Run: 2026-10-13-01M4TBBWBF64GXBHEFGJRAG6VZ

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Duration:
50.4s
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$0.089212
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Meta

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered Camden High Street and turned the gutters into black streams. Shop shutters rattled under the downpour. Buses threw up sheets of water from the kerb, and the late crowds pressed under awnings with shopping bags over their heads. Detective Harlow Quinn hit a puddle at full stride and felt cold water flood her boot. She kept her pace. Ten metres ahead, Tomás Herrera cut between two men outside a fried chicken shop, his dark curls plastered to his scalp, his jacket stuck to his back. He clutched a canvas medical bag against his chest with both arms. Glass rattled inside the bag with each stride. Quinn had tailed his battered hatchback from The Raven's Nest in Soho to Camden, watched him carry the bag from a side door beside the green neon sign, watched him load three crates into the boot and take a phone call that drained the colour from his olive skin. He had spotted her across the car park as he shut the boot. He had run. Her worn leather watch dug into her left wrist as she pumped her arms. The time read eleven forty-seven. The full moon hung behind the storm clouds, a pale smear above the rooftops. Her radio crackled against her collarbone. "Control, Quinn. Foot pursuit in Camden. Male suspect, Herrera, heading toward the old Tube station. Send units to the service alleys behind the High Street." Static hissed back. A tram of thunder rolled over the station roof. Quinn ducked under a scaffolding pole and vaulted a stack of beer crates outside a pub. Tomás knocked a bin into her path. It rolled, spilled wet cardboard and bottles across the pavement, and bounced off a parked scooter. She leapt the wreckage and landed hard on her right ankle. Pain shot up her shin. She drove through it with her teeth locked. Tomás glanced back. The Saint Christopher medallion at his neck flashed under a streetlight. Fear pulled his mouth open. "Stop running and talk to me, Tomás." "You picked the wrong night to talk, Detective." He swung round a bus stop and clipped a woman with an umbrella. The umbrella spun into the road. A bus braked, horn blaring, and water surged over the pavement. Quinn threw up one hand against the spray and lost two strides. Tomás gained ground past the market stalls, where tarpaulins snapped in the wind and traders dragged crates under cover. The air smelled of wet canvas, diesel, hot sugar, and rain on hot tarmac. She had first met him at the Raven's Nest three weeks before, in the hidden back room behind the bookshelf. He had stitched a man's shoulder at a card table while a poker game ran in the next breath. The man had wounds that bent in the wrong direction. Tomás had cleaned them, dosed them with a blue liquid from an unlabelled vial, and refused to meet Quinn's eye. Her warrant had found ledgers, cash, and nothing she could charge. He had watched her leave with relief written across his face. Now he clutched that same style of bag. Now he ran from her through Camden as if the contents bought him a grave or a fortune. A delivery rider shot out from a side street. Tomás swerved, slipped on a drain cover, and went down on one knee. The bag hit the ground. A vial cracked inside. A sharp chemical reek cut through the rain. He scrambled up, left a dark handprint on the wet stone, and sprinted into a service alley beside the abandoned Tube station. Quinn turned in after him. The alley narrowed between brick walls black with soot. Pipes dripped. A broken security light blinked over a steel door set into the station wall. Old posters peeled from tiles behind a wire grille. The place belonged to a station the city had sealed before she joined the force. Tomás reached the steel door and hammered on it with his fist. Three strikes. A pause. Two strikes. He dug into his pocket and pulled out a disc of pale bone, thick as a casino chip, carved with a circle of small holes. Quinn drew her warrant card and held it high. Rain ran down her salt-and-pepper crop and into her collar. Her sharp jaw ached from the run. "Police. Step away from the door, Tomás. Put the bag on the ground." "You need to walk back to the street, Detective." "You ran from Soho with a bag of unlabelled drugs. You ran through a bus lane and a market. That buys us a conversation in a cell if you want it that way." "This bag keeps people alive after your cells shut." "Then show me. Open it here." He shook his head and pressed his back to the door. Blood seeped through his jacket at the shoulder. She had missed the wound in the rain. His left forearm showed the long scar she knew from his file, raised and pale against his skin, and his hand trembled against the bag strap. "You took a hit before you left the Nest." "A man came in with a knife and a fever that boiled his blood. I took the knife off him. He took a piece of me." "Who was he?" "A customer." "A name, Tomás." "Names get men killed in there." A bolt scraped behind the steel. The door opened a hand's width. Warm air rolled out, thick with spice, hot metal, candle wax, and animal musk. Light the colour of old brass fell across the alley floor. An eye appeared in the gap, then a hand with rings on every finger. The hand opened, palm up, and waited for the bone token. Tomás placed the disc in the palm. The rings clicked against it. The door swung inward, and a flight of concrete steps dropped into darkness beneath the station. Sounds rose from below — coins, glass, haggling voices, a string instrument with too few notes in its scale. Quinn stepped forward. The hand rose