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Run: 2026-10-13-01M4TBPXEJTDMDYZ5YS7WBTWMG
Run Details
Model:
Muse Wonder (Reasoning, Medium)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
53.5s
Cost:
$0.096557
Provider:
Meta
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
97.78%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
84.48%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
83.33%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
94.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
45.98%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
20.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
8.39%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
40.32%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
85.8094%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
"You are bleeding on Eva's mat."
The chain held the door
at four inches.
Lucien filled the gap, one
hand braced against the frame, his ivory-handled cane hooked over his wrist.
Blood darkened the cuff of
his tailored charcoal suit and dripped from his fingertips onto the coir.
His platinum blond hair had
lost its slicked-back order. Strands clung to his forehead.
His amber eye caught the
hall light.
His black eye gave nothing
back. "I noticed." "You always notice. You never knock like a normal person." "I knocked three times." "You knocked our code on Eva's door. That code died three months ago." "It appears the door still remembers." "It appears you still use what people give you in confidence." His jaw tightened.
A fresh bead of blood
struck the mat. "Sanctuary, Aurora." "Use my full name again and I will shut this in your face." "Then shut it
quickly
. The thing behind me counts slower than you do." I looked past his shoulder.
The landing beyond him held
shadows, coats on hooks, a bicycle with one flat tyre, nothing with teeth. Yet Ptolemy pressed against my ankles and growled deep in his chest. Eva's tabby adored strangers, postmen, burglars, anyone with pockets.
He hated empty landings for
one reason only. I slammed the door.
Lucien's cane stopped it an
inch from the frame. "Rory." "You lost Rory in Marseille." "I lost a great many things in Marseille. My favourite coat. Two informants. Any hope of a civil conversation with you." "You gained your father's favour. Fair trade." The wood groaned between us.
Pain pulled at the corner
of his mouth, and his polished control cracked enough to show it. "I gained twelve hours. No more. He spent them hunting the woman I hid from him." The chain rattled.
Ptolemy growled again, louder this
time, and stared at the far end of the landing.
The bulb above the stairs
flickered
once. Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Fresh, and not all of it Lucien's.
I unhooked the chain, dragged
the door wide, and seized his lapel. "Inside. Now."
He crossed the threshold and
staggered. I kicked the door shut, shot the first deadbolt, then the second, then Eva's beloved third. Three locks. Three chunks of metal between us and the landing. Lucien leaned his back against the wall and slid down among Eva's shoes. "Do not bleed on the books." "I shall aim for the floorboards." "Generous."
I shoved a stack of
hardbacks off Eva's armchair with one forearm. The cramped flat on Brick Lane allowed no graceful rescue. Books covered the sofa, scrolls choked the coffee table, research notes papered the narrow hall, and the curry house downstairs sent cumin and hot oil through every floorboard.
I hauled Lucien up by
his good arm and steered him around a tower of folklore journals.
He gripped my waist to
keep his balance. Heat shot through my jumper at the contact.
His fingers knew the exact
place. Muscle memory, traitorous and precise.
I removed his hand and
placed it on the chair back. "Chair. Sit." "You give orders with
remarkable
affection
." "I give warnings the same way. Ask Evan."
His expression changed at the
name. It always did. "I have no need to ask Evan anything. I read the hospital report." "You read everything. It saves you asking people how they feel." He sat. Ptolemy leapt onto the chair arm, sniffed the blood, and butted his head against Lucien's shoulder in shameless welcome. "At least the cat has forgiven me." "Ptolemy licks his own arse. His standards present no challenge." A laugh escaped Lucien and turned into a hiss. He pressed his side. Blood spread beneath his palm, black in the lamplight.
I knelt and pushed his
hand aside. "Jacket off." "Buy me dinner first." "You owe me dinner. Marseille, the little place near the port, you left before the bill and before the dessert and before you explained the men with knives." "I explained the men with knives. I told you to run." "You told me to trust you first. Order matters."
