Run: 2026-10-13-01M4TAWJFX5K21EPMNNP8F3G89

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Duration:
1m 9s
Cost:
$0.090213
Provider:
Meta

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign above The Raven's Nest threw colour across the wet pavement in Soho and stained the rain as it fell past the glass. Rory stood under the awning with water in the seams of her coat and watched a cab drag spray along the kerb. The door handle carried the same notch near its base. Her thumb found it before her eyes did. Inside, heat from the radiators met her face. Tobacco had left the walls years before, but the wood held the smell in its grain, along with lemon oil, beer, and the dust inside old picture frames. Maps covered the brickwork between black-and-white photographs of ports, rail yards, and men in coats squinting against foreign sun. The bookshelf at the back kept its false spine in place, third shelf down. Silas stood behind the bar with a cloth in one hand and a glass in the other. Grey had taken more of his auburn hair, and his beard carried clean lines at the jaw. The silver signet ring on his right hand struck the glass and made a small, clear note. His left leg rested at an angle that kept weight from the knee. He saw her and stopped polishing. Rory set her bag on the floor beside a stool. "You cut your hair." "You grew more grey." "Time has been busy with both of us." She took the stool in front of him. Her straight black hair touched her shoulders and left her face bare. Water darkened the ends. A small crescent scar showed white against the skin of her left wrist where her cuff rode up. Silas put the glass down on a mat printed with a faded anchor. "Last time you sat there, it reached the middle of your back." "Easier on a bike." "You ride now?" "Delivery. Golden Empress, three nights a week. Yu-Fei pays cash on Fridays and feeds me before each shift." "Cardiff?" "London. I came back in March." His hand tightened around the cloth. "March." "Yes." "This is October, Rory." "I know the month." "You know my address too. Your flat sits above this room." The word flat pulled her gaze toward the ceiling. A pipe ticked inside the wall. Somewhere up there, a floorboard had a loose nail near the window, and the tap in the kitchen had dripped unless she turned it past the point marked with red tape. "You rented it out." "No." "You left it empty for four years?" "I aired it. I fixed the tap." "That counts as rent lost." "I counted other things." He filled a glass with tonic and set it before her, then added ice with tongs. In the old days she drank sweet cider and left half of it warm beside the quiz machine. Once, she had cried into a pint because Evan had called the bar six times in an hour and Silas had taken the phone off the hook and put a chair against the door. She lifted the tonic and drank. "No cider?" "It tastes like pudding now." "You used to add sugar to it." "I used to add sugar to tea and then apologise to the cup." His mouth changed shape, but the smile stopped before it reached his eyes. "You did apologise too much." "You told me to stop." "I told you a hundred things. You left before I found out which ones took." A couple entered through the door and shook rain from an umbrella onto the mat. Silas nodded toward a table near the maps. The man helped the woman out of her coat, and their chairs scraped the floor. The ordinary noise filled the gap between the bar stools and gave Rory something to watch. "You never wrote." "No." "A note would have fit on a receipt." "I know." "Eva had a number for you." "She had orders to keep it from you." "Orders." "My orders. Not hers." "She came here after you vanished and drank water for two hours. She kept turning her phone over. Face up, face down. She told me you were safe and then she told me she could not say more in the same breath." Rory turned the glass in a circle. Condensation marked the mat. "Evan found the refuge address in Cardiff." Silas set the cloth aside. "When?" "The week after I left London. He waited near the gate with flowers from a petrol station. White roses. He had cut the stems short enough to fit inside his coat." "Did he touch you?" "He grabbed my sleeve. A support worker came out with two men from the bakery next door. He ran." "And you ran farther." "I went to Eva's cousin in Newport. Then Bristol. Then a room above a chip shop in Bath where the owner let me take shifts under the name Laila." "Laila." "It was on a badge in a drawer. It fit better than mine for a while." Silas looked at her wrist. The scar rose from the skin in a pale curve, a childhood accident on a garden gate that she had once described with a laugh and a pint in her hand. Her hand rested flat now. No tremor. No ring. No nail marks in the palm. "You should have called me." "You had a knee held together with pins and a bar full of men who asked questions for money." "That describes half my phone book." "You would have come." "Yes." "That was the reason." The couple near the maps laughed at something on a