and blocked her chest. The man behind the door filled the frame, shoulders broad under a coat stitched with pockets. His face bore a mask of beaten copper from the nose down. "Token." "I am a Metropolitan Police officer. Move aside." "Token." Quinn turned her head toward the alley mouth. Rain swept the High Street in grey curtains. No sirens cut the storm. Her radio gave a burst of static and died as the door light touched it. She pressed the transmit button. Nothing left the speaker but a dull click. Her phone showed no signal. Three years before, DS Morris had followed a suspect into a cellar off Greek Street and had told her to wait for backup. She had waited. The uniforms had found his coat, his radio, and a pool of blood that belonged to three people and matched none of them. The coroner had signed a form with the cause left blank. Quinn had carried the coat to his widow in a plastic evidence bag. Tomás backed down the first step. The bag swung against his hip. Blood darkened his sleeve to the elbow now. "Herrera. Last chance. Come back up." "You come down here with that card out and these people will eat the card and bill you for the meal." "Is that a threat?" "It is directions. Put it away. Keep your hands where pockets can see them." The gatekeeper thrust his palm toward Quinn again. His nails bore black crescents of dirt. He pointed at the medical bag, then at Tomás, then made a cutting motion across his own throat. "He bleeds. He pays double if he drips on the floor." "He needs a hospital." "He needs what waits below. Hospitals ask questions and pull plugs when the answers scare them." Quinn looked at the steps. Water from her coat dripped onto the concrete and ran down in thin lines. Her backup had an address on the High Street and no knowledge of this door. A shout up the alley would bring nobody through the storm in time. If she let the door close, Tomás vanished with the bag, the blood, and whatever thread connected the Raven's Nest to Morris and the cellar off Greek Street. If she stepped through, she entered a market that moved with the full moon, in a dead station under Camden, with no warrant, no signal, no backup, and a suspect as her sole guide. She put her warrant card inside her coat. She unclipped her radio and set it on a dry ledge beside the door, where the response units would find it if they searched the alley. She lifted her hands clear of her body and faced the gatekeeper. "No token. A trade. He bleeds in your doorway without me. I have hands, a steady head, and I owe him an arrest after he gets patched. Let me through and he reaches your floor clean." The copper mask tilted. The man studied her watch, her boots, the bulge of handcuffs at her belt. He rapped two knuckles against the doorframe. A bell answered somewhere below. He stepped aside and left a gap no wider than her shoulders. Tomás stared at her from the steps. His mouth opened, shut, and opened again. "You are out of your mind, Quinn." "Move. You are dripping." She crossed the threshold. Heat closed around her and the rain cut off as the steel door slammed at her back. The bolt drove home. The steps led down past tiles filmed with damp, past cables thick as wrists, past a landing where candles burned inside jam jars and a woman sold bundles of feathers beside bottles filled with silver dust. The air grew dense with voices. Arch after arch opened below, each one packed with stalls, hanging lamps, crates, cages, and crowds that parted around goods Quinn had no names for — jars of teeth, maps that shifted under glass, powders that glowed through corked tubes, meat that steamed without a fire. Tomás reached the market floor and broke into a run between stalls. A vendor cursed and snatched a tray of bone discs from his path. Quinn hit the last step, shoved past a curtain of beads, and chased the flash of his medallion through the crowd.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1721
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
94.19% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1721
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"grave"
count1
1
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"grave"
1"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences121
matches
0"e with relief"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences121
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences148
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1723
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions58
wordCount1431
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.98
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden4
High3
Street5
Harlow1
Quinn14
Tomás13
Herrera1
Raven3
Nest3
Soho1
Saint1
Christopher1
Tube1
Morris2
Greek2
Rain3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Tomás"
3"Herrera"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Morris"
7"Rain"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"Soho"
4"Greek"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences96
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1723
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences148
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean32.51
std29.31
cv0.902
sampleLengths
040
167
265
339
425
575
619
77
88
975
1091
1126
1261
1354
1443
1526
1613
179
1833
199
206
2153
229
2326
243
252
263
276
2862
2985
301
318
321
3354
3473
3520
366
3721
384
3914
4033
4111
424
4316
44109
4546
4636
4742
4814
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences121
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs217
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences148
ratio0.014
matches
0"Sounds rose from below — coins, glass, haggling voices, a string instrument with too few notes in its scale."
