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Run: 2026-10-13-01M4V1Q5ZM8866042VZQY79TH2
Run Details
Model:
Gemini 4 Argon (Reasoning, Medium)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
30.7s
Cost:
$0.024038
Provider:
Google AI Studio
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
93.04%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
61.70%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
89.27%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
94.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
57.07%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
42.78%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
63.29%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
86.7051%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
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The third deadbolt clicked back.
Rory yanked the heavy oak
door open, a brass candlestick raised at shoulder height. Lucien Moreau didn't flinch.
He leaned his weight onto
his ivory-handled cane, the hallway light catching his slicked-back platinum hair.
His mismatched eyes, one amber
and one pitch-black, dropped from the makeshift weapon to her bare feet. "Expecting the bailiffs, *
ma chérie
*, or just happy to see me?"
Rory lowered the candlestick an
inch, her knuckles tight around the tarnished metal.
She blocked the threshold with
her body. Six months of
silence
, and he showed up on Brick Lane looking like he had stepped out of a Mayfair tailor's shop. Not a thread of his charcoal suit was out of place. "Wrong side of town for you, Luc." "You moved." "Not my flat." "And yet, here you are." "And there you are. On the landing."
She pushed the door to
close it.
The rubber tip of his
cane wedged between the wood and the frame. It didn't budge.
Demon strength, masked behind a
gentleman's posture. Rory met his gaze.
The amber eye burned with
that
familiar
, infuriating amusement.
The black one remained an
abyss.
Her pulse hammered against the
small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a traitorous flutter she hated herself for feeling. "Take the stick out of the door, Lucien." "Let me in, Aurora. The hallway smells of damp cabbage and poor life choices." "I prefer the cabbage." "Liar." He stepped forward.
He didn't push her, just
invaded the space until the scent of him, sandalwood and woodsmoke, drowned out the curry house below.
Heat radiated through his wool
jacket.
Rory held her ground for
three seconds before her spine hit the inner wall, giving him room to pass.
Lucien strolled into Eva's cramped
flat.
He paused near the miniature
kitchenette, taking in the towering stacks of yellowed scrolls on the dining table, the dog-eared grimoires lining the skirting boards, and the red string pinned across the peeling floral wallpaper. A fat tabby cat slept atop a pile of Latin translations, undisturbed by the intrusion. Ptolemy opened one green eye, hissed
softly
at the half-demon, and curled back into a ball. "Charming," Lucien said. "Eva always did have a flair for the manic." "She's not here." "I know." "Then you have no business here." "My business is with you." Rory set the candlestick on a teetering stack of encyclopaedias and crossed her arms.
Her oversized Golden Empress T-shirt
hung loose off one shoulder, exposing her collarbone. Lucien's gaze lingered on the bare skin before rising back to her face. The air in the tiny room grew thick,
charged
with the memory of
silk
sheets in his Kensington townhouse and the taste of his blood on her tongue. She rubbed her left wrist. "Our business concluded in November." "You climbed out of a bathroom window." "The front door was locked." "To keep the hounds out, not to keep you in." "Funny how a cage feels the same either way." A muscle ticked in Lucien's jaw.
He hooked his cane over
the back of a wooden chair and unbuttoned his suit jacket. The movement was slow, deliberate, reminding her of a
predator
shedding its skin.
He walked toward the window
overlooking Brick Lane, his polished Oxfords
navigating
the maze of paper on the floorboards. Neon light from the street bled through the grimy glass, painting his sharp cheekbones in shades of magenta and blue.
He picked up a silver
dagger Eva used as a paperweight, testing the dull point against his thumb. "You left your coat," he said. "Keep it." "And the sapphire ring." "Wasn't mine to take." "I bought it for you." "You bought it to mark territory. I'm not a ledger entry, Luc."
He set the dagger down
with a sharp click. When he turned, the suave fixer mask had slipped. The demon beneath stared at her, raw and starving. "I kept you alive." "You used me as bait for your father's court." "I killed the three who touched you!" The glass in the window frame rattled. Ptolemy bolted from the table, darting into the bedroom. Rory didn't back down. She took two steps forward, closing the distance between them until she had to tilt her head back to look at him. Her bright blue
eyes narrowed
. "After they cornered me in Soho. Because you didn't tell me what the contract actually meant. You translated the Aramaic, Luc. You knew the blood clause required a human vessel, and you let me sign my name anyway." "I intended to sever the link before the harvest moon." "Intended."
She laughed, a dry, jagged
sound. "My father is a barrister, remember? I know all about intentions. They don't mean shit when the bailiff comes knocking." Lucien reached out.
His gloved fingers brushed a
strand of straight black hair behind her ear. Rory froze, her breath catching in her throat. Even through the fine leather, his touch scalded her skin. Every nerve ending screamed at her to lean into his palm, to let him pull her against his chest like he used to do when the nightmares about Evan woke her up soaked in sweat. Nobody had ever made her
feel
safer than Lucien. Nobody had ever put her in more danger, either. "You think I wanted you on that altar?"
His voice dropped to a
rough purr, slipping into the Marseille cadence he only used when he bled truth. "I burned half of Whitechapel looking for you when you vanished. Silas lied to my face for three months. Said you went back to Cardiff." "Silas is a good friend." "Silas has a broken kneecap." Rory's hand flew up, gripping his wrist. "What did you do?" "Nothing permanent. He poured me a Scotch after." Lucien stepped closer, trapping her between his body and the edge of the research table. Scrolls rustled behind her thighs. "He kept your secret until tonight. Until the market whispers grew too loud." "I'm out of the game. I deliver sweet and sour pork on a moped, Luc. Nobody cares about me." "Your hand is shaking." "I'm angry." "You're terrified." He peeled his leather glove off with his teeth, tossing it onto the table, and pressed his bare thumb against the
pulse
point at her throat. His skin was fever-hot. "One hundred and twenty beats a minute. You always were a terrible liar, *
ma petite menteuse
*." "Get out." "Look at me and say you don't want me here." His hand slid from her throat to the nape of her neck, fingers tangling in her dark hair. He tilted her head back. Rory gripped his lapels, intending to shove him away, but the wool bunched in her fists instead. He smelled of rain and expensive cologne and sin. "I hate you," she breathed. "I know." His lips brushed the corner of her jaw. "It keeps you warm at night, doesn't it?" "You bastard." "Always." He kissed her. It wasn't gentle. It was six months of fury and withdrawal crashing together. Rory gasped against his mouth, and he took advantage, his tongue sweeping in to claim the territory she had denied him. She tugged hard on his jacket, pulling him flush against her. The edge of the table dug into her lower back as he lifted her
slightly
, her bare feet leaving the worn rug. Her fingers slid upinto his platinum hair, ruining the neat style. He groaned, a low vibration deep in his chest that was entirely inhuman, his hands dropping to grip her hips through the thin cotton of her shirt. He broke the kiss, his forehead resting against hers, both of them breathing raggedly. His black eye had bled into the sclera, darkness consuming the white. "They found the parchment, Aurora." Rory stiffened in his arms. "What?" "The original contract. My father's hounds didn't give up when I slaughtered their pack leader. They bought the debt from the broker in Paris." Lucien reached into his breast pocket and pulled out a folded square of thick cream paper, stained with dried rust-coloured marks at the edges. "Eva's wards on this building are failing. I smelled the brimstone from the underground station." Rory stared at the paper, her
stomach
plummeting. "Eva went to Oxford for the weekend. To the Bodleian library." "She didn't go to Oxford." Lucien pressed the paper into her palm. It was Eva's silver ring wrapped inside the parchment, coated in fresh blood. "Pack a bag. Now." Downstairs, the heavy glass window of the curry house
shattered
inward, followed by a chorus of guttural, multi-toned howls that shook the floorboards beneath their feet.
