Run: 2026-10-13-01M4TBKDTHSPGXAKMV8QFRMC3F

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Duration:
2m 43s
Cost:
$0.146383
Provider:
Fireworks

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain had followed Rory from Commercial Street to Soho, worked its way down her collar and into her shoes. She shouldered through the door of the Raven's Nest, the delivery bag dragging at her hip, and behind her the green neon above the entrance buzzed once and steadied. Silas glanced up from the glass he was polishing. Lamplight caught the silver signet on his right hand. He set the tumbler down, reached for the whisky bottle, and poured without asking. Rory dropped onto a stool. "Double. Mrs Cheung had me up and down the same street six times. The last order went to a man who tipped me in foreign coins." "Czech koruny?" "Buttons." His mouth twitched under the grey streaks of his beard. He slid the glass across and limped off towards the till, favouring his left leg, and Rory shrugged out of her jacket. It stank of sesame oil and fryer heat. Everything she owned stank of it. She wrapped both hands around the glass and let the bar's warmth reach her fingers. Above the maps and the black-and-white photographs, the old clock ticked towards eleven. The door opened and the cold came in with three people: two men in wet overcoats and a woman shaking rain from a folded umbrella, laughing at something behind her. City clothes. City voices. Rory looked back at her glass. Then she looked again, because the woman had turned towards the bar and the light had found her face. Four years. Carys Hughes had acquired a good coat, a sharper haircut, a stone on her left hand that caught the lamplight the way Silas's ring did. None of it mattered. Rory would have known her from the back of her head. The impulse rose from somewhere old and practised: upstairs, twenty seconds, door locked. Her hand tightened on the glass. She stayed. The two men took a table under the maps. Carys came to the bar, digging in her purse. "A bottle of the Malbec, please, and three—" She looked up. The purse stopped moving. "Rory." "Hello, Carys." "Rory Carter." The name came out twice, once in each direction, as if she were checking it against a list. "You're in London." "Four years now." "Four—" Carys set the purse down flat on the bar, a card player folding. "I qualified in March. Haldane and Pryce. The City. I'm—" She stopped. Somewhere behind her eyes, two sentences collided: I've become exactly what we planned, and you smell of frying oil. Rory helped her out. "What are you doing in a place like this?" "Client drinks. Rhodri found it on his phone. He likes anywhere with a theme." A glance at the wall, the photographs, the shelf of old atlases. "Is it a theme?" "It's a man who never threw anything away." Silas brought the Malbec and three glasses and withdrew down the bar without a word, and Rory registered the mercy of it. "So." Carys turned the bottle a quarter turn. "What are you—" "I work for a restaurant in Chinatown. The Golden Empress." "Front of house?" "I deliver the food." Rory rotated her glass on its base. "On a bicycle. It's very green." Carys's mouth did the thing it used to do in seminars when she'd been caught without the reading. Then she laughed, one beat late, but real. "God. You always could land a line." "Four years of practice." The table behind them erupted over something; Rhodri's voice rolled off the ceiling. Carys studied Rory the way she used to study a problem question, and Rory watched her do it. "You've changed," Carys said. "It's the hair." "It's not the hair. You used to take up the whole room. Meredith once gave up and let you finish her point for her. Now you—" A gesture took in the jacket, the folded posture, the stool nearest the end of the bar. "You've looked at the door three times since I came in." "Occupational hazard." "Of what?" "Of leaving places." Carys let that sit. She touched the stone on her finger, turning it, and Rory caught the gesture for what it was. "Engaged?" "Marcus. He's at the firm." "Of course he is." Rory raised a hand before the flinch could land. "Does he make you laugh?" A pause, a fraction too long. "He's steady." "That's not what I asked." Carys picked up one of the glasses and put it down again without drinking. "No," she said. "It isn't." Rain worked at the windows. From the table, one of the men called for the wine, and Carys lifted a finger without turning. "We had a plan," she said. "Flat in Mile End. Pupillage by twenty-five. Your father was going to get us both mini-pupillages and pretend it was merit." "You got there." "Somebody had to." It came out harder than she seemed to expect. She looked down at the bottle. "Nobody knew where you were. Your mum rang me twice. The second time she cried, and I had nothing to give her. Eva swore blind she didn't know, and I believed her, because the alternative was that you'd told her and not me." "I told Eva one thing. That I was safe. I made her promise." "She kept it." Carys's thumb worried the stem of the glass. "Your dad tells my mother you're travelling." "Four years is a long holiday." "I saw Evan." The name dropped into the bar and lay there. "Last Christmas, in Cardiff. He cornered me outside the butcher's and told me you'd run off with a man from our course. He had it all ready. The man's name. The month." Rory laughed. It had nothing in it. "Did you believe him?" "No." The word came quick. Then, slower, as if it cost more: "No. But I believed him for about a minute, and I've thought about that minute ever since." Rory pushed her sleeve up to rest her forearm on the bar, and the old scar showed, the small pale crescent at her wrist. Carys's eyes went to it. "I was there when you got that," she said. "Your nan's greenhouse. I wrapped your arm in my cardigan and you told me not to be dramatic." "You were being dramatic." "I was nine." Her voice thinned. "I helped you then. That's the bit I can't—" She stopped. Rory waited. "Third year. Spring. You sat the tort paper with two fingers strapped together, and you said you'd shut them in Rhys's car door. I held your coffee so you could grip the pen." Her eyes came up, wet and furious. "I held your coffee, Rory." "You couldn't have known." "At Laura's party, you cried in the bathroom and told me you were going to leave him. And I said give it time, he's stressed, it's finals." The words came out whole, worn smooth by repetition, a sentence carried for four years. "I have thought about that night every month since you vanished." Rory turned the whisky glass once, twice, and set