Run: 2026-10-13-01M4TBGDY526NZ8FD9Q1KCAMXJ

Run Details

Duration:
2m 22s
Cost:
$0.114551
Provider:
Fireworks

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory slid the third deadbolt and opened the door, and Lucien Moreau stood in the hallway light with rain on his shoulders. Two months of silence, wearing a charcoal suit. Platinum hair gone dark at the temples, one amber eye and one black, the ivory cane planted between his shoes like it paid rent on the landing. She swung the door shut. The cane's ferrule stopped it dead. "No." "Aurora." Marseille still lived under his consonants, even through a gap in a door. "Five minutes. Then I go, and you never have to see me again." "That was the arrangement. You've broken it." "Evan came off a flight at Heathrow on Tuesday morning." Her hand stopped on the edge of the door. Rain ticked somewhere down the stairwell. The curry house extractor hummed up through the floorboards, the way it always had, indifferent to everything. "Five minutes," she said, and opened the door wide. "You're not getting tea." Ptolemy uncoiled from a tower of journals and wound a figure of eight around Lucien's ankles, purring loud enough to be heard from Brick Lane. "Don't you start," Rory told the cat. Lucien stepped inside and took in the flat — Eva's books on every surface, scrolls weighed down with mugs, three days of Rory's solitary existence fermenting in the sink. He stood beside the only clear chair and didn't touch it. He'd never once sat in her presence uninvited, and she hated that she noticed it now. "Talk." "Evan's retained an enquiry agent. He started in Cardiff — your old halls, the students' union, a barmaid on City Road who remembers you fondly and told him nothing. Then your mother's school." "Leave my mother out of this." "Your mother is out of it. She sent him off with a flea in his ear. Your father went further." The corner of his mouth moved. "I gather the language was vivid. Billable hours usually polish that out of him." Rory folded her arms. "How do you know any of this?" "Because I asked them to tell me if anyone came asking. When you first arrived in London, I left word with certain people. Anyone came looking for you, I'd hear of it." "Of course you did." The old heat came up through her ribs, familiar as the scar on her wrist. "Tell me something. Is there still a folder with my name on it in your office?" Lucien said nothing. "Because I saw it, Lucien. I was standing in your office with Yu-Fei's sesame chicken going cold in the bag, and there was my whole life on your desk. My father's chambers. My mother's school. The scar on my wrist, annotated. In your handwriting." "There was a file." "Was." He reached inside his coat and drew out a slim folder, its corners damp from the rain, and set it on a stack of Eva's journals. Ptolemy claimed it at once, the way cats annex paperwork, and Lucien's mouth twitched again before he smoothed it flat. "Everything. What I knew, what I paid to learn, what I guessed. Read it, burn it, check my sums. There's no copy. No drawer, no archive, no man in Cardiff. From tonight, whatever you don't tell me, I don't know." Rory stared at the folder under its new tabby paperweight. "You don't hand a person their own life and call it a gift." "No," he said. "You hand it back and apologise for ever holding it. Which I do." "You're very polished, aren't you? Even grovelling, you're polished." "I've had two months to rehearse." "You had two months to ring." Her voice came out harder than she intended, and she let it. "One phone call. 'Rory, I'm a paranoid half-demon who investigates people the way other men check the weather.' I'd have shouted at you. I'd have got over it. Instead you went silent and let me invent the reasons, and I have a vivid imagination, Lucien, you should hear some of the things you did." "Would you have answered?" "I'll never know, will I? You took that off the table. You decided." She jabbed a finger at him, and the folder, and the whole elegant wreck of him. "That's the part I can't get past. The file, the watching, the silence — all of it is you deciding things on my behalf. I had a boyfriend who did my deciding for me. I moved two hundred miles to stop being managed. I'm not queueing up for another man to do it." The rain worked at the window. Somewhere below, the curry house door banged and a scooter whined away up Brick Lane. Lucien looked at her for a long moment, and then he did something she'd never seen him do: he leaned the cane against the arm of the chair, which was as close as Lucien Moreau ever came to shedding armour. "You're right," he said. "I won't dress it up. In Avaros, what you love is a handle the world uses to move you. My father taught me that before he taught me to shave. I told myself the file kept you out of reach." He turned one hand over, studied the palm as though the excuse were written there and had worn off. "The truth is duller. As long as I didn't ring, you hadn't refused to answer. I got to keep the version of you who might have picked up." Rory's chest did something hot and miserable. She crossed to the kitchenette, filled the kettle, and set it on the hob hard enough to rattle the grate. "You're still a bastard." "Noted." "And you're on probation." "How long?" "I'll let you know." She reached for two of Eva's chipped mugs, then caught him watching her — not her face. Her left wrist, where the sleeve had ridden up off the crescent scar. Once, months ago, he'd asked about it and she'd fed him some line about a bicycle. He hadn't believed her then and he'd clearly read the truth in his wretched folder since. She pushed the sleeve up higher and let him look. "Climbing frame. I was seven. Whatever it says in there, half of it's wrong." "Then correct it," he said. "Over time. At your discretion." "Tu me manques," he added, almost to himself, in the voice he only used for French. "Don't hide behind your languages. I know what that means." "Then plainly." He straightened from the chair, and the lamp caught the black eye, the amber one, both of them steady on her. "I missed you. Every day of it. The file was open on my desk the night you kissed me, and I closed it before you came in, and I've been paying interest on that one cowardly gesture ever since." "You kissed me," Rory said. "Like a man signing his name to something." "Then let me amend the document." She crossed the room before she'd decided to, hooked