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Run: 2026-10-13-01M4TB7FKT9ESKJ5HQM39PH5RB
Run Details
Model:
Muse Wonder (Reasoning, Medium)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
52.8s
Cost:
$0.085336
Provider:
Meta
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
97.16%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
82.98%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
94.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
44.08%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
16.49%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
84.4905%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
Aurora Carter opened the front
door and Lucien Moreau put his blade to her throat.
She froze with her hand
on the third deadbolt.
The thin steel came from
his ivory-handled cane and it nicked the skin under her jaw.
A bead of blood ran
down and soaked into the collar of her shirt. "Inside, Rory." "You lost the right to give orders in Cardiff." "I lost many things in Cardiff. Move."
Boots scraped in the stairwell
below.
Lucien shoved her backwards into
Eva's flat and kicked the door shut. He shot the first deadbolt, then the second, then the third.
Each bolt slammed home and
shook dust from the frame.
Ptolemy launched off the sofa
and landed on a stack of books.
The tabby cat arched his
back and hissed. His tail lashed against scrolls, research notes and a cold mug of tea. Lucien lowered the blade.
Blood darkened the left side
of his tailored charcoal suit.
It spread from under his
ribs and dripped onto Eva's rug. Rory stared at the stain. "Yours?" "Mostly." "You tracked blood into Eva's flat for a social call?" "I came for you." "Then you wasted the trip."
She stepped around him and
picked up the kitchen knife from the counter.
The flat smelled of turmeric
from the curry house below, old paper and the sharp iron tang coming off his clothes.
Books covered the table, the
chairs and half the floor.
Eva had built little towers
of research and left gaps for feet, mugs and the cat.
Lucien watched the knife in
her hand.
His slicked-back platinum blond hair
had come loose at one side. Strands stuck to his forehead with sweat.
His amber eye gleamed in
the hall light.
His black eye gave nothing
back. "Put that down." "Leave." "I cannot." "Try the stairs. One foot after the other works for most people." "Men followed me from Aldgate. Two carried iron. One carried a contract." The knife stayed up between them. "A contract for you?" "A contract with a name I recognised." "You recognise lots of names, Luc. You sell them for a living." His jaw tightened.
He slid the blade back
into the cane and leaned his
weight
on it. The ivory handle clicked against his palm. "I never sold yours." "You handed it over gift wrapped." "I handed over a false name and bought you three days." "You bought yourself an exit." "I bought you your life." "Bollocks."
She said it flat and
hard. His mouth opened, then shut. For a second the only sounds came from Ptolemy worrying a loose thread on the sofa and the traffic crawling along Brick Lane through the thin window. Lucien swayed. Rory swore under her breath and caught his arm before he hit the book towers. Heat poured off him through the wet wool.
He weighed more than he
looked and he dragged her half a step before she braced her shoulder under his. "Sofa. Now." "You still fuss when you are furious." "I still stop idiots bleeding on my friend's rug. Different thing."
She dumped him onto the
cushions. Ptolemy fled to the kitchen counter and glared from beside the kettle. Lucien pressed a hand to his side and his fingers came away black red. Rory grabbed the first aid kit from under Eva's sink. Eva kept it beside three bottles of gin and a torch with dead batteries.
She set it on the
floor and yanked his jacket open. Buttons hit the rug. One rolled under a pile of scrolls. "That suit cost more than Eva's rent." "Bill me." "I plan to."
She cut his shirt with
the kitchen scissors. The fabric peeled away from skin and stuck where the blood had dried. A long cut ran from his lowest rib towards his navel. Someone had aimed to gut him and missed by inches. Rory pressed a wad of gauze hard against the wound. Lucien hissed through his teeth.
His hand shot out and
clamped around her left wrist.
His thumb found the small
crescent-shaped scar and stopped there.
Her breath caught before she
could hide it. "Let go." "You still wear it bare." "It is a scar, not jewellery." "In Avaros, marks carry meaning." "This one came from a broken swing in Splott. Very mystical."
