Run: 2026-10-08-01M4DAKTFXRXFEB2D5B702SK1J

Run Details

Duration:
20.0s
Cost:
$0.001646
Provider:
Claude Platform on AWS

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Northern line platform had been dead for decades, and the tiles still wore the ghosts of adverts for a brand of cigarettes that no longer existed. Quinn ducked under the blue-and-white tape at the bottom of the stairwell and felt the air change. It was colder down here than the November night above, and it carried a faint sweetness, like a church after the candles had been snuffed. "Ma'am." DC Owen Marsh waited by a support pillar, his hi-vis jacket glowing under the work lamps. He had the flushed cheeks of a man who had been awake too long and had decided to enjoy it. "Glad you came. Didn't think you'd want to bother with a tunnel job." "Tell me why it's a tunnel job." Marsh gestured with his notebook toward the middle of the platform. "Maintenance crew found him at half five. Bloke's fallen from the walkway above, looks like. Access hatch was open. Landed badly." Quinn stepped closer. The body lay on its side at the edge of the yellow safety line, one arm folded beneath the chest, the other stretched toward the tracks as though reaching for something that had rolled away. Late fifties, grey overcoat, good leather shoes scuffed at the toes. A tweed flat cap sat upside down a yard from his head, its lining turned out. She crouched beside him and did not touch anything. The left wrist was bare. A pale band of skin showed where a watch had been for years, and the skin around it had not yet caught up with the loss. "Who is he?" "No wallet. No ID. We're running prints." Marsh shifted his weight. "Honestly, ma'am, I think he was pissed and wandered up the old service stairs. Happens more than you'd credit. Nobody's been down here in ages." Quinn let the silence sit. Marsh, to his credit, filled it with something useful after a moment. "There's a bit of a smell," he offered. "Cordite, maybe? Or fireworks." "Fireworks would be a fine thing to have on a platform with no lights," Quinn said. "Show me the walkway." They climbed the rusted stairs to the gantry that ran above the tracks. Here the dust lay thick and undisturbed except for a single trail of footprints, heavy-soled and widely spaced, coming from the hatch and ending at the rail. Quinn knelt and studied them without rising. Two prints, then a long gap, then two more. Whoever had made them had not been walking so much as stepping across something. "Lads from forensics will want these photographed before someone treads on them," she said. "Already on it." Marsh crouched too, his torch beam bobbing. "See? He's come up here, slipped, gone over. Simple." "Simple," Quinn repeated. She rose and pointed at the rail. "Look at the paint." The rail was painted a flaking green. Along the top bar, where a hand would grip, the paint had been scraped away in a neat half-circle. Beneath it the metal shone dull and dark, almost black, as though it had been rubbed with ash. "Rust," Marsh said. "Friction." "Rust doesn't write a pattern." Quinn leaned close and angled her head. Along the scraped arc ran a line of tiny indentations, evenly spaced, each one no bigger than a grain of rice. "Those are not from a fall. Something was pressed against this rail on purpose. Repeatedly." Marsh frowned at it. "Could be anything. Keys. Coins." "Could be." She walked back toward the hatch. The walkway boards were sticky underfoot in a way that had nothing to do with the damp. She stopped, crouched, and touched one fingertip to the surface. Nothing came away on her skin. Not blood, not oil. Just a faint warmth that should not have been there in a space this cold. "Owen. Did the maintenance crew touch the hatch?" "Dunno. Probably. Why?" "Because it's been shut and reopened by someone who wanted it to look like it had been forced from below." She nodded at the bolt. The metal was bright where something had struck it, but the scratches ran the wrong way. "If a man climbed up and fell, the hatch would be pushed outward. These marks show it was dragged open from the inside." Marsh opened his mouth, then closed it. Quinn went back down the stairs, one hand on the rail she had already decided not to trust. At the bottom she turned slowly on the platform, letting her eyes travel the length of the tiles. Near the pillar where Marsh had been standing she noticed a patch of floor that was cleaner than the rest. The dust had been brushed in a broad circle, roughly the width of a man's outstretched arms, and at its centre lay a small ring of grey powder that had been drawn into a pattern and then smudged by the heel of a shoe. "What's that?" Marsh asked, following her gaze. "Ash, I'd say. Bone ash, if I'm honest, though I hope I'm wrong." Quinn didn't kneel this time. "Somebody stood in that circle and waited. Then they walked up to the hatch and the dead man walked up to meet them." "Ma'am, with respect, that's a bit of a leap." "Then leap with me for one minute." She pointed at the body. "Look at the coat. Buttons are done up wrong. Top one into the second hole. A man who's been drinking all evening doesn't button his coat like a soldier on parade, and a man who's climbing a gantry doesn't keep his cap in his hand. The cap was taken off him. Then the watch was taken off him too, and I'd guess it wasn't a thief who did it, because a thief would have left the shoes." Marsh looked at the body, then at the cap, then back at her. His mouth worked silently. "And there's no blood on the tiles," Quinn went on. "He landed on his side, and that's a fall that should have put blood on the concrete. There's a dark stain on