a finger into his lapel, and pulled him down to her. He went still — the whole polished apparatus of him holding its breath — and she kissed him once, brief and deliberate, then let go of the lapel. "That's so you remember what you're on probation for." Lucien exhaled through his nose, and the smile that came over him was the real one, the rare coin he spent about twice a year. "Memorable terms." "Coat off," she said. "You're dripping on Eva's first editions." He shrugged out of the wet charcoal wool and she took it from him, and for a moment both their hands were on the coat and neither of them hurried. Ptolemy, having finished with the folder, transferred himself to the coat the instant it hit the chair back, kneading it into a nest with an air of long-held intention. "Traitor," Rory said, and this time she meant it fondly. The kettle climbed to its whistle. She made the tea strong, the way he took it, and put the mug into his hand, and he finally sat — uninvited, unobjected to — with the cat adjudicating from his folded coat. Outside, the rain kept at the windows and Brick Lane went about its night. Rory slid the deadbolts home, one, two, three, with Lucien Moreau on the inside of them.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.296
leniency0.593
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.37% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1376
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
85.47% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1376
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"solitary"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"solitary"
2"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences52
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences52
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences89
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen59
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1384
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
90.08% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount751
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.2
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien9
Moreau3
Ptolemy3
Brick3
Lane3
Eva3
Rory9
French1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Eva"
4"Rory"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.901
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1384
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences89
matches
0"hated that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean25.63
std23.77
cv0.927
sampleLengths
022
135
211
31
427
57
610
732
813
925
107
1156
121
1333
146
1540
1611
1732
1835
193
2044
214
221
2346
2440
2523
2616
279
286
2972
304
3182
3261
3391
3427
354
361
374
382
3990
4010
4116
4210
4362
4413
456
4648
479
4827
4910
98.52% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences52
matches
0"were written"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs122
matches(empty)
14.45% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences89
ratio0.045
matches
0"Lucien stepped inside and took in the flat — Eva's books on every surface, scrolls weighed down with mugs, three days of Rory's solitary existence fermenting in the sink."
1"\"I'll let you know.\" She reached for two of Eva's chipped mugs, then caught him watching her — not her face."
2"He went still — the whole polished apparatus of him holding its breath — and she kissed him once, brief and deliberate, then let go of the lapel."
3"She made the tea strong, the way he took it, and put the mug into his hand, and he finally sat — uninvited, unobjected to — with the cat adjudicating from his folded coat."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount746
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.03351206434316354
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.006702412868632708
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences89
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences89
mean15.55
std12.81
cv0.824
sampleLengths
022
18
227
35
46
51
614
713
87
910
109
116
1217
139
144
1525
167
1729
1811
1916
201
2133
226
2326
2414
254
267
2732
2819
2916
303
3144
324
331
3426
3520
3640
3710
3813
393
4013
419
426
4318
4454
454
4629
4753
486
4915
78.28% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.48314606741573035
totalSentences89
uniqueOpeners43
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences47
matches
0"Somewhere below, the curry house"
1"Once, months ago, he'd asked"
ratio0.043
49.79% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences47
matches
0"She swung the door shut."
1"Her hand stopped on the"
2"she said, and opened the"
3"He stood beside the only"
4"He'd never once sat in"
5"He reached inside his coat"
6"Her voice came out harder"
7"She jabbed a finger at"
8"He turned one hand over,"
9"She crossed to the kitchenette,"
10"She reached for two of"
11"Her left wrist, where the"
12"He hadn't believed her then"
13"She pushed the sleeve up"
14"he added, almost to himself,"
15"He straightened from the chair,"
16"She crossed the room before"
17"He went still — the"
18"He shrugged out of the"
19"She made the tea strong,"
ratio0.426
2.55% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount43
totalSentences47
matches
0"Rory slid the third deadbolt"
1"Platinum hair gone dark at"
2"She swung the door shut."
3"The cane's ferrule stopped it"
4"Marseille still lived under his"
5"Her hand stopped on the"
6"Rain ticked somewhere down the"
7"The curry house extractor hummed"
8"she said, and opened the"
9"Ptolemy uncoiled from a tower"
10"Rory told the cat"
11"Lucien stepped inside and took"
12"He stood beside the only"
13"He'd never once sat in"
14"The corner of his mouth"
15"Rory folded her arms."
16"The old heat came up"
17"Lucien said nothing."
18"He reached inside his coat"
19"Ptolemy claimed it at once,"
ratio0.915
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Lucien looked at her for a long moment, and then he did something she'd never seen him do: he leaned the cane against the arm of the chair, which was as close a…"
93.75% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He straightened, and the lamp caught the black eye, the amber one, both of them steady on her"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he added (add)"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.167
leniency0.333
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.037
86.9747%