Run: 2026-10-13-01M4V1RPEDDQX7YEWF5QWQQB6P

Run Details

Duration:
31.8s
Cost:
$0.023884
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Water dripped from the arched brick ceiling, striking the rusted rails below with the steady rhythm of a metronome. Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under the yellow crime scene tape, her boots crunching on pulverized glass and decades of calcified soot. The abandoned Tube station beneath Camden smelled of stagnant iron and something sharper, like ozone mixed with burnt copper. Halogen floodlights stood on tripods near the platform's edge. They cast harsh, sterile beams across the Victorian tilework, washing out the grime and illuminating the body slumped against a tiled pillar. Detective Constable Patel stood over the corpse, a clipboard wedged under his arm and a steaming paper cup in his gloved hand. He blew across the rim, his shoulders hunched against the subterranean draft. "You took your time, Guv. Forensics is chomping at the bit to bag him and clear out before the damp ruins their gear." Harlow didn't break her stride. Her posture remained rigid, shoulders back, moving down the platform with the clipped, economical gait of a career soldier. She checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist. 03:14. "Traffic on the North Circular. A lorry jackknifed." She stopped three feet from the body, planting her feet shoulder-width apart. The victim was male, mid-thirties, dressed in a tailored wool overcoat that cost more than Patel made in two months. The man's eyes stared blankly at the vaulted ceiling, milky and dry. His chest was intact. No blood pooled on the cracked concrete beneath him. Patel gestured with his coffee cup toward the dark tunnel mouth. "Open and shut, really. Poor bastard wandered down here looking for a score, crossed the wrong dealer, and took a lethal dose of something synthetic. Lab boys found traces of purple powder near his boots. Probably a new batch of street fentanyl." Harlow's brown eyes narrowed. She ran a gloved hand over her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair, her sharp jaw tightening. "In a bespoke Savile Row coat? Look at his shoes, Patel. Oxford brogues. Leather soles." Patel shrugged, taking a sip. "Rich blokes buy gear too. Slumming it in Camden is practically a pastime for the Canary Wharf crowd." "Look at the soles." Harlow crouched, her knees popping in the quiet cavern. She pointed a rigid finger at the bottom of the dead man's left shoe. The leather was scuffed, scored with faint Crosshatch patterns, yet completely free of the thick black sludge that coated the stairs leading down from the street level. "He didn't walk down the service stairs. If he had, he'd be wearing two inches of Camden mud on those heels. Same as you. Same as me." Patel glanced down at his own filthy boots, his brow furrowing. "Maybe he came through the tunnels from Mornington Crescent." "The blast gates between here and Crescent have been welded shut since nineteen-ninety-eight." Harlow leaned closer to the corpse. The man's skin carried a strange, waxy sheen, devoid of the usual lividity that settled after death. His right hand was clenched into a tight claw against his sternum. Using a pair of steel tweezers from her kit, Harlow pried the stiff fingers apart. A small disc tumbled from his palm, clattering against the concrete. Patel leaned over her shoulder. "A casino chip?" "Bone." Harlow lifted the object with the tweezers. It was the size of a two-pound coin, carved from dense, yellowed ivory or marrow, etched with a symbol that looked like an inverted keyhole. No casino in London used carved femur for currency. She dropped it into a plastic evidence bag and sealed the strip. "And this purple powder you mentioned?" "Right over there, Guv. By the kiosk." Harlow stood and walked toward the remnants of an old wooden ticket booth twenty yards down the platform. The air grew colder here, raising the fine hairs on her forearms. She ignored the chill, focusing on the floor. The dust had been disturbed. Not by the chaotic scuffle of a mugging or the erratic stumbling of a junkie, but by geometric precision. Rectangular gaps sat in the hundred-year-old grime. Heavy wooden stalls had rested here recently. Dozens of footprints crisscrossed the concrete—boots, heels, bare feet—all converging around the empty rectangles, then vanishing entirely ten feet from the platform edge. "A market." Patel snorted, walking up beside her. "Down here? There's no power, Guv. No lights, no ventilation. Who's setting up a boot sale in a pitch-black rat hole?" "They had light." Harlow pointed toward the curved tiled wall. Soot stains marked the glazed ceramic at six-foot intervals, right above rusted iron brackets that hadn't held gas lamps since the Blitz. She stepped up to the nearest bracket and scraped the residue with her thumbnail. It wasn't