His thumb stayed on the
scar. His skin burned against hers and her
pulse
hammered under his touch. "Tell me why you are here." "Someone paid the Court of Avaros for Aurora Carter." The room shrank around the words. She pressed harder on the gauze, harder than she needed to, and watched his face. Pain cut lines around his mouth. He welcomed it and kept his eyes on her. "People pay for me most weeks. Late deliveries. Cold noodles." "This buyer offered a prince's ransom." "I am flattered." "He offered your true name as part payment." Her hand stopped. "My what?" "Malphora." The name hit her ears and her
stomach
dropped. Ptolemy stopped mid lick. Every book in the flat
seemed to
lean in. She had
heard that name
once before, in her mother's kitchen, whispered into a phone while Jennifer Carter stood with her back turned and her hand pressed flat against the wall. She had heard it again the night Lucien walked out of the Cardiff safe house and left her with a packed bag, a false passport in the name of Laila and no explanation worth a damn. "You knew." "I learned it the night I left." "And you ran." "I drew your hunters to Marseille and killed the first two in a car park behind the station." "You sent one text. One. Do not hurt Eva." "I gave you instructions." "You gave me six words after three months in my bed." His grip on her wrist loosened. His fingers slid, slow and deliberate, until they rested light against her
pulse
. "You counted the words." "You counted nothing. You just left." "I counted the days until the trail went cold. I counted the men your father sent. I counted the knives I put in them." Her bright blue eyes filled and she hated him for seeing it. She ripped her hand free and grabbed the needle from the kit. "Hold the gauze." "Rory." "Hold it or bleed out. Either suits me." He held it. She threaded the needle with shaking fingers. The first stitch pulled the wound closed and his body went rigid under her hands. Sweat broke across his chest. Dark veins stood out at his throat and his human disguise frayed at the edges. For an instant she saw the shape under the skin, horn shadow at his temples, something old and hungry looking out through the mismatched eyes. She kept stitching. "You still flinch at that face." "I flinch at men who lie." "I lied about my name, my father and the price on my head. I never lied about wanting you." "Wanting is cheap." "Then why did you come to London?" "Eva begged me." "Eva told you I worked this city." "Eva tells me lots of things. She has questionable taste in informants." "Yet you stayed." "London rent demands income. Yu-Fei pays on Fridays." "You stayed above Silas' bar for eight months. Silas reports to me." The needle paused in her hand. "He what?" "Every Thursday. Your shifts. Your routes. The men who watch your door. The ex who sent flowers in March." "Evan sent flowers?" "Silas burned them. Good man." "You spied on me." "I guarded the perimeter." "Guarded. You French dress up control beautifully." "You prefer Evan's version? Locked doors and a phone in the toilet bowl?" The slap landed before she thought. Her palm stung. His head turned with the force of it and a red mark bloomed on his cheek. Silence fell and sat heavy between them. Lucien turned back to her, slow. He lifted her hand from where it hovered and pressed her palm flat against his chest. His heart slammed under her fingers, hard and fast and nothing like the cool fixer who traded secrets in hotel bars. "Hit me again if it helps you stitch straight." "It might." "Then do it after. I need you alive and steady." "For the contract." "For you." "Bleeding men get sentimental." "Bleeding men get honest. It is a design flaw." She finished the last stitch and tied it off. Her hands left blood on his
stomach
, his ribs, his belt. She reached for fresh gauze and his fingers caught the hem of her shirt. He held a fistful of cheap cotton like it anchored him. "Stay in this flat tonight. Eva warded the doors. Three deadbolts, salt, iron and that dreadful cat." "Ptolemy has standards." "Ptolemy has demon blood. Why do you think he hates me?" She looked at the cat. Ptolemy looked back and yawned with far too many teeth for a tabby. "Of course he does. Eva collects strays." "She collected you." "She collected us both and look at the result." His hand tightened on her shirt. He pulled and she came with it, one knee sinking into the sofa beside his hip. His other hand rose and stopped a breath from her face. Blood smeared his fingers. He waited and the waiting cost him. She could see it in the set of his shoulders and the shallow pull of his breathing. She leaned in and stopped with her mouth an inch from his. "Ask." "Let me stay." "Ask properly." "Please." The word wrecked his voice. She kissed him. He tasted of copper and cloves. His hand slid into her straight black hair and held her there, not gentle, not rough, just certain. Her shoulder-length hair slipped through his fingers and her body remembered every inch of the road back to him. The gauze bunched between them. His stitched wound pulled and he made a sound low in his throat and kissed her harder for it. She broke away first, breathing hard. "That changes nothing." "It changes the temperature considerably." "Still an arse." "Still here." Her phone buzzed on top of a scroll by his head. She reached for it. Lucien caught her wrist again, gentle this time, and shook his head. The phone buzzed again. And again. On the screen, Eva's name glowed above a single line of text. Do not open the door. I never came home. I am still in Camden. Three deadbolts turned by themselves, one slow click after another. Ptolemy flattened his ears. Someone knocked on the other side and used Eva's voice. "Rory? Open up. I forgot my keys."
