Run: 2026-10-08-01M4DAE9JTFTM8CMZ3XD3B9JST

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Duration:
18.1s
Cost:
$0.001528
Provider:
Claude Platform on AWS

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Northern line platform at Camden had been sealed for nearly a decade, and the damp had long since claimed the advertising tiles. Harlow Quinn stepped down from the last of the iron stairs and felt the cold rise through the soles of her shoes. The air smelled of wet brick and something sweeter underneath, like lilies left too long in a vase. "Mind the third step, ma'am. It's given way." DC Rhys Fenwick stood at the bottom with a torch angled at the floor, his breath clouding in front of him. He was twenty-nine, eager, and had the habit of tapping his pen against his notebook when he was nervous. The pen was going now. "Third step," Quinn said, and stepped over it. The body lay near the platform's edge, face up, one arm flung toward the tracks as if reaching for a train that had left a century ago. The man wore a charcoal suit that had cost more than her monthly rent. His shoes were polished. His hair was dry. That was the first thing that snagged. Quinn crouched beside him, knees cracking, and looked at the stone beneath his shoulders. The floor was slick with condensation, a fine film of moisture beading on every surface, yet the fabric of his collar was bone dry and the back of his jacket had left no pale stain on the grime. "Time of death?" she asked. "Pathologist's guessing sometime between midnight and three." Fenwick shifted his weight. "Lividity's fixed on his back, so he's not been moved after he went down. Which is what I'm saying. He came down those stairs, lost his footing, cracked his head on the edge of the platform. Happens. The place is a death trap." "He lost his footing in a station nobody has used since 2014, at night, in a suit and polished shoes, with no torch." "Drunk, probably. Or on something. The tox screen will tell us." Quinn did not answer. She was looking at the man's left hand, which was curled loosely against his ribs. Between his fingers sat a small disc of bone, yellowed and smooth, carved with a spiral that had been worn almost flat by handling. "Did you bag that?" "Not yet. I was going to get to it." "Get to it now. Don't touch it with your bare fingers." Fenwick pulled on a glove and worked the token free with the care of someone who had been told about the last officer who had handled a cursed item. He held it up to the torchlight. The spiral seemed to catch the beam and hold it a moment longer than it should have. "Looks like a bit of old ivory," he said. "Or a button." "Buttons don't have that much wear on them." Quinn let her gaze drift along the platform. Dust lay thick on the concrete, grey and undisturbed except for a single line of scuffs running from the stairs to the body. Someone had walked that path. But the scuffs were narrow, each print pressed deep at the heel, a long stride. They did not match the dress shoes of the dead man. They were too large. She rose, her left wrist catching the light. The worn leather strap of her watch had darkened with years of sweat, and she tapped its face once out of habit. Twelve minutes past three. She glanced at the dead man's own wrist. His gold watch had stopped at the same time. "Coincidence," Fenwick offered. "I don't believe in them when I'm standing in a hole in the ground." Near the tracks, half-buried in grit, something glinted. Quinn walked to it, stepping wide of the scuffs, and knelt again. A small brass compass lay face down. The casing had a bloom of verdigris along its rim, green as old pennies. She eased it over with the tip of a pen. The face was etched with a ring of tiny marks, each one a jagged little symbol that seemed to crawl when she looked at it directly. The needle was not pointing north. It was trembling, swinging in short arcs, and then it settled toward the far end of the tunnel where the black mouth of the track vanished into nothing. "Sir, that's a bit of a novelty shop thing, isn't it?" Fenwick said, peering over her shoulder. "Tourists buy them down Camden Lock." "Tourists don't buy compasses that point at the dark." Quinn kept her voice flat. "And a tourist doesn't leave one on a dead man's trail with the needle locked on the tunnel." "You're reading too much into a broken toy." "Am I?" She turned the compass so the needle caught the torchlight. "Then tell me why the dust is disturbed on this side of the track but not the other. Two sets of tread come down to the rails, and only one goes back up. Whoever walked out of here wasn't carrying a body, and didn't need the stairs to get out." Fenwick followed her gesture and frowned. He crouched, sweeping his torch along the rail bed. The second line of prints was faint, almost a smear, and ended at the wall beside a blackened archway that had once held a ticket gate. Nothing came out of the wall. "They vanished," he said slowly. "They didn't vanish. They walked through a door that you and I cannot see." He stood, rubbing the back of his neck. "Ma'am, respectfully, we're not in the business of—" "I'm in the business of the body." She pointed to the man's collar. "Look at his neck. No ligature. No bruising on the throat. Now look at his fingernails." Fenwick leaned in. The nails were pale and perfectly clean, but the tips of the index and middle fingers were stained a faint blue-black, like ink that had dried and cracked. "Some sort of dye?" "Or something burned into him, the same way that bone token was burned into the sweat on his palm." Quinn straightened, and her knees protested. "He wasn't running from anything when he came down here. He was carrying that token to get in, and somebody arranged him so the stairs would look like the cause. Somebody who knew exactly how long a man's watch takes to stop when it's been wound too tightly." The lights from the platform overhead flickered once, then steadied. Somewhere in the tunnel a drip of water struck the rails, a sound like a dropped coin. Fenwick's pen had gone quiet. "You think he was murdered here." "I think he was put here," Quinn said, and lifted the compass once more. The needle swung, hesitated, and pointed straight at her.
