Run: 2026-10-09-01M4G011Y7729BBPP98QC5Z5Y2

Run Details

Duration:
13.7s
Cost:
$0.001144
Provider:
Claude Platform on AWS

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came at half eleven, sharp and unhurried, three raps spaced like someone counting. Rory didn't move from the sofa. She had a mug of tea going cold on her knee and a delivery manifest from the Golden Empress spread across the cushion beside her, half-checked. Nobody knocked on the door above Silas' bar. Silas shouted up the stairs, and Eva rang first and then threatened to come over anyway. The knock came again. Two raps this time. Deliberate. She set the mug down, rose, and crossed the bare boards in her socks. Through the spyhole, a distorted fish-eye view showed a charcoal lapel, a silver-tipped cane, and a sliver of platinum hair combed back with more care than the hour deserved. She stood with her palm flat against the wood for three full seconds before she turned the lock. "You've got a nerve," she said. Lucien Moreau leaned on the ivory handle of his cane and looked at her with mismatched eyes, one amber, one black, both steady. "I have a great many things, Aurora. Nerve is the least interesting of them." "Rory. Nobody calls me Aurora unless they want something." "Then I shall try not to want anything." His gaze moved past her shoulder into the flat, lingered on the stacked boxes by the window, and returned to her face. "You've changed the bolts." "Three of them. You remember how many you had to pick last time?" "Two. The third was a courtesy." He tilted his head. "You're still wearing that jumper with the hole in the cuff." She glanced down at her wrist, at the thin crescent scar she'd spent years pretending not to notice, and tugged the sleeve over her knuckles. "It's comfortable." "It's a disgrace." "You've not been here in five months, Lucien. You don't get opinions on my jumpers." Something flickered behind the amber eye. He shifted his weight off the cane and onto the balls of his feet, a movement he had always made right before he decided how much of the truth to spend. "I've been in Paris. Then Lyon. Then a series of unpleasant rooms that do not bear repeating." "And now you're on my doorstep at half eleven." "Yes." "Why?" He didn't answer straight away. Below them, the bar's jukebox thumped through the floorboards, a bass line that rattled the frame. Rory waited. She had learned long ago that Lucien filled silences the way other men filled glasses, and she refused to be the one who poured. "Someone is asking questions about you," he said at last. "Not the usual sort. The sort that come with a price attached to your name." Her stomach went tight and quiet. "What sort of price?" "The kind I refused to pay the last time." "You refused to pay for me." "I refused to let them take you to pay off a debt you didn't owe." His voice stayed level, but the cane's tip tapped once against the threshold, sharp as a full stop. "There is a difference, though I'm told you have never accepted it." "You walked out of the Hollow Court with your coat over your arm and didn't look back. That's what I accepted." "I looked back." He said it quietly, and the words landed heavier than any shout would have. "You weren't looking." She opened her mouth and shut it again. Her heart kicked hard against her ribs, and she hated that he could see it in the flush climbing her throat. "Come in, then," she said, stepping aside. "Before the whole street gets an eyeful and Silas starts charging admission." He didn't move straight away. Instead he reached into his inside pocket and drew out a folded slip of card, thick cream stock, the edges gilded. He held it out between two fingers. "Read it first," he said. "Then decide whether you still want me inside." She took it. The writing was his, precise and looping, a name she didn't recognise, and beneath it a single word she recognised all too well. *Malphora.* Rory's fingers closed around the card. She lifted her eyes to his. "Where did you get this?" "From the same place I got the scar on your name," Lucien said. "Which is why I'm standing in your doorway instead of ringing you from Paris like a sensible man."
created_at"2026-10-09T09:31:08.109Z" 10/9/2026, 9:31:08 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.313
leniency0.625
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount723
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
72.34% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount723
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"comfortable"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"comfortable"
1"flickered"
2"weight"
3"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences39
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences39
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences62
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords723
ratio0.001
matches
0"Malphora."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions11
wordCount450
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.67
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Golden1
Empress1
Silas1
Eva1
Lucien3
Moreau1
Rory3
persons
0"Silas"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Moreau"
4"Rory"
places
0"Golden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences25
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount723
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"hated that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean20.66
std15.19
cv0.735
sampleLengths
015
156
29
343
418
56
637
79
834
913
1021
1127
123
1315
1454
159
161
171
1847
1925
2010
219
226
2345
2421
2520
2629
2719
2833
2913
3026
311
3212
335
3431
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences39
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs79
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences62
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount263
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.030418250950570342
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences62
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences62
mean11.66
std8.38
cv0.719
sampleLengths
015
16
226
38
416
54
64
71
814
929
1018
116
1223
1314
149
1530
164
1713
1810
1911
2025
212
223
2315
246
2531
2617
279
281
291
305
3116
322
3324
3410
3515
366
374
389
396
4033
4112
4221
4317
443
458
4621
477
4812
495
87.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.532258064516129
totalSentences62
uniqueOpeners33
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences33
matches
0"Instead he reached into his"
ratio0.03
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences33
matches
0"She had a mug of"
1"She set the mug down,"
2"She stood with her palm"
3"His gaze moved past her"
4"He tilted his head"
5"She glanced down at her"
6"He shifted his weight off"
7"He didn't answer straight away."
8"She had learned long ago"
9"he said at last"
10"Her stomach went tight and"
11"His voice stayed level, but"
12"He said it quietly, and"
13"She opened her mouth and"
14"Her heart kicked hard against"
15"she said, stepping aside"
16"He didn't move straight away."
17"He held it out between"
18"She took it."
19"She lifted her eyes to"
ratio0.606
20.61% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount29
totalSentences33
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"Rory didn't move from the"
2"She had a mug of"
3"Nobody knocked on the door"
4"Silas shouted up the stairs,"
5"The knock came again."
6"She set the mug down,"
7"She stood with her palm"
8"Lucien Moreau leaned on the"
9"His gaze moved past her"
10"He tilted his head"
11"She glanced down at her"
12"Something flickered behind the amber"
13"He shifted his weight off"
14"He didn't answer straight away."
15"She had learned long ago"
16"he said at last"
17"Her stomach went tight and"
18"His voice stayed level, but"
19"He said it quietly, and"
ratio0.879
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences33
matches(empty)
ratio0
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences14
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Below them, the bar's jukebox thumped through the floorboards, a bass line that rattled the frame."
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He said, and the words landed heavier than any shout would have"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.188
leniency0.375
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.2292%