coal soot. It was greasy, shimmering faintly with an iridescent sheen under the floodlights, smelling faintly of sage and tallow. "Torches. Or braziers. Dozens of them." "You're winding me up. A flash mob with torches?" "Look at the floor, Patel. Use your eyes." She swept her arm across the wide expanse of the platform. "Forty, fifty people minimum stood in this room less than six hours ago. They set up stalls. They traded. Look at the scatter pattern of the debris." She crouched again, shining her pocket torch across the concrete. The beam caught the glint of shattered glass. Not brown beer bottles or clear spirit flasks, but thick,blown crystal vials, their curved shards stained with viscous, dried liquids in hues of cobalt and crimson. Beside the glass lay a scatter of that purple dust Patel had dismissed. Harlow leaned down and wafted the air above the powder toward her nose. Sulfur. Crushed dry leaves. Iron filings. "If this is fentanyl, I'm the Queen Mother." Patel shifted his weight, the leather of his jacket creaking. "Alright, so some crusty Camden pagans held a rave down here. Got out of hand, our man in the fancy coat had a heart attack, and they scattered like cockroaches before the uniforms arrived." "Without leaving footprints on the stairs." Harlow moved along the perimeter of the rectangular dust-gaps. Her boots clicked rhythmically against the stone. She wasn't looking at the body anymore; she was reading the room the way she had been taught to read insurgent safe houses twenty years ago. Entry points. Exit vectors. Load-bearing anomalies. Three years ago, she had stood in an alley in Whitechapel over DS Morris's body. The doctors had called that a massive coronary, too. They had ignored the frost on the brickwork in the middle of July and the way Morris's service weapon had melted into slag inside his holster. Harlow hadn't ignored it. She had spent a thousand sleepless nights staring at case files that made no rational sense, waiting for the pattern to repeat. Her flashlight beam hit a drainage grate near the base of the tiled wall. Something metallic wedged between the iron bars caught the light. "Bag for me, Patel." While the constable fumbled in his pockets for a fresh evidence pouch, Harlow knelt by the grate. She wedged her gloved fingers into the muck and pulled the object free. It was a small brass compass, heavy for its size, its casing coated in a thick patina of green verdigris. She wiped the grime from the glass face with her thumb. Beneath the scratched crystal, there were no cardinal directions. No North, South, East, or West. Instead, the brass face was etched with tiny, interlocking sigils that hurt her eyes when she stared directly at them. "What's that, then? Antique?" "Hold the light steady." Patel aimed his torch over her shoulder. The needle inside the brass casing wasn't pointing north toward Hampstead. It was spinning. Not wildly, like a broken mechanism, but in a slow, deliberate orbit, before jerking violently and locking onto a spot six feet away—pointing directly at a solid brick wall at the dead end of the platform. Harlow stood up, holding the brass casing level in her palm. She took three steps left. The needle pivoted, staying locked on the exact same patch of brickwork. She walked right. The needle tracked the wall. "Magnet in the wall," Patel offered, though the certainty had drained from his voice. "Old cabling from the Northern Line." "The Northern Line runs four hundred yards east of this shaft." Harlow walked up to the dead-end wall. Thecompass needle trembled against the glass, vibrating hard enough that she felt the hum through her leather gloves. She raised her free hand and pressed her palm flat against the damp bricks. The stone was ice-cold, except for an oval patch roughly the height and width of a doorway. There, the brick felt warm. Like skin. She looked down at the floor directly beneath the warm brick. The dozens of footprints—the boots, the bare feet, the heavy drags of wooden crates—all led directly into the solid masonry and stopped dead. "Guv? You alright?" Harlow slipped the vibrating brass compass into her own coat pocket instead of the evidence bag Patel held out. Her sharp jaw set as she turned back toward the crime scene, her eyes sweeping over the empty rectangles in the dust and the dead man in the bespoke coat. "Get on the radio to Scotland Yard, Patel. Tell them to pull the CCTV from every street-level camera within four blocks of Camden High Street between midnight and two." "Looking for our pagans?" "Looking for anyone carrying heavy trunks who vanished into thin air." She checked her leather watch again. The second hand ticked forward, steady and absolute, while the brass disc in her pocket hummed against her ribs like a trapped hornet. "And tell Forensics to stay off the platform until I clear the perimeter. They're trampling the threshold."
