 9 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | | 0 | "She had not noticed the" | | 1 | "Her silver hair moved down" | | 2 | "It had been thin and" | | 3 | "She stood and her left" | | 4 | "She could not decide whether" | | 5 | "It was not a question." | | 6 | "It always did that." | | 7 | "She had stopped trying to" | | 8 | "Her pale lavender eyes held" |
| | ratio | 0.188 | |
| 53.75% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones rose out" | | 1 | "Aurora counted them as she" | | 2 | "Each one was oak, not" | | 3 | "The lines kept slipping sideways" | | 4 | "She had not noticed the" | | 5 | "Isolde said, without turning her" | | 6 | "Her silver hair moved down" | | 7 | "Aurora had watched her cross" | | 8 | "The mud had not taken" | | 9 | "Neither had the dew." | | 10 | "Nyx drifted at the edge" | | 11 | "Nyx's laugh was a rustle" | | 12 | "Aurora felt the sound more" | | 13 | "The grass changed under her" | | 14 | "It had been thin and" | | 15 | "Some had petals like folded" | | 16 | "A cluster of blue ones" | | 17 | "Aurora crouched and reached for" | | 18 | "Isolde's voice stopped her before" | | 19 | "Aurora drew her hand back" |
| | ratio | 0.813 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 48 | | matches | | 0 | "Now it lay still against" |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 79.55% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, without turning her head" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.55 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.091 | |