phone screen. Silas watched them for a moment, and the muscles along his jaw shifted under his beard. "I went to your father's funeral." The glass stopped in Rory's hand. "Mum wrote to you?" "Jennifer sent a card to the bar. Black border. She wrote that Brendan had died on a Tuesday and that the service would take place on Friday. She added a line at the bottom. No flowers. Donations to a legal aid clinic." "She never told me you came." "I sat at the back. She wore a blue coat and carried gloves in one hand. After the service she stood by the door and thanked each person. She thanked me too. Then she held my hand and asked if I had news of you." Rory looked down at the tonic. Bubbles rose and broke at the surface. "What did you give her?" "The truth in its smallest form. No news." "He died thinking I hated law more than I loved him." "He died knowing you hated the course. Fathers can hold two facts at once when pride gives them room." "We spoke once in the last five years. He called about a training contract. I told him I delivered noodles for a woman who kept chilli oil in a teapot. He asked if I had thrown away three years. I asked if he had kept the receipt." Silas reached under the bar and brought out a bottle of water. He poured some into a clean glass and drank before he spoke again. "I kept your boxes in the back room." "Through the bookshelf?" "Third shelf down. Your textbooks sit beside Eva's terrible watercolour of the Thames. There is a blue scarf, a phone charger for a phone no company makes now, and a mug with Cardiff Castle on it." "I searched for that mug in three cities." "It has a chip." "It had the chip when I bought it." "You bought it chipped?" "It cost fifty pence less." A laugh left her before she caught it. The sound startled the man at the map table. Silas heard it and his shoulders dropped a fraction, as if a strap across his chest had loosened. "There it is." "What?" "A sound I used to get for free." "You get silence for free now." "I paid for that too." She wrapped her hand around the glass. The ice had begun to melt and thin the tonic. "Evan went to prison in January." His eyes fixed on hers, bright and hard. "For what?" "He broke into a woman's house in Swansea. She had a camera above the door. The court gave him three years." "You learned this from Eva." "From Mum. She clipped the court report and sent it to Bristol without a letter. Just the cutting and a stamp." "Three years." "He served eleven months before this month. Eva heard from a friend in the probation service." The signet ring struck the bar as his hand came down flat. "You came back before March." "I came back when I stopped checking each street twice." "And you kept twelve streets between us for seven months." "Ten. I timed the walk." The admission hung between them. Silas picked up a clean glass and began to polish it, though the glass shone under the bar lights. His limp showed when he shifted to reach a higher shelf. He used the counter for balance and pretended the movement came from habit. "Your knee got worse." "The joint wants a replacement. The surgeon wants a signature. We remain in talks." "You hate hospitals." "I hate forms. Hospitals have chairs and tea." "You told me once that a hospital bed made a fine place to recruit a nurse." "I deny all knowledge." "You were drunk that night." "I was in character." She studied the photographs behind him. One showed Silas in Prague beside a bridge, younger, with dark auburn hair and a coat too thin for the snow around his boots. His left knee had bent without effort in that picture. Her own face appeared in a smaller frame near the till, half hidden behind Eva and a tower of empty glasses at a birthday long past. Someone had kept the print behind glass and wiped the dust from its corners. "You kept my picture up." "The frame came with the till." "Frames sit in drawers in this city by the thousand." "That one earns its place." "Sentiment from the Spymaster." "Age has ruined my tradecraft." Her bag rested against her ankle. Inside it, folded into a square, sat a letter she had written in Bath on the back of a menu, then rewritten in Bristol on paper from a library printer, then copied again in a bedsit in Peckham with a pen that kept skipping. Three versions. Each one bore a date. None bore a stamp. "I wrote to you." Silas stopped polishing. "Ink or intention?" "Both. I kept the pages." "Kept them where?" "With my passport." "So they travelled well." "They got damp in Bath." "Paper suffers in this country." She pulled the zip an inch, then stopped. Her fingers rested on the teeth of the zip and pressed until the metal left marks. "You gave me the train ticket to London the first time." "I remember the platform." "You told me to cut every thread." "I told you to cut the threads Evan could pull." "You said a clean break heals straight." "I said a lot of things with blood on my shirt that night." Her gaze dropped to his right hand. The signet ring carried a scratch across its face that had not been there in the photograph