Run: 2026-10-13-01M4TBGY0YF6TRMKRW9YEC3J81

Run Details

Duration:
1m 17s
Cost:
$0.111941
Provider:
Meta

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon above The Raven's Nest buzzed and spat in the rain. Water ran in crooked lines down the glass and pooled against the kerb, and each passing cab threw light across the front windows in brief, broken bands. Rory Carter stood under the sign with rain in her shoes and a leather case banging against her calf. Four years had put grime into the lettering and a crack through the tail of the raven. The crack split the bird clean in half. Heat and beer and wood polish hit her face the moment she pushed the door. Low light pooled over the tables. Maps covered one wall in frames with warped corners, and black-and-white photographs crowded the space beside the till, men in coats on foreign platforms, women at café tables with cups untouched, a bridge under snow. New photographs had filled the gaps she remembered. Her photographs had gone. Silas Blackwood stood behind the bar with a cloth in one hand and a glass in the other. Height still gave him command of the room, even with the stick hooked over the rail beside the optics. Grey had eaten most of the auburn in his hair and beard, leaving thin bands of colour above his ears. His shoulders had narrowed inside his shirt. The silver signet ring on his right hand caught the light each time he turned the glass. He lifted his head. Hazel eyes moved from her face to the wet case at her side and back again. "You are wet through, Carter." Rory shut the door with her heel. Rain hammered the pavement behind the glass. "You cut your hair again, Si." His mouth pulled at one corner. He set the glass down on a mat with a green raven stamped in gold. "Copper suits a woman in hiding. Black suits counsel for the Crown." The word counsel landed between the stools. She crossed the boards and felt a loose plank give under her left shoe. The defect lived in the exact spot she remembered, three steps from the bar, beside the table where the chessboard once stood. "You kept the loose plank." "Estate agents call that character." "You call an estate agent now?" "Men in good shoes come in here each month and measure the place with their eyes. One offered me a sum with a straight face and a pen already open." "You took the pen?" "I took his coat and hung it up for him. Politeness costs nothing." She put the leather case on the bar. Water beaded across its surface and ran onto the wood. Her hand shook once before she tucked it into her coat pocket. Silas reached for the bottle on the second shelf, the single malt she once spat into a plant pot behind the bar. He poured two fingers into a clean tumbler and pushed the tumbler across without a coaster. "You poisoned a fern with that in 2019." "That fern had a miserable life in this bar. I put the poor thing out of pain." "You named the fern." "Clients name things. It helps with invoices." His eyebrows rose. The cloth in his hand stopped moving. "Clients." "I passed the Bar in March. Pupillage ends in spring." "Brendan must send flowers to the flat each week." "Brendan sends opinions. Flowers wilt. Opinions keep." A muscle moved in his jaw. He poured water into his own glass and left the whisky bottle open. "Your father rings here on your birthday. Each year. Same hour." Her bright blue eyes dropped to the tumbler. She turned the glass with her fingertips and left wet rings on the bar. "He has my number." "He has pride. You inherited the full set." "Pot, kettle, the whole black kitchen." "Touché." Silence filled the space while the fridge hummed behind him and rain needled the windows. A man in the far booth coughed into his fist and turned a newspaper page. The secret room door stood hidden behind the bookshelf near the cellar hatch, its shelves bare except for four atlases and a dictionary with a torn spine. She pointed her chin toward the bookshelf. "You cleared the back room." "I burned papers in the yard in October. Mrs Patel complained about the smoke and brought me soup the same evening." "Names?" "Names, maps, train times, debts. Forty years in ash." "You kept nothing?" "I kept the dictionary. A man needs to check his spelling before he writes a confession." "You, confessing. The Pope sends his regards." "He sends anybody with a pulse these days. Standards have slipped at the Vatican." Laughter came out of her before she could catch it. The sound shocked her. Silas watched her face and gave a short nod, as if a sum on a page had balanced. "You bleached your hair copper the night you arrived here. You had a split lip and a bag from Yu-Fei with rice stuck to the lining." "I repaid Yu-Fei." "You repaid Yu-Fei in labour, insults, and a new sign for the Golden Empress. The man still puts your name on the staff rota at Christmas." "He likes a ghost story." "He likes you, Carter. People have a habit in that regard." She rolled her left sleeve once. The small crescent scar on her wrist showed white against skin flushed from the cold. Silas saw the scar and his hand went to the stick, then stopped. His fingers curled around the edge of the bar instead. "You got that scar falling from a wall in Cardiff." "I got that scar falling from a wall while you shouted instructions from a deckchair." "I gave sound instructions. You ignored the entire set." "I broke a wrist and you bought me chips." "I bought you chips and drove you to A and E with a tea towel round your