Run: 2026-10-13-01M4V1PFRW3Y62MDS14AKBA2DQ

Run Details

Duration:
29.3s
Cost:
$0.021888
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Green neon bled through the rain-streaked glass of The Raven’s Nest, casting an emerald slick across the mahogany counter. Rory rested her chin in her palm, the smell of fried garlic and soy sauce from her Golden Empress shift still clinging to the cuffs of her jacket. Across the room, framed cartography of empires that no longer existed stared down at empty leather booths. Silas moved behind the taps. His left leg caught with a familiar, rhythmic hitch before he planted his weight and dragged a dry cloth through the inside of a pint glass. The silver signet ring on his right hand clicked against the rim. "You're letting the ice melt, Rory." She spun the tumbler. Her left sleeve rode up, exposing the pale crescent scar on her wrist. "It’s tap water, Si. That's the whole point of ice." The front door swung open, breaking the vacuum of the quiet Soho pub. Streetlamp glare and the hiss of wet tires spilled over the threshold, followed by a man shaking out a tailored charcoal umbrella. He wore a bespoke overcoat that cost more than six months of rent on the flat upstairs. Rory’s fingers froze on the glass. The man stepped under the amber glow of the wall sconces, his eyes scanning the monochrome photographs before landing on the bar. He stopped. The polished leather of his Oxfords creaked against the floorboards. "Aurora?" Nobody used that name in London. Only Brendan Carter back in Cardiff when her marks slipped, and the ghosts she’d left behind at the university. "Liam." He closed the distance between them, the sharp scent of cedarwood cologne cutting through the pub’s stale hops and damp wool. Five years ago, Liam’s wardrobe had consisted of frayed jumpers and ink-stained cuffs from the library annexes. Now, a gold watch peeked from beneath a crisp French cuff. His posture had stiffened into the exact shape of her father’s chambers. "God, it is you." He looked at her faded denim, the canvas messenger bag slumped by her barstool, the damp ends of her straight black hair. His smile faltered at the edges, recalibrating. "Eva told me you’d vanished into the city, she didn't mention where." "That was the general idea of vanishing." Silas set the polished glass down. His hazel eyes flicked from Liam’s bespoke lapels to the tension tightening Rory’s jaw. "Can I get you something?" "Macallan, neat. Please." Liam didn't look at Silas, keeping his gaze locked on the bright blue of Rory's eyes. He gestured to the empty stool beside her. "May I?" Rory shrugged one shoulder, turning back to her water. Silas limped toward the top shelf, taking his time with the pour, before retreating to the far end of the counter by the towering bookshelf. Liam settled onto the leather seat, laying his umbrella across his knees. "You cut your hair." "Years ago." "I looked for you, you know. After Easter term." He wrapped his manicured fingers around the whisky glass Silas had left, though he didn't drink. "One week we’re outlining tort law in the union, the next your flat is cleared out. Your father told the dean you were taking a sabbatical." A dry laugh escaped her throat. "A sabbatical. Right. Very Brendan Carter. Keeps the dinner party conversation polite." "We had the Lincoln’s Inn interviews that June, Rory. You had the top marks in the cohort. We were supposed to take the pupils' seats at Gray’s together." "You took it." It wasn't a question. The cut of his jaw, the way he held his chin high as if addressing a magistrate, told the entire story. "I did. Made junior tenant eighteen months ago. Commercial litigation." He took a slow sip of the scotch, wincing slightly before smoothing his expression. "It’s brutal hours, of course. Soul-crushing paperwork. Remember how we used to swear we’d only take human rights cases? Save the world on legal aid?" "You used to steal sugar packets from the canteen to get through the month, Liam. Now you're drinking fifteen-pound scotch." "People grow up." His voice dropped an octave, losing its nostalgia. He looked around the dimly lit room, taking in the water-stained maps of old Prague and Berlin, the scuffed floorboards, the heavy velvet curtains at the back. "What is this place? Do