Run: 2026-10-13-01M4V1PFRXSZKPWXNTG853M8Q1

Run Details

Duration:
23.0s
Cost:
$0.016344
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Richmond Park died at the boundary. One step back, the November wind carried the distant hum of London traffic and the damp smell of rotting leaves. One step forward, between the ancient oak standing stones, the air went dead. Rory stopped. Her boots sank into thick, vibrant turf. Bluebells and foxgloves brushed against her shins, their petals rigid in the moonlight, defying the winter frost outside the perimeter. She adjusted the insulated red bag of the Golden Empress over her shoulder. The cardboard containers inside still radiated heat, smelling of ginger and scorched soy sauce, though the receipt taped to the front listed no address—only GPS coordinates and a fifty-pound tip paid in advance. "Isolde?" Rory's voice dropped flat, swallowed by the canopy. No echo returned. Not even the rustle of a disturbed squirrel. She pulled her phone from her jacket pocket. The screen read 11:42 PM. As she watched, the digits flickered to 11:43, then snapped back to 11:39. The battery icon bled from eighty percent to twelve in a single second, then vanished behind a spinning loading wheel. She shoved the useless brick back into her pocket and rubbed the small crescent scar on her left wrist. The clearing stretched out before her, bathed in a silver light that had no source. The moon hung behind a dense mat of clouds, yet the wildflowers cast sharp, ink-black shadows across the grass. Shadows that pointed toward the center of the grove, rather than away from the sky. "I've got two cartons of char siu and three spring rolls," Rory called out, stepping further into the flora. "Leaving them by the stones if you don't show in two minutes." A sound cut through the stagnation. *Click-clack.* It came from the northern edge of the boundary, where the oak pillars met a wall of tangled hawthorn. It sounded like two dry bones striking together. Or the plastic latch of a delivery box snapping shut. Rory pivoted, her bright blue eyes narrowing against the gloom. The hawthorn branches remained still. Nothing swayed. Yet, in the periphery of her left eye, one of the standing stones seemed taller than it had been thirty seconds ago. Its gnarled wood grain twisted into the vague, elongated suggestion of a spine. When she looked directly at it, the illusion vanished. Just old oak, petrified and moss-slick. She let out a slow breath through her nose. The air tasted metallic, like she had a copper penny tucked beneath her tongue. Beneath her collarbone, the Heartstone Pendant shifted. The thumbnail-sized crimson gem, usually cool against her skin, let out a sluggish throb of heat. A single, heavy pulse that matched the rhythm of a resting heartbeat. Hel portal. There shouldn't be a tear here. The grove belonged to the Fae, a pocket stitched between Earth and their realm. "Wrong neighborhood for that," she muttered, her hand rising to grasp the silver chain through her wool jumper. The gem radiated a faint, bruised light through the dark knit. *Shhhk.* Grass blades scraped together ten paces behind her. Rory spun on her heel, dropping the thermal bag to the ground. The path she had walked through the wildflowers was gone. The crushed stems had snapped back upright, unbroken, erasing her footprints. Three yards away, a patch of white anemones swayed violently, as though a heavy skirt had just dragged across their crowns. The rest of the meadow stood petrified in the windless pocket. "Come out, then." Rory kept her stance wide, weight balanced on the balls of her feet. She didn't reach for the pepper spray clipped to her belt; windless or not, Fae dynamics did poorly with aerosol, and whatever was near a Hel tear wouldn't care about capsaicin. "You paid for the food. Take it." From the opposite side of the clearing, near a cluster of ferns, a voice answered. "I've got two cartons of char siu." Rory froze. The voice was hers. It carried her exact Welsh-inflected cadence, flattened by years in London, though the pitch sat half an octave too low, vibrating like a plucked cello string. She stared into the ferns. Darkness pooled beneath the fronds, thick and oily. "And three spring rolls," the voice continued, except this time it originated from the canopy directly above her head. Rory didn't look up. Looking up exposed the throat. Instead, she backed away, her boots crushing fresh bluebells that smelled not of pollen, but of damp cellar dirt. In the corner of her vision, the shadows of the wildflowers detached themselves from the stems. They stretched across the turf like spilled ink, reaching toward her heels, only to snap back into place the instant her gaze flicked down. The Heartstone throbbed again. Hotter now. A frantic, double-time beat sear-marking her sternum. The crimson glow bled through her collar, painting her chin and throat in the color of arterial blood. *Click-clack. Click-clack.* The sound circled the boundary stones, moving faster than anything on two legs had a right to move. The oak pillars blurred at the edges of her sight. One of them—the eastern stone—was definitely closer. Ten feet closer to the center of the clearing than when she had entered. The circle was cinching tight, drawing the pocket closed like a drawstring bag. "Leaving them by the stones," her own voice whispered, right behind her left ear. A breath accompanied the words. It didn't warm her neck; it pulled the heat from her skin, raising gooseflesh down her arms. Rory lunged forward, rolling her shoulder to avoid a grasp that never came, and whipped around with her keys wedged between her knuckles. Empty space. Just the thermal bag sitting in the center of the crushed flowers. Except the bag was open. The zipper she had fastened back on Richmond Hill hung wide, the silver foil interior gaping at the sky. The white cardboard boxes sat neatly stacked beside it on the grass. Closed. Untouched. Behind the boxes, the air shimmered, warping like heat rising off summer asphalt. Through the distortion, the ancient oak stone at the far end of the grove bowed inward, its wooden bulk bending like a tall man stooping to peer through a keyhole. Rory kept her eyes locked on the space just above the cartons, refusing to blink, her left thumb rubbing the crescent scar on her wrist until the skin burned. The pendant against her chest pulsed in a solid, unbroken fever, and from the treeline, the wet, rhythmic sound of chewing began.
