Run: 2026-10-13-01M4V1PFS2NSH2Y7B58S6PNQFN

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Duration:
32.2s
Cost:
$0.027432
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked. I yanked the door open, clutching a heavy cast-iron skillet to my chest. Lucien Moreau leaned against the peeling wallpaper of the narrow corridor, his ivory-handled cane resting against a tailored charcoal trouser leg. I lowered the pan an inch. My knuckles ached from the grip. Six months of silence, and he materialised on the landing above a Brick Lane curry house smelling of bergamot and expensive rain. "Expecting the bailiffs, *ma petite*?" "They knock softer." "A flawed strategy. Announcements ruin the element of surprise." "Eva isn't here." "A tragedy, I am sure. Yet I did not climb three flights of greased stairs for Eva." I stepped back, blocking the threshold. He didn't move, his mismatched eyes, one glowing amber, the other a pit of pitch black, tracking the pulse jumping at the base of my throat. He looked immaculate, his platinum hair slicked back, untouched by the East London grime that coated everything else on this street. A thin crimson line marred his left cheekbone. Demon blood dried dark, almost violet under the buzzing fluorescent bulb overhead. "You're bleeding." "A disagreement in Soho. The other party fared worse." "Go to a clinic." "And miss your hospitality?" He shifted his weight. A wince, microscopic and gone in a blink, tightened the corner of his mouth. His left hand gripped the ivory handle of his cane with white-knuckled force. Not a scratch on the cheek, then. Something lower. Something under the wool jacket. I cursed in Welsh and stepped aside. Lucien glided past me. The cramped one-bedroom flat shrank further with him inside it. Every surface held Eva's clutter. Towers of yellowing scrolls leaned precariously on the coffee table, and ancient leather-bound grimoires sat stacked in the kitchen sink because we had run out of shelf space in November. The scent of cumin and turmeric drifted up through the floorboards from the restaurant below, warring with the ozone tang that always clung to Lucien's skin. Ptolemy, Eva's massive tabby, hopped off a pile of translation notes and wove between Lucien's ankles, purring like a chainsaw. Traitor. "The beast remembers me." "He likes anyone who smells like raw meat." "Cruel, Aurora." "It's Rory. Take off the jacket." "We haven't even had a drink." "Take it off, Luc, before you bleed on a first-edition demonology text and Eva skins us both." He set the cane against the radiator. His fingers worked the buttons of his waistcoat with deliberate slowness, his gaze pinned to mine. When he shrugged out of the charcoal suit jacket, a dark, wet stain bloomed across the left ribs of his crisp white shirt. I tossed the skillet onto the stove and grabbed a clean tea towel and the bottle of high-proof Polish vodka Eva kept for sterilising ritual blades. "Sit." He lowered himself onto the sagging velvet sofa, nudging a stack of Latin lexicons out of the way. I knelt on the threadbare rug between his knees. The proximity hit me like a physical blow. The heat radiating from his half-demon core warmed the air between us, carrying memories of tangled sheets in his Mayfair townhouse and the cold, empty bed I had woken up to in October. I unbuttoned his shirt. My fingers brushed the firm plane of his chest. His skin burned. A jagged gash, four inches long and weeping black-red ichor, tore across his ribs. Silver burn at the edges. "Hellhound?" "Worse. An auditor from Avaros." "Your father's people." "My father's *accountants*." I uncapped the vodka and soaked the cloth. "This will sting." "Do your worst." I pressed the soaked fabric directly into the wound. Lucien's breath hissed between his teeth. His hand shot out, wrapping around my left wrist, his thumb pressing directly over my small crescent-shaped scar. His grip bruised, pinning me in place, though he didn't push me away. "Still ruthless." "You left a twenty-pound note on the nightstand, Luc." "It was fifty. And a first-edition Baudelaire." "I don't read French." "You threw it into the Thames. The water nymphs fished it out and sold it back to me for twice its value." "Good for them." I pressed harder with the towel, wiping away the blistered residue of the silver. His pulse hammered beneath my palm, erratic and fast. He didn't let go of my wrist. Instead, his thumb stroked the raised tissue of my scar, back and forth, a slow, hypnotic rhythm that made my stomach drop. "The book was an apology." "Books aren't apologies. Words are." "If I had spoken to you that morning, I would not have left." I froze, the bloodied towel bunched in my fist. I looked up. His face hovered inches from mine. The amber eye blazed, stripped of the suave, untouchable fixer persona he wore for the London underworld. "Is that supposed to flatter me?" "It is supposed to terrify you." "I don't scare easily." "You should. When the syndicate in Marseille put a price on my head in October, their first move was to look for my leverage. Do you know what happens to human girls who become leverage in Avaros, *chérie*?" "I'm not just some human girl." "No. You are a human girl who delivers spring rolls on a moped and reads pre-law textbooks for fun. Against a legion of blood-mages, your frying pan would not suffice." "So you made the choice for me." "I kept you breathing." "You made me feel like a whore." His jaw flexed. His free hand came up, his long, cool fingers tangling in the straight black hair at the nape of my neck, tilting my head back. "Never that." "Felt like it." "Then let me correct the misunderstanding." His mouth crashed onto mine. There was nothing gentle about it. It tasted of salt, copper, and six months of starved fury. A sound tore from my throat, half-protest, half-surrender, as I dropped the soiled cloth and grabbed the collar of his ruined shirt. I pulled him down, or he pulled me up, until I straddled his lap on the cramped sofa, scrolls tumbling to the floorboards with a dry clatter. He groaned against my lips, his hands spanning my waist, hitching me closer against the hard ridge of his arousal. I bit his lower lip, drawing a fresh bead of metallic blood, punishing him for every night I had stared at the ceiling above Silas' bar, wondering if he was dead or just bored of me. He tore his mouth away, burying his face in the crook