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Run: 2026-10-08-01M4DA4A51Y8GTWNS7XP2X8NM3
Run Details
Model:
Claude Haiku 5.5 (Adaptive)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
21.2s
Cost:
$0.002321
Provider:
Claude Platform on AWS
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
57.81%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
78.90%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
71.88%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
84.21%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
94.22%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
93.65%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
100.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
83.41%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
81.95%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
73.08%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
90.6368%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The knife was already in
my hand when I opened the door, which was the only reason I didn't gut him on the landing.
Lucien Moreau stood there as
though the lease had his name on it.
Charcoal suit, pressed to a
edge you could cut bread with.
Platinum hair slicked back from
a face that had no business looking this composed after four months of
silence
. One hand rested on the ivory handle of his cane.
The other hung loose, fingers
curled, the way a man stood when he expected to need either hand
very
quickly
. "You're holding that like you'd enjoy using it," he said.
His gaze dropped to the
blade, then rose again. Amber left eye. Black right. Both steady. "Good. It saves me asking whether you still would." "Silas let you up." "Silas let me stand at his bar and buy him a whisky. He is a sentimental man."
Lucien tilted his head towards
the stairs. "I am not sure I was ever in his good books. Can I come in, or shall we conduct this through the letterbox like civilised people?" "Four months," I said. "Four months, three weeks and two days."
He checked a slim gold
watch without looking at it. "I did not count them. I simply know the number." "You didn't call." "You changed your number."
A pause, deliberate
. "Rather a hint, Aurora." "Rory."
The name came out harder
than I intended.
Only the people who mattered
called me that, and he knew it. He'd always known it.
He'd just decided, somewhere between
the Golden Empress and the rain-streaked train platform, that I didn't get to be a friend anymore.
The napkin had been folded
into a neat square on my table at the back of Yu-Fei's kitchen. Five words in his looping hand. *Don't come looking.
L.* I'd read it four
times before the dumplings went cold. "Rory,"
he repeated, slowly, as though
tasting it. "Very well. Rory, I need you to put that knife down before you cut yourself on the nerves in your own hand." I didn't move. Behind me, Ptolemy's claws skittered across the bare floorboards of the kitchen. No, not Ptolemy, that was Eva's cat.
My flat held nothing but
a kettle, two mismatched mugs and a sofa with a sagging left cushion.
Lucien's eyes flicked past my
shoulder, cataloguing, the way he catalogued everything. "Eva's,"
he said quietly
.
My stomach dropped through the
floor. "What's Eva's?"
He reached into his inside
pocket. Slow. Deliberate. Where any sane person would have expected a gun, he produced a folded square of cream card instead. A photograph, creased, the colour bled from one corner. Eva's flat on Brick Lane. The rows of bookshelves had
been reduced
to splinters. Scrolls lay unspooled across the floor like shed skin. Someone had drawn a circle in chalk on the floorboards, and the circle had
been filled
with something dark that had dried to the colour of rust. "When?"
My voice sounded far away
. "Last night. The three deadbolts were not even scratched."
He let that sit
. "Whoever came through that door had a key, or had a reason to believe the door would open for them." "Eva would never give anyone a key." "No. She would not." He took the photograph back, tucked it away, and finally let the cane's tip touch the floor. "Which is
precisely
why she is not answering her phone, and why the cat is not in the photograph, and why I came up your rather steep stairs without an appointment."
I looked at him properly
then, past the suit, past the expensive restraint. There was a thin line at his jaw I'd never seen before, and his black eye had gone unusually bright in the lamplight. "You came to me," I said. "Not to Silas. Not to anyone else in London." "I came to you," Lucien agreed, "because whoever drew that circle wanted something you're still carrying around, and I would
very
much like to know what it is before they come up your stairs as well."
Somewhere below us, the bar's
door banged open. Heavy boots.
Then Silas's voice rose, sharp
and wrong, shouting a single word that made the hair stand up along my arms. "Aurora!"
