Run: 2026-10-13-01M4V1QKCV8MJTBZXSM7FFS96P

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Duration:
30.0s
Cost:
$0.022358
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked open, and I yanked the door back to find Lucien Moreau bleeding onto the welcome mat. I threw my weight against the wood to slam it shut. An ivory-handled cane wedged into the gap, stopping the door with a dull thud. "Charming as ever, Rory." "You have a lot of nerve showing up here." "I have a lot of blood leaving my body, chérie. Priorities." My gaze dropped to his side. Dark red soaked through his tailored charcoal suit jacket, staining the crisp white shirt beneath. His slicked-back platinum blond hair had a single stray lock hanging over his forehead, and his skin looked grey under the dim hallway bulb. I let go of the doorknob and stepped back. Lucien stumbled over the threshold, his cane tapping hard against the floorboards. I shut the door and locked all three deadbolts. "Eva isn't here." "I know. She's in Prague chasing a myth." "Then why come to her place?" "Because you are here." He leaned against the narrow hallway wall, his mismatched eyes locking onto mine. One warm amber, one pitch black. Even half-dead, the bastard knew how to fill a room. The scent of roasted cumin and turmeric drifted up from the curry house below, mixing with the sharp, metallic tang of his blood and that expensive sandalwood cologne he always wore. "Couch. Now. Don't bleed on the scrolls." He walked into the cramped living room, his limp heavier than usual. Every surface in Eva's flat held towering stacks of leather-bound books, loose parchment, and chaotic research notes. Ptolemy, a fat orange tabby cat, hissed from atop a pile of Latin lexicons and bolted into the bedroom. "Your familiar still hates me." "He has good taste." Lucien lowered himself onto the worn velvet sofa, wincing as the fabric pressed against his ribs. I went to the kitchen sink, grabbed a stack of clean tea towels and a bottle of cheap gin, and walked back. "Take the jacket off." "Buy me dinner first." "Do it yourself, then." I tossed the towels into his lap. He caught them with a quiet grunt, setting his cane aside. His fingers fumbled with the buttons of his waistcoat. Red smeared across the grey fabric. He hissed through his teeth as he shrugged the jacket off his left shoulder, his movements stiff and jerky. I let out a breath and knelt between his knees. "Stop moving. You're making a mess." I pushed his hands away and undid the remaining buttons of his shirt. When I parted the linen, the breath caught in my throat. Three jagged gashes tore across his pale ribs. Black veins spiderwebbed outward from the torn flesh, pulsing beneath his skin. Hellhound claws. "Avaros hounds? In East London?" "Just one. A stray." "Strays don't hunt fixers in Savile Row suits." "This one had an enterprising new master." I uncapped the gin and poured it directly over the wound. Lucien's hand shot out, his fingers wrapping around my left wrist. His skin burned like a fever, his thumb pressing hard against my small crescent-shaped scar. I froze. My heart hammered against my ribs, a traitorous, rapid rhythm that had nothing to do with fear. His black eye dilated, swallowing the light, while the amber one burned into mine. "Still ruthless." "Still careless." "I missed your bedside manner." "You didn't miss anything. You left." The words slipped out before I could bite them back. Silence stretched between us, heavy and suffocating. Downstairs, a plate shattered in the restaurant kitchen, followed by muffled shouting in Bengali. Lucien didn't let go of my wrist. His thumb stroked the crescent scar, a slow, deliberate sweep that sent a shiver straight down my spine. "Glasgow was not a place for you, Rory." "You didn't ask me." "You would have said yes." "And that terrified you?" "Yes." I yanked my wrist free and pressed a dry towel hard against his bleeding side. He gasped, his head falling back against the cushions, exposing the strong line of his throat. "A little honesty, six months too late." "You wanted me to drag you into a turf war with my father's kin?" "I wanted you to stay in bed until morning." "I left you the flat in Soho." "I didn't want real estate, Luc. I went back to my place above Silas' bar that same afternoon." He lifted his head. His hand came up, his knuckles brushing a strand of straight black hair away from my cheek. Blood stained his cuffs, and the heat radiating from his palm made my skin prickle. I leaned into the touch for a fraction of a second before catching myself and pulling back. "You smell like sweet and sour pork." "I work for Yu-Fei. Somebody has to make an honest living." "A waste of a Pre-Law degree." "Cardiff is a long way away, and my father isn't paying my rent." "I could." "Shut up and hold this." I grabbed his clean hand and forced it onto the blood-soaked towel. Rising to my feet, I went to the small round wooden table by the window, shoving aside a stack of yellowed maps to find Eva's silver sewing kit. My hands shook as I threaded a curved needle with black silk thread. "Why are you really here, Lucien? You have doctors on your payroll from Mayfair to the docks." "None I can trust tonight." "And you trust me? After how we ended?" "With my life. Evidently." I walked back and straddled his lap to get a better angle at his ribs. His breath hitched. Not from pain. His free hand settled on my hip, his fingers digging into the denim of my jeans. The scent of sandalwood and copper enveloped me. I lowered the needle to his skin. "This will hurt." "Do your worst, Malphora." I drove the needle through his flesh. Don't call me that. I pulled the thread tight. His muscles bunched beneath my thighs, his grip on my hip bruising, yet he didn't make a sound. We moved together in the quiet room, my focus entirely on the bite of the needle and the dark thread pulling his torn skin together. Every breath he took brushed against my collarbone. Every time I leaned in to knot a stitch, my chest grazed his. Five stitches. Six. Seven. I snipped the thread with my teeth and sat back on his thighs. Lucien looked up at me, his chest heaving. The black veins around the wound had already begun to recede, his demonic heritage fighting