arm. Your mother threatened me with a wooden spoon at the hospital doors." "Jennifer loved that spoon." "She loved you. The spoon served as punctuation." Her throat tightened. She drank. Whisky burned a clean line down and settled warm in her chest. "I saw you at the funeral." The cloth dropped from his hand onto the bar. It landed across the wet rings from her glass. "You stood beside the yew tree." "You wore black gloves and left before the hymn ended." "I stood at the back because your father had men at the gates with a list." "Those men worked for Evan's solicitor. Brendan had a court order in his pocket and grief in his throat. He needed both hands for the order." "I made the gates. I never made the church." "You made the cemetery in Cardiff after a seven-hour drive on that knee. I watched you from the porch and climbed into a car." "I saw the car." The newspaper man folded his paper, dropped coins beside his pint glass, and left. The door opened, threw rain across the floor, and banged shut. Neither of them looked toward the sound. Silas picked up the cloth and folded it into a square. Crease over crease. Exact edges. "You left London on a Tuesday." She held his gaze. "I left a note." "You slid a note under a door at three in the morning. Ten words. No address." "Evan had found the flat." "Evan had found nothing. A lad from his gym stood outside the Golden Empress twice and asked about a girl with copper hair. Yu-Fei sent him to a brothel in King's Cross with a menu in his pocket." "You never told me that." "You never gave me a number to ring." "I gave you silence because silence kept you out of his reach." "Bollocks." The word cracked across the bar. His signet ring struck the wood as he flattened his palm. "You kept me out of your life. Dress the thing in armour if the shape pleases you, but name it straight in my bar." Heat climbed her face. She set the tumbler down hard enough to slosh whisky over her fingers. "You taught me tradecraft at my mother's kitchen table. Burn the route. Change the name. Cut the thread before the thread cuts you. I used the lesson." "I taught you tradecraft to keep you alive for a month. You turned a month into four years." "You had a network in every capital in Europe." "I had a knee held together with pins and a girl upstairs who screamed at aeroplanes in her sleep. The network had papers. You had a pulse." She looked toward the ceiling. Boards above her head held the flat where she had slept behind a lock he fitted himself, where he had brought tea at dawn after nightmares and left the cup outside the door without a knock. "You kept the flat empty." "Dust sheets keep a place honest." "Four years of rent, Si." "Board and lodging for services rendered. You washed glasses on Fridays." "I washed glasses for six months in 2019." "Inflation." "You paid my deposit in Cardiff." "You paid that back in March. A bank transfer with a reference number and no message. Very moving. I framed the reference number." Her fingers tightened round the case handle. The leather creaked. "I have work in London. A case at the Old Bailey. Eight weeks, perhaps ten." "A case brings Aurora Carter into a courtroom under her own name." "Under my own name, in wig and gown, with Evan's brother in the public gallery on day one." Silas took the stick from the rail. Weight shifted onto his right leg as he came round the bar, limp dragging the left foot across the boards in a rhythm she counted without thought. One, drag. One, drag. The journey took longer than memory allowed. He stopped beside her stool and looked at the case. "He sits in court and watches you work." "He sits in court and learns my hours. His family hires a photographer for the steps." "And you came here." "Yu-Fei has a room over the restaurant with a mattress and a lock from a garden centre. Your flat has steel in the door and a landlord with a stick." "And a bar downstairs full of witnesses." "And that." He pulled out the next stool and sat, left leg stuck out straight, boot dripping onto the floor. Close up, lines cut deep grooves from his nose to his mouth. A thin scar crossed one eyebrow where hair grew white through it. "You sleep in a bed these days, or a chair with a bat beside it?" "A bed. Door locked. Phone on the pillow." "Progress." "You use the stick in the street?" "Children offer me seats on the Tube now. I accept on wet days and feel ancient before Hammersmith." "You look tired." "You look like your mother when she had a point to prove. It frightens the horses." She reached out and touched the signet ring with one fingertip. The silver held the cold of the room. His hand stayed flat on his thigh. "I practised apologies on trains for four years. Each version had better lines than the one before it." "Give the judges the best version." "The best version had me brave and you proud. The true version has me standing in a bar with wet socks, nicking your whisky." He turned his hand over, palm up, ring bright against skin mapped with veins. "You were a kid with a busted face and a habit of flinching at doors. I gave you a room and three rules. Eat. Sleep. Tell me one true thing each day." "I told you lies with excellent structure." "Your lies had footnotes. Pre-law training showed through." "I told you one true thing." His face changed. Lines round his eyes deepened as his mouth lost its humour. "You told me you wished Evan had finished the job in Cardiff because rest beat fear. Then you slept