Run: 2026-10-13-01M4TB4HPXGD65C3XM7TTYBN3Z

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Duration:
1m 3s
Cost:
$0.098096
Provider:
Meta

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Veil parted between the ancient oak standing stones with a sound like lake ice cracking under a boot. Rory stepped through first. Cold bit her teeth on one side of her face. Heat rolled across the other. Her boot left wet grass in Richmond Park and struck warm stone, and the change ran up her leg and settled in her knees. The Heartstone Pendant jumped against her chest. The deep crimson stone on its silver chain pulsed with heat in time with her blood, each beat stronger than the last, and light moved inside the gem like wine held up to a lamp. Nyx came through beside her without touching the ground. Their humanoid silhouette stretched to six feet and more, then snapped back into shape as the shimmering distortion closed behind them. Violet light burned in place of eyes. Isolde crossed last. Her silver hair lifted in a wind Rory could not feel. Her bare feet crossed mud and stone and left no print in either. Before them, Dymas opened under a warm amber sky with no sun in it. The light came from everywhere. It lay across vineyard rows that climbed hills in green terraces. It caught on orchard trees laden with fruit in colours Rory had no names for, fruit with skins like polished glass, fruit with rinds that opened and closed in a slow breath. It lit a road of pale stone that ran from the standing stones on this side of the Veil, down through gardens and long open halls, toward a city of domes and kitchen chimneys. Rory lifted her chin and tasted the air on her tongue. Plum. Smoke. Browned butter. Fermented grapes. Blood orange peel scorched on a hot pan. "It has a flavour. The air itself." Nyx turned their head toward the nearest orchard. Their shadow body thinned at the edges, and the amber light passed through them and cast violet pools on the stone. "Your world peels away with each step. This one puts its fingers in the mouth." Isolde walked ahead over the warm road. Wildflowers at the verge bent away from her feet before she reached them. "The table groans, the guest forgets the door. Pretty hunger wears a crown here." Rory adjusted the strap across her shoulder and felt the Fae-forged blade knock against her hip. The moonsilver dagger stayed cold through cloth and leather. Cold bit into her thigh with each stride, a clean contrast to the pendant heat at her throat. The road dropped between vineyard terraces. Vines as thick as Rory's wrist climbed posts of black wood. Grapes hung in clusters the size of lanterns. Each grape held a point of amber light at its centre, and juice moved under the skin when the wind passed through the leaves. Rory stopped beside a low vine and raised her hand. Heat radiated from the fruit. A scent rose from it, peach and iron and rain on hot earth. A grape split before her fingers touched it. Juice ran down the skin in a clear bead and stopped, held in place, quivering. "Do not pick it." Isolde stood two rows away. Rory had not seen her move between the vines. Pale lavender eyes held Rory's face, and the flowers at Isolde's hem turned their heads toward her. Rory withdrew her hand. The split grape sealed itself. The seam vanished. "You could have led with that before my fingers got curious." "A warning heard too soon becomes a dare. A warning heard at the teeth becomes a lesson." Nyx drifted along the row. A vine leaned toward them as they passed. Leaves brushed their shoulder and curled black at the tips, then flushed green again behind them. "This place feeds on attention too. The vines know a new scent." The sound reached them from below the terraces. At first Rory heard cutlery against porcelain, a thousand small strikes out of rhythm. Under it ran music from stringed instruments with too many notes in each chord. Under that, voices rose and fell in the cadence of a feast, people calling for dishes, laughing with full mouths, shouting names across tables. Rory followed the road down. The stone changed under her boots. Veins of copper ran through it, then veins of bone white marble, then panels of dark glass that reflected the amber sky and none of the three travellers. At the bottom of the hill, an open hall stood without walls. Columns of twisted fig trees supported a roof of living leaves. Tables ran the length of the hall and vanished around a bend in the road. People sat shoulder to shoulder on benches, in evening dress, in work clothes, in robes stitched with gold thread. Platters covered every surface. Roasts steamed beside towers of fruit. Bowls of soup reflected faces that did not match the people leaning over them. Bread tore open and filled itself again. A woman cut a slice from a cake, and the cake closed the wound before the knife left its surface. No one at the tables looked full. No one looked satisfied. A man in a white shirt reached for a roasted bird. His hand passed through the handle of his knife twice before he caught it. Light from the domed lamps passed through his wrist. Rory stopped at the edge of the hall. Her crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist prickled. She rubbed it with her thumb and watched the man's hand shake as he cut. "He has no shadow." Nyx stood at her right. Their form pulled in tight, taller and narrower, and their voice came on the wind through fig leaves. "Few at these tables cast one. The kitchens keep them." Isolde stepped between two columns. A servant in a red coat approached with a tray of cups. The liquid in each cup moved against gravity, climbing one side of the glass in a dark red wave. The servant offered the tray to Isolde with a bow that bent him double. Isolde placed two fingers under the tray and pushed it down and away. "The cup gives the hand a master. The gift