off the toxin now that the flesh was closed. His gaze dropped to my mouth. "You should get off me, Rory." "Probably." Neither of us moved. His hand slid from my hip to the small of my back, pulling me an inch closer. The solid heat of him pressed against my core, familiar and dangerous. "If you stay there, I am going to kiss you." "You're losing blood. You're delirious." "I have never been clearer in my life." His fingers tangled in the hair at the nape of my neck, and he pulled me down. His mouth crashed into mine, tasting of copper and mint and the dark, bitter edge of magic. I grabbed his shoulders, my nails biting into his skin as I kissed him back with six months of pent-up fury. He groaned into my mouth, shifting me closer until my knees hit the back of the sofa. Downstairs, the street door splintered off its hinges with a deafening crack. Heavy boots pounded up the wooden stairwell, accompanied by a low, guttural snarl that vibrated through the floorboards. Lucien tore his mouth from mine and reached for his cane. "How many hounds did you say were chasing you?" "Just one." He twisted the ivory handle, drawing five inches of gleaming steel from the shaft as the first deadbolt on the front door snapped in half. "It appears he brought the whole pack."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.019
leniency0.038
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.22% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1323
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.43% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1323
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"chaotic"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count2
3
word"velvet"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"shattered"
count1
6
word"down my spine"
count1
7
word"silk"
count1
8
word"vibrated"
count1
9
word"gleaming"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"chaotic"
2"familiar"
3"velvet"
4"silence"
5"shattered"
6"down my spine"
7"silk"
8"vibrated"
9"gleaming"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences80
matches
0"o with fear"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences80
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences131
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1323
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions12
wordCount995
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.7
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien7
Moreau1
Eva2
Latin1
Bengali1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Moreau"
2"Eva"
places
0"Bengali"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1323
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences131
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs79
mean16.75
std18.36
cv1.096
sampleLengths
020
125
24
39
411
545
69
721
83
98
106
114
1260
137
1448
155
164
1738
184
194
204
2152
2210
236
2446
255
264
278
287
2956
3014
312
322
335
346
3531
3625
378
384
395
404
411
4231
437
4414
459
467
4718
4853
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs150
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences131
ratio0
matches(empty)
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1002
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"fat orange tabby cat,"
1"pressing hard against my"
2"small crescent-shaped scar."
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.016966067864271458
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.001996007984031936
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences131
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences131
mean10.1
std6.28
cv0.622
sampleLengths
020
111
214
34
49
511
66
715
824
99
1012
119
123
138
146
154
1613
176
1810
1931
207
2112
2217
2319
245
254
2616
2722
284
294
304
317
3211
339
346
3519
3610
376
3813
3911
408
4112
422
435
444
458
467
4711
4811
4915
69.21% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.44274809160305345
totalSentences131
uniqueOpeners58
44.44% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"Dark red soaked through his"
ratio0.013
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount42
totalSentences75
matches
0"I threw my weight against"
1"My gaze dropped to his"
2"His slicked-back platinum blond hair"
3"I let go of the"
4"I shut the door and"
5"He leaned against the narrow"
6"He walked into the cramped"
7"I went to the kitchen"
8"I tossed the towels into"
9"He caught them with a"
10"His fingers fumbled with the"
11"He hissed through his teeth"
12"I let out a breath"
13"I pushed his hands away"
14"I uncapped the gin and"
15"His skin burned like a"
16"My heart hammered against my"
17"His black eye dilated, swallowing"
18"His thumb stroked the crescent"
19"I yanked my wrist free"
ratio0.56
33.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences75
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked open,"
1"I threw my weight against"
2"An ivory-handled cane wedged into"
3"My gaze dropped to his"
4"His slicked-back platinum blond hair"
5"I let go of the"
6"Lucien stumbled over the threshold,"
7"I shut the door and"
8"He leaned against the narrow"
9"The scent of roasted cumin"
10"He walked into the cramped"
11"Every surface in Eva's flat"
12"Ptolemy, a fat orange tabby"
13"Lucien lowered himself onto the"
14"I went to the kitchen"
15"I tossed the towels into"
16"He caught them with a"
17"His fingers fumbled with the"
18"He hissed through his teeth"
19"I let out a breath"
ratio0.853
66.67% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"Even half-dead, the bastard knew"
ratio0.013
74.18% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"My heart hammered against my ribs, a traitorous, rapid rhythm that had nothing to do with fear."
1"His thumb stroked the crescent scar, a slow, deliberate sweep that sent a shiver straight down my spine."
2"He gasped, his head falling back against the cushions, exposing the strong line of his throat."
3"Rising to my feet, I went to the small round wooden table by the window, shoving aside a stack of yellowed maps to find Eva's silver sewing kit."
4"Heavy boots pounded up the wooden stairwell, accompanied by a low, guttural snarl that vibrated through the floorboards."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
87.4827%