Run: 2026-10-13-01M4T9VPGQM4ZR1QGFXHC8NRKZ

Run Details

Duration:
52.3s
Cost:
$0.085200
Provider:
Meta

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory reached the Richmond Park gate at eleven minutes to midnight and found the chain already in place across the iron bars. Frost coated the links. It coated the sign with the closing times, the bike rack, the tops of the parked cars along the road behind her. Her breath made small clouds and vanished. The pendant under her jumper did the opposite. The crimson stone, no larger than her thumbnail, pushed heat through the silver chain and into the skin between her breasts, pulse after pulse, each one stronger than the last step she had taken from the bus stop. She took her phone from her coat pocket and opened the photograph again. The envelope had arrived with no stamp and no name, wedged behind the delivery orders at the Golden Empress. Inside sat the pendant and a page torn from a London street atlas. A red pen circle marked Richmond Park. A hand she did not know had drawn a second, tighter circle inside the first, between the trees, and written one word beneath it. Midnight. Her thumb hovered over Eva's number. The signal bar showed an X. "Brilliant start." She pocketed the phone, gripped the top rail, and climbed. Her boots hit the grass on the far side with a wet thud. The sound travelled too far. It rolled past the first line of trees and came back from deeper in the park, flatter, as if the ground in there had no give at all. Rory stood still and listened for traffic. The road sat twenty paces behind her. Cars had passed while she checked the map. Now the gate, the pavement, the street lamps, all of it produced nothing. She turned. Orange light still hung over the railings and lit the frost on the chain. A bus passed behind the iron bars, windows bright, passengers staring at their laps. No engine reached her. No tyres hissed on the wet road. She faced the trees again and lifted her torch. "Right. In, look, out. That covers it." The beam cut a tunnel through the dark. Bare branches. Wet leaves plastered to the path. A bench with a plaque she did not stop to read. The pendant beat against her chest in a rhythm that refused to match her heart. It sped up when she faced west. It cooled a degree when she turned back toward the gate. She went west. Deer should have been there. Richmond had herds, signs warned about them, drivers braked for them on the park roads. Tonight the grass held no eyes, no shift of bulk in the dark, no snort from the tree line. Her torch picked out empty clearings and paths slick with mud. Then the flowers started. They grew in patches at first, low white heads shut tight above the frost, then clusters of violet and yellow between the roots of an oak. January sat on every branch and puddle. Ice skinned the standing water beside the path. The flowers stood open anyway. Petals lifted as her beam passed. One patch turned, each head bending toward her boots, and stayed that way after the light moved on. Rory stopped. The crescent scar on her left wrist itched under her cuff. She pushed the sleeve up. The old white mark looked dark, almost bruised, in the torchlight. "Seasonal. Very normal." She kept to the path until the stones cut across it. They stood between two ancient oaks, grey slabs sunk into the earth at uneven heights. Moss filled letters or cuts on the nearest face, too worn to read. Lichen made pale maps across the stone. Her torch beam thinned when it crossed the gap between them. The light reached the trees beyond with less strength, as if the air inside had weight. Heat flared from the pendant. It stung. Rory hooked two fingers under the chain and held the stone away from her skin. The crimson glow inside it brightened in time with a pulse she felt through her fingertips. Beyond the stones, the ground dipped into a clearing. No frost touched the grass in there. Wildflowers covered it in drifts, white, gold, bruise-purple, their petals wide open to a sky with no moon. The air smelled of warm earth and cut stems, of rain held inside a greenhouse. It smelled wrong for the season. It smelled kept. Rory checked her phone. 11:49. She watched the minute refuse to change. She locked the screen, counted to sixty under her breath, and opened it again. 11:03. The photograph of the atlas page had vanished from her gallery. In its place sat a black square with a white circle at its centre. She tapped it. Her own voice came from the speaker, thin and compressed, recording a note she had no memory of making. "Don't step between the stones after the flowers turn." The recording ended. The clearing beyond the stones held dozens of flower heads, and every one of them faced her. She deleted nothing. She changed nothing. She held the phone at arm's length, opened a fresh voice note, and pressed record. Red numbers climbed on the screen. "Voice note, in case the other one decides to stay. I'm at the stones. The flowers are—" She searched for a word that would not sound mad on playback. "—awake. The pendant is hot. If there's a Hel portal here, it's doing a good job of not looking like a door." She stopped the recording and played it back while she watched the clearing. Her voice listed the stones, the flowers, the heat. Then the speaker gave a small click, and the recording continued for three seconds past the point where she had pressed stop. Breath filled those seconds. It was hers in tone, hers in shape, but it came from a mouth too close to the microphone, and it formed the start of a word before the file cut out. Rory lowered the phone. In the grass at her feet, dew held a line of footprints. They matched her boots. The tread had the same nick at the left heel from a cracked pavement slab outside Silas' bar. The prints crossed under the stones and entered the clearing, one set, neat and single, leading toward the centre. They started at the spot where she stood. They went in. None came out. She moved her left foot. Fresh dew flattened under her sole and left a print beside the first of the set. Two prints now marked her side of the stones. Ahead of her, within the clearing, the original set waited, complete and dry at the edges, as if she had already walked that ground with dry boots. "Okay. No." The word crossed the stones. Something in the clearing repeated its shape without sound. Flowers near the centre dipped in sequence, head after head, the movement passing through them from one plant to the next, tracing a path that curved around the footprint line and halted at its end. Rory lifted the torch again. The beam touched trunks, low branches, the far side of the dip where grass gave way to shadow. Nothing stood there. At the left edge of the light, bark changed. She refused to jerk the beam toward it. She held her wrist steady and moved her eyes instead. A section of the nearest oak had a vertical break in its pattern, a slice the width of her shoulders, darker than the trunk behind it. It had not been part of the tree when the light first passed. She knew the whorls and splits she had seen. She counted them again. The dark slice had no whorls. She looked straight at it. Bark filled her beam, complete, rough, ordinary oak bark with moss in the