writes its name in the gut." The servant straightened. His smile stayed fixed while his eyes darted toward Rory, toward Nyx, toward the road behind them. He backed into the press of other servants and vanished. Rory watched the tables again. A girl no older than ten sat between two old women and ate cherries from a silver bowl. Each cherry left a black stain on her lips that spread and faded. The old women fed her spoonfuls of cream between cherries and wiped her chin with napkins that came away clean. "How long has she sat there?" Isolde touched a fig leaf. The leaf curled around her finger and released a drop of milk white sap that floated upward. "Ask the bowl. It counts in refills, not years." A bell rang at the far end of the hall. Heads turned at the tables. Servants moved in lines toward a gate Rory had missed, set into a hedge of rosemary higher than the fig trees. The hedge gave off a scent so sharp it cut through butter and plum and smoke and cleaned the back of her throat. Beyond the gate, a garden descended in rings toward a river. The river ran gold and opaque between banks of mint and shattered sugar glass. Trees in the rings bore blossom and ripe fruit on the same branch. White flowers opened beside black plums. Green apples hung next to blossom buds that burst as Rory watched. Nyx moved toward the gate before Rory did. Their silhouette stretched across the road, incorporeal at the waist, solid at the hands. One hand passed through a rosemary branch. The branch shivered and released seeds that hung in the air in a spiral. "The wards taste old. Older than the hall. Older than the road." Rory drew the Fae blade. Cold flooded her palm and shot clean lines of sensation into her wrist and elbow. The leaf-shaped dagger caught amber light along its edge and threw it back white. In the shimmer between gateposts, lines of force appeared, a net of hair-thin strands across the opening. Each strand bore knots, and each knot held a tiny bell made of bone. She raised the blade to the lowest strand. The moonsilver met the ward with no sound. The strand parted. The bone bell above it opened like a mouth and shut without ringing. Isolde inclined her head. Approval narrowed her eyes and softened nothing else in her face. "The Courts made that edge for doors that deny their shape." Rory cut a second strand, then a third. A gap opened at waist height. Cold air poured out of the garden and carried scents of anise and crushed ice and green things growing in dark soil. It cooled the sweat that had gathered between Rory's shoulder blades under the amber heat. Nyx slipped through first. Their body folded at the gap and re-formed on the far side with violet eyes flaring in the shade of a tree that bore pears and white roses together. Rory ducked through. The cut strands brushed her hair. Each touch left a note in her ears, a chord that faded as she straightened on the garden path. Inside the rings, sound changed. The feast noise fell behind the rosemary hedge. Water spoke against stone. Insects with wings like stained glass moved between flowers and struck soft chimes from petals as they landed. Fruit fell from a tree ahead and bounced once, twice, then rolled uphill back to the trunk and climbed into its branch. Rory crouched beside a bed of herbs. The leaves bore script in their veins, lines that shifted when she tilted her head. She reached out and stopped with her fingers above a leaf that spelled her name in green thread, then broke the letters apart and re-formed them as Carter, then Laila, then a word her mouth shaped without permission. She snatched her hand back and stood. Her bright blue eyes watered from the garden scents. Her black hair clung to her neck. "It knows names I do not use in public." Isolde stood on the path with her hands folded in her sleeves. Soil showed no mark where she had walked across it. "A garden in Dymas learns the appetite under the name. It lays a place for each." At the centre of the rings, chefs worked at open fires built into tables of black stone. They wore white coats and tall hats and chains of dull iron around their throats. Each chain ran down into the stone table and vanished. A chef turned a spit with meat that changed species as it rotated, pig to lamb to a bird with silver feathers. His eyes stayed on the fire. His mouth moved in a count of turns. When he reached a number Rory could not hear, he began again. Another chef, a woman with burns mapping both forearms in lace patterns, piped cream onto pastries in shapes that moved. Swans folded their necks. Ships raised sails. Tiny hands opened and closed. The woman placed each pastry on a tray, and a servant carried the tray up the rings toward the hall. The woman looked up as Rory passed her table. Her chain pulled taut. Iron links ground against stone. Her voice cracked on the first word. "Girl. Blue eyes. What year sits on Earth?" Rory stopped. The pendant beat hard against her sternum, heat on heat. "Winter holds London. The year turned a month ago." The woman pressed her piping bag until cream burst from a seam and spilled across her fingers. She stared at the spill as if it had spoken. "A month. A month. They served my contract in courses. I signed for my son's lungs. I signed in a hospital corridor with soup on the man's shoes." Nyx materialised at the end of the table. Solid hands rested on black stone. Their whisper cut across fire crackle and water. "Who holds the other end of your chain?" The woman lifted her chin toward the highest dome in the city beyond the garden. Gold light crowned its roof. A weathervane in the shape of a tongue turned there, tasting the wind. "The Prince keeps a menu of debts. Belphegor reads it at supper." Isolde stepped to Rory's side. Her presence cooled the air between them and bent the chef's fire away. "Names given here acquire weight. Spend them with care." Rory looked from the chef to the river, to the rings rising around them, to the tables of black stone sunk deeper into the garden where more chains ran into more fires and more hands shaped food that repaired itself as fast as knives could open it. Her blade stayed cold in her grip. She lowered its point toward the ground and moved past the woman's table, down the next ring, where the path narrowed between trees that bore bread in place of fruit and the river ran closer at hand.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2190