his collar, and his hands are clean. Someone washed them, or they were never in the fight at all." "Could be the cold." "Could be." Quinn turned her wrist over and studied the dial of her own watch, a battered leather strap that had outlasted two partners' worth of birthday presents and one long-dead marriage. The second hand moved with steady precision. The stranger's watch, wherever it was now, had surely stopped at the same minute the man hit the floor. "The thing I can't explain is why the tunnel is so warm at the rail and so cold everywhere else." Marsh's torch wavered across the tiles. "What do we do, then?" "We photograph every mark on that rail, every print on that gantry, and the ash in that circle, before anyone sweeps it. We get a sample from the scrape." Quinn turned toward the stairs, then paused. "And you find out who has been coming down here at night with a bone token in their pocket." "A what?" "Nothing yet," she said, and started back up toward the street.
created_at"2026-10-08T08:38:25.541Z" 10/8/2026, 8:38:25 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
57.14% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Marsh crouched too [too]"
1"Quinn leaned close [close]"
2"She walked back [back]"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.143
95.80% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1190
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
83.19% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1190
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"wavered"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"silence"
2"warmth"
3"wavered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences59
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences83
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen77
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1190
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
64.53% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount702
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.71
worstName"Marsh"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Marsh"
discoveredNames
Northern1
November1
Owen1
Marsh12
Quinn12
persons
0"Marsh"
1"Quinn"
places
0"Owen"
globalScore0.645
windowScore0.833
90.48% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as though reaching for something that had rolled away"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1190
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean32.16
std27.42
cv0.853
sampleLengths
069
150
27
332
465
540
63
736
817
912
1020
1170
1214
1319
1414
1544
164
1748
189
1960
208
213
2264
237
24100
257
2641
279
2889
2917
3051
314
3278
3311
3455
352
3611
75.53% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences59
matches
0"been snuffed"
1"was painted"
2"been scraped"
3"been rubbed"
4"been brushed"
5"been drawn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs118
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences83
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount724
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.03867403314917127
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.006906077348066298
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences83
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences83
mean14.34
std11.49
cv0.801
sampleLengths
027
117
225
317
420
513
67
711
821
93
1035
1111
1216
139
145
1526
163
1711
1825
195
2012
218
224
2316
244
2513
2627
277
289
2914
3014
3110
329
333
347
354
367
3719
3818
393
401
4112
4221
4315
444
455
468
4717
4810
496
95.18% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.6024096385542169
totalSentences83
uniqueOpeners50
61.73% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"Just a faint warmth that"
ratio0.019
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences54
matches
0"It was colder down here"
1"He had the flushed cheeks"
2"She crouched beside him and"
3"They climbed the rusted stairs"
4"She rose and pointed at"
5"She walked back toward the"
6"She stopped, crouched, and touched"
7"She nodded at the bolt"
8"She pointed at the body"
9"His mouth worked silently."
10"she said, and started back"
ratio0.204
52.59% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount44
totalSentences54
matches
0"The Northern line platform had"
1"Quinn ducked under the blue-and-white"
2"It was colder down here"
3"DC Owen Marsh waited by"
4"He had the flushed cheeks"
5"Marsh gestured with his notebook"
6"Quinn stepped closer."
7"The body lay on its"
8"A tweed flat cap sat"
9"She crouched beside him and"
10"The left wrist was bare."
11"A pale band of skin"
12"Marsh shifted his weight"
13"Quinn let the silence sit."
14"Marsh, to his credit, filled"
15"They climbed the rusted stairs"
16"Here the dust lay thick"
17"Quinn knelt and studied them"
18"Marsh crouched too, his torch"
19"She rose and pointed at"
ratio0.815
92.59% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences54
matches
0"Whoever had made them had"
ratio0.019
60.44% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The body lay on its side at the edge of the yellow safety line, one arm folded beneath the chest, the other stretched toward the tracks as though reaching for s…"
1"Beneath it the metal shone dull and dark, almost black, as though it had been rubbed with ash."
2"The dust had been brushed in a broad circle, roughly the width of a man's outstretched arms, and at its centre lay a small ring of grey powder that had been dra…"
97.22% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Marsh crouched too, his torch beam bobbing"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Quinn repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.048
90.8808%