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
10
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
60
tagDensity
0.167
leniency
0.333
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
93.04%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1436
totalAiIsmAdverbs
2
found
0
adverb
"softly"
count
1
1
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
highlights
0
"softly"
1
"slightly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
61.70%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1436
totalAiIsms
11
found
0
word
"weight"
count
1
1
word
"silence"
count
1
2
word
"familiar"
count
1
3
word
"pulse"
count
2
4
word
"charged"
count
1
5
word
"silk"
count
1
6
word
"predator"
count
1
7
word
"navigating"
count
1
8
word
"stomach"
count
1
9
word
"shattered"
count
1
highlights
0
"weight"
1
"silence"
2
"familiar"
3
"pulse"
4
"charged"
5
"silk"
6
"predator"
7
"navigating"
8
"stomach"
9
"shattered"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes narrowed"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
82
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
1
hedgeCount
0
narrationSentences
82
filterMatches
0
"feel"
hedgeMatches
(empty)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
132
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
repeatedSegmentCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
49
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
2
markdownWords
5
totalWords
1436
ratio
0.003
matches
0
"ma chérie"
1
"ma petite menteuse"
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
10
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
89.27%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
39
wordCount
988
uniqueNames
15
maxNameDensity
1.21
worstName
"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity
2
worstWindowName
"Rory"
discoveredNames
Moreau
1
Brick
2
Lane
2
Mayfair
1
Eva
3
Latin
1
Rory
12
Golden
1
Empress
1
Kensington
1
Lucien
10
Oxfords
1
Evan
1
Marseille
1
Scrolls
1
persons
0
"Moreau"
1
"Eva"
2
"Rory"
3
"Lucien"
4
"Oxfords"
5
"Evan"
6
"Scrolls"
places
0
"Brick"
1
"Lane"
2
"Kensington"
3
"Marseille"
globalScore
0.893
windowScore
1
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
64
glossingSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1436
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
132
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
74
mean
19.41
std
19.4
cv
1
sampleLengths
0
19
1
37
2
11
3
53
4
7
5
2
6
3
7
5
8
7
9
30
10
39
11
8
12
14
13
4
14
1
15
50
16
56
17
16
18
12
19
3
20
2
21
6
22
5
23
68
24
5
25
5
26
7
27
5
28
10
29
9
30
35
31
57
32
6
33
2
34
4
35
4
36
5
37
12
38
27
39
4
40
9
41
7
42
16
43
31
44
38
45
10
46
27
47
69
48
18
49
52
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
82
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
162
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
132
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
94.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
996
adjectiveStacks
1
stackExamples
0
"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount
17
adverbRatio
0.01706827309236948
lyAdverbCount
5
lyAdverbRatio
0.0050200803212851405
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
132
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
132
mean
10.88
std
8.29
cv
0.762
sampleLengths
0
5
1
14
2
4
3
16
4
17
5
11
6
13
7
7
8
22
9
11
10
7
11
2
12
3
13
5
14
7
15
7
16
13
17
3
18
7
19
4
20
9
21
6
22
20
23
8
24
14
25
4
26
1
27
3
28
22
29
6
30
19
31
6
32
35
33
15
34
16
35
3
36
9
37
3
38
2
39
6
40
5
41
14
42
13
43
13
44
28
45
5
46
5
47
7
48
5
49
10
57.07%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
8
diversityRatio
0.3787878787878788
totalSentences
132
uniqueOpeners
50
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
79
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
42.78%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
35
totalSentences
79
matches
0
"He leaned his weight onto"
1
"His mismatched eyes, one amber"
2
"She blocked the threshold with"
3
"She pushed the door to"
4
"It didn't budge."
5
"Her pulse hammered against the"
6
"He stepped forward."
7
"He didn't push her, just"
8
"He paused near the miniature"
9
"Her oversized Golden Empress T-shirt"
10
"She rubbed her left wrist."
11
"He hooked his cane over"
12
"He walked toward the window"
13
"He picked up a silver"
14
"He set the dagger down"
15
"She took two steps forward,"
16
"Her bright blue eyes narrowed."
17
"She laughed, a dry, jagged"
18
"His gloved fingers brushed a"
19
"His voice dropped to a"
ratio
0.443
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
75
totalSentences
79
matches
0
"The third deadbolt clicked back."
1
"Rory yanked the heavy oak"
2
"Lucien Moreau didn't flinch."
3
"He leaned his weight onto"
4
"His mismatched eyes, one amber"
5
"Rory lowered the candlestick an"
6
"She blocked the threshold with"
7
"She pushed the door to"
8
"The rubber tip of his"
9
"It didn't budge."
10
"Demon strength, masked behind a"
11
"Rory met his gaze."
12
"The amber eye burned with"
13
"The black one remained an"
14
"Her pulse hammered against the"
15
"He stepped forward."
16
"He didn't push her, just"
17
"Heat radiated through his wool"
18
"Rory held her ground for"
19
"Lucien strolled into Eva's cramped"
ratio
0.949
63.29%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
1
totalSentences
79
matches
0
"Even through the fine leather,"
ratio
0.013
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
38
technicalSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"He groaned, a low vibration deep in his chest that was entirely inhuman, his hands dropping to grip her hips through the thin cotton of her shirt."
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
10
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
5
fancyCount
3
fancyTags
0
"She laughed (laugh)"
1
"she breathed (breathe)"
2
"Lucien pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences
60
tagDensity
0.083
leniency
0.167
rawRatio
0.6
effectiveRatio
0.1
86.7051%