| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.029 | | leniency | 0.059 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 93.83% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1622 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 63.01% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1622 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "synthetic" | | 1 | "furrowing" | | 2 | "etched" | | 3 | "chill" | | 4 | "chaotic" | | 5 | "glint" | | 6 | "shattered" | | 7 | "crystal" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 100 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 133 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1617 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 45 | | wordCount | 1220 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 1.31 | | worstName | "Harlow" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Harlow" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 16 | | Quinn | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Camden | 1 | | Victorian | 1 | | Constable | 1 | | Patel | 12 | | Crosshatch | 1 | | London | 1 | | Blitz | 1 | | Whitechapel | 1 | | Morris | 2 | | July | 1 | | North | 1 | | South | 1 | | East | 1 | | West | 1 | | Hampstead | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Camden" | | 3 | "Constable" | | 4 | "Patel" | | 5 | "Morris" |
| | places | | 0 | "Victorian" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Whitechapel" | | 3 | "Hampstead" |
| | globalScore | 0.844 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 79 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like an inverted keyhole" |
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| 14.47% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 1.855 | | wordCount | 1617 | | matches | | 0 | "Not by the chaotic scuffle of a mugging or the erratic stumbling of a junkie, but by geometric precision" | | 1 | "Not brown beer bottles or clear spirit flasks, but thick,blown crystal vials, their curved shards stained with" | | 2 | "Not wildly, like a broken mechanism, but in a slow, deliberate orbit, before jerking violently" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 67 | | mean | 24.13 | | std | 20.31 | | cv | 0.841 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 59 | | 1 | 31 | | 2 | 34 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 35 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 57 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 42 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 50 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 50 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 53 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 38 | | 28 | 61 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 65 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 27 | | 39 | 70 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 34 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 48 | | 46 | 76 | | 47 | 24 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 30 |
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| 87.72% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "was scuffed" | | 1 | "was clenched" | | 2 | "been disturbed" | | 3 | "been taught" | | 4 | "was etched" |
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| 58.91% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 189 | | matches | | 0 | "was reading" | | 1 | "wasn't looking" | | 2 | "wasn't pointing" | | 3 | "was spinning" |
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| 56.93% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 133 | | ratio | 0.03 | | matches | | 0 | "Dozens of footprints crisscrossed the concrete—boots, heels, bare feet—all converging around the empty rectangles, then vanishing entirely ten feet from the platform edge." | | 1 | "She wasn't looking at the body anymore; she was reading the room the way she had been taught to read insurgent safe houses twenty years ago." | | 2 | "Not wildly, like a broken mechanism, but in a slow, deliberate orbit, before jerking violently and locking onto a spot six feet away—pointing directly at a solid brick wall at the dead end of the platform." | | 3 | "The dozens of footprints—the boots, the bare feet, the heavy drags of wooden crates—all led directly into the solid masonry and stopped dead." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1237 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.029911075181891674 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012934518997574777 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 133 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 133 | | mean | 12.16 | | std | 8.15 | | cv | 0.67 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 9 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 42 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 27 | | 29 | 27 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 25 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 72.22% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.44696969696969696 | | totalSentences | 132 | | uniqueOpeners | 59 | |
| 35.84% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, the brass face was" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 82.37% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "They cast harsh, sterile beams" | | 1 | "He blew across the rim," | | 2 | "Her posture remained rigid, shoulders" | | 3 | "She checked the worn leather" | | 4 | "She stopped three feet from" | | 5 | "His chest was intact." | | 6 | "She ran a gloved hand" | | 7 | "She pointed a rigid finger" | | 8 | "His right hand was clenched" | | 9 | "It was the size of" | | 10 | "She dropped it into a" | | 11 | "She ignored the chill, focusing" | | 12 | "She stepped up to the" | | 13 | "It wasn't coal soot." | | 14 | "It was greasy, shimmering faintly" | | 15 | "She swept her arm across" | | 16 | "She crouched again, shining her" | | 17 | "Her boots clicked rhythmically against" | | 18 | "She wasn't looking at the" | | 19 | "They had ignored the frost" |
| | ratio | 0.344 | |
| 40.65% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 78 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "Water dripped from the arched" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under" | | 2 | "The abandoned Tube station beneath" | | 3 | "Halogen floodlights stood on tripods" | | 4 | "They cast harsh, sterile beams" | | 5 | "Detective Constable Patel stood over" | | 6 | "He blew across the rim," | | 7 | "Harlow didn't break her stride." | | 8 | "Her posture remained rigid, shoulders" | | 9 | "She checked the worn leather" | | 10 | "She stopped three feet from" | | 11 | "The victim was male, mid-thirties," | | 12 | "The man's eyes stared blankly" | | 13 | "His chest was intact." | | 14 | "Patel gestured with his coffee" | | 15 | "Harlow's brown eyes narrowed." | | 16 | "She ran a gloved hand" | | 17 | "Patel shrugged, taking a sip." | | 18 | "Harlow crouched, her knees popping" | | 19 | "She pointed a rigid finger" |
| | ratio | 0.839 | |
| 53.76% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 93 | | matches | | 0 | "While the constable fumbled in" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The leather was scuffed, scored with faint Crosshatch patterns, yet completely free of the thick black sludge that coated the stairs leading down from the stree…" | | 1 | "It was the size of a two-pound coin, carved from dense, yellowed ivory or marrow, etched with a symbol that looked like an inverted keyhole." | | 2 | "Soot stains marked the glazed ceramic at six-foot intervals, right above rusted iron brackets that hadn't held gas lamps since the Blitz." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |