| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.393 | | leniency | 0.786 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 85.54% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1383 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "precisely" | | 2 | "perfectly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 67.46% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1383 | | totalAiIsms | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "charged" | | 3 | "measured" | | 4 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 86 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 102 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1403 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Not voices, she told herself, then stopped telling herself, because the leaves had no wind to excuse them and the sound …" |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 1159 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.86 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 4 | | November | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Wildflowers | 1 | | Aurora | 10 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Hel | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1403 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 37.92 | | std | 33.45 | | cv | 0.882 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 36 | | 2 | 46 | | 3 | 40 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 113 | | 6 | 49 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 69 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 74 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 76 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 61 | | 18 | 62 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 112 | | 21 | 39 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 74 | | 25 | 86 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 102 | | 30 | 56 | | 31 | 34 | | 32 | 66 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 47 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 32 |
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| 93.02% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "been carved" | | 1 | "being made" | | 2 | "being regarded" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 210 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 19 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 15 | | totalSentences | 102 | | ratio | 0.147 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond Park stretched around them in its ordinary guise — bracken gone rust-coloured, bare branches, a distant road humming through the cold." | | 1 | "Not quarried rock — oak." | | 2 | "The sound of the road vanished — not faded, vanished, cut off mid-hum as though someone had lifted the needle from a record." | | 3 | "Inside the arc, the air held a blue hour that didn't belong to any clock — dusk without a sunset behind it, stars pricking through overhead in constellations she didn't recognise, while the ground below stayed lit as if lit from within." | | 4 | "Cornflowers, foxgloves, wild garlic, poppies — a whole year's worth of blooming crammed into one clearing, out of season and out of sequence, nodding in a breeze she couldn't feel." | | 5 | "\"I've been *between* before.\" They drifted past her, and for the first time since she'd met them, their form wouldn't hold a clean silhouette — the edges feathered, stretched, reached by something in the air." | | 6 | "The Heartstone pendant lay under her shirt, cool and dim and quiet — asleep, she thought, though she'd never once thought of it as something that could wake." | | 7 | "The clearing unfolded the way rooms do in dreams — each rise revealed another space that the first view hadn't allowed for." | | 8 | "Small lights drifted above the current, not fireflies — too slow, too deliberate — moving against the flow like salmon." | | 9 | "Not off — dead, screen black, though she'd charged it that morning." | | 10 | "Aurora met its gaze and felt measured — weighed on some scale she couldn't see — and then it turned and was simply not there anymore, no bound away, no crash through undergrowth." | | 11 | "She caught it happening on a patch of bare earth — she turned, and it arrived a half-heartbeat late, like a bad dub." | | 12 | "The path — there was a path now, whether or not there had been one — wound between two stones twice her height and opened onto the grove's heart." | | 13 | "The fire cracked; the chimes turned; the tea steamed; and the whole grove might have been empty for a thousand years, except for the cup, except for the sense — settling over her skin like the warmth had — of being regarded." | | 14 | "Silver hair fell to her waist without a tangle in it, and her eyes were the pale lavender of the light inside the stones, and where she stood the grass lay perfectly flat — not bent, not pressed." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1146 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 39 | | adverbRatio | 0.034031413612565446 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005235602094240838 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 102 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 102 | | mean | 13.75 | | std | 10.41 | | cv | 0.757 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 39 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 34 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 23 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 42 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 30 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 35 | | 46 | 26 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 28 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 76.80% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.49019607843137253 | | totalSentences | 102 | | uniqueOpeners | 50 | |
| 43.86% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she saw the stones." |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 17 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "Their violet eyes caught the" | | 1 | "Her boots crunched frost." | | 2 | "She knew it the moment" | | 3 | "They had stopped at the" | | 4 | "Her breath stopped fogging." | | 5 | "She crouched and touched a" | | 6 | "It was real." | | 7 | "It was also, she noticed," | | 8 | "They all were." | | 9 | "They drifted past her, and" | | 10 | "She filed that under things" | | 11 | "They moved deeper." | | 12 | "Her phone was dead." | | 13 | "It left no prints in" | | 14 | "Her shadow lagged." | | 15 | "She caught it happening on" | | 16 | "She stood very still until" |
| | ratio | 0.224 | |
| 91.58% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "The directions made no sense" | | 1 | "Aurora folded the scrap of" | | 2 | "Nyx moved beside her without" | | 3 | "Their violet eyes caught the" | | 4 | "Richmond Park stretched around them" | | 5 | "A herd of deer watched" | | 6 | "Aurora's breath fogged." | | 7 | "Her boots crunched frost." | | 8 | "She knew it the moment" | | 9 | "Spirals had been carved into" | | 10 | "They had stopped at the" | | 11 | "Aurora stepped between the stones" | | 12 | "The world squeezed her." | | 13 | "Pressure closed over her ears" | | 14 | "The sound of the road" | | 15 | "The light changed." | | 16 | "Her breath stopped fogging." | | 17 | "The cold let go of" | | 18 | "Cornflowers, foxgloves, wild garlic, poppies" | | 19 | "The grass under her boots" |
| | ratio | 0.737 | |
| 65.79% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 93.02% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Inside the arc, the air held a blue hour that didn't belong to any clock — dusk without a sunset behind it, stars pricking through overhead in constellations sh…" | | 1 | "The Heartstone pendant lay under her shirt, cool and dim and quiet — asleep, she thought, though she'd never once thought of it as something that could wake." | | 2 | "White, antlered in more points than antlers should manage, watching them with the calm of something that has never once needed to run." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.214 | | leniency | 0.429 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |