| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "he said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.419 | | leniency | 0.839 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.065 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 917 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 72.74% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 917 | | totalAiIsms | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 42 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 74.83% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 42 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 46 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 917 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 93.93% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 18 | | wordCount | 535 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.12 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Stone | 1 | | Roses | 1 | | Silas | 2 | | Thursday | 1 | | Sunday | 1 | | Rory | 6 | | Lucien | 5 | | Yu-Fei | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Roses" | | 1 | "Silas" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Yu-Fei" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.939 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 917 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 28.66 | | std | 18.53 | | cv | 0.647 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 43 | | 1 | 57 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 43 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 57 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 43 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 36 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 63 | | 15 | 46 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 44 | | 21 | 50 | | 22 | 31 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 35 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 65 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 34 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 43 | | 31 | 11 |
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| 96.91% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 42 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 99 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 537 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 13 | | adverbRatio | 0.024208566108007448 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0037243947858473 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 60 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 60 | | mean | 15.28 | | std | 10.43 | | cv | 0.683 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 5 | | 1 | 38 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 31 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 26 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 35 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 39 | | 29 | 46 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 29 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 25 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 30 | | 49 | 35 |
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| 68.33% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.45 | | totalSentences | 60 | | uniqueOpeners | 27 | |
| 98.04% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 34 | | matches | | 0 | "Then his gaze came back" |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 55.29% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 34 | | matches | | 0 | "His platinum hair stayed slicked" | | 1 | "He leaned on the ivory-handled" | | 2 | "She kept her hand on" | | 3 | "It wasn't a smile." | | 4 | "He had never been generous" | | 5 | "He shifted the cane to" | | 6 | "He looked past her shoulder," | | 7 | "he said quietly" | | 8 | "She had told herself she" | | 9 | "She saw him register it," | | 10 | "He glanced down at the" | | 11 | "He almost never used her" | | 12 | "She slid the chain free." | | 13 | "He paused on the mat," |
| | ratio | 0.412 | |
| 33.53% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 34 | | matches | | 0 | "The chain was still on." | | 1 | "Rory had slid the bolt" | | 2 | "Rain darkened the shoulders of" | | 3 | "His platinum hair stayed slicked" | | 4 | "He leaned on the ivory-handled" | | 5 | "She kept her hand on" | | 6 | "Something flickered at the corner" | | 7 | "It wasn't a smile." | | 8 | "He had never been generous" | | 9 | "The stairwell smelled of spilled" | | 10 | "Rory had lived with that" | | 11 | "He shifted the cane to" | | 12 | "Rory breathed out through her" | | 13 | "Eva would be pleased with" | | 14 | "Eva had always enjoyed being" | | 15 | "He looked past her shoulder," | | 16 | "he said quietly" | | 17 | "The jukebox dropped to silence" | | 18 | "Lucien's voice stayed level, but" | | 19 | "She had told herself she" |
| | ratio | 0.853 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 34 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 20 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Eleven months, a new flat, new deliveries for Yu-Fei's restaurant, a job that let her be invisible." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.29 | | leniency | 0.581 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |