Run: 2026-10-13-01M4TB40GFVPWPADVGQKZ6SG1Q

Run Details

Duration:
1m 9s
Cost:
$0.102121
Provider:
Meta

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon above The Raven's Nest threw a sick light across the wet pavement outside, and rain needled the windows in gusts that rattled the glass in its frames. Inside, old maps papered the walls between black-and-white photographs of men in coats on foreign streets, and the air held polish, beer, and the ginger heat that clung to Aurora Carter's delivery jacket. Rory came down the stairs from the flat above the bar with an empty Golden Empress bag hooked over one shoulder. Her straight black hair stuck to her neck from the last run through the rain. A receipt had welded itself to her palm. Silas Blackwood stood behind the bar and turned a glass in his hands. The silver signet ring on his right hand knocked the wood each time he set a glass down. His grey-streaked auburn beard had gone damp at the edges from a trip to the bins out back, and his left knee kept him anchored to one spot behind the pumps. "You eat on that run, Carter?" "Yu-Fei fed me at the counter." "That counts as a food group now?" "She put an egg on rice and pointed at a stool. Resistance cost more than compliance." Silas poured water and pushed it across the bar. Rory drank and watched the door in the mirror behind the bottles. The mirror gave the room back in pieces. Coats. Hands. The maps with their borders no country honoured anymore. The door opened and let in rain and a woman in a charcoal suit. She shook water from a cropped head of hair that had once hung past her waist in red ropes, closed a black umbrella with a snap, and scanned the room with the brisk inventory of a person pricing furniture. Rory set the glass down on the wrong part of the bar and left a ring. The woman ordered at the far end. "Tonic. Ice, no gin, and a slice of anything citrus you have that hasn't died in a drawer." The Welsh in her voice had lost its Cardiff lift. Each word landed flat, London-clipped, except home, which came out with a bend she caught too late. Rory spoke before sense got a vote in. "Eva." The woman turned. Her face did the work in stages. Eyes first. Mouth after. Her hand closed around the umbrella handle and squeezed water onto her shoe. "Christ. Rory." Silas took in the pair of them and moved down the bar toward a man with a newspaper, limp favouring the good leg, rag in hand. He gave them the whole corner and the maps of Prague and Berlin above it. Eva crossed the room. She had lost the nose ring, the chipped black polish, the habit of filling silence with her hands. A plain gold band sat on her left ring finger. Her suit had cost money and showed the receipt in every seam. She stopped a foot from Rory and the gap held four years of unanswered phones. "You work here?" "I live upstairs. The bag belongs to Yu-Fei Cheung at the Golden Empress. Deliveries." "Deliveries." "Food goes out hot. People pay me. Radical system." "You left Cardiff University with two years of pre-law done and a tutor who wrote your name on the board as an example." "Tutors love a cautionary tale." Eva looked at the delivery bag, at Rory's wet trainers, at the crescent scar on her left wrist where Rory's thumb worried the skin without thought. "You changed your number." "I changed a lot of things in a hurry." "You changed it and forgot to perform the second half of the trick. The part where you give the new one to people who ring hospitals for you." Silas set a tonic down near Eva and left without a word. Eva picked it up and put it down again in the exact ring it had made. "I rang St David's. I rang the Heath. I rang your mother." "Jennifer kept a list by the phone. Dad colour-coded it." "Your father still calls me by my full name in chambers." Rory's shoulders hitched. She caught the movement and parked her hands on the bar. "Chambers." "I qualified last spring. Brendan offered me the pupillage after my second six. I took it." "You took my dad's pupillage." "I took the one going. You had vacated the family seat." "I never sat in it. I perched and plotted arson." "You perched for twenty-one years. People built plans around the shape of you in that chair." A man at the jukebox fed coins in and got a trumpet solo for his trouble. It filled the pause and gave neither of them shelter. Eva sat on the stool next to Rory and turned it a quarter inch at a time until their knees pointed at each other. "You look thin." "You look expensive." "I look employed by your father, which in Cardiff counts as a branch of the family." "He always wanted a daughter with a spine made of case law." "He wanted you left alone. He asked in about six ways that all sounded like cross-examination." "And Mum?" "Jennifer teaches three days a week now. She grows tomatoes that stage coups against the fence. She asks after you through weather reports. Cardiff rain gets a mention and then your name falls out of the sky with it." Rory picked up her water and found it empty. Silas refilled it on one of his passes and kept walking. "When did you cut the hair?" "Second year of the Bar course. A judge in Newport looked at the curls and addressed every answer to my chest. I went to a barber in Roath that same night and told him to take the lot." "You loved that hair. You set fire to it with a straightener at my fourteenth birthday and kept the party going with a tea towel on your head." "It grew back. Most decisions do, given neglect." "The nose ring?" "MRI after a car accident on the M4. They took it out and the hole closed before I remembered I cared. No grand conversion, Rory. Maintenance failed." "And the gin?" Eva turned the tonic so the ice shifted. "That one had help. Tuesday nights in a church hall off City Road. Bad tea and people who nod at the parts newcomers skip." "You used to drink vodka from a kettle at house parties because glasses slowed the operation." "The kettle belonged to Evan." The name dropped between them and stayed there. Rory's thumb pressed the scar on her wrist until the skin blanched. "He kept the kettle. I hope it furred up and poisoned his tea." "He lives in Penarth. Works for an insurance firm. Married a woman from their office who wears scarves indoors." "You track him?" "Cardiff tracks everyone. A city that size functions as one long corridor with curtains." "I should have rung from London. First week. First month. I had the words stacked in the right order each night on Silas's stairs and each morning the stack had fallen over." "You sent a card when Mam died." Rory lifted her head. "I sent flowers." "You sent a card to the chapel with no return address and handwriting you disguised as a left-handed child. You spelled Bronwen with two n's. She taught you piano for six years." "I learned about the funeral from a girl from school in a petrol station outside Reading. Three weeks after. Evan had my phone in his coat for the last stretch, and after, the shame did the same job without the coat." "You think shame reads as silence at the other end? It reads as a door." Eva's gold band caught the light from the bottles. She covered it with her other hand, then dropped the hand when she saw Rory notice the gesture. "Married?" "Eighteen months. Gareth. He builds bridges and sends photographs of rivets with captions that belong in a hostage note. He knows your name. He knows the Cardiff version, which has better hair and worse judgement than the one in this bar." "Does he know the London version exists?" "He knows a space exists. I have kept you in the family grammar. Present tense, details pending." Silas called last orders for the kitchen at the far end, though the Raven's Nest kitchen consisted of a toastie machine and crisps in three flavours. The trumpet on the jukebox gave way to a woman singing about a train. Eva took a breath that moved her suit at the ribs. "You told me to leave Evan on a Tuesday. You had a bag packed behind your door for a month and you told me to make the call while he played football." "I did make the call." "You called a taxi to my flat and sat on my floor and shook until the radiator burned your back through your coat. I held a frozen bag of peas to your face and you apologised to the peas." "I remember the peas. I owe them a formal letter." "You owe me a phone call from 2022 that has accrued interest." Rory pulled the delivery bag off her shoulder and set it on the floor between her trainers. The Golden Empress logo faced the ceiling, gold on red. "I rehearsed it in other people's doorways. Deliveries give a person thirty seconds on a step with a bag going cold. I stood in Walthamstow and Soho and Camden and told strangers' doors that you had pulled me out by the hair and that gratitude had curdled in my mouth because every word I sent back proved I had gone and built nothing worth reporting." "You built distance. That counts as construction." "I built a tab at this bar and a reputation for knowing which tower blocks have lifts that lie about their floors." Eva laughed once. The sound lacked practice. She stopped it with a sip of tonic. "Brendan had a stroke scare in March." The glass in Rory's hand hit the bar harder than she aimed for. Water jumped. "He what?" "A night in hospital. Tests. A doctor with graphs. He told Jennifer to keep it from you until the results cleared, then the results cleared and pride took over the rota." "Is he—" "He walks the Taff trail and bullies his blood pressure cuff each morning. He keeps your graduation prospectus in his desk. The one from before you dropped out. He uses it as a coaster and denies the symbolism under oath." "He would commit perjury over a coaster." "He commits it over you at Sunday lunch. Jennifer kicks him under the table. He calls it a reflex condition." Eva reached into her suit pocket and produced a phone with a cracked corner. She set it face-down and kept two fingers on it, as if it might leave. "Gareth sent three rivet photographs during this conversation. The man documents load-bearing steel the way other people document children." "You picked a bridge builder." "I picked a person who rings back." The sentence landed without heat, which gave it weight. Rory nodded at the tonic glass, at the suit, at the cropped hair, assembling the woman in front of her from parts that refused the old blueprint. "When do you go back to Cardiff?" "Tomorrow night. Chambers in the morning, then a plea hearing that will eat the afternoon and call it lunch." "And tonight?" "A hotel in Bloomsbury with a shower that scalds one shoulder at a time. I came in here because the neon reminded me of the chip shop sign on Albany Road and I had run out of road to walk without thinking." "We got rained on outside that chip shop after Evan locked me out in February. You gave me your coat and stole chips off a boy who owed you money." "I gave you my coat and you gave it to a dog outside Spar because you said it had honest eyes." "The dog wore it better." "The dog had the posture for it." Silas set two packets of crisps between them and retreated. Eva opened one with her teeth, caught herself, and used her hands. She offered the packet across. Rory took a crisp and ate it and the salt cut through the taste of rain at the back of her throat. "Tell me about the church hall." "Tell me about the stairs first. You owe chronology." "I owe you a small nation's debt in chronology." "Then start paying in instalments." Rory turned her wrist over. The crescent scar caught the bar light, pale against skin gone cold. "You know this came from a bike chain in Dad's garage. I told every new person in London it came from a broken bottle in a pub brawl, because a brawl made the rest of the story easier to file." Eva leaned in. Salt sat on her lower lip. Her phone lit face-down against the wood and buzzed against her fingers, and she kept her hand flat on it and her eyes on Rory.