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
0
97.16%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1763
totalAiIsmAdverbs
1
found
0
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"very"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
82.98%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1763
totalAiIsms
6
found
0
word
"weight"
count
1
1
word
"pulse"
count
2
2
word
"stomach"
count
2
3
word
"silence"
count
1
highlights
0
"weight"
1
"pulse"
2
"stomach"
3
"silence"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"stomach dropped/sank"
count
1
highlights
0
"stomach dropped"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
116
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
1
narrationSentences
116
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
211
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
36
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1763
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
11
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
36
wordCount
1174
uniqueNames
12
maxNameDensity
0.85
worstName
"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity
1.5
worstWindowName
"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Carter
2
Lucien
10
Moreau
1
Eva
7
Ptolemy
6
Brick
1
Lane
1
Jennifer
1
Cardiff
1
Laila
1
Camden
1
Rory
4
persons
0
"Carter"
1
"Lucien"
2
"Moreau"
3
"Eva"
4
"Ptolemy"
5
"Jennifer"
6
"Laila"
7
"Rory"
places
0
"Brick"
1
"Lane"
2
"Cardiff"
3
"Camden"
globalScore
1
windowScore
1
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
91
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1763
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
211
matches
0
"heard that name"
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
143
mean
12.33
std
14.95
cv
1.212
sampleLengths
0
15
1
39
2
2
3
9
4
7
5
39
6
33
7
25
8
5
9
1
10
1
11
10
12
4
13
5
14
60
15
39
16
3
17
1
18
2
19
12
20
12
21
6
22
4
23
7
24
12
25
24
26
4
27
6
28
11
29
5
30
5
31
1
32
38
33
2
34
43
35
2
36
7
37
11
38
32
39
35
40
11
41
7
42
2
43
3
44
42
45
10
46
25
47
8
48
2
49
5
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
116
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
194
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
211
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
94.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1178
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount
26
adverbRatio
0.022071307300509338
lyAdverbCount
1
lyAdverbRatio
0.0008488964346349745
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
211
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
211
mean
8.36
std
5.66
cv
0.677
sampleLengths
0
15
1
9
2
16
3
14
4
2
5
9
6
7
7
6
8
12
9
11
10
10
11
12
12
8
13
13
14
4
15
10
16
11
17
5
18
1
19
1
20
10
21
4
22
5
23
13
24
21
25
10
26
16
27
7
28
11
29
7
30
8
31
6
32
3
33
1
34
2
35
12
36
12
37
6
38
4
39
7
40
12
41
3
42
14
43
7
44
4
45
6
46
11
47
5
48
5
49
1
44.08%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
17
diversityRatio
0.3127962085308057
totalSentences
211
uniqueOpeners
66
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
114
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
16.49%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
58
totalSentences
114
matches
0
"She froze with her hand"
1
"He shot the first deadbolt,"
2
"His tail lashed against scrolls,"
3
"It spread from under his"
4
"She stepped around him and"
5
"His slicked-back platinum blond hair"
6
"His amber eye gleamed in"
7
"His black eye gave nothing"
8
"His jaw tightened."
9
"He slid the blade back"
10
"She said it flat and"
11
"His mouth opened, then shut."
12
"He weighed more than he"
13
"She dumped him onto the"
14
"She set it on the"
15
"She cut his shirt with"
16
"His hand shot out and"
17
"His thumb found the small"
18
"Her breath caught before she"
19
"His thumb stayed on the"
ratio
0.509
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
107
totalSentences
114
matches
0
"Aurora Carter opened the front"
1
"She froze with her hand"
2
"The thin steel came from"
3
"A bead of blood ran"
4
"Boots scraped in the stairwell"
5
"Lucien shoved her backwards into"
6
"He shot the first deadbolt,"
7
"Each bolt slammed home and"
8
"Ptolemy launched off the sofa"
9
"The tabby cat arched his"
10
"His tail lashed against scrolls,"
11
"Lucien lowered the blade."
12
"Blood darkened the left side"
13
"It spread from under his"
14
"Rory stared at the stain."
15
"She stepped around him and"
16
"The flat smelled of turmeric"
17
"Books covered the table, the"
18
"Eva had built little towers"
19
"Lucien watched the knife in"
ratio
0.939
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
114
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
59
technicalSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
0
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
0
84.4905%