I worked his jacket down
his shoulders. The charcoal wool cost more than my delivery scooter and now carried a long tear through the left side. Under it, his white shirt stuck to his skin. I unbuttoned it from the collar down. His breath hitched when my knuckles brushed his sternum. "Still ticklish. Half-demon, terror of London, ticklish." "Only when concussed." "You have a concussion now?" "No. I added it to the list of excuses for enjoying this." "Enjoy the next part less." I peeled the shirt away from the wound. Three parallel gashes raked his ribs, each edge rimmed with a dull silver crust. Iron filings. Someone had packed a claw with iron. Lucien watched my face instead of the injury. "Iron hurts your kind." "It hurts most kinds. It merely insults mine while it works." "These came from something with five claws and a grudge." "Four claws. I removed the thumb." "You removed a thumb in Eva's stairwell?" "On the roof. I have standards." "Since when?" "Since you set them and left me to live up to them in your absence." The words landed where he aimed them. I reached for Eva's first aid box under the coffee table and found whisky, plasters, three fountain pens, and a fossilised lemon. The real kit sat in the kitchen beside a fruit bowl full of keys. I crossed the flat in six steps, filled a bowl with hot water, and grabbed clean towels, surgical glue, and the curved needle Eva kept for bookbinding and emergencies. London life under Silas and beside Eva had taught me useful distinctions. Thread held paper together. Thread also held Frenchmen together. Lucien tracked me back across the room. "You kept the needle." "You bought it." "I bought it after Bristol." "You bought it because I used a safety pin on you in Bristol." "You used two." "You screamed through the first." "I objected on aesthetic grounds." I set the bowl down and cleaned the first gash. His abdomen hardened under the cloth. Sweat broke across his skin despite the cool room. "You should have gone to Silas." "Silas opens his bar to every creature with money and a grudge. Word travels through his taps." "You should have gone to a hospital." "And gift your National Health Service a half-demon with iron poisoning and no reflection in two mirrors out of three?" "You should have gone anywhere else." "There is no anywhere else tonight." His hand closed around my left wrist. He stopped my work and turned my hand over. The small crescent-shaped scar on my wrist gleamed pale against my skin. His thumb rested beside it, never quite on it. He had
traced
that scar once in a hotel room above a bookshop, with the curtains drawn and his cane propped against the bed, and he had asked who gave it to me. I had told him about the bicycle, the Cardiff kerb, my father's fury at the torn school uniform. He had kissed the scar and called it a moon with better sense than most gods. Now his thumb hovered. One inch of air held three months of damage. "Let go." "You still wear it uncovered." "It is a scar, Lucien. I do not dress it for company." "You hid it from Evan." "Evan collected my tells. You collect exits." His fingers loosened, but he held on one second too long. "I had to leave the restaurant." "No. You had to leave before your father arrived. You chose the sequence." "I chose your life." "You chose for me. Again. There is a difference, and your four languages all have a word for it." He released my wrist. "Control." "In French?" "Contrôle." "In English with the history included?" "Betrayal." At last, honesty without garnish. It hurt more than the wound under my hands. I threaded the needle. "Hold the towel." He obeyed. I pinched the first gash shut and pushed the needle through his skin. He gave no sound. His free hand gripped the chair arm until the wood creaked. "You came here hurt. That buys stitches. It buys nothing else." "I came here because Avaros has your name." "Avaros has had my name since you introduced us. Charming party. Candles, chanting, your father calling me Carter like a solicitor with horns." "He has the other name." The needle paused halfway through his skin. "What other name?" "The one your mother hid. The one Brendan sealed in a Cardiff court record before you turned six." "My parents named me Aurora Carter." "They christened you Aurora Carter. Jennifer Ellis registered a different name three days earlier in a parish book no human clerk remembers copying." Cold spread through my fingers. I finished the