of my neck, his breath ragged and scorching against my skin. "I watched you," he rasped, his lips brushing my collarbone. "Every Tuesday outside the Golden Empress. That ridiculous red helmet." "Stalker." "Guardian." "Asshole." "Undeniably." He bit the tendon of my neck, soothing it instantly with his tongue. My spine arched, a shiver ripping through me that had nothing to do with the drafty flat. My hands slid under his open shirt, mapping the lean muscle of his back, careful to avoid the torn flesh on his left side. "Why tonight?" I panted, tangling my fingers in the silver silk of his hair, forcing him to look at me. "If your father's auditors are in London, why come here?" Lucien's eyes darkened, the black pupil swallowing the amber ring almost entirely. "Because the auditor I killed in Soho wasn't hunting me." He reached into his breast pocket and pulled out a crumpled, blood-stained photograph, pressing it into my palm. I looked down. It was a candid shot taken through a rain-streaked window. Me, locking up my moped outside Silas' bar. Scrawled across my face in glowing, infernal runes was a single word I recognized from Eva's translations. *Malphora.* Below us, the heavy wooden door of the curry house splintered inward with a deafening boom, followed by the shrill, inhuman shriek of hellhounds flooding the stairwell.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.077
leniency0.154
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1307
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.22% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1307
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"velvet"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"silk"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"pulse"
2"weight"
3"velvet"
4"stomach"
5"silk"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences74
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences124
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords5
totalWords1307
ratio0.004
matches
0"ma petite"
1"accountants"
2"chérie"
3"Malphora."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount947
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.63
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Brick1
Lane1
East1
London2
Welsh1
Eva4
November1
Lucien6
Polish1
Latin1
Mayfair1
October1
Scrawled1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"East"
3"London"
4"Welsh"
5"November"
6"October"
7"Scrawled"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1307
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences124
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs78
mean16.76
std18.88
cv1.127
sampleLengths
017
121
234
35
43
59
63
717
873
92
109
114
124
1345
147
1575
1621
174
188
192
206
216
2217
2346
2426
251
2668
2735
281
295
303
313
328
333
343
359
3637
372
389
397
404
4122
423
4352
445
455
4613
4735
486
496
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs153
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences124
ratio0
matches(empty)
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount788
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"ancient leather-bound grimoires"
1"weeping black-red ichor,"
2"small crescent-shaped scar."
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.021573604060913704
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0038071065989847717
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences124
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences124
mean10.54
std8.48
cv0.805
sampleLengths
04
113
221
36
46
522
65
73
89
93
1017
116
1226
1321
148
1512
162
179
184
194
204
2114
2213
237
242
255
267
274
2810
295
3030
3126
3220
331
344
358
362
376
386
3917
407
4116
4223
4326
441
4518
469
478
4833
494
68.28% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4435483870967742
totalSentences124
uniqueOpeners55
46.95% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"Instead, his thumb stroked the"
ratio0.014
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences71
matches
0"I yanked the door open,"
1"I lowered the pan an"
2"My knuckles ached from the"
3"I stepped back, blocking the"
4"He didn't move, his mismatched"
5"He looked immaculate, his platinum"
6"He shifted his weight."
7"His left hand gripped the"
8"I cursed in Welsh and"
9"He set the cane against"
10"His fingers worked the buttons"
11"I tossed the skillet onto"
12"He lowered himself onto the"
13"I knelt on the threadbare"
14"I unbuttoned his shirt."
15"My fingers brushed the firm"
16"His skin burned."
17"I uncapped the vodka and"
18"I pressed the soaked fabric"
19"His hand shot out, wrapping"
ratio0.62
16.34% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences71
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked."
1"I yanked the door open,"
2"Lucien Moreau leaned against the"
3"I lowered the pan an"
4"My knuckles ached from the"
5"I stepped back, blocking the"
6"He didn't move, his mismatched"
7"He looked immaculate, his platinum"
8"A thin crimson line marred"
9"Demon blood dried dark, almost"
10"He shifted his weight."
11"A wince, microscopic and gone"
12"His left hand gripped the"
13"Something under the wool jacket."
14"I cursed in Welsh and"
15"Lucien glided past me."
16"The cramped one-bedroom flat shrank"
17"Every surface held Eva's clutter."
18"Towers of yellowing scrolls leaned"
19"The scent of cumin and"
ratio0.887
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
46.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"He looked immaculate, his platinum hair slicked back, untouched by the East London grime that coated everything else on this street."
1"His hand shot out, wrapping around my left wrist, his thumb pressing directly over my small crescent-shaped scar."
2"Instead, his thumb stroked the raised tissue of my scar, back and forth, a slow, hypnotic rhythm that made my stomach drop."
3"His free hand came up, his long, cool fingers tangling in the straight black hair at the nape of my neck, tilting my head back."
4"He groaned against my lips, his hands spanning my waist, hitching me closer against the hard ridge of his arousal."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"he rasped, his lips brushing my collarbone"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"I panted (pant)"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.019
leniency0.038
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.038
81.1040%