seams. Water beaded on its surface. A beetle crossed one ridge and vanished into a crack. From behind her right shoulder came the crunch of a leaf under weight. Rory spun. The torch swept empty path, wet stones, the gate-side trees. Leaves lay undisturbed. Her own boot marks pressed the path behind her, a clear line back the way she had come, except for one print she stopped counting at. It sat between two of hers, toe pointed toward her, heel dug deep, filled with water that showed no ripple. The pendant cooled against her fingers. Then it warmed again, once, hard, in answer to a heat she felt on the back of her neck. She spoke to the path, the trees, the stones. "If you want the pendant, say so. If you sent it, even better. Name, complaint, return address. Pick one." No voice answered. Her words reached the stones and lost their edges there. The return she expected, the small echo off bark and rock, never arrived. She took a step backward. Leaves crunched beneath her boot. A second crunch followed, a fraction behind the first, from the grass on her left. It did not match her weight. It pressed the ground with care, the stems bending in a slow sequence her ears could hear better than her eyes could catch: heel, arch, toe. A pause. The next step landed when she breathed in, hidden inside the sound of her own breath, and the flowers beyond the stones bent away from a point near the centre of the clearing. The point moved. Petal by petal, a lane opened through the drifts. It curved toward the gap between the stones. Toward her. Rory backed up until one shoulder blade struck stone. Cold shot through her coat. The phone in her hand lit up on its own, screen white, clock frozen at 11:03, then blank, then white again. In each flash she saw the clearing from a fraction higher up, as if the screen showed her a photograph taken from behind her own head. Stone at her back. Black hair damp against her neck. Her raised hand around the pendant. Blue eyes wide and fixed on the phone itself. The last white flash held for three seconds. In it, the lane through the flowers had reached the stones. Prints filled it now, wet prints on dry grass, each one landing in the photographs between one frame and the next, closer every time the screen lit. Behind her, on the far side of the stone her back touched, breath fogged the night air at the height of her ear.
created_at"2026-10-13T09:35:22.776Z" 10/13/2026, 9:35:22 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.125
leniency0.25
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.12% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1736
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
76.96% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1736
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"pulse"
count3
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"weight"
2"tracing"
3"echo"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences154
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences154
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences161
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1735
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount1673
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.54
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond3
Park2
Golden1
Empress1
London1
Eva1
Hel1
Rory9
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Golden"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences110
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1735
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences161
matches
0"stayed that way"
1"walked that ground"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean30.44
std25.26
cv0.83
sampleLengths
022
179
276
31
412
52
610
746
865
911
109
117
1260
133
1450
154
1670
1729
183
1911
2062
2138
229
2349
2426
251
2647
279
2820
2927
3017
3112
3222
3380
344
3512
3655
3757
382
3949
4026
419
4270
436
4434
4513
4661
4725
489
4919
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences154
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs254
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences161
ratio0.006
matches
0"\"—awake. The pendant is hot. If there's a Hel portal here, it's doing a good job of not looking like a door.\""
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount889
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.019122609673790775
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences161
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences161
mean10.78
std7.64
cv0.709
sampleLengths
022
14
222
37
48
538
613
719
813
97
1024
111
126
136
142
1510
1613
175
1828
197
207
218
2213
232
2414
2514
264
277
289
297
308
312
326
3311
3415
357
3611
373
385
3915
4019
4111
424
4326
447
458
465
476
4818
492
53.46% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.37735849056603776
totalSentences159
uniqueOpeners60
69.44% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences144
matches
0"Then the flowers started."
1"Then the speaker gave a"
2"Then it warmed again, once,"
ratio0.021
83.89% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences144
matches
0"It coated the sign with"
1"Her breath made small clouds"
2"She took her phone from"
3"Her thumb hovered over Eva's"
4"She pocketed the phone, gripped"
5"Her boots hit the grass"
6"It rolled past the first"
7"She faced the trees again"
8"It sped up when she"
9"It cooled a degree when"
10"She went west."
11"Her torch picked out empty"
12"They grew in patches at"
13"She pushed the sleeve up."
14"She kept to the path"
15"They stood between two ancient"
16"Her torch beam thinned when"
17"It smelled wrong for the"
18"It smelled kept."
19"She watched the minute refuse"
ratio0.34
57.22% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount116
totalSentences144
matches
0"Rory reached the Richmond Park"
1"Frost coated the links."
2"It coated the sign with"
3"Her breath made small clouds"
4"The pendant under her jumper"
5"The crimson stone, no larger"
6"She took her phone from"
7"The envelope had arrived with"
8"A red pen circle marked"
9"A hand she did not"
10"Her thumb hovered over Eva's"
11"The signal bar showed an"
12"She pocketed the phone, gripped"
13"Her boots hit the grass"
14"The sound travelled too far."
15"It rolled past the first"
16"Rory stood still and listened"
17"The road sat twenty paces"
18"Cars had passed while she"
19"A bus passed behind the"
ratio0.806
34.72% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences144
matches
0"Now the gate, the pavement,"
ratio0.007
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences68
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The pendant beat against her chest in a rhythm that refused to match her heart."
1"Ahead of her, within the clearing, the original set waited, complete and dry at the edges, as if she had already walked that ground with dry boots."
2"Flowers near the centre dipped in sequence, head after head, the movement passing through them from one plant to the next, tracing a path that curved around the…"
3"In each flash she saw the clearing from a fraction higher up, as if the screen showed her a photograph taken from behind her own head."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
92.4272%