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
86.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2190
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"porcelain"
count1
2
word"marble"
count1
3
word"shattered"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"porcelain"
2"marble"
3"shattered"
4"whisper"
5"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences166
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences166
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences188
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2190
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions63
wordCount1944
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.44
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Veil2
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Rory28
Dymas1
Fae-forged1
Isolde11
Nyx8
Fae2
Carter1
Laila1
Cold4
persons
0"Veil"
1"Rory"
2"Dymas"
3"Isolde"
4"Nyx"
5"Carter"
6"Laila"
7"Cold"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.78
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences128
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2190
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences188
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs74
mean29.59
std22.09
cv0.747
sampleLengths
019
143
242
337
427
514
682
725
87
929
1015
1120
1214
1343
1449
1528
1623
174
1831
1912
2011
2117
2229
2312
2460
2539
26108
2711
2834
2931
304
3123
3210
3350
3413
3515
3630
3756
386
3922
409
4159
4256
4343
4412
4565
4632
4715
4811
4951
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences166
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs297
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences188
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1948
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.016940451745379878
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences188
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences188
mean11.65
std7.45
cv0.64
sampleLengths
019
14
210
35
424
57
635
79
821
97
103
1111
1213
1314
145
1511
1632
1734
1811
191
201
212
222
238
247
258
2621
2715
287
2913
3014
3116
329
3318
346
3511
368
3724
3810
395
4013
418
4215
434
445
459
4617
474
485
493
55.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.3882978723404255
totalSentences188
uniqueOpeners73
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences161
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences161
matches
0"Her boot left wet grass"
1"Their humanoid silhouette stretched to"
2"Her silver hair lifted in"
3"Her bare feet crossed mud"
4"It lay across vineyard rows"
5"It caught on orchard trees"
6"It lit a road of"
7"Their shadow body thinned at"
8"His hand passed through the"
9"Her crescent-shaped scar on her"
10"She rubbed it with her"
11"Their form pulled in tight,"
12"His smile stayed fixed while"
13"He backed into the press"
14"Their silhouette stretched across the"
15"She raised the blade to"
16"It cooled the sweat that"
17"Their body folded at the"
18"She reached out and stopped"
19"She snatched her hand back"
ratio0.199
37.64% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount136
totalSentences161
matches
0"The Veil parted between the"
1"Rory stepped through first."
2"Heat rolled across the other."
3"Her boot left wet grass"
4"The Heartstone Pendant jumped against"
5"The deep crimson stone on"
6"Nyx came through beside her"
7"Their humanoid silhouette stretched to"
8"Violet light burned in place"
9"Isolde crossed last."
10"Her silver hair lifted in"
11"Her bare feet crossed mud"
12"The light came from everywhere."
13"It lay across vineyard rows"
14"It caught on orchard trees"
15"It lit a road of"
16"Rory lifted her chin and"
17"Blood orange peel scorched on"
18"Nyx turned their head toward"
19"Their shadow body thinned at"
ratio0.845
31.06% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences161
matches
0"Before them, Dymas opened under"
ratio0.006
68.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences87
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"It lay across vineyard rows that climbed hills in green terraces."
1"It lit a road of pale stone that ran from the standing stones on this side of the Veil, down through gardens and long open halls, toward a city of domes and kit…"
2"Veins of copper ran through it, then veins of bone white marble, then panels of dark glass that reflected the amber sky and none of the three travellers."
3"It cooled the sweat that had gathered between Rory's shoulder blades under the amber heat."
4"Their body folded at the gap and re-formed on the far side with violet eyes flaring in the shade of a tree that bore pears and white roses together."
5"Each touch left a note in her ears, a chord that faded as she straightened on the garden path."
6"The leaves bore script in their veins, lines that shifted when she tilted her head."
7"She reached out and stopped with her fingers above a leaf that spelled her name in green thread, then broke the letters apart and re-formed them as Carter, then…"
8"Rory looked from the chef to the river, to the rings rising around them, to the tables of black stone sunk deeper into the garden where more chains ran into mor…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
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88.2101%