| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.143 | | leniency | 0.286 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1352 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 7.54% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1352 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "rhythmic" | | 4 | "throb" | | 5 | "vibrated" | | 6 | "churned" | | 7 | "crystalline" | | 8 | "velvet" | | 9 | "stomach" | | 10 | "pang" | | 11 | "pulse" | | 12 | "flickered" | | 13 | "scanned" | | 14 | "marble" | | 15 | "silence" | | 16 | "crystal" | | 17 | "echoing" | | 18 | "gloom" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 98 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1348 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 89.45% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 1156 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.21 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Veil | 1 | | Rory | 14 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Fae | 4 | | Grove | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Shade | 2 | | Devonshire | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Nyx | 6 | | Sunday | 1 | | Isolde | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Veil" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Half-Fae" | | 4 | "Shade" | | 5 | "Nyx" | | 6 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 0.894 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 82.43% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if recoiling from the heavy golden light" | | 1 | "looked like blown glass sat beside cuts o" |
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| 51.63% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.484 | | wordCount | 1348 | | matches | | 0 | "Not an earthquake, not machinery, but the deep, resonant purr of a beast gorging itself" | | 1 | "not machinery, but the deep, resonant purr of a beast gorging itself" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 46 | | mean | 29.3 | | std | 20.44 | | cv | 0.698 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 62 | | 2 | 48 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 42 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 53 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 63 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 60 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 54 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 56 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 30 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 53 | | 20 | 44 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 44 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 40 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 33 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 59 | | 32 | 49 | | 33 | 48 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 34 | | 37 | 29 | | 38 | 56 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 61 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 57 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 4 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 174 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 55.39% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 98 | | ratio | 0.031 | | matches | | 0 | "The tall grass—a deep, velvety burgundy that smelled of crushed cloves when Rory’s boots trampled it—did not bend beneath the Half-Fae’s bare feet." | | 1 | "The scent hit her a second later—hot, spiced wine, sharp with citrus and cinnamon, so potent it made her head spin." | | 2 | "Tiny faces pressed against the inside of the crystal—translucent, miniature shapes opening and closing their mouths in silent screams before dissolving back into the silver current." |
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| 76.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1175 | | adjectiveStacks | 4 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "lay tepid against her" | | 1 | "small crescent-shaped scar" | | 2 | "translucent, fist-sized fruits." | | 3 | "over smooth white boulders," |
| | adverbCount | 15 | | adverbRatio | 0.01276595744680851 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.002553191489361702 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 98 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 98 | | mean | 13.76 | | std | 6.93 | | cv | 0.504 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 2 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 24 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 28 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 18 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 24 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 89.12% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.5408163265306123 | | totalSentences | 98 | | uniqueOpeners | 53 | |
| 42.74% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Faintly glowing violet eyes narrowed" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Its inner glow dimmed to" | | 1 | "She left no tracks in" | | 2 | "Her fingers brushed the hilt" | | 3 | "It anchored her against the" | | 4 | "She glided down the slope," | | 5 | "It tracked her movement." | | 6 | "Her hand lifted toward the" | | 7 | "She approached the salt table," | | 8 | "They paused by a gap" | | 9 | "She leaned closer." | | 10 | "She recoiled, her boot heel" | | 11 | "She stood at the head" |
| | ratio | 0.154 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "The shimmering distortion of the" | | 1 | "The damp chill of Richmond" | | 2 | "Rory blinked, her bright blue" | | 3 | "The thumbnail-sized crimson gem had" | | 4 | "Its inner glow dimmed to" | | 5 | "Isolde drifted ahead, her waist-length" | | 6 | "The tall grass—a deep, velvety" | | 7 | "She left no tracks in" | | 8 | "Rory rubbed the small crescent-shaped" | | 9 | "Nyx’s voice scraped across the" | | 10 | "The Shade towered at six" | | 11 | "Tendrils of living shadow bled" | | 12 | "Rory stepped over a root" | | 13 | "A low hum vibrated through" | | 14 | "A river carved through the" | | 15 | "Rory stopped at the ridge," | | 16 | "The scent hit her a" | | 17 | "Rory drew her hand back" | | 18 | "Her fingers brushed the hilt" | | 19 | "It anchored her against the" |
| | ratio | 0.641 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, the silver chain lay" | | 1 | "Even through the leather sheath," |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 47.62% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The damp chill of Richmond Park gave way to a thick, syrupy heat that coated the back of her throat." | | 1 | "The tall grass—a deep, velvety burgundy that smelled of crushed cloves when Rory’s boots trampled it—did not bend beneath the Half-Fae’s bare feet." | | 2 | "Tendrils of living shadow bled from their shoulders, curling and snapping back as if recoiling from the heavy golden light." | | 3 | "Rory drew her hand back from a bush heavy with crystalline berries that chimed against each other in the breeze." | | 4 | "The trumpet flower hissed, its scent souring from roast beef to rotting cabbage in a heartbeat." | | 5 | "A courtyard of polished green marble stretched out before them, veined with real gold that glinted under the amber clouds." | | 6 | "On the platters, fruits that looked like blown glass sat beside cuts of meat that steamed despite the absence of fire." | | 7 | "She stood at the head of the salt table, her fingers hovering over a platter of black figs that bled rubies where their skins split." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory wiped, her pulse hammering against her ribs" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |