Run: 2026-10-13-01M4TA8VK54CZC8Q4FZ310D8EC

Run Details

Model:
Muse Wonder (Reasoning, Medium)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
52.9s
Cost:
$0.075716
Provider:
Meta

Evaluation summary

Score Evaluator
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100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags (details)
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency (details)
100.00% AI-ism character names (details)
100.00% AI-ism location names (details)
72.60% AI-ism word frequency (details)
100.00% Cliché density (details)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell) (details)
100.00% Filter word density (details)
100.00% Gibberish response detection (details)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse (details)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) (details)
63.00% Name drop frequency (details)
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing (details)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse (details)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) (details)
100.00% Paragraph length variance (details)
100.00% Passive voice overuse (details)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse (details)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse (details)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload) (details)
100.00% Repeated phrase echo (details)
100.00% Sentence length variance (details)
66.09% Sentence opener variety (details)
36.23% Adverb-first sentence starts (details)
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts (details)
41.52% Subject-first sentence starts (details)
54.35% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts (details)
100.00% Technical jargon density (details)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions (details)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) (details)
90.9265% Overall

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The stones stood between the oaks where Richmond Park thinned into mist. Moss filled the cuts in their faces. Roots pushed through their bases and gripped them like fingers through wet earth. Rory stopped before the gap and touched the Heartstone Pendant through her coat. Its crimson heat tapped against her ribs in the park. Beyond the stones, the beat faltered. "Your necklace loses its appetite in my house." Isolde stepped through the gap without a pause in her stride. Her silver hair brushed bark, leaf litter, stone. The wet ground behind her held Rory's boot prints, Nyx's long smear of shadow, and nothing else. No print marked where Isolde had walked. Rory lifted her foot and crossed. Cold hit her teeth. The air tasted of honey, ash, and copper. Sound arrived late. Her boot struck a root, and the thud reached her ears after she had taken the next step. The Fae-Forged Blade at her hip pressed its moonsilver chill through cloth and skin, stronger here than frost on the road outside. She looked back. Richmond Park had shrunk into a grey strip between the stones. Bare branches. A distant gate. A dog barking with its mouth shut inside the mist. "The gate was right behind us." "The gate keeps its place. You lost yours." Nyx slid through beside her, a human shape cut from night, violet eyes open in a face without edges. Their shoulders stretched above the stone as their lower half thinned across the grass. "The shadow here has weight." As if the grove had heard, the darkness under an oak leaned toward Nyx and climbed their leg. Nyx pulled free with a hiss that sounded like wind through a keyhole. Rory checked her phone. The clock showed 4:17. The digits spun backward, stopped at midnight, then raced toward dawn. Three messages from Eva appeared in a stack, each asking where Rory had gone, each dated a different day. "Put that in your pocket before the grove answers it." Rory obeyed and tasted copper again. Her small crescent-shaped scar burned on her left wrist. A ring of white flowers at her feet turned toward the scar. Their petals opened and shut with the beat of her pulse. "They know that mark." "They know the shape. Shapes open doors here. Keep your sleeve down." Rory yanked her cuff over the scar. The flowers bent toward other things then: a beetle with wings like stained glass, a snail shell big as her fist, a feather that changed colour each time it moved. Blue. Green. A wet red that made her think of the pendant. The path widened. Outside the stones, the ring had measured twenty paces across. Inside, the trees stood hundreds of paces apart. Trunks rose into a canopy that hid the sky except for cuts of starlight, though dusk had held the park when Rory entered. Wildflowers pushed through black frost. Plums hung ripe beside cherry blossom. Rain fell upward from a ring of toadstools and vanished into the leaves without sound. A smell of crushed mint rolled from the undergrowth. Beneath it sat warm bread, river mud, and the iron tang of a struck match. Rory breathed through her mouth. "Nothing here agrees with anything else." "Agreement belongs to countries with maps." Isolde moved ahead and left no trace on bark dust or mud. Rory followed the swing of that silver hair and pressed each boot into ground that felt solid a fraction after she trusted it. A pond opened between the trees, round and black and flat as slate. No breeze touched it. Stars burned beneath the surface, packed in bands and spirals, and a moon drifted under the mud at its edge. Rory knelt. Her reflection knelt a breath later. Bright blue eyes stared up. Black hair hung around a face that wore her skin and none of her expression. The reflection smiled first. Rory jerked back. Cold water soaked her knee through her jeans. "Do not wait for it to catch up." Nyx stood at the bank, but the pond held a different figure in their place. A tall human man in a dark coat stood under the water. His hands pressed against the underside of the surface. His mouth opened. Nyx struck the pond with a hand turned solid. The blow cracked the reflection into rings. The man broke apart, coat and face and reaching hands