Run: 2026-10-13-01M4V1PFRVVSN2F605FPD89H5K

Run Details

Duration:
25.3s
Cost:
$0.017658
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Brass scraped against brass. Once, twice, three times. The final deadbolt clicked back, and the heavy wood swung inward, letting in the stairwell's damp draft and the rich, toasted-cumin aroma from the curry house downstairs. Lucien Moreau filled the doorframe. Rain darkened the shoulders of his tailored charcoal coat, and a single silver-blond strand had escaped its slick hold to curl against his brow. His mismatched eyes—one the colour of burnt sugar, the other a flat, lightless void—dropped from Rory’s face to the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, where her fingers gripped the edge of the door. "You changed the locks." "Eva changed the locks. Added two more, actually." Rory didn't step back. She kept her foot wedged behind the bottom hinge, blocking his path into the cramped hallway. "The last time you were in this borough, you left a bloodstain on the floorboards and a very expensive cufflink on my nightstand. Neither of us wants a repeat performance." Lucien’s gloved hand tightened on the ivory handle of his cane. The carving—a coiled serpent with rubies for eyes—dug into his leather palm. "I came for the cufflink." "I pawned it." A muscle feathered in his jaw. The Marseillais cadence in his voice thickened as his gaze drifted past her shoulder, taking in the towering stacks of yellowed scrolls and leather-bound lexicons balancing precariously on the radiator. "Then I will take its value in information. Let me in, Rory. The rain in this city is an insult, and I am bleeding on your welcome mat." Rory looked down. A dark, viscous drop—too thick for human blood, carrying the faint, ozone tang of Avaros—splashed onto the frayed coir rug beside his polished Oxford shoe. She stepped aside. Lucien moved past her with a stiff, measured gait that betrayed the injury he was hiding. He smelled of wet wool, clove cigarettes, and cold iron. As she threw the three deadbolts back into place, Ptolemy dropped from the top of the fridge, landing with a dull thud on a pile of Latin translations. The tabby arched his back, let out a low hiss at the half-demon, and vanished into the bedroom. "Smart cat," Rory muttered, crossing the tiny living room to the kitchenette. She shoved a stack of court transcripts off the counter to make room for the kettle. "Take the coat off. Sit on the wooden chair, not the sofa. Eva’s got fifteenth-century parish records spread across the cushions, and if you bleed demon ichor on the Bishop of Winchester's ledger, she’ll skin us both." Lucien unbuttoned his overcoat with one hand. His left arm hung at an awkward angle against his ribs. When the heavy wool parted, a jagged tear in his crisp white shirt revealed dark, angry flesh knitting itself together at a sluggish pace. Something had slowed his healing. Silver, or perhaps bone-ash. He lowered himself onto the spindle-backed chair, resting his cane across his knees. The black eye tracked her movements as she pulled a tin of antiseptic and a roll of gauze from the cupboard above the sink, right beside the Golden Empress takeaway menus. "Still delivering dumplings for Cheung?" "Pays the rent. Doesn't require me to make deals with things that have three rows of teeth." She turned, leaning her hip against the chipped laminate counter. Her bright blue eyes narrowed. "Four months, Luc. Not a postcard. Not a burned matchbook left on my windowsill. You walked out of my flat while I was still asleep, and the next day half the brokers in Soho were saying the Frenchman had gone back to Paris." "Marseille." "I don't care if you went to Brighton. You left." "You were safe when I left." "I was alone when you left." The kettle began to rumble, a low vibration that rattled the mismatched mugs on the drying rack. Lucien looked away, his amber eye catching the yellow glow of the streetlamp filtering through the rain-streaked window. Without the armour of his coat, his shoulders looked narrower, the sharp lines of his face drawn tight by exhaustion. "The Vane brothers knew about you," he said, his voice dropping an octave. "They knew I had spent three nights above Silas’s bar. If I had stayed a fourth, they would have come through your windows instead of mine." Rory crossed the small space between them, the floorboards creaking under her boots. She didn't reach for his wound. Instead, she grabbed the end of his ivory cane and lifted it an inch off his knees before letting it drop back against his thighs. "My father is an Irish barrister who can argue a judge into a coma, and I survived two years with Evan before I ever met a single creature from the underworld," she said, standing between his knees, forcing him to look up at her. "Don't dress cowardice up as chivalry, Lucien. It looks cheap on you. And you hate cheap things." His hand shot out—the good one, uninjured and fast—and wrapped around her left wrist. His thumb pressed directly over the small white crescent of her scar. Even through the thin lambskin of his glove, the heat of him radiated against her pulse point, hotter than any human fever. "You think it was easy?" He pulled her an inch closer. The scent of ozone and cloves swallowed the room's dusty air. "Walking out of that room with your hair still tangled across my pillow? Knowing that every bastard from Whitechapel to Mayfair was looking for a lever to break me, and you were lying three feet away without a single ward on your door?" "You could have asked me what I wanted." "I knew what you wanted." His thumb traced the curve of the scar, a slow, deliberate stroke that made her breath hitch in her throat. "You wanted to fight. You would have stood in that doorway with a kitchen knife and a law textbook, and they would have torn you to pieces before I could draw my blade." "I have a crowbar now," she said, though the heat in her voice had thinned, replaced by a tight ache beneath her ribs. A ghost of a smile touched the corner of his mouth, gone before it could settle. He didn't let go of her wrist. Instead, his fingers slid up her forearm, pushing back the sleeve of her worn cardigan until his glove gave way to bare skin at his wrist, pressing his burning pulse against hers. "Look at me, *chérie*." She looked. The black eye was a mirror, reflecting the small, cluttered room and the pale oval of her own face; the amber one burned like banked coals. "Why are you here, Luc?" she asked, her voice barely carrying over the whistle of the boiling kettle behind them. "Eva isn't home until midnight. This isn't my flat. And you didn't come to Brick Lane for a bandage." He tilted his head back, resting the nape of his neck against the stacked encyclopedias behind his chair. His fingers tightened on her arm, anchoring her in place. "Because the Vane brothers are dead," Lucien said, watching her lips. "And I am tired of sleeping in beds that do not smell like cheap jasmine soap and takeaway ginger."
