| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.55 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.091 | |
| 88.62% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 879 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 26.05% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 879 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "fractured" | | 2 | "wavered" | | 3 | "reminder" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "flicker" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "shimmered" | | 9 | "throbbed" | | 10 | "pulsed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "flicker of emotion" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "a flicker of recognition" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.24% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 60 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 879 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 65.01% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 26 | | wordCount | 706 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.7 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 12 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Tom | 5 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Isolde | 5 | | Veil | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Tom" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.65 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 33.72% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite the wind" | | 1 | "spirals that seemed to shift when Rory looked away" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 879 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 23 | | mean | 38.22 | | std | 29.31 | | cv | 0.767 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 84 | | 1 | 53 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 95 | | 4 | 50 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 77 | | 7 | 30 | | 8 | 52 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 75 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 67 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 70 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 51 | | 21 | 49 | | 22 | 37 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 84.06% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 115 | | matches | | 0 | "were blooming" | | 1 | "was standing" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 707 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.03818953323903819 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009900990099009901 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 69 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 69 | | mean | 12.74 | | std | 8.17 | | cv | 0.641 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 28 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 28 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 14 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 32 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 95.17% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.5797101449275363 | | totalSentences | 69 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 65.36% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 13 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "She walked ahead without looking" | | 1 | "She had stopped trying to" | | 2 | "Their outline wavered between a" | | 3 | "Her left wrist ached faintly" | | 4 | "It was an odd thing" | | 5 | "He stepped forward, awestruck, reaching" | | 6 | "It did not need to." | | 7 | "He backed up three careful" | | 8 | "She felt it before she" | | 9 | "She pulled it out and" | | 10 | "she said quietly" | | 11 | "They crossed the clearing in" | | 12 | "Her breath came shallow and" |
| | ratio | 0.255 | |
| 87.45% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 38 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | | 0 | "The oaks began a hundred" | | 1 | "The park's dusk had been" | | 2 | "Here it was thinner, the" | | 3 | "She walked ahead without looking" | | 4 | "Rory watched the grass bend" | | 5 | "She had stopped trying to" | | 6 | "The voice slid along the" | | 7 | "Nyx drifted at the edge" | | 8 | "Their outline wavered between a" | | 9 | "Rory kept her hands in" | | 10 | "Her left wrist ached faintly" | | 11 | "It was an odd thing" | | 12 | "The clearing opened without warning." | | 13 | "Wildflowers covered the ground, and" | | 14 | "Foxgloves stood tall beside clusters" | | 15 | "Rory knew, with the certainty" | | 16 | "He stepped forward, awestruck, reaching" | | 17 | "Isolde said, and her voice" | | 18 | "It did not need to." | | 19 | "Tom froze with his fingers" |
| | ratio | 0.745 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 51 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 66.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 28 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "She walked ahead without looking back, silver hair loose down her back and catching light that had no business being there." | | 1 | "Rory knew, with the certainty of someone who had studied botany for one miserable semester at Cardiff, that these flowers did not bloom together." | | 2 | "She felt it before she understood it, a faint warmth spreading through the silver chain beneath her shirt, as though someone had pressed a palm to her skin." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 59.09% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "breathed Tom (breathe)" | | 1 | "Isolde agreed (agree)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 20 | | tagDensity | 0.55 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.182 | | effectiveRatio | 0.182 | |