Run: 2026-10-13-01M4TC1BTMBV0ZPF0KW20W1RD3

Run Details

Duration:
1m 26s
Cost:
$0.077803
Provider:
Fireworks

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The neon above the door turned the rain green. Rory watched it run down the window in bright threads while Silas worked a cloth through a glass that was already clean, the way he did when the bar was quiet and his knee was playing up. Outside, Soho did its evening shuffle: umbrellas, theatre crowds, a man losing an argument with a parking meter. Her jacket steamed on the peg by the door. It smelled of sesame oil and wet pavement, of the Golden Empress's kitchen and six flights of stairs in a mansion block off Fitzroy Street. She cupped her whisky and read the same line of her book for the fourth time. The door opened and let the weather in, and a woman with it. Good coat. Dark wool, belted, the kind that cost a month of the flat upstairs. She shook the rain from her hair, swept the bar with the brisk audit of someone who billed her attention by the hour, and her gaze crossed Rory's and stopped dead. "No. Rory Carter." Eight years folded up like a map. Rory set the book face down. "Cerys Hughes." "You cut your hair." Cerys stood there with rain on her shoulders, one hand still on the door, as though leaving remained an option she hadn't ruled out. "You used to wear it down your back." "So did you." Cerys touched the blunt line at her jaw, corporate-sharp, and something moved across her face that Rory couldn't read. Then she crossed the room and took the stool beside her, and the coat gave off the smell of money and a florist's perfume. "Of all the bars in London. My client dinner cancelled, I ducked in out of the rain, and—" She turned on the stool, taking Rory in the way a surveyor takes a building. "Seven years, Rory. You fell off the edge of the world." "London's not the edge of the world." "It is from Cardiff." Silas appeared with a glass, unasked, and raised an eyebrow at Cerys. His limp announced him before his voice did. "Wine. White. Whatever you've got that's never been within a mile of a pub in Cathays." She glanced at the maps on the walls, the black-and-white photographs, the bookshelf that didn't quite fit its wall. "This place is strange. I like it." "It grows on you," Silas said, and poured, and his signet ring clicked once against the bottle. He set Rory's second whisky down beside her first without a word, and Rory watched Cerys register that: the unasked-for drink, the shorthand of a regular. This is her local. She belongs here, in a room full of old maps, delivering noodles. "So." Cerys wrapped both hands around her glass. "Catch me up. You vanished halfway through second year. Nobody knew anything. Eva Price knew something, but Eva Price would set herself on fire before she'd give you up, which I respected and hated in equal measure." "I'm between things." "Between things." Cerys let the words sit. "You were top of our year, Rory. Brennan's contract seminars, the only first he ever gave. You were going to be the barrister. I was going to make partner somewhere and bankroll the good works. That was the plan. We had a flat picked out off the Caledonian Road." "You remember the flat." "I remember the plans." Cerys drank. "I finished, obviously. Training contract, then Bishopsgate. I was going to prosecute war criminals; now I help energy companies argue about pipelines. The money's obscene. I've decided to let it be." "You say that like it happened to someone else." "It did, most days." Cerys turned the glass in her fingers. "You'd hate what I am now. The old you. I keep waiting to miss her, and mostly I just miss you." Rory's sleeve rode up when she reached for her drink, and Cerys's eyes caught the small crescent on her left wrist. "You still have the scar." "Occupational hazard of greenhouses." "The greenhouse story. First night of freshers', you told it in that awful kitchen in Talybont, and I've told it at dinner parties since like it happened to me." A breath of a laugh. "I stole your childhood for small talk. That's what I do now, I mine the past for anecdotes." Down the bar, Silas had found another clean glass to polish. He kept his back to them with the practised care of a man who knew when a room needed to feel empty. "I saw your dad last spring," Cerys said. "Outside the courthouse in Cardiff. He asked if I'd heard from you." The whisky had gone warm in Rory's hand. She watched the neon bleed through the window and said nothing. "I said no. I've been composing what I'd say to you ever since, and now you're here and it's all gone." Cerys's voice stayed level, the level of cross-examination, of a woman who billed by the six-minute unit. "He looks older. He looks like a man waiting for a phone to ring." "Cerys." "I know. I know it's not my business. But you were my business. You were the person I—" She stopped, recalibrated. "Evan tells people you had a breakdown. That's the story in Cardiff. That you went to pieces and he bore it nobly until you left him." "What do you tell people?" "Nothing. I wasn't there. You were gone before I ever—" Cerys set her glass down too precisely, aligning it with the grain of the bar. "He came to your twenty-first. He chose what you wore; you said it in the taxi like it was a joke, and I laughed. I thought it was romantic, Rory. I have thought about that night every few months for five years, and I thought it was romantic." The rain softened against the glass. Somewhere behind them the door opened and closed and the bar breathed in and out. "You called me once," Cerys said. "Four years ago, two in the morning. I was asleep. It went to voicemail and you didn't leave a message, and I kept the missed call on my phone for a year like it was evidence. Like if I held onto it I could go back and answer it." "It was nothing. A bad night." "I know what kind of nothing it was." Cerys finally looked at her, and the corporate polish cracked enough to show the girl from Talybont