you drink here often?" "I live upstairs." Liam blinked. He looked down at her hands, noticing the calluses on her palms from the bicycle handlebars, the faint grease smudge near her thumb. "And the law?" "I deliver sweet and sour pork in the rain. Pays cash. Nobody cross-examines me when I drop off the spring rolls." The silence stretched between them, heavy with the tick of the brass clock above the optics. Down the bar, Silas turned a page of a broadsheet newspaper, his neatly trimmed beard tucked into his collar, though his reflection in the back-bar mirror watched Liam’s right hand. "Because of Evan?" Liam’s voice was barely a murmur. Rory’s grip tightened on her tumbler until the knuckles turned white. "Don't." "We knew, Rory. Toward the end." Liam stared into the amber liquid of his glass, swirling it with a tight, practiced flick of his wrist. "That bruised collarbone before the winter moot. You said you slipped on the steps outside the library. Nobody slips going up the steps." "And yet you were all very fascinated by your shoes that morning." "What were we supposed to do? He was the senior partner's nephew. We had our references on the line. You never asked for help." "I shouldn't have had to." She turned on the stool to face him fully, her blue eyes sharp and cold. "You sat three feet away from me in constitutional law while my hands shook too hard to hold a pen. You asked to borrow my notes on parliamentary sovereignty. You didn't ask why I was wearing a turtleneck in May." Liam flinched, the polished barrister mask cracking to reveal the anxious twenty-year-old who used to hyperventilate before oral arguments. He set the glass down with a sharp clack. "I was twenty-one, Aurora. I was terrified of failing. You were the brilliant one, the untouchable one. If you couldn't handle your own life, what chance did the rest of us have?" "I handled it. I left." "You threw everything away." He swept a hand through the air, indicating the neon-tinted gloom, her stained jacket, the empty plastic cup. "You had a mind like a steel trap. You could dissect a precedent in thirty seconds flat. Now you're hiding in a Soho basement running takeaways while I spend sixty hours a week arguing over shipping manifests for men who don't even know my first name." Rory studied the deep creases framing his mouth. He was twenty-six, a year older than her, yet he looked closer to forty under the yellow bar lights. The boy who used to argue passionately about prison reform in greasy spoons had been hollowed out and stuffed with billable hours. "I didn't throw it away, Liam. I put it down. It was too heavy, and it belonged to my father anyway." She tapped the crescent scar on her wrist against the mahogany edge. "You're the one still carrying it." Liam opened his mouth, his jaw working for a rebuttal, searching for a clause or a loophole to win the point. Nothing came. He looked down at his gold watch, the réflex of a man whose life was measured in six-minute increments. At the end of the counter, Silas folded his newspaper with a crisp snap and limped back toward them, resting his knuckles on the wood. The silver signet ring caught the green neon light. "Another round, sir, or are we settling the tab?" Liam looked up at the older man’s grey-streaked hair and unblinking hazel eyes, reading the quiet authority in the set of his shoulders. The young barrister reached into his breast pocket, pulled out a crisp twenty-pound note, and laid it beside the half-full glass of Macallan. "Keep the change." Liam slid off the stool, gathering his umbrella like a cane. He looked back at Rory, his expression tightening back into courtroom neutrality. "Your mother still asks about you, you know. Whenever I run into your father at the High Court." "Tell them the traffic on Shaftesbury Avenue is murder." Liam gave a short, tight nod, turned on his heel, and walked out into the Soho drizzle. The door clicked shut, cutting off the street noise and leaving only the hum of the beer coolers. Silas picked up the twenty, tucked it into the register, and poured the untouched half of the Macallan down the brass sink drain. "Friend of yours?" Rory picked up her glass of melted ice and drank it down. "Someone I used to know in another life, Si. Pour me a proper drink, will you?"
