Run: 2026-10-13-01M4V1RJE616J0CRJHDE1527AG

Run Details

Duration:
28.2s
Cost:
$0.020814
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain drummed against the tarmac of Camden High Street, shattering the amber glow of the sodium streetlights into jagged pools of gold. Detective Harlow Quinn vaulted over a cluster of overflowing wheelie bins. Her boots hit the wet cobblestones on the other side, ankle-deep in frigid runoff, without breaking her stride. Eighteen years on the Met, and her lungs still burned with the familiar, copper-tasting fire of a foot chase. Ahead, the dark silhouette of Tomás Herrera weaved through a cluster of late-night revellers huddled under the awning of a closed kebab shop. A heavy canvas medical bag bounced against his hip. "Herrera! Police! Stop!" Her voice cut through the hiss of passing tyres and the dull roar of the downpour. A few drunken teenagers spun around, wide-eyed, plastered hair sticking to their foreheads. Tomás didn't pause. He shoved a man in a leather jacket aside, sending a carton of chips scattering across the pavement, and bolted into the narrow mouth of Buck Street. Harlow tucked her chin down, rainwater beading on her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair, and pivoted around the corner. Military precision dictated every movement; she kept her centre of gravity low, elbows tucked, eyes locked on the space between Tomás's shoulder blades. Three years of chasing shadows since Morris died. Three years of redacted files, vanished witnesses, and corpses that defied every pathology report the coroner threw at them. Now she had a tangible link—a disgraced NHS paramedic who frequented that Soho dive with the green neon sign, carrying a bag that smelled of antiseptic and old blood. Tomás vaulted a rusted chain-link barrier blocking a narrow service alley. The metal rattled violently. As he landed, his black leather jacket rode up his left arm, exposing the pale, jagged line of a knife scar running along his olive-skinned forearm. A silver medallion bounced from beneath his collar, catching the distant flare of a passing bus's headlights before disappearing back against his chest. Harlow didn't climb the fence. She hit the padlock with the heel of her boot where the rusted iron met the brick wall. The mortar crumbled, the bolt sheared off in a shower of grit, and she kicked the gate wide. The alley smelled of rotting cabbage and wet soot. Ahead, a towering brick wall capped with broken glass sealed the passage. A dead end. Harlow slowed her pace, her hand dropping to the telescopic baton clipped to her tactical vest. She wiped the rain from her brown eyes with the back of her left wrist, the worn leather strap of her watch scraping against her sharp jaw. Tomás stood thirty feet away, chest heaving, his dark brown curls plastered to his forehead. He backed up against a pair of corrugated iron doors set into the side of an old railway viaduct—an abandoned Tube station that Transport for London had bricked up before Harlow even joined the force. "Nowhere left to run, Tommy." Harlow took a measured step forward, boots crunching on broken glass. "Drop the bag. Step away from the wall." Tomás's warm brown eyes darted from her baton to the heavy padlocked chains securing the iron doors. His fingers twitched against the strap of his medical kit. "You don't want what's in this bag, Detective." His Spanish accent thickened under the strain of his ragged breathing. "And you definitely don't want to follow me through that door. Walk away. Go back to your paperwork." "My partner died because of people like you and your little crew at the Raven's Nest." Harlow advanced another two paces, closing the distance, cutting off his angles of escape. "Turn around. Hands behind your back." "I'm a medic. I fix people." Tomás reached into his trouser pocket. Harlow's hand snapped to the grip of her baton, extending the steel shaft with a sharp metallic clack. "Show me your hands! Now!" "Relax. It's not a weapon." Tomás pulled his hand out slowly, keeping his palm open. Nestled against his calloused skin lay a small, ivory-coloured disc, etched with geometric grooves that glowed with a faint, sickly violet light. Bone. "Last warning, Quinn. The things down here don't care about a warrant card." Before she could lunge the final ten feet, Tomás pressed the bone token flat against the rusted padlock on the iron doors. No key turned. Instead, a sound like grinding tectonic plates vibrated through the soles of Harlow's boots. The heavy iron chains didn't fall; they dissolved into wisps of grey smoke that the rain immediately beat down into the puddles. The corrugated doors swung inward on silent hinges, revealing a yawning throat of dry, torch-lit brickwork descending into the earth. Tomás spun on his heel and plunged into the stairwell. "Dammit!" Harlow sprinted forward, reaching the threshold just as the iron doors began to swing shut on their own. She jammed her steel baton into the gap. The metal shrieked as the doors crushed against the hardened steel, threatening to snap the shaft in two. Gritting her teeth, her jaw set like granite, Harlow threw her shoulder against the rusted iron and forced her way through the narrowing gap. She tumbled onto the top landing of a spiral stone staircase as the doors boomed shut behind her, sealing out the sound of the London rain. Silence didn't greet her. Instead, a cacophony of sound rose from the depths below—the clinking of glass, the low hum of hundreds of overlapping voices speaking in languages that made her ears ache, and the sharp, ozone tang of a thunderstorm trapped in a bottle. Harlow clicked on her shoulder-mounted radio. "Control, this is DS Quinn, collar number four-nine-two. Suspect has entered an unlisted subterranean structure off Buck Street. Requesting immediate backup with tactical support." The radio