underneath, hungover at a nine o'clock lecture, splitting a packet of custard creams. "I know now. That's the difference between then and now, and it's worth exactly nothing to you." Rory turned her glass a quarter circle on the wood. The ice had collapsed into itself. "You couldn't have known." "I could have asked. That's the part I carry. There was a question I didn't ask, and then there was a phone call I didn't answer, and then there were seven years." Cerys reached into the coat, produced a card, laid it on the bar between them. Cream card, heavy stock, her name in embossed grey. "In case there's another two in the morning. In case there isn't and you just want to tell me about the greenhouse again. I tell it wrong, apparently. There's no greenhouse in it the way you tell it." Rory looked at the card. She didn't pick it up. She didn't push it back. Cerys finished her wine and stood and belted the good coat, and for a moment her hand hovered near Rory's shoulder and thought better of it. "The rain's stopped," she said. "You look well, Rory. You look like someone. I can't work out who yet." Silas limped the length of the bar and collected the empty wine glass, and his hazel eyes found Rory's over the rim of it, a question with no words in it. The neon buzzed. The card lay on the wood between the wet ring of Cerys's glass and the warm one of Rory's, and Rory turned her whisky another quarter circle, and the ice settled, and neither of them spoke.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.34
leniency0.681
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.29% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1348
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
96.29% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1348
totalAiIsms1
found
0
word"eyebrow"
count1
highlights
0"eyebrow"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences53
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences53
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences83
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1348
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount704
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.41
worstName"Cerys"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"Cerys"
discoveredNames
Silas5
Soho1
Golden1
Empress1
Fitzroy1
Street1
Rory15
Cerys17
Talybont1
Cream1
persons
0"Silas"
1"Empress"
2"Rory"
3"Cerys"
places
0"Soho"
1"Fitzroy"
2"Street"
3"Talybont"
globalScore0.293
windowScore0
25.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences40
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as though leaving remained an option she hadn't ruled out"
1"quite fit its wall"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1348
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean29.3
std23.37
cv0.797
sampleLengths
064
150
213
346
43
513
62
736
83
943
1044
117
124
1320
1442
1559
1645
173
1856
194
2037
219
2232
2321
245
254
2652
2733
2820
2919
3052
311
3247
335
3473
3521
3655
376
3855
3916
404
4194
4215
4326
4419
4570
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs114
matches
0"was playing"
74.01% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences83
ratio0.024
matches
0"\"I finished, obviously. Training contract, then Bishopsgate. I was going to prosecute war criminals; now I help energy companies argue about pipelines. The money's obscene. I've decided to let it be.\""
1"\"He came to your twenty-first. He chose what you wore; you said it in the taxi like it was a joke, and I laughed. I thought it was romantic, Rory. I have thought about that night every few months for five years, and I thought it was romantic.\""
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount710
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.014084507042253521
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0028169014084507044
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences83
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences83
mean16.24
std12.86
cv0.792
sampleLengths
09
137
218
39
425
516
613
72
813
931
103
117
126
132
1428
158
163
1719
1824
1933
2011
217
224
2312
248
2535
267
2717
2826
294
3012
318
3237
333
347
3549
364
376
3831
399
4011
4121
4221
435
444
4534
4618
4711
4822
498
61.04% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.40963855421686746
totalSentences83
uniqueOpeners34
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences48
matches
0"Then she crossed the room"
1"Somewhere behind them the door"
ratio0.042
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences48
matches
0"Her jacket steamed on the"
1"It smelled of sesame oil"
2"She cupped her whisky and"
3"She shook the rain from"
4"She turned on the stool,"
5"His limp announced him before"
6"She glanced at the maps"
7"He set Rory's second whisky"
8"She belongs here, in a"
9"He kept his back to"
10"She watched the neon bleed"
11"She stopped, recalibrated"
12"She didn't pick it up."
13"She didn't push it back."
ratio0.292
22.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount42
totalSentences48
matches
0"The neon above the door"
1"Rory watched it run down"
2"Her jacket steamed on the"
3"It smelled of sesame oil"
4"She cupped her whisky and"
5"The door opened and let"
6"She shook the rain from"
7"Rory set the book face"
8"Cerys stood there with rain"
9"Cerys touched the blunt line"
10"She turned on the stool,"
11"Silas appeared with a glass,"
12"His limp announced him before"
13"She glanced at the maps"
14"Silas said, and poured, and"
15"He set Rory's second whisky"
16"This is her local."
17"She belongs here, in a"
18"Cerys wrapped both hands around"
19"Cerys let the words sit"
ratio0.875
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Rory watched it run down the window in bright threads while Silas worked a cloth through a glass that was already clean, the way he did when the bar was quiet a…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.085
leniency0.17
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.8379%