it down square. "If I'd stayed to argue my case, I'd have stayed," she said. "That was how it worked. He only needed one more chance, every time. I couldn't tell anyone, because anyone might have talked me into it. Eva got me a coach ticket and a floor to sleep on. That was the whole plan. There wasn't room in it for a friend with a conscience." "There's room now." "Carys! The wine's breathing itself to death over here!" Carys didn't turn. She pulled a napkin towards her, drew a pen from the good coat, and wrote a number in the hand Rory remembered from lecture notes passed across a desk, margins full of arguments. She slid it across the bar. "Don't lose it. Don't move house, change your name, or enter a convent." "No promises on the convent." "Rory." Flat, and then her face did something older than twenty-five. "Don't vanish again." "I don't vanish." Rory nodded at the ceiling. "I live upstairs. Flat two. I'm the one who smells of prawn toast." Carys looked at her for a long moment, and whatever she found must have been enough, because she gathered the bottle and the glasses. Halfway to the table she looked back. Rory lifted the whisky an inch off the bar, the smallest toast, and Carys returned it with the bottle, and went to sit among her other life beneath the maps. Silas came down the bar and took the empty tumbler. "Friend of yours?" "She was going to be my flatmate." Rory turned the napkin over. The number sat there in blue biro, four years late. "We were going to be barristers." "Hm." He set down a fresh glass and poured an inch into it. "For the reunion. On the house." "Is that what it was?" He considered the table, the bottle going round, Carys's laugh arriving a beat late and real. "Closest thing there is." Rory folded the napkin once, twice, and put it in the inside pocket of the jacket that stank of sesame oil. Beyond the window the rain worked at the glass, and the green neon held.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"it cost more [more]"
dialogueSentences79
tagDensity0.304
leniency0.608
rawRatio0.042
effectiveRatio0.025
96.73% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1527
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Marcus"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
96.73% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1527
totalAiIsms1
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences85
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences139
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen53
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1527
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
32.68% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount895
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.35
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Carys"
discoveredNames
Rory21
Commercial1
Street1
Soho1
Raven1
Nest1
Hughes1
Silas4
Carys16
Malbec1
Rhodri1
Rain1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Raven"
2"Hughes"
3"Silas"
4"Carys"
5"Rhodri"
6"Rain"
places
0"Commercial"
1"Street"
2"Soho"
globalScore0.327
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1527
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences139
matches
0"let that sit"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs78
mean19.58
std17.65
cv0.902
sampleLengths
049
132
231
32
41
574
640
719
842
921
1018
118
127
131
142
1523
163
1745
1813
1930
208
2122
2211
2310
243
2517
2633
274
2831
294
303
3154
322
332
343
3522
361
375
3818
398
405
4119
4223
4327
443
4561
4613
4718
486
4944
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"been caught"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs151
matches
0"was polishing"
1"were checking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences139
ratio0.007
matches
0"The table behind them erupted over something; Rhodri's voice rolled off the ceiling."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount898
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.025612472160356347
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0011135857461024498
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences139
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences139
mean10.99
std9.81
cv0.893
sampleLengths
020
129
29
39
414
55
626
72
81
910
1022
118
126
1315
1413
1530
162
172
186
1919
202
2125
224
2311
2413
256
262
279
289
298
303
314
321
332
3420
353
363
3714
3812
3919
404
419
4226
434
448
4522
468
473
4810
493
63.79% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.4172661870503597
totalSentences139
uniqueOpeners58
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences72
matches
0"Then she looked again, because"
1"Somewhere behind her eyes, two"
2"Then she laughed, one beat"
3"Then, slower, as if it"
ratio0.056
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences72
matches
0"She shouldered through the door"
1"He set the tumbler down,"
2"His mouth twitched under the"
3"He slid the glass across"
4"It stank of sesame oil"
5"She wrapped both hands around"
6"Her hand tightened on the"
7"She looked up."
8"She touched the stone on"
9"It came out harder than"
10"She looked down at the"
11"It had nothing in it."
12"Her voice thinned"
13"Her eyes came up, wet"
14"She pulled a napkin towards"
15"She slid it across the"
16"He set down a fresh"
17"He considered the table, the"
ratio0.25
15.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences72
matches
0"The rain had followed Rory"
1"She shouldered through the door"
2"Silas glanced up from the"
3"Lamplight caught the silver signet"
4"He set the tumbler down,"
5"Rory dropped onto a stool."
6"His mouth twitched under the"
7"He slid the glass across"
8"It stank of sesame oil"
9"Everything she owned stank of"
10"She wrapped both hands around"
11"The door opened and the"
12"Rory looked back at her"
13"Carys Hughes had acquired a"
14"None of it mattered."
15"Rory would have known her"
16"The impulse rose from somewhere"
17"Her hand tightened on the"
18"The two men took a"
19"Carys came to the bar,"
ratio0.889
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
ratio0
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Carys Hughes had acquired a good coat, a sharper haircut, a stone on her left hand that caught the lamplight the way Silas's ring did."
1"He considered the table, the bottle going round, Carys's laugh arriving a beat late and real."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Carys set, a card player folding"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences79
tagDensity0.063
leniency0.127
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.3572%