created_at"2026-10-13T16:31:57.914Z" 10/13/2026, 4:31:57 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.88% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1213
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
83.51% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1213
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"pulse"
2"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences54
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences54
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences74
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1206
ratio0.001
matches
0"chérie"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount769
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.78
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Rory5
Marseillais1
Avaros1
Oxford1
Ptolemy1
Latin1
Golden1
Empress1
Lucien6
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Rory"
2"Avaros"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Lucien"
places
0"Oxford"
1"Golden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1206
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean34.46
std23.88
cv0.693
sampleLengths
035
163
24
358
423
55
63
764
828
93
1072
1165
1251
1344
145
1575
161
1710
186
196
2055
2139
2244
2361
2448
2565
268
2758
2823
2955
304
3128
3239
3328
3430
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs114
matches
0"was hiding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences74
ratio0.068
matches
0"His mismatched eyes—one the colour of burnt sugar, the other a flat, lightless void—dropped from Rory’s face to the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, where her fingers gripped the edge of the door."
1"The carving—a coiled serpent with rubies for eyes—dug into his leather palm."
2"A dark, viscous drop—too thick for human blood, carrying the faint, ozone tang of Avaros—splashed onto the frayed coir rug beside his polished Oxford shoe."
3"His hand shot out—the good one, uninjured and fast—and wrapped around her left wrist."
4"The black eye was a mirror, reflecting the small, cluttered room and the pale oval of her own face; the amber one burned like banked coals."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount784
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"single silver-blond strand"
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.02423469387755102
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.003826530612244898
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences74
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences74
mean16.3
std10.79
cv0.662
sampleLengths
04
14
227
35
424
534
64
712
816
930
1011
1112
125
133
146
1530
1628
173
1825
193
2016
2110
2228
2318
2412
2516
2637
277
2811
2924
305
314
3213
3331
345
3527
365
3743
381
3910
406
416
4217
4318
4420
4513
4626
4713
486
4925
78.38% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4864864864864865
totalSentences74
uniqueOpeners36
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences53
matches
0"Once, twice, three times."
1"Instead, she grabbed the end"
2"Instead, his fingers slid up"
ratio0.057
61.51% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences53
matches
0"His mismatched eyes—one the colour"
1"She kept her foot wedged"
2"She stepped aside."
3"He smelled of wet wool,"
4"She shoved a stack of"
5"His left arm hung at"
6"He lowered himself onto the"
7"She turned, leaning her hip"
8"Her bright blue eyes narrowed."
9"he said, his voice dropping"
10"She didn't reach for his"
11"she said, standing between his"
12"His hand shot out—the good"
13"His thumb pressed directly over"
14"He pulled her an inch"
15"His thumb traced the curve"
16"she said, though the heat"
17"He didn't let go of"
18"she asked, her voice barely"
19"He tilted his head back,"
ratio0.396
35.47% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount45
totalSentences53
matches
0"Brass scraped against brass."
1"The final deadbolt clicked back,"
2"Lucien Moreau filled the doorframe."
3"Rain darkened the shoulders of"
4"His mismatched eyes—one the colour"
5"Rory didn't step back"
6"She kept her foot wedged"
7"Lucien’s gloved hand tightened on"
8"The carving—a coiled serpent with"
9"A muscle feathered in his"
10"The Marseillais cadence in his"
11"Rory looked down."
12"A dark, viscous drop—too thick"
13"She stepped aside."
14"Lucien moved past her with"
15"He smelled of wet wool,"
16"The tabby arched his back,"
17"Rory muttered, crossing the tiny"
18"She shoved a stack of"
19"Lucien unbuttoned his overcoat with"
ratio0.849
94.34% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences53
matches
0"Even through the thin lambskin"
ratio0.019
73.73% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The Marseillais cadence in his voice thickened as his gaze drifted past her shoulder, taking in the towering stacks of yellowed scrolls and leather-bound lexico…"
1"The kettle began to rumble, a low vibration that rattled the mismatched mugs on the drying rack."
2"Instead, his fingers slid up her forearm, pushing back the sleeve of her worn cardigan until his glove gave way to bare skin at his wrist, pressing his burning …"
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he said, his voice dropping an octave"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.067
89.7274%