Run: 2026-10-13-01M4TBBXNXAHF1Q8H644C78KJG

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3m 3s
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$0.161610
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory opened the door on the chain and found six months of silence standing in her stairwell in a charcoal suit. Lucien Moreau. Slicked platinum hair, ivory cane, one amber eye and one black. The amber caught the hall light. The black caught her. "No." "I have not yet asked for anything." "You were about to." She shut the door. The cane stopped it, the ivory handle flat against the wood like a white knuckle. "Take that out of my door, Moreau." "It is ivory. It scratches." "So do I. Take it out." The cane stayed. "Your name has come up, Aurora." "My name's been up for six months. You put it there." "Everyone calls me Rory now," she added, because she wanted the wound to show. "Everyone is wrong." Below them, Silas' Friday crowd roared through the floorboards, half a chorus of some birthday song. The stairwell smelled of spilled beer and fryer oil. Her forearm itched, the little knotted black thread under the skin, and she scratched it through her sleeve before she could stop herself. His gaze dropped to her arm. The black eye narrowed. "Show me." "Show me a reason." "It started on Tuesday." Not a question. "An itch first. Then heat. Worse near thresholds. Am I close?" Her stomach dropped through the floorboards and into the bar. "Get out of my stairwell." "At midnight your name woke in the ledger. Mine woke with it." He said it evenly, the way other men read out bills. "The oath that sealed my mouth on the matter lapsed at twelve o'clock. It is half past. I ran." "You don't run." "No." She looked at him for a long moment. Six months, and he stood on her landing with his cufflinks straight and his shoes wet and a word like *ran* sitting in his mouth like a stone. She unhooked the chain. "One foot over the threshold, you bleed on salt. Eva's work." "Eva's paranoia." "Eva's alive. Steady correlation." He stepped over the white line with care, lifting the cane across it like a man crossing a stream, and then he was inside her small flat, ducking the bare bulb, filling it. The fold-down table. The wobbly chair. Her red Golden Empress jacket on its hook, sesame oil ground into the cotton. The curtain that hid her bed. Her first-year Contract Law textbook doing duty as a doorstop, which was the most use it had seen since Cardiff. "You live above a bar," he said. "Rent's cheap. The company pays cash." "The locks are a rumour." "The salt isn't. Skip the chit-chat, Moreau. Why is my arm burning?" "Roll the sleeve." "You're not a doctor." "No. I am something worse. I am the counterparty." She rolled the sleeve. The sigil sat above her wrist, a knot of black thread under the skin, and tonight it glistened like wet ink. He set the cane against the table and blew on his fingers before he touched her. She hated that he remembered. His hands ran cold, always had, and six months ago she had told him so, and now he warmed them for her like it meant nothing. His thumb stopped a breath above the crescent scar on her wrist. "Still carrying the moon." "It was a jam jar." "In a garden in Cardiff. You told me at two in the morning, over cold noodles." His thumb moved on, tracing the knot, clinical and not clinical at all. "You tell men in bars it was a cat." "You been asking men in bars?" "I ask everyone everything. It is my trade." He let go of her arm. "Two nights after the noodles, you signed a book." There it was. The flat went very small. "You let me sign." "I begged you not to take that run." "You begged in riddles. *Any box but the lacquered one.* You want credit for a riddle?" "I want it on the record that I said no." "You could have said why." "I could not. That was the shape of the oath." He picked up the cane again, set it down, a man with nowhere to put his hands. "My father's contracts are thorough." "Convenient." "Constantly." The amber eye caught the bulb light. "It cost me the only conversation I have wanted to have in years. I would like that on the record too." She looked at the curtain, the kettle, anywhere. "What was in the box, Lucien." "A receipt book. A claim ledger. Your signature took custody of a debt in escrow." A pause. "My debt. Owed to my father. Avaros keeps ledgers, Aurora, not armies. Tonight the term ends and a notary comes to collect. If he collects from you alone, custody converts." "Converts to what?" "Ownership. He will not want your money." The birthday song swelled below, oblivious. Rory pulled the sleeve down and made herself breathe the way Yu-Fei had taught her on bad traffic days, in for four, out for six. "Then we void the contract. Consideration, capacity, intention to create legal relations. I had none of the three. Nobody told me what I was signing. Cardiff drilled that into me before I walked out." "Avaros law is older than Cardiff." "Paper is paper." "You sound like a barrister." "You sound like your father." "Do not." One word, soft as a closing door. She had found the only bruise on him and pressed it, and part of her was glad, and part of her wanted to take it back. Neither part apologised. "The book had carbon paper," she said instead. She crossed the room, lifted the Contract Law textbook, and drew out a thin pink slip from between chapters three and four. "Yu-Fei keeps the duplicates for the taxman. I keep mine for men like you." He took it. She watched him read, watched something shift behind the mismatched eyes, the look of a man dealt a card he had not expected. "Bearer accepts custody of the within-named obligation, to hold in escrow until presentation of the counterfoil." He looked up. "Bearer. Not owner. You kept it." "I keep everything. Ask your cufflink." "You threw my cufflink in the canal." "It was a cufflink." "It was my mother's." That landed. She had not known, and he let the knowing sit on her for exactly one second before he went on, which was its own kind of kindness. "I'll get you another," she said. "There is not another. But I accept the sentiment." He folded the pink slip once, precisely, and held it like a verdict. "The counterfoil was in my safe. At midnight it burned through four inches of steel." "Then nobody holds it." "Then the claim defaults to the registrar at term." "Which is when?" Below them, the bar went silent mid-chorus. Not a fade. A cut, like a needle lifted off a record. Forty people stopping on the same half-syllable. "Now, I think," Lucien said. The bulb flickered. Steam from the kettle curled sideways, though no window was open, and it smelled of pennies. The knot in her forearm went hot, then hotter, and something began to climb the stairs from the bar. One stair at a time. Unhurried. Like a man reading each step. On the threshold, the salt line began to blacken at one corner, a slow burn with no flame. Lucien said something in French, low and blistering. Three knocks at the door. Polite. Patient. The knocks of a man who had never once been refused. "Miss Carter." The voice came through the wood like ink through blotting paper. "Custody is called." The handle turned. The deadbolt held, and then it didn't, unscrewing itself with slow, courteous clicks, one, two. The cane came apart in Lucien's hands, ivory handle in one, a thin blade in the other, narrow as a letter opener. He moved to stand beside her. Not in front. She noticed that too. "Aurora." His voice had gone very quiet. "Whatever he offers, do not sign." "Wasn't planning to." The bolt gave its third click. The salt smoked. The knot in her arm pulsed in time with her heartbeat, and she understood, cool and clear, the way she understood traffic and shortcuts and the exact weight of a lie: the thing on the other side of that door could not take what she did not hand over. Paper was paper. Custody was hers until a counterfoil walked through the door, and the counterfoil was ash in a safe in Mayfair. Rory tucked the pink slip into her waistband, rolled her sleeve down, and reached past Lucien Moreau to turn the deadbolt back herself. "What are you doing?" "Let's audit," she said, and opened the door.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said instead [instead]"
dialogueSentences79
tagDensity0.203
leniency0.405
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.025
89.66% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1451
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"precisely"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"precisely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.32% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1451
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"stomach"
2"tracing"
3"flickered"
4"pulsed"
5"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences87
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences147
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords7
totalWords1451
ratio0.005
matches
0"ran"
1"Any box but the lacquered one."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount876
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.57
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
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Golden1
Empress1
Contract2
Law2
Cardiff1
Yu-Fei1
French1
Lucien5
Mayfair1
Rory3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Yu-Fei"
2"Lucien"
3"Rory"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"French"
2"Mayfair"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1451
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences147
matches
0"hated that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
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std17.44
cv1.034
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1014
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394
408
4116
4210
435
4432
451
4629
4714
4847
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences87
matches
0"been refused"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs142
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences147
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount452
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"Steady live above a"
adverbCount3
adverbRatio0.00663716814159292
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0022123893805309734
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences147
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences147
mean9.87
std8.37
cv0.848
sampleLengths
021
12
211
36
44
51
67
78
815
97
105
116
123
136
1411
1514
163
1716
189
1923
206
214
222
234
247
2511
2610
275
2823
2919
303
311
328
3328
344
3511
362
374
3833
393
403
4114
426
4320
447
456
465
4712
483
494
59.41% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.4217687074829932
totalSentences147
uniqueOpeners62
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
53.77% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences77
matches
0"She shut the door"
1"she added, because she wanted"
2"Her forearm itched, the little"
3"His gaze dropped to her"
4"Her stomach dropped through the"
5"He said it evenly, the"
6"She looked at him for"
7"She unhooked the chain."
8"He stepped over the white"
9"Her red Golden Empress jacket"
10"Her first-year Contract Law textbook"
11"She rolled the sleeve."
12"He set the cane against"
13"She hated that he remembered."
14"His hands ran cold, always"
15"His thumb stopped a breath"
16"His thumb moved on, tracing"
17"He let go of her"
18"He picked up the cane"
19"She looked at the curtain,"
ratio0.416
44.42% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences77
matches
0"Rory opened the door on"
1"The amber caught the hall"
2"The black caught her."
3"She shut the door"
4"The cane stopped it, the"
5"The cane stayed."
6"she added, because she wanted"
7"The stairwell smelled of spilled"
8"Her forearm itched, the little"
9"His gaze dropped to her"
10"The black eye narrowed."
11"Her stomach dropped through the"
12"He said it evenly, the"
13"She looked at him for"
14"She unhooked the chain."
15"He stepped over the white"
16"The fold-down table."
17"The wobbly chair."
18"Her red Golden Empress jacket"
19"The curtain that hid her"
ratio0.831
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Her first-year Contract Law textbook doing duty as a doorstop, which was the most use it had seen since Cardiff."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she added (add)"
dialogueSentences79
tagDensity0.089
leniency0.177
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.025
87.3526%