| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1084 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 49.26% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1084 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echo" | | 1 | "flickered" | | 2 | "gloom" | | 3 | "throb" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "flicked" | | 7 | "throbbed" | | 8 | "shimmered" | | 9 | "pulsed" | | 10 | "rhythmic" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 89 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 92 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 4 | | totalWords | 1081 | | ratio | 0.004 | | matches | | 0 | "Click-clack." | | 1 | "Shhhk." | | 2 | "Click-clack. Click-clack." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 1027 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 0.97 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Park | 1 | | November | 1 | | London | 2 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Earth | 1 | | Grass | 1 | | Hel | 2 | | Welsh-inflected | 1 | | Rory | 10 | | Richmond | 2 | | Hill | 1 | | One | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Park" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grass" | | 4 | "Hel" | | 5 | "Richmond" | | 6 | "Hill" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 75.37% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like two dry bones striking togeth" | | 1 | "seemed taller than it had been thirty seconds ago" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.925 | | wordCount | 1081 | | matches | | 0 | "not of pollen, but of damp cellar dirt" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 30.03 | | std | 21.48 | | cv | 0.715 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 33 | | 2 | 75 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 65 | | 5 | 49 | | 6 | 31 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 37 | | 10 | 67 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 35 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 29 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 53 | | 19 | 54 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 32 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 68 | | 26 | 31 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 62 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 22 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 50 | | 34 | 43 | | 35 | 51 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 89 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 158 | | matches | | |
| 18.63% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 92 | | ratio | 0.043 | | matches | | 0 | "The cardboard containers inside still radiated heat, smelling of ginger and scorched soy sauce, though the receipt taped to the front listed no address—only GPS coordinates and a fifty-pound tip paid in advance." | | 1 | "She didn't reach for the pepper spray clipped to her belt; windless or not, Fae dynamics did poorly with aerosol, and whatever was near a Hel tear wouldn't care about capsaicin." | | 2 | "One of them—the eastern stone—was definitely closer." | | 3 | "It didn't warm her neck; it pulled the heat from her skin, raising gooseflesh down her arms." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1038 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "sharp, ink-black shadows" | | 1 | "exact Welsh-inflected cadence," |
| | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.03275529865125241 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009633911368015413 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 92 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 92 | | mean | 11.75 | | std | 7.54 | | cv | 0.642 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 33 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 6 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 16 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 77.54% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.5108695652173914 | | totalSentences | 92 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Just old oak, petrified and" | | 1 | "Instead, she backed away, her" | | 2 | "Just the thermal bag sitting" |
| | ratio | 0.039 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots sank into thick," | | 1 | "She adjusted the insulated red" | | 2 | "She pulled her phone from" | | 3 | "She shoved the useless brick" | | 4 | "It came from the northern" | | 5 | "It sounded like two dry" | | 6 | "Its gnarled wood grain twisted" | | 7 | "She let out a slow" | | 8 | "she muttered, her hand rising" | | 9 | "She didn't reach for the" | | 10 | "It carried her exact Welsh-inflected" | | 11 | "She stared into the ferns." | | 12 | "They stretched across the turf" | | 13 | "her own voice whispered, right" | | 14 | "It didn't warm her neck;" |
| | ratio | 0.195 | |
| 96.36% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Richmond Park died at the" | | 1 | "Her boots sank into thick," | | 2 | "Bluebells and foxgloves brushed against" | | 3 | "She adjusted the insulated red" | | 4 | "The cardboard containers inside still" | | 5 | "Rory's voice dropped flat, swallowed" | | 6 | "She pulled her phone from" | | 7 | "The screen read 11:42 PM." | | 8 | "The battery icon bled from" | | 9 | "She shoved the useless brick" | | 10 | "The clearing stretched out before" | | 11 | "The moon hung behind a" | | 12 | "Shadows that pointed toward the" | | 13 | "Rory called out, stepping further" | | 14 | "A sound cut through the" | | 15 | "It came from the northern" | | 16 | "It sounded like two dry" | | 17 | "Rory pivoted, her bright blue" | | 18 | "The hawthorn branches remained still." | | 19 | "Its gnarled wood grain twisted" |
| | ratio | 0.727 | |
| 64.94% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | | 0 | "Yet, in the periphery of" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "A single, heavy pulse that matched the rhythm of a resting heartbeat." | | 1 | "Instead, she backed away, her boots crushing fresh bluebells that smelled not of pollen, but of damp cellar dirt." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory called out (call out)" | | 1 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "the voice continued (continue)" | | 3 | "own voice whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 9 | | tagDensity | 0.444 | | leniency | 0.889 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.889 | |