Run: 2026-10-13-01M4V1RS6S8JZ0E182QB1N21JV

Run Details

Duration:
30.4s
Cost:
$0.020726
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The shimmering distortion of the Veil snapped shut behind Rory's heels with the sound of a plucked cello string. Thick, warm air rushed into her lungs. It tasted of焦burnt sugar, crushed pomegranates, and old copper. Beneath her collarbone, the Heartstone Pendant cooled, its frantic crimson pulsing fading to a lazy, satisfied ember against her skin. Rory blinked hard, her bright blue eyes adjusting to the glare. Overhead, a vast, sunless sky stretched out in hues of bruised peach and molten amber. No clouds broke the expanse, only slow-moving currents of golden dust that drifted like silt in a river. "We skipped out on London drizzle for a giant terrarium." Rory rubbed the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, her gaze dropping to the ground. They stood on a ridge of dark, loamy soil that gave slightly under her boots, rich and springy like fresh cake. Below them, a valley unspooled in a riot of impossible agriculture. Vines the thickness of pythons strangled trelliswork carved from bleached bone. Orchards of gnarled, black-barked trees bowed under the weight of translucent fruit that glowed from within, casting pools of magenta and chartreuse light across the dark soil. Beside her, darkness pooled and stretched upward, coalescing into a six-foot-two silhouette. Faint violet eyes flared within the living shadow as Nyx solidified, though their edges remained blurred, drank in by the amber twilight. "Keep your voice low, little mortal. The soil here has ears, and a terribly specific appetite." Nyx's voice drifted across her neck like a draft through a cracked window. Isolde glided past them both. The hem of her dress brushed the ankle-high, turquoise grass, yet the blades didn't bend. She left the spongy earth entirely unmarked. Her waist-length silver hair caught the amber light, turning the colour of tarnished brass as she tilted her chin toward the valley. "Where hunger wears a crown of velvet, the plate is never empty, only waiting for the butcher's nerve." Isolde's pale lavender eyes fixed on a distant spire that twisted toward the sky like spun caramel. "Step where the sugar has crystallised. The mud remembers the shape of feet." "Right. Stick to the crusty bits. Got it." Rory drew the moonsilver dagger from her belt. The leaf-shaped blade bit into her palm with a familiar, grounding chill, cutting through the oppressive, humid heat of the valley. She took the lead, stepping onto a winding path made of fused, milky crystals that crunched like coarse sea salt under her soles. As they descended into the first orchard, the scale of the flora warped her sense of distance. Leaves the size of banquet tables hung overhead, dripping a viscous, clear sap that smelled of vanilla and rotting lilies. Every few seconds, a heavy *thud* vibrated through the salt path as an overripe fruit detached from a high branch and burst against the loam. Rory skirted a split melon-like growth. Inside the ruptured rind, dozens of tiny, translucent grubs with human-like hands feasted on the glowing pulp, emitting a chorus of high-pitched, contented sighs. Rory's stomach turned. She nudged a stray vine out of their way with the tip of her Fae blade. The plant hissed, recoiling from the cold moonsilver and leaking a dark, port-wine sap from the shallow nick. "Everything here is pulsing." Rory wiped the blade on her jeans, leaving a purple smear. "Is the whole realm alive, or just indigestion waiting to happen?" "Both." Nyx drifted through a low-hanging bough rather than ducking under it, their shadow-form rippling like ink in water before snapping back into humanoid shape. "Belphegor's domain does not grow. It bloats. Touch nothing that offers itself to your reach." A low, rhythmic thrumming rose from the deeper groves. At first, Rory mistook it for distant thunder, or the rumble of the Piccadilly line beneath pavement. As the salt path widened into a sunken courtyard, the sound resolved into a symphony of wet, metallic clicks and the roar of unseen furnaces. Ancient stone arches, furred with emerald moss that smelled sharply of mint, framed a series of terraced pools. Instead of water, a thick, amber liquid cascaded down the stone steps, steaming gently in the heavy air. Rory approached the edge of the lowest basin. The Heartstone Pendant swung free of her jacket, its silver chain taut as the crimson gem strained toward the liquid. "It's broth." Rory leaned back, wrinkling her nose as the updraft