dissolving into black water. "You saw a coat with a hunger in it. Look again and it learns your eyes." "I saw a man." "You saw bait." The rings smoothed. The stars returned one by one. Rory's reflection returned with them, late, its smile gone. She stood on legs that shook. Water dripped from her knee and fell upward for an inch before gravity remembered it. Farther in, the trees changed. Bark gave way to pale wood veined with gold. Fruit hung at head height, skins taut, each fruit pulsing with light from within. A low sound rolled through the branches, part beeswarm, part choir heard through a wall. One fruit split. Juice ran down its skin and carried a woman's laugh across the clearing. Another split. A child counted backward from ten. "Rory." Her own voice called from the far side of the pond. Clear. Exact. It used the clipped tone she saved for bad news and court clerks and Eva after midnight. Rory turned. "Rory, the stones moved. Come back this way." Isolde caught her sleeve. The Half-Fae's fingers had the chill of the Fae blade and a grip that bruised. "The grove has your voice now. It wants the rest of the set." Nyx stretched between two trunks until their body became a black curtain. The voice beyond them repeated Rory's name, then switched to Brendan's voice, then Jennifer's, each call landing in the clearing before the shape that spoke it could form. Rory covered her ears. The voices entered through her jaw instead. Her teeth ached with her father's warning to come home. She pulled the Fae-Forged Blade free. Moonsilver caught the buried moonlight and threw a thin white line across the trees. The fruit shut. The voices cut off in mid-breath. A smell of snow filled the clearing. Ahead, between gold-veined trunks, a second path showed itself: packed earth, blue stones, flowers with teeth tucked inside their petals. The standing stones had no business there, yet one rose beside the path, fresh-cut and warm enough to send steam into the cold air. Isolde released Rory's sleeve and placed her palm flat against the new stone.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1095
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
72.60% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1095
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"chill"
count2
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"raced"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"measured"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"weight"
2"raced"
3"pulse"
4"measured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences100
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences116
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1095
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
63.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions48
wordCount977
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.74
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Rory17
Nyx7
Isolde5
Fae-Forged2
Blade2
Eva2
Half-Fae1
Fae4
Brendan1
Jennifer1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
3"Eva"
4"Half-Fae"
5"Fae"
6"Brendan"
7"Jennifer"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.63
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like wind through a keyhole"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1095
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean22.35
std16.24
cv0.727
sampleLengths
032
129
28
343
46
555
629
76
88
933
105
1131
1238
1310
1438
154
1612
1749
1870
1924
205
216
226
2335
2437
2528
264
2711
288
2939
3030
3116
324
333
3418
3521
3643
3724
381
3930
402
418
4219
4313
4440
4521
4636
4744
4813
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs159
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences116
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount984
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.018292682926829267
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean9.44
std6.03
cv0.639
sampleLengths
012
17
213
313
410
56
68
711
88
917
107
116
124
138
143
1518
1622
173
1811
192
203
2110
226
238
2419
2514
265
2718
2813
294
304
3111
3219
3310
346
359
3612
3711
384
3912
407
4130
421
431
4410
453
4610
478
4823
495
66.09% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.4482758620689655
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners52
36.23% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"Bright blue eyes stared up."
ratio0.011
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences92
matches
0"Its crimson heat tapped against"
1"Her silver hair brushed bark,"
2"Her boot struck a root,"
3"She looked back."
4"Their shoulders stretched above the"
5"Her small crescent-shaped scar burned"
6"Their petals opened and shut"
7"Her reflection knelt a breath"
8"His hands pressed against the"
9"His mouth opened."
10"She stood on legs that"
11"Her own voice called from"
12"It used the clipped tone"
13"Her teeth ached with her"
14"She pulled the Fae-Forged Blade"
ratio0.163
41.52% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences92
matches
0"The stones stood between the"
1"Moss filled the cuts in"
2"Roots pushed through their bases"
3"Rory stopped before the gap"
4"Its crimson heat tapped against"
5"Isolde stepped through the gap"
6"Her silver hair brushed bark,"
7"The wet ground behind her"
8"Rory lifted her foot and"
9"The air tasted of honey,"
10"Sound arrived late."
11"Her boot struck a root,"
12"The Fae-Forged Blade at her"
13"She looked back."
14"Richmond Park had shrunk into"
15"A distant gate."
16"A dog barking with its"
17"Nyx slid through beside her,"
18"Their shoulders stretched above the"
19"Nyx pulled free with a"
ratio0.837
54.35% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"As if the grove had"
ratio0.011
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The flowers bent toward other things then: a beetle with wings like stained glass, a snail shell big as her fist, a feather that changed colour each time it mov…"
1"Black hair hung around a face that wore her skin and none of her expression."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
90.9265%