created_at"2026-10-13T16:31:57.91Z" 10/13/2026, 4:31:57 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1084
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.26% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1084
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"echo"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"throb"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"flicked"
count1
7
word"throbbed"
count1
8
word"shimmered"
count1
9
word"pulsed"
count1
10
word"rhythmic"
count1
highlights
0"echo"
1"flickered"
2"gloom"
3"throb"
4"pulse"
5"weight"
6"flicked"
7"throbbed"
8"shimmered"
9"pulsed"
10"rhythmic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences89
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences92
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords4
totalWords1081
ratio0.004
matches
0"Click-clack."
1"Shhhk."
2"Click-clack. Click-clack."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount1027
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity0.97
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Park1
November1
London2
Golden1
Empress1
Heartstone2
Pendant1
Fae2
Earth1
Grass1
Hel2
Welsh-inflected1
Rory10
Richmond2
Hill1
One3
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Pendant"
2"Rory"
places
0"Park"
1"London"
2"Fae"
3"Grass"
4"Hel"
5"Richmond"
6"Hill"
globalScore1
windowScore1
75.37% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"sounded like two dry bones striking togeth"
1"seemed taller than it had been thirty seconds ago"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.925
wordCount1081
matches
0"not of pollen, but of damp cellar dirt"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean30.03
std21.48
cv0.715
sampleLengths
06
133
275
320
465
549
631
76
81
937
1067
1123
1235
1322
1429
151
168
1712
1853
1954
2015
217
2232
2313
2419
2568
2631
272
2862
2914
3022
3123
322
3350
3443
3551
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences89
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs158
matches
0"was cinching"
18.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences92
ratio0.043
matches
0"The cardboard containers inside still radiated heat, smelling of ginger and scorched soy sauce, though the receipt taped to the front listed no address—only GPS coordinates and a fifty-pound tip paid in advance."
1"She didn't reach for the pepper spray clipped to her belt; windless or not, Fae dynamics did poorly with aerosol, and whatever was near a Hel tear wouldn't care about capsaicin."
2"One of them—the eastern stone—was definitely closer."
3"It didn't warm her neck; it pulled the heat from her skin, raising gooseflesh down her arms."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1038
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"sharp, ink-black shadows"
1"exact Welsh-inflected cadence,"
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.03275529865125241
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.009633911368015413
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences92
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences92
mean11.75
std7.54
cv0.642
sampleLengths
06
120
213
32
47
520
613
733
89
93
108
118
125
1313
1420
1519
1615
1719
1815
1919
2012
216
221
2319
248
2510
2610
275
282
2922
3013
319
326
339
3414
357
3616
3712
382
396
4014
4118
4211
431
448
4512
4610
4711
4821
4911
77.54% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.5108695652173914
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners47
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences77
matches
0"Just old oak, petrified and"
1"Instead, she backed away, her"
2"Just the thermal bag sitting"
ratio0.039
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences77
matches
0"Her boots sank into thick,"
1"She adjusted the insulated red"
2"She pulled her phone from"
3"She shoved the useless brick"
4"It came from the northern"
5"It sounded like two dry"
6"Its gnarled wood grain twisted"
7"She let out a slow"
8"she muttered, her hand rising"
9"She didn't reach for the"
10"It carried her exact Welsh-inflected"
11"She stared into the ferns."
12"They stretched across the turf"
13"her own voice whispered, right"
14"It didn't warm her neck;"
ratio0.195
96.36% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences77
matches
0"Richmond Park died at the"
1"Her boots sank into thick,"
2"Bluebells and foxgloves brushed against"
3"She adjusted the insulated red"
4"The cardboard containers inside still"
5"Rory's voice dropped flat, swallowed"
6"She pulled her phone from"
7"The screen read 11:42 PM."
8"The battery icon bled from"
9"She shoved the useless brick"
10"The clearing stretched out before"
11"The moon hung behind a"
12"Shadows that pointed toward the"
13"Rory called out, stepping further"
14"A sound cut through the"
15"It came from the northern"
16"It sounded like two dry"
17"Rory pivoted, her bright blue"
18"The hawthorn branches remained still."
19"Its gnarled wood grain twisted"
ratio0.727
64.94% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences77
matches
0"Yet, in the periphery of"
ratio0.013
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"A single, heavy pulse that matched the rhythm of a resting heartbeat."
1"Instead, she backed away, her boots crushing fresh bluebells that smelled not of pollen, but of damp cellar dirt."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Rory called out (call out)"
1"she muttered (mutter)"
2"the voice continued (continue)"
3"own voice whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.889
89.0035%