by the bridge. "He followed me to the station." "I know. I put two men on the concourse and one in a taxi shirt outside." "You never told me." "You had enough faces in your head. Mine was set to become one more if I gave you a reason to look back." "So you let me think you had washed your hands." "I let you leave. There is a difference, though it wore the same coat for four years." The door opened and cold air crossed the floor. A delivery driver in a yellow jacket carried a crate toward the cellar hatch. Silas lifted a hand and pointed with two fingers. The man changed course without a word. Rory watched the exchange. "You still run this place like a listening post." "I run a bar with good sightlines." "And a false bookshelf." "That shelf holds cookery books. No person of sense trusts a landlord with cookery books." "You read them?" "I use one to prop the cellar door." She finished the tonic. Silas took the glass and washed it in the sink behind the bar. Steam rose around his hands. He dried them on a fresh cloth and placed a key on the mat where the glass had stood. The key had a green plastic tag with the number two written in marker. "The flat needs air." "It has had air. It needs a person." "Rent?" "Pay Yu-Fei on Fridays. Pay me when you stop counting the walk in streets." Rory picked up the key. The metal held heat from his palm. "Coffee first, Si."
created_at"2026-10-13T09:53:19.881Z" 10/13/2026, 9:53:19 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2138
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
95.32% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2138
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences86
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences216
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2138
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount1027
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.36
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Evan1
Silas14
Rory8
Prague1
Eva1
Bath1
Bristol1
Peckham1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Evan"
3"Silas"
4"Rory"
5"Eva"
places
0"Soho"
1"Prague"
2"Bath"
3"Bristol"
4"Peckham"
globalScore0.818
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2138
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences216
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs164
mean13.04
std15.89
cv1.219
sampleLengths
066
169
264
36
410
54
64
78
842
913
1012
114
123
1318
141
156
166
171
181
194
204
2111
2246
234
241
257
267
275
284
2968
306
312
325
337
3413
3513
365
375
3815
3954
403
411
428
432
446
458
461
474
4842
4911
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs147
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences216
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1029
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.012633624878522837
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences216
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences216
mean9.9
std8.61
cv0.87
sampleLengths
026
122
210
38
48
528
619
714
817
917
1017
1113
126
1310
144
154
168
178
1812
194
2018
2113
2212
234
243
2518
261
276
286
291
301
314
324
3311
349
356
3631
374
381
397
407
415
424
4316
4418
4534
466
472
485
497
49.38% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.32407407407407407
totalSentences216
uniqueOpeners70
80.32% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences83
matches
0"Somewhere up there, a floorboard"
1"Once, she had cried into"
ratio0.024
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences83
matches
0"Her thumb found it before"
1"His left leg rested at"
2"He saw her and stopped"
3"She took the stool in"
4"Her straight black hair touched"
5"His hand tightened around the"
6"He filled a glass with"
7"She lifted the tonic and"
8"His mouth changed shape, but"
9"Her hand rested flat now."
10"He poured some into a"
11"She wrapped her hand around"
12"His eyes fixed on hers,"
13"His limp showed when he"
14"He used the counter for"
15"She studied the photographs behind"
16"His left knee had bent"
17"Her own face appeared in"
18"Her bag rested against her"
19"She pulled the zip an"
ratio0.289
8.19% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences83
matches
0"The green neon sign above"
1"Rory stood under the awning"
2"The door handle carried the"
3"Her thumb found it before"
4"Tobacco had left the walls"
5"Maps covered the brickwork between"
6"The bookshelf at the back"
7"Silas stood behind the bar"
8"The silver signet ring on"
9"His left leg rested at"
10"He saw her and stopped"
11"Rory set her bag on"
12"She took the stool in"
13"Her straight black hair touched"
14"Water darkened the ends."
15"A small crescent scar showed"
16"Silas put the glass down"
17"His hand tightened around the"
18"The word flat pulled her"
19"A pipe ticked inside the"
ratio0.904
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Silas heard it and his shoulders dropped a fraction, as if a strap across his chest had loosened."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
89.9962%