stitch, tied it, and cut the thread with Eva's scissors. "Say it." "No." "Lucien." "No. Names travel through walls here. Eva built these wards from language and spite. I admire the workmanship too much to test it." He caught my chin between finger and thumb and lifted my face. His amber eye burned. His black eye swallowed the light whole. Inches separated us. Whisky and blood and his clean wintergreen soap filled the space. "I crossed Marseille with your name locked behind my teeth. My father pulled two molars learning whether I kept it there. He failed. Tonight someone else succeeded." "You expect gratitude?" "I expect you alive at dawn. Gratitude can queue behind survival." "You walked out." "I walked toward the men hunting you." "You left me with your cane, a dead phone, and a note that said forgive the hour." "Forgive the hour. Not forgive me." "You split hairs while people bleed. It remains your finest talent." "And yours remains opening doors you swore you had barred." His thumb moved along my jaw, the lightest pressure. My body leaned before my mind granted permission. Shoulder-length black hair slid forward and brushed his wrist. His gaze dropped to my mouth. "You cut your hair." "You noticed three months of intelligence and chose the hair." "I notice everything about you first. Intelligence files itself later." "Romantic." "Accurate." "You still keep the cane beside the bed in hotels?" "I keep it beside your side of the bed. Habit outlives sense." The admission stripped the room bare. Eva's notes, Ptolemy's purring, the curry smells, all of it fell away behind the simple ugliness of missing him. He had left. He had also positioned himself between me and every knife since the day we met, and my anger had no clean place to stand. I set the scissors down before I put them through someone. "If I kiss you, your father wins a bargain. Correct?" His hand fell from my face. "Correct." "If I touch you first?" "The bargain specifies intent, not choreography." "Your father writes obscene contracts." "He learned romance from kings." "Do not make me laugh while I hold a needle near your ribs." "Then finish. We have little time." I stitched the second gash. Faster now. Professional distance returned stitch by stitch, though his skin under my palm stayed hot and his breathing matched mine beat for beat. "Who followed you?" "A listener. No body of its own. It borrows mouths." "Mouths plural?" "It repeated your voice on the roof. Perfect pitch. It called me Luc and asked me to open my throat." "You hate Luc from anyone else." "I removed its tongue. The body it borrowed objected." "What does it want?" "It wants the name spoken inside a warded home by someone who loves the bearer." The room
chilled
. Ptolemy stopped purring. "No one here qualifies." Lucien looked at me then, no armour left in either eye. "That is why I came bleeding instead of calling. A call gives it your voice. A door gives it a threshold. It needs invitation shaped like intimacy." "You came to warn me not to let you in." "I came to warn you from the landing. You altered the plan." "You chose the code. You knew I would open." "I knew you would open to shout at me. It requires more than shouting." I tied the final stitch and pressed a dressing across his ribs. My hand stayed there. His heart hammered under my palm through muscle and bandage. "Rory." "Do not." "You should step back." "You should stop looking at me like that." "I have no other way of looking at you. I checked in Marseille." His hand rose and stopped in the air between us. He left the choice there, open palmed, shaking from blood loss and restraint. The gesture undid me more than any touch. Lucien Moreau took contracts apart for kings of hell and men in Parliament. He never begged. He offered space and waited to starve inside it. I laced my fingers through his. The wards above Eva's door chimed. Every book on the coffee table lifted one inch and fell. Ptolemy shot off the chair and vanished behind the sofa. Lucien pulled me down as his cane flew from the armrest into his hand. He twisted the ivory handle. A thin blade slid free with a bright metallic hiss. Three knocks struck the front door. Slow. Exact. Our old code. Lucien stared at the locks, and colour drained from his face. "That is impossible." A voice came through the wood, warm, French, and identical to the man holding the blade beside me. "Rory, open the door. The one beside you has no blood."