1"Arch after arch opened below, each one packed with stalls, hanging lamps, crates, cages, and crowds that parted around goods Quinn had no names for — jars of teeth, maps that shifted under glass, powders that glowed through corked tubes, meat that steamed without a fire."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1432
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.009078212290502794
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences148
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences148
mean11.64
std8.4
cv0.722
sampleLengths
012
16
222
316
44
527
612
78
849
913
103
1114
125
1314
146
1525
163
179
1816
197
2016
2111
225
238
243
2511
265
277
288
2913
306
3111
3212
3319
3414
3520
3619
3710
3820
3911
4011
418
4218
439
4413
455
464
478
4822
495
40.77% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.31756756756756754
totalSentences148
uniqueOpeners47
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences117
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences117
matches
0"She kept her pace."
1"He clutched a canvas medical"
2"He had spotted her across"
3"He had run."
4"Her worn leather watch dug"
5"Her radio crackled against her"
6"It rolled, spilled wet cardboard"
7"She leapt the wreckage and"
8"She drove through it with"
9"He swung round a bus"
10"She had first met him"
11"He had stitched a man's"
12"Her warrant had found ledgers,"
13"He had watched her leave"
14"He scrambled up, left a"
15"He dug into his pocket"
16"Her sharp jaw ached from"
17"He shook his head and"
18"She had missed the wound"
19"His left forearm showed the"
ratio0.299
19.83% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount103
totalSentences117
matches
0"Buses threw up sheets of"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn hit a"
2"She kept her pace."
3"He clutched a canvas medical"
4"Glass rattled inside the bag"
5"Quinn had tailed his battered"
6"He had spotted her across"
7"He had run."
8"Her worn leather watch dug"
9"The time read eleven forty-seven."
10"The full moon hung behind"
11"Her radio crackled against her"
12"Static hissed back."
13"A tram of thunder rolled"
14"Quinn ducked under a scaffolding"
15"Tomás knocked a bin into"
16"It rolled, spilled wet cardboard"
17"She leapt the wreckage and"
18"Pain shot up her shin."
19"She drove through it with"
ratio0.88
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount4
totalSentences117
matches
0"Now he clutched that same"
1"Now he ran from her"
2"If she let the door"
3"If she stepped through, she"
ratio0.034
97.51% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences63
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Quinn had tailed his battered hatchback from The Raven's Nest in Soho to Camden, watched him carry the bag from a side door beside the green neon sign, watched …"
1"The uniforms had found his coat, his radio, and a pool of blood that belonged to three people and matched none of them."
2"If she stepped through, she entered a market that moved with the full moon, in a dead station under Camden, with no warrant, no signal, no backup, and a suspect…"
3"Arch after arch opened below, each one packed with stalls, hanging lamps, crates, cages, and crowds that parted around goods Quinn had no names for — jars of te…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
91.7430%