Run: 2026-10-13-01M4TC1BPN20ZJ8VPPE8G0MBN8

Run Details

Duration:
1m 59s
Cost:
$0.116278
Provider:
Fireworks

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon sign above the Raven's Nest hummed green against the rain, and inside, the bottles along the back bar glowed like something on a chemist's shelf. Rory sat at her usual spot at the far end, delivery jacket steaming on the stool beside her, both hands wrapped round a mug of tea Silas had poured without being asked. Tuesday. Two regulars murmured over dominoes in the corner, and the old maps on the walls had gone soft at the edges with decades of smoke. "You've got the look of a drowned crow." Silas worked a cloth round a glass, signet ring clicking against the stem. "Flattery'll get you everywhere." "Six drops in this weather. Cheung's working you like a pack mule." "Cheung pays. Weather doesn't." The door swung in on a gust and a woman stepped through, shaking her umbrella twice against the frame. A small gesture, twice-folded, fussy and familiar. Recognition arrived before the name did. Camel coat darkened at the shoulders, hair gone sleek and expensive, heels that had no business on a night like this. Nia Bevan. Four years gone, and there she stood under the green wash of the sign, looking for a dry seat and finding a ghost instead. "Rory?" "Hello, Nia." "Christ. Christ alive." The laugh came out of her unchanged, the same bark that used to set off whole seminar rooms. She crossed the floor in four strides and wrapped Rory up, wet coat and all. Rory's arms came up a beat late. Nia felt it. Rory watched her feel it, watched her file it away under things not to mention yet. "Large red." Silas set a glass down before Nia had finished sitting. "House. You had the look of it coming through the door." "I could kiss you." "My wife would object." He limped back down the bar, and Nia's eyes followed the ring, the grey-streaked beard, the quiet of him. "Who's that?" "Silas. Landlord. Friend." "You've got people, then." "One or two." Nia shrugged out of her coat and looked at Rory properly for the first time. Rory saw the audit happen. The jacket. The moped key on the bar. The hands round the tea, chapped from handlebars and October. Nia's face rearranged itself and Rory let it, because there was no version of this that skipped the audit. "Deliveries." "For the Golden Empress. Round the corner. It pays the rent. Most months." "You were top of the cohort, Rory. Top. Old Meredith used your essay as the model answer. Kept it in a drawer like a relic." "Meredith kept everything. Man had a drawer full of bus tickets." "Don't." Nia's voice dropped. "Don't do the bit where you make it funny so I can't ask." Silas had retreated to the far till, polishing glasses that were already clean. The domino players clicked on, indifferent. Rain worked the windows. Rory turned her mug a quarter circle and her thumb found the crescent scar on her left wrist, an old habit, older than any of this by twenty years. "Ask, then." "You vanished. One day you were there, and then your mam's telling half of Cathays you're in London and you're fine, and nobody's heard a word. I emailed. I wrote an actual letter. Like a Victorian." "I know." "Eva wouldn't tell me a thing. Just that you were safe. She said it like she was reading it off a card." "That was all there was to tell, for a while." Nia worked the stem of her glass between finger and thumb. The ring on her left hand caught the light, plain gold, and Rory nodded at it. "Gethin. Year above us. The one with the car." "The one with the car." Nia's mouth softened. "We've a boy. Two years old. At home with my mam in Pontcanna right now, probably teaching her bad habits." She got the phone out, and Rory looked at the photos because that was what you did. A round-faced child scowling at the camera. "He's got your scowl." "He's got his father's everything, worse luck." Nia put the phone face down and the softness went with it. "I heard about Evan. After. Bits of it." "Bits." "Rory. His cousin's birthday, that club on St Mary Street. I'm the one who introduced you." "You didn't introduce us. You were sick in the taxi and he gave me his chips." Rory kept her voice level. "You can't take credit for the chips, Nia." "I saw him take your arm once. Outside Gethin's, that last summer. You wanted to leave and he wanted to stay, and he had your wrist, and you did that laugh, the one that means nothing's wrong. And I let it go. Got in the car and let it go." Nia's glass had stopped turning. "I've thought about that night more than I've thought about most things in my life." The bar held its quiet. Silas set down two small glasses of something amber between them and moved off without a word, and Rory was grateful for him in a way she couldn't have said out loud. "On the house," he murmured, halfway down the bar already. "You look like two women who've earned it." Rory picked up her glass. The whisky burned a clean line down. "I left at four in the morning with one bag and Eva's spare key in my pocket." "What happened?" A long pause. Nia didn't fill it, and Rory respected her for that more than for anything in four years. "He put his fist through the bathroom door because I'd locked it. To take a bath." Level. Cool. A fact from a file. "It wasn't the first thing. It was the last one." Nia's hand came across the bar and settled over Rory's. Rory let it stay for three seconds, then turned her palm up and gave one squeeze, which was the most she had in her. "I should have said something. That night. I should have dragged you into the car." "You did say something. Once. Second year. You said he was a lot, and I didn't speak to you for a week." "I remember." "So we were both cowards about it, in our own ways." Rory drank. "Done now." "Is it?" "It has to be. I've got deliveries at nine." Nia laughed despite herself, wet around the eyes, and wiped under them with the side of her hand, practised, a mother's move. Then she sat back and looked at Rory the way you look at a house you used to live in. "The house on Rhymney Street. The boiler." "You had to kick it. There was a technique." "You drew a