created_at"2026-10-13T16:33:10.104Z" 10/13/2026, 4:33:10 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.029
leniency0.059
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1622
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"completely"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Patel"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
63.01% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1622
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"synthetic"
count1
1
word"furrowing"
count1
2
word"etched"
count2
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"chaotic"
count1
5
word"glint"
count1
6
word"shattered"
count1
7
word"crystal"
count2
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"synthetic"
1"furrowing"
2"etched"
3"chill"
4"chaotic"
5"glint"
6"shattered"
7"crystal"
8"weight"
9"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences100
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences133
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1617
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount1220
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.31
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow16
Quinn1
Tube1
Camden1
Victorian1
Constable1
Patel12
Crosshatch1
London1
Blitz1
Whitechapel1
Morris2
July1
North1
South1
East1
West1
Hampstead1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Camden"
3"Constable"
4"Patel"
5"Morris"
places
0"Victorian"
1"London"
2"Whitechapel"
3"Hampstead"
globalScore0.844
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like an inverted keyhole"
14.47% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.855
wordCount1617
matches
0"Not by the chaotic scuffle of a mugging or the erratic stumbling of a junkie, but by geometric precision"
1"Not brown beer bottles or clear spirit flasks, but thick,blown crystal vials, their curved shards stained with"
2"Not wildly, like a broken mechanism, but in a slow, deliberate orbit, before jerking violently"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences133
matches
0"called that a"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs67
mean24.13
std20.31
cv0.841
sampleLengths
059
131
234
323
435
58
657
711
842
919
1015
115
1218
134
1450
1527
1611
179
1813
1950
2011
215
223
231
2453
256
267
2738
2861
292
306
3121
323
3365
346
359
368
3711
3827
3970
406
418
4210
4334
446
4548
4676
4724
484
4930
87.72% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences100
matches
0"was scuffed"
1"was clenched"
2"been disturbed"
3"been taught"
4"was etched"
58.91% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs189
matches
0"was reading"
1"wasn't looking"
2"wasn't pointing"
3"was spinning"
56.93% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences133
ratio0.03
matches
0"Dozens of footprints crisscrossed the concrete—boots, heels, bare feet—all converging around the empty rectangles, then vanishing entirely ten feet from the platform edge."
1"She wasn't looking at the body anymore; she was reading the room the way she had been taught to read insurgent safe houses twenty years ago."
2"Not wildly, like a broken mechanism, but in a slow, deliberate orbit, before jerking violently and locking onto a spot six feet away—pointing directly at a solid brick wall at the dead end of the platform."
3"The dozens of footprints—the boots, the bare feet, the heavy drags of wooden crates—all led directly into the solid masonry and stopped dead."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1237
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.029911075181891674
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.012934518997574777
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences133
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences133
mean12.16
std8.15
cv0.67
sampleLengths
019
121
219
39
422
522
612
723
85
919
1010
111
128
1312
1420
1512
164
179
1811
1942
204
2115
2215
235
2418
254
269
2714
2827
2927
3011
319
3213
336
3417
3512
3615
3711
385
393
401
417
4225
439
4412
456
467
4718
4812
498
72.22% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.44696969696969696
totalSentences132
uniqueOpeners59
35.84% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"Instead, the brass face was"
ratio0.011
82.37% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences93
matches
0"They cast harsh, sterile beams"
1"He blew across the rim,"
2"Her posture remained rigid, shoulders"
3"She checked the worn leather"
4"She stopped three feet from"
5"His chest was intact."
6"She ran a gloved hand"
7"She pointed a rigid finger"
8"His right hand was clenched"
9"It was the size of"
10"She dropped it into a"
11"She ignored the chill, focusing"
12"She stepped up to the"
13"It wasn't coal soot."
14"It was greasy, shimmering faintly"
15"She swept her arm across"
16"She crouched again, shining her"
17"Her boots clicked rhythmically against"
18"She wasn't looking at the"
19"They had ignored the frost"
ratio0.344
40.65% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences93
matches
0"Water dripped from the arched"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under"
2"The abandoned Tube station beneath"
3"Halogen floodlights stood on tripods"
4"They cast harsh, sterile beams"
5"Detective Constable Patel stood over"
6"He blew across the rim,"
7"Harlow didn't break her stride."
8"Her posture remained rigid, shoulders"
9"She checked the worn leather"
10"She stopped three feet from"
11"The victim was male, mid-thirties,"
12"The man's eyes stared blankly"
13"His chest was intact."
14"Patel gestured with his coffee"
15"Harlow's brown eyes narrowed."
16"She ran a gloved hand"
17"Patel shrugged, taking a sip."
18"Harlow crouched, her knees popping"
19"She pointed a rigid finger"
ratio0.839
53.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"While the constable fumbled in"
ratio0.011
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences59
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The leather was scuffed, scored with faint Crosshatch patterns, yet completely free of the thick black sludge that coated the stairs leading down from the stree…"
1"It was the size of a two-pound coin, carved from dense, yellowed ivory or marrow, etched with a symbol that looked like an inverted keyhole."
2"Soot stains marked the glazed ceramic at six-foot intervals, right above rusted iron brackets that hadn't held gas lamps since the Blitz."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.1014%