spat back a burst of harsh, rhythmic static that sounded disturbingly like laughter. The tiny green LED on the unit flickered, turned blood-red, and died. She stared at the dead unit, then looked at her watch. The second hand was spinning backward at a frantic clip. She tapped the glass face. Nothing changed. Down the stairs, the footsteps of Tomás Herrera echoed off curved tiles stained with a century of coal dust. He was moving fast, dropping down the levels toward the old platforms. Harlow unclipped her torch, though she didn't need it. Phosphorescent moss grew in thick, pulsing veins along the mortar between the bricks, casting a pale green illumination over the descent. She took the steps three at a time, keeping one hand near her baton, her breathing slow and regulated. The stairwell opened onto a vast, vaulted chamber where the Northern Line trains used to run. The tracks were gone, filled in with compacted dirt and cobblestones. In their place stood a sprawling, chaotic bazaar. Tents stitched from dark velvet and oiled leather crowded the platform and the sunken track bed. Braziers burned with flames that were entirely the wrong colour—cobalt blue, deep emerald, and a black fire that seemed to suck the light out of the air around it. At a stall near the foot of the stairs, a merchant in a tailored three-piece suit was weighing glass vials filled with glowing, swirling mist on brass scales. His customer turned slightly, and Harlow froze in the shadows of the archway. The buyer had the build of a dockworker, but where his nose and mouth should have been, a wet, chitinous mandibles clicked together as he counted out silver coins. Her stomach dropped. Her mind instantly flashed to the crime scene photo of DS Morris—the lacerations the coroner had insisted were made by industrial machinery, despite them being in the middle of an empty Hyde Park field. "Look at the jaw on that one," a raspy voice muttered from an alcove to her left. "Definitely not on the guest list. Smells like bacon and rainwater." Harlow didn't look toward the voice. She scanned the crowd of impossibly tall figures, cloaked forms, and men whose eyes reflected the brazier light like nocturnal predators. Fifty yards away, down the centre aisle of the old platform, a dark curly head bobbed between two stalls draped in dried herbs and hanging animal skulls. Tomás was handing a vial from his medical bag to a woman whose skin looked like cracked porcelain. A hulking man in a butcher's apron stained with luminescent blue fluid stepped out of a nearby tent, his milky, pupil-less eyes fixing directly on Harlow's wet Met-issue jacket. He reached for a cleaver hanging from his belt. Harlow stood at the threshold of the platform, the exit doors sealed behind her, the impossible market stretching out in front of her. She checked her baton, then looked toward Tomás disappearing into the deeper tunnels of the station.
created_at"2026-10-13T16:33:06.011Z" 10/13/2026, 4:33:06 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.467
leniency0.933
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.14% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1458
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
34.84% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1458
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"tangible"
count1
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"vibrated"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"cacophony"
count1
7
word"depths"
count1
8
word"structure"
count1
9
word"rhythmic"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
11
word"footsteps"
count1
12
word"echoed"
count1
13
word"chaotic"
count1
14
word"velvet"
count1
15
word"stomach"
count1
16
word"scanned"
count1
17
word"porcelain"
count1
18
word"hulking"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"tangible"
2"measured"
3"etched"
4"vibrated"
5"silence"
6"cacophony"
7"depths"
8"structure"
9"rhythmic"
10"flickered"
11"footsteps"
12"echoed"
13"chaotic"
14"velvet"
15"stomach"
16"scanned"
17"porcelain"
18"hulking"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences83
matches(empty)
74.01% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences83
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences91
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1453
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions54
wordCount1317
uniqueNames21
maxNameDensity1.29
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Camden1
High1
Street2
Harlow17
Quinn1
Met2
Tomás13
Herrera2
Buck1
Morris2
Soho1
Tube1
Transport1
London2
Spanish1
Nestled1
Northern1
Line1
Hyde1
Park1
Met-issue1
persons
0"Street"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Tomás"
4"Herrera"
5"Buck"
6"Morris"
7"Line"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Soho"
3"London"
4"Hyde"
5"Park"
globalScore0.855
windowScore0.833
81.51% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"fire that seemed to suck the light out of the air around it"
1"looked like cracked porcelain"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1453
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"frequented that Soho"
90.39% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean37.26
std17.37
cv0.466
sampleLengths
070
132
23
359
441
556
664
741
824
943
1050
1124
1227
1337
1436
1512
1623
1751
1822
1959
2010
2119
2276
2345
2430
2527
2621
277
2831
2949
3035
3145
3270
3337
3428
3527
3645
3738
3839
96.81% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences83
matches
0"were gone"
1"were made"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs208
matches
0"was spinning"
1"was weighing"
2"was handing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences91
ratio0.077
matches
0"Military precision dictated every movement; she kept her centre of gravity low, elbows tucked, eyes locked on the space between Tomás's shoulder blades."