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10/13/2026, 10:07:43 AM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
0
97.78%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
2255
totalAiIsmAdverbs
1
found
0
adverb
"quickly"
count
1
highlights
0
"quickly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
84.48%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
2255
totalAiIsms
7
found
0
word
"sanctuary"
count
1
1
word
"flickered"
count
1
2
word
"remarkable"
count
1
3
word
"affection"
count
1
4
word
"traced"
count
1
5
word
"perfect"
count
1
6
word
"chilled"
count
1
highlights
0
"sanctuary"
1
"flickered"
2
"remarkable"
3
"affection"
4
"traced"
5
"perfect"
6
"chilled"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
0
maxInWindow
0
found
(empty)
highlights
(empty)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
132
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
132
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
261
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
33
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
2255
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
21
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
83.33%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
44
wordCount
1214
uniqueNames
13
maxNameDensity
1.07
worstName
"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity
2.5
worstWindowName
"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy
6
Lucien
13
Eva
10
Brick
1
Lane
1
Silas
1
Frenchmen
1
Cardiff
1
Moreau
1
Parliament
1
French
1
Blood
3
Three
4
persons
0
"Ptolemy"
1
"Lucien"
2
"Eva"
3
"Silas"
4
"Moreau"
5
"Blood"
places
0
"Brick"
1
"Lane"
2
"Cardiff"
3
"Parliament"
globalScore
0.965
windowScore
0.833
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
96
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
2255
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
1
totalSentences
261
matches
0
"traced that scar"
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
185
mean
12.19
std
13.01
cv
1.068
sampleLengths
0
6
1
42
2
27
3
2
4
10
5
4
6
13
7
6
8
11
9
11
10
2
11
13
12
13
13
52
14
4
15
9
16
1
17
5
18
21
19
7
20
22
21
16
22
29
23
8
24
12
25
2
26
33
27
13
28
6
29
6
30
1
31
67
32
8
33
19
34
11
35
2
36
6
37
8
38
9
39
13
40
11
41
21
42
7
43
10
44
22
45
7
46
2
47
4
48
28
49
11
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
132
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
195
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
261
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
94.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1218
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount
26
adverbRatio
0.021346469622331693
lyAdverbCount
1
lyAdverbRatio
0.0008210180623973727
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
261
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
261
mean
8.64
std
5.93
cv
0.686
sampleLengths
0
6
1
8
2
17
3
17
4
9
5
5
6
7
7
6
8
2
9
10
10
4
11
13
12
6
13
11
14
3
15
8
16
2
17
13
18
13
19
5
20
18
21
12
22
9
23
8
24
4
25
9
26
1
27
5
28
21
29
7
30
5
31
17
32
16
33
3
34
15
35
7
36
4
37
1
38
7
39
12
40
2
41
6
42
16
43
2
44
9
45
13
46
6
47
6
48
1
49
12
45.98%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
15
diversityRatio
0.3103448275862069
totalSentences
261
uniqueOpeners
81
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
124
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
20.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
62
totalSentences
124
matches
0
"His platinum blond hair had"
1
"His amber eye caught the"
2
"His black eye gave nothing"
3
"His jaw tightened."
4
"I looked past his shoulder."
5
"He hated empty landings for"
6
"I slammed the door."
7
"I unhooked the chain, dragged"
8
"He crossed the threshold and"
9
"I kicked the door shut,"
10
"I shoved a stack of"
11
"I hauled Lucien up by"
12
"He gripped my waist to"
13
"His fingers knew the exact"
14
"I removed his hand and"
15
"His expression changed at the"
16
"It always did."
17
"He pressed his side."
18
"I knelt and pushed his"
19
"I worked his jacket down"
ratio
0.5
8.39%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
112
totalSentences
124
matches
0
"The chain held the door"
1
"Lucien filled the gap, one"
2
"Blood darkened the cuff of"
3
"His platinum blond hair had"
4
"Strands clung to his forehead."
5
"His amber eye caught the"
6
"His black eye gave nothing"
7
"His jaw tightened."
8
"A fresh bead of blood"
9
"I looked past his shoulder."
10
"The landing beyond him held"
11
"Eva's tabby adored strangers, postmen,"
12
"He hated empty landings for"
13
"I slammed the door."
14
"Lucien's cane stopped it an"
15
"The wood groaned between us."
16
"Pain pulled at the corner"
17
"The chain rattled."
18
"Ptolemy growled again, louder this"
19
"The bulb above the stairs"
ratio
0.903
40.32%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
1
totalSentences
124
matches
0
"Now his thumb hovered."
ratio
0.008
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
50
technicalSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
0
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
0
85.8094%