created_at
"2026-10-08T08:29:57.299Z"
10/8/2026, 8:29:57 AM
model
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cancelled
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21151
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generation_time
21162
tokens_prompt
4383
tokens_completion
1002
native_tokens_prompt
6411
native_tokens_completion
3359
native_tokens_completion_images
(null)
native_tokens_reasoning
2000
native_tokens_cached
0
num_media_prompt
(null)
num_input_audio_prompt
(null)
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0
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(null)
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856
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
12
adverbTagCount
1
adverbTags
0
"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences
26
tagDensity
0.462
leniency
0.923
rawRatio
0.083
effectiveRatio
0.077
57.81%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
711
totalAiIsmAdverbs
6
found
0
adverb
"very"
count
3
1
adverb
"quickly"
count
1
2
adverb
"slowly"
count
1
3
adverb
"precisely"
count
1
highlights
0
"very"
1
"quickly"
2
"slowly"
3
"precisely"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
78.90%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
711
totalAiIsms
3
found
0
word
"silence"
count
1
1
word
"flicked"
count
1
2
word
"stomach"
count
1
highlights
0
"silence"
1
"flicked"
2
"stomach"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"stomach dropped/sank"
count
1
highlights
0
"stomach dropped"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
50
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
50
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
63
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
36
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
1
markdownWords
4
totalWords
711
ratio
0.006
matches
0
"Don't come looking. L."
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
9
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
15
wordCount
470
uniqueNames
10
maxNameDensity
0.85
worstName
"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity
1
worstWindowName
"Ptolemy"
discoveredNames
Moreau
1
Golden
1
Empress
1
Yu-Fei
1
Ptolemy
2
Eva
2
Brick
1
Lane
1
Lucien
4
Silas
1
persons
0
"Moreau"
1
"Yu-Fei"
2
"Ptolemy"
3
"Eva"
4
"Lucien"
5
"Silas"
places
0
"Brick"
1
"Lane"
globalScore
1
windowScore
1
71.88%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
32
glossingSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"as though tasting it"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
711
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
63
matches
0
"let that sit"
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
26
mean
27.35
std
19.35
cv
0.708
sampleLengths
0
24
1
73
2
35
3
4
4
50
5
4
6
27
7
3
8
11
9
47
10
38
11
30
12
52
13
4
14
8
15
35
16
50
17
6
18
33
19
7
20
52
21
36
22
15
23
36
24
30
25
1
84.21%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
3
totalSentences
50
matches
0
"been folded"
1
"been reduced"
2
"been filled"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
82
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
63
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
94.22%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
472
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
22
adverbRatio
0.046610169491525424
lyAdverbCount
8
lyAdverbRatio
0.01694915254237288
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
63
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
63
mean
11.29
std
8.18
cv
0.725
sampleLengths
0
24
1
13
2
11
3
19
4
10
5
20
6
10
7
9
8
3
9
2
10
2
11
9
12
4
13
24
14
26
15
4
16
17
17
10
18
3
19
7
20
4
21
9
22
12
23
4
24
22
25
18
26
6
27
3
28
11
29
8
30
22
31
3
32
12
33
7
34
18
35
12
36
4
37
6
38
2
39
6
40
1
41
1
42
18
43
9
44
5
45
9
46
9
47
27
48
6
49
13
93.65%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
4
diversityRatio
0.6825396825396826
totalSentences
63
uniqueOpeners
43
100.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
3
totalSentences
41
matches
0
"Only the people who mattered"
1
"Somewhere below us, the bar's"
2
"Then Silas's voice rose, sharp"
ratio
0.073
83.41%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
14
totalSentences
41
matches
0
"His gaze dropped to the"
1
"He checked a slim gold"
2
"He'd always known it."
3
"He'd just decided, somewhere between"
4
"he repeated, slowly, as though"
5
"I didn't move."
6
"My flat held nothing but"
7
"he said quietly"
8
"My stomach dropped through the"
9
"He reached into his inside"
10
"My voice sounded far away"
11
"He let that sit"
12
"He took the photograph back,"
13
"I looked at him properly"
ratio
0.341
81.95%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
31
totalSentences
41
matches
0
"The knife was already in"
1
"Lucien Moreau stood there as"
2
"Charcoal suit, pressed to a"
3
"Platinum hair slicked back from"
4
"The other hung loose, fingers"
5
"His gaze dropped to the"
6
"Amber left eye."
7
"Lucien tilted his head towards"
8
"He checked a slim gold"
9
"A pause, deliberate"
10
"The name came out harder"
11
"He'd always known it."
12
"He'd just decided, somewhere between"
13
"The napkin had been folded"
14
"L.* I'd read it four"
15
"he repeated, slowly, as though"
16
"I didn't move."
17
"My flat held nothing but"
18
"Lucien's eyes flicked past my"
19
"he said quietly"
ratio
0.756
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
41
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
18
technicalSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"Lucien Moreau stood there as though the lease had his name on it."
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
12
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
73.08%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
6
fancyCount
2
fancyTags
0
"he repeated (repeat)"
1
"Lucien agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences
26
tagDensity
0.231
leniency
0.462
rawRatio
0.333
effectiveRatio
0.154
90.6368%