for fourteen hours and ate toast with your fingers." "I remember the toast." "I remember the sentence. It lives in this bar. It lives in the back room with the ash." She pulled her hand back and wrapped both arms round herself. The coat stuck wet to her shoulders. "I have a flat in Cardiff with plants and a neighbour who feeds a cat through my letterbox when court runs late. I have friends who know my birthday and my coffee order. I have a life with doors that open from the inside." "And Evan's brother followed you to London." "And Evan's brother followed me to London." "So the life folds into a case and the case folds into my upstairs flat." "The flat folds nothing. The flat gives me a door Evan cannot kick through while I build a record in court." "There it stands." "There it stands." He reached behind the bar without rising and drew a brass key from under the till. The key had a green plastic tag with faded ink across it. He laid the key beside her tumbler, metal ticking against glass. "You kept the tag." "I keep bills, regrets, and keys in a drawer by the till. A system built on shame and order." Her hand hovered above the key. Water dripped from her sleeve onto the tag and blurred the ink further. "Tell me the price first." "Dishes on Fridays. One true thing each day. No notes under doors." "And the straight version about tonight comes before the key moves." Rory lifted her eyes to his face. Her fingers closed, stopped, opened again above the brass. "Ask the question, Si." Silas put his palm flat beside the key and leaned in, stick braced against the stool, breath carrying whisky and mint. "Why did you come through that door tonight, Carter, and why did you come to me before you rang your father?"
created_at"2026-10-13T10:04:27.046Z" 10/13/2026, 10:04:27 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
97.84% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2310
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Patel"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
82.68% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2310
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"silence"
count3
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"eyebrow"
count1
4
word"structure"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"pulse"
2"weight"
3"eyebrow"
4"structure"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences91
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences203
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2310
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount1026
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.68
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Carter1
Blackwood1
Water3
Rory3
Silas7
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Blackwood"
4"Water"
5"Rory"
6"Silas"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2310
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences203
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs148
mean15.61
std14.26
cv0.914
sampleLengths
084
168
281
320
45
514
66
721
812
943
105
115
126
1330
144
1513
1630
1738
188
1917
204
217
2210
231
2410
259
267
2719
2811
2922
304
318
326
331
3457
357
365
3721
381
399
403
4116
427
4314
4432
4526
463
4726
485
4911
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs160
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences203
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1028
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.014591439688715954
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences203
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences203
mean11.38
std7.98
cv0.701
sampleLengths
013
127
219
317
48
515
66
735
88
94
1018
1119
1220
137
1417
154
1616
175
187
197
206
216
2215
2312
247
2514
2622
275
285
296
3030
314
3213
338
3410
3512
3622
3716
388
3917
404
417
423
437
441
4510
469
477
486
4913
40.23% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats20
diversityRatio0.30049261083743845
totalSentences203
uniqueOpeners61
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
ratio0
63.68% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences87
matches
0"Her photographs had gone."
1"His shoulders had narrowed inside"
2"He lifted his head."
3"His mouth pulled at one"
4"He set the glass down"
5"She crossed the boards and"
6"She put the leather case"
7"Her hand shook once before"
8"He poured two fingers into"
9"His eyebrows rose."
10"He poured water into his"
11"Her bright blue eyes dropped"
12"She turned the glass with"
13"She pointed her chin toward"
14"She rolled her left sleeve"
15"His fingers curled around the"
16"Her throat tightened."
17"It landed across the wet"
18"She held his gaze."
19"His signet ring struck the"
ratio0.391
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences87
matches
0"The green neon above The"
1"Water ran in crooked lines"
2"Rory Carter stood under the"
3"The crack split the bird"
4"Heat and beer and wood"
5"Maps covered one wall in"
6"Her photographs had gone."
7"Silas Blackwood stood behind the"
8"Height still gave him command"
9"His shoulders had narrowed inside"
10"The silver signet ring on"
11"He lifted his head."
12"Hazel eyes moved from her"
13"Rory shut the door with"
14"His mouth pulled at one"
15"He set the glass down"
16"The word counsel landed between"
17"She crossed the boards and"
18"The defect lived in the"
19"She put the leather case"
ratio0.931
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.4809%