created_at"2026-10-13T16:31:57.908Z" 10/13/2026, 4:31:57 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.222
leniency0.444
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
86.45% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1476
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"passionately"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slightly"
2"passionately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
66.12% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1476
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"flicked"
count1
5
word"tension"
count1
6
word"velvet"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"gloom"
count1
9
word"measured"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"rhythmic"
2"weight"
3"scanning"
4"flicked"
5"tension"
6"velvet"
7"silence"
8"gloom"
9"measured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences65
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences65
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1476
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
82.36% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount961
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity1.35
worstName"Liam"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Liam"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Golden1
Empress1
Soho2
Oxfords1
London1
Brendan1
Carter1
Cardiff1
Liam13
French1
Rory9
Silas8
Prague1
Berlin1
Macallan2
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Oxfords"
3"Brendan"
4"Carter"
5"Liam"
6"Rory"
7"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
3"Prague"
4"Berlin"
globalScore0.824
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if addressing a magistrate, told the entire story"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1476
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"used that name"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean25.45
std18.93
cv0.744
sampleLengths
064
143
26
317
410
552
66
734
81
925
101
1161
1245
137
1420
155
1629
1734
1812
194
202
2151
226
2312
2428
2528
2649
2720
2847
293
3025
313
3221
3346
349
3511
361
3748
3812
3924
4060
4128
4232
435
4468
4549
4639
4742
4834
499
94.47% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences65
matches
0"been hollowed"
1"was measured"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs143
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences98
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount973
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.018499486125385406
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.008221993833504625
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean15.06
std9.25
cv0.614
sampleLengths
019
128
217
35
426
512
66
74
813
910
1013
1122
1217
136
1422
152
1610
171
186
1919
201
2121
2217
2311
2412
2526
267
2712
287
296
3014
315
3219
338
342
359
3625
3712
384
392
4025
4126
426
4312
4428
457
4621
4724
4825
4920
70.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4387755102040816
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners43
53.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"Only Brendan Carter back in"
ratio0.016
71.61% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences62
matches
0"His left leg caught with"
1"She spun the tumbler."
2"Her left sleeve rode up,"
3"He wore a bespoke overcoat"
4"He closed the distance between"
5"His posture had stiffened into"
6"He looked at her faded"
7"His smile faltered at the"
8"His hazel eyes flicked from"
9"He gestured to the empty"
10"He wrapped his manicured fingers"
11"It wasn't a question"
12"He took a slow sip"
13"His voice dropped an octave,"
14"He looked around the dimly"
15"He looked down at her"
16"She turned on the stool"
17"He set the glass down"
18"He swept a hand through"
19"He was twenty-six, a year"
ratio0.371
16.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences62
matches
0"Rory rested her chin in"
1"Silas moved behind the taps."
2"His left leg caught with"
3"The silver signet ring on"
4"She spun the tumbler."
5"Her left sleeve rode up,"
6"The front door swung open,"
7"Streetlamp glare and the hiss"
8"He wore a bespoke overcoat"
9"Rory’s fingers froze on the"
10"The man stepped under the"
11"The polished leather of his"
12"Nobody used that name in"
13"He closed the distance between"
14"His posture had stiffened into"
15"He looked at her faded"
16"His smile faltered at the"
17"Silas set the polished glass"
18"His hazel eyes flicked from"
19"Liam didn't look at Silas,"
ratio0.887
80.65% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"Now, a gold watch peeked"
ratio0.016
67.67% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The man stepped under the amber glow of the wall sconces, his eyes scanning the monochrome photographs before landing on the bar."
1"The cut of his jaw, the way he held his chin high as if addressing a magistrate, told the entire story."
2"Liam flinched, the polished barrister mask cracking to reveal the anxious twenty-year-old who used to hyperventilate before oral arguments."
3"Liam opened his mouth, his jaw working for a rebuttal, searching for a clause or a loophole to win the point."
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She turned on, her blue eyes sharp and cold"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
88.8205%