created_at"2026-10-08T08:35:24.388Z" 10/8/2026, 8:35:24 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.375
leniency0.75
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.063
82.06% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1115
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"loosely"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"perfectly"
count1
3
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"loosely"
1"slowly"
2"perfectly"
3"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
86.55% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1115
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"etched"
2"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences61
matches
0"was nervous"
72.60% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences61
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences81
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1115
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
88.10% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount727
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.24
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Fenwick"
discoveredNames
Northern1
Camden1
Quinn9
Rhys1
Fenwick8
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Fenwick"
places(empty)
globalScore0.881
windowScore1
41.30% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if reaching for a train that had left a century ago"
1"symbol that seemed to crawl when she looked at it directly"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1115
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"walked that path"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean29.34
std21.76
cv0.742
sampleLengths
063
18
245
38
449
559
65
754
823
911
1043
114
129
1311
1453
1512
168
1766
1851
193
2014
2151
2260
2323
2432
258
2662
2747
285
2914
3016
3129
3231
334
3473
3527
3611
3723
70.75% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences61
matches
0"been sealed"
1"was curled"
2"been worn"
3"been told"
4"was etched"
5"were stained"
34.71% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs121
matches
0"was going"
1"was looking"
2"was not pointing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences81
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount730
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"faint blue-black, like"
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.030136986301369864
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.00821917808219178
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences81
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences81
mean13.77
std10.04
cv0.729
sampleLengths
023
122
218
38
421
519
65
78
827
914
104
114
127
1314
1438
155
1611
1743
1823
1911
204
2115
2224
234
249
2511
2629
277
2817
299
303
318
328
3323
345
3515
3611
374
388
3922
404
418
429
433
4414
458
4612
477
4814
4910
81.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.5308641975308642
totalSentences81
uniqueOpeners43
57.47% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences58
matches
0"Somewhere in the tunnel a"
ratio0.017
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences58
matches
0"He was twenty-nine, eager, and"
1"His shoes were polished."
2"His hair was dry."
3"She was looking at the"
4"He held it up to"
5"They did not match the"
6"They were too large."
7"She rose, her left wrist"
8"She glanced at the dead"
9"His gold watch had stopped"
10"She eased it over with"
11"It was trembling, swinging in"
12"She turned the compass so"
13"He crouched, sweeping his torch"
14"he said slowly"
15"He stood, rubbing the back"
16"She pointed to the man's"
ratio0.293
3.10% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences58
matches
0"The Northern line platform at"
1"Harlow Quinn stepped down from"
2"The air smelled of wet"
3"DC Rhys Fenwick stood at"
4"He was twenty-nine, eager, and"
5"The pen was going now."
6"Quinn said, and stepped over"
7"The body lay near the"
8"The man wore a charcoal"
9"His shoes were polished."
10"His hair was dry."
11"That was the first thing"
12"Quinn crouched beside him, knees"
13"The floor was slick with"
14"Fenwick shifted his weight"
15"Quinn did not answer."
16"She was looking at the"
17"Fenwick pulled on a glove"
18"He held it up to"
19"The spiral seemed to catch"
ratio0.914
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
32.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The body lay near the platform's edge, face up, one arm flung toward the tracks as if reaching for a train that had left a century ago."
1"The man wore a charcoal suit that had cost more than her monthly rent."
2"Between his fingers sat a small disc of bone, yellowed and smooth, carved with a spiral that had been worn almost flat by handling."
3"The nails were pale and perfectly clean, but the tips of the index and middle fingers were stained a faint blue-black, like ink that had dried and cracked."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.188
leniency0.375
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.4896%