created_at"2026-10-13T09:57:23.613Z" 10/13/2026, 9:57:23 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2189
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
88.58% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2189
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"coded"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"silence"
2"coded"
3"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences72
filterMatches
0"notice"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences159
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen65
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2189
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions54
wordCount917
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity2.07
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Aurora1
Carter1
Golden2
Empress2
Blackwood1
Welsh1
Cardiff1
London-clipped1
Prague1
Berlin1
Rory19
Eva12
Silas7
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Aurora"
3"Carter"
4"Blackwood"
5"Rory"
6"Eva"
7"Silas"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London-clipped"
2"Prague"
3"Berlin"
globalScore0.464
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2189
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences159
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs117
mean18.71
std15.65
cv0.837
sampleLengths
063
144
262
36
46
57
616
740
853
916
107
1118
1227
138
141
1527
162
1741
1859
193
2014
211
229
2323
245
2526
264
279
2828
2928
3012
3110
3211
3314
341
3516
365
3711
3810
3916
4050
413
423
4316
4412
4516
462
4739
4820
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs144
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences159
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount923
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.013001083423618635
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences159
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences159
mean13.77
std11.01
cv0.8
sampleLengths
030
133
221
315
48
513
618
731
86
96
107
1116
129
1312
148
151
161
179
1814
1939
2016
217
2218
2310
2417
258
261
273
287
292
302
3113
322
3326
3415
354
3618
3710
3812
3915
403
4114
421
439
4423
455
4626
474
489
4928
43.71% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.2830188679245283
totalSentences159
uniqueOpeners45
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences67
matches
0"Her straight black hair stuck"
1"His grey-streaked auburn beard had"
2"She shook water from a"
3"Her face did the work"
4"Her hand closed around the"
5"He gave them the whole"
6"She had lost the nose"
7"Her suit had cost money"
8"She stopped a foot from"
9"She caught the movement and"
10"It filled the pause and"
11"She covered it with her"
12"She stopped it with a"
13"She set it face-down and"
14"She offered the packet across."
15"Her phone lit face-down against"
ratio0.239
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences67
matches
0"The green neon above The"
1"Rory came down the stairs"
2"Her straight black hair stuck"
3"A receipt had welded itself"
4"Silas Blackwood stood behind the"
5"The silver signet ring on"
6"His grey-streaked auburn beard had"
7"Silas poured water and pushed"
8"Rory drank and watched the"
9"The mirror gave the room"
10"The maps with their borders"
11"The door opened and let"
12"She shook water from a"
13"Rory set the glass down"
14"The woman ordered at the"
15"The Welsh in her voice"
16"Each word landed flat, London-clipped,"
17"Rory spoke before sense got"
18"The woman turned."
19"Her face did the work"
ratio0.985
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
61.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The green neon above The Raven's Nest threw a sick light across the wet pavement outside, and rain needled the windows in gusts that rattled the glass in its fr…"
1"Inside, old maps papered the walls between black-and-white photographs of men in coats on foreign streets, and the air held polish, beer, and the ginger heat th…"
2"She shook water from a cropped head of hair that had once hung past her waist in red ropes, closed a black umbrella with a snap, and scanned the room with the b…"
3"Each word landed flat, London-clipped, except home, which came out with a bend she caught too late."
4"Eva took a breath that moved her suit at the ribs."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.2437%