1"Now she had a tangible link—a disgraced NHS paramedic who frequented that Soho dive with the green neon sign, carrying a bag that smelled of antiseptic and old blood."
2"He backed up against a pair of corrugated iron doors set into the side of an old railway viaduct—an abandoned Tube station that Transport for London had bricked up before Harlow even joined the force."
3"The heavy iron chains didn't fall; they dissolved into wisps of grey smoke that the rain immediately beat down into the puddles."
4"Instead, a cacophony of sound rose from the depths below—the clinking of glass, the low hum of hundreds of overlapping voices speaking in languages that made her ears ache, and the sharp, ozone tang of a thunderstorm trapped in a bottle."
5"Braziers burned with flames that were entirely the wrong colour—cobalt blue, deep emerald, and a black fire that seemed to suck the light out of the air around it."
6"Her mind instantly flashed to the crime scene photo of DS Morris—the lacerations the coroner had insisted were made by industrial machinery, despite them being in the middle of an empty Hyde Park field."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1336
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small, ivory-coloured disc,"
1"dry, torch-lit brickwork"
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.021706586826347306
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.008982035928143712
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences91
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences91
mean15.97
std8.46
cv0.53
sampleLengths
022
111
218
319
423
59
63
716
813
93
1027
1118
1223
138
1419
1529
1611
174
1826
1923
205
2118
2218
239
2412
253
2616
2727
2815
2935
3016
318
3217
3310
3419
3518
3630
376
3812
3918
405
4115
4222
431
4413
4522
463
4714
4822
4920
77.66% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.5054945054945055
totalSentences91
uniqueOpeners46
82.30% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences81
matches
0"Instead, a sound like grinding"
1"Instead, a cacophony of sound"
ratio0.025
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences81
matches
0"Her boots hit the wet"
1"Her voice cut through the"
2"He shoved a man in"
3"She hit the padlock with"
4"She wiped the rain from"
5"He backed up against a"
6"His fingers twitched against the"
7"His Spanish accent thickened under"
8"She jammed her steel baton"
9"She tumbled onto the top"
10"She stared at the dead"
11"She tapped the glass face."
12"He was moving fast, dropping"
13"She took the steps three"
14"His customer turned slightly, and"
15"Her stomach dropped."
16"Her mind instantly flashed to"
17"She scanned the crowd of"
18"He reached for a cleaver"
19"She checked her baton, then"
ratio0.247
71.11% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences81
matches
0"Rain drummed against the tarmac"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn vaulted over"
2"Her boots hit the wet"
3"A heavy canvas medical bag"
4"Her voice cut through the"
5"Tomás didn't pause."
6"He shoved a man in"
7"Harlow tucked her chin down,"
8"Military precision dictated every movement;"
9"Tomás vaulted a rusted chain-link"
10"The metal rattled violently."
11"A silver medallion bounced from"
12"Harlow didn't climb the fence."
13"She hit the padlock with"
14"The mortar crumbled, the bolt"
15"The alley smelled of rotting"
16"A dead end."
17"Harlow slowed her pace, her"
18"She wiped the rain from"
19"Tomás stood thirty feet away,"
ratio0.778
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences81
matches
0"Now she had a tangible"
1"Before she could lunge the"
ratio0.025
80.20% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Now she had a tangible link—a disgraced NHS paramedic who frequented that Soho dive with the green neon sign, carrying a bag that smelled of antiseptic and old …"
1"A silver medallion bounced from beneath his collar, catching the distant flare of a passing bus's headlights before disappearing back against his chest."
2"Nestled against his calloused skin lay a small, ivory-coloured disc, etched with geometric grooves that glowed with a faint, sickly violet light."
3"Instead, a cacophony of sound rose from the depths below—the clinking of glass, the low hum of hundreds of overlapping voices speaking in languages that made he…"
4"Braziers burned with flames that were entirely the wrong colour—cobalt blue, deep emerald, and a black fire that seemed to suck the light out of the air around …"
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Harlow took, boots crunching on broken glass"
83.33% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"a raspy voice muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.067
leniency0.133
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.133
86.3402%