diagram. Pinned it to the wall." "It was a good diagram." "It was a beautiful diagram." The laugh arrived late but it arrived whole, and for a moment they were nineteen and freezing and invincible in a terrace in Cathays. Then it faded, and what was left was the truth under it. "We were going to be barristers." "You were. I was going to marry someone rich and summer in Tuscany." "You said that with your whole chest, aged nineteen." "Nineteen's an age for saying things with your whole chest." Her phone buzzed. A cab, two minutes out. Nia stood and shrugged the camel coat back on, and Rory watched her become the London woman again, piece by piece, scarf, bag, phone. Then Nia took a pen from inside the bag and wrote a number on the back of a receipt from her purse. "My mobile. I'm up every month now. Depositions, training, the lot. The firm's got an office off Chancery Lane." "You don't have to—" "Ring or don't. That's yours to decide." Nia set the receipt on the bar and held it down with one finger for a second, as if it might blow away. "Just don't vanish again. Once was enough for one lifetime." At the door she stopped and looked back, and her face did something complicated before it settled. "You look like yourself again. That last year in Cardiff you looked like a photo of yourself with the colour gone. I never said it then." The umbrella snapped open. "I'm saying it now." The door swung shut and the green neon hummed and the rain took her. Rory turned the receipt over. Nia's handwriting hadn't changed, all forward lean and no patience. She read the number twice, folded it once, and put it in the inside pocket of the delivery jacket, next to her heart, where the rain couldn't get at it. Silas limped down the bar and collected the glasses. "Old ghost?" "Old friend." "Good kind or the other kind?" "Jury's out." He huffed through his nose and took the whisky away and put the kettle on instead, because he knew her better than most people knew anybody. Rory reached for her tea, and the sleeve of her jumper rode up past the small crescent scar, and she left it where it was.
created_at"2026-10-13T10:13:25.344Z" 10/13/2026, 10:13:25 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"The laugh arrived late [late]"
dialogueSentences70
tagDensity0.214
leniency0.429
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.029
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1503
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
96.67% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1503
totalAiIsms1
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences68
matches
0"was grateful"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences68
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences122
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1503
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions52
wordCount867
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.42
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Silas6
Bevan1
Rory21
Nia18
October1
Cool1
Cathays1
London1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Bevan"
4"Rory"
5"Nia"
places
0"Cathays"
globalScore0.289
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1503
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences122
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs75
mean20.04
std19.01
cv0.949
sampleLengths
085
121
24
312
44
553
626
71
82
962
1023
114
1223
132
143
154
163
1757
181
1913
2025
2111
2217
2352
242
2536
262
2722
2810
2927
309
3152
324
3327
341
3516
3629
3770
3837
3918
4012
4117
422
4320
4433
4534
4615
4722
482
4915
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences68
matches
0"being asked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs143
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences122
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount870
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.026436781609195402
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0011494252873563218
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences122
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences122
mean12.32
std9.81
cv0.796
sampleLengths
027
132
21
325
421
54
612
74
819
97
106
1121
122
1324
141
152
1621
1715
187
193
2016
2112
2211
234
2423
252
263
274
283
2915
305
312
326
3310
3419
351
3613
3725
3811
394
4013
4113
426
434
4429
452
4636
472
4822
4910
61.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.4180327868852459
totalSentences122
uniqueOpeners51
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences62
matches
0"Then she sat back and"
1"Then it faded, and what"
2"Then Nia took a pen"
ratio0.048
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount7
totalSentences62
matches
0"She crossed the floor in"
1"He limped back down the"
2"She got the phone out,"
3"he murmured, halfway down the"
4"Her phone buzzed."
5"She read the number twice,"
6"He huffed through his nose"
ratio0.113
8.39% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences62
matches
0"The neon sign above the"
1"Rory sat at her usual"
2"Silas worked a cloth round"
3"The door swung in on"
4"A small gesture, twice-folded, fussy"
5"Recognition arrived before the name"
6"Camel coat darkened at the"
7"The laugh came out of"
8"She crossed the floor in"
9"Rory's arms came up a"
10"Nia felt it."
11"Rory watched her feel it,"
12"Silas set a glass down"
13"He limped back down the"
14"Nia shrugged out of her"
15"Rory saw the audit happen."
16"The moped key on the"
17"The hands round the tea,"
18"Nia's face rearranged itself and"
19"Nia's voice dropped"
ratio0.903
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Camel coat darkened at the shoulders, hair gone sleek and expensive, heels that had no business on a night like this."
1"Silas had retreated to the far till, polishing glasses that were already clean."
91.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Nia set, as if it might blow away"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"The umbrella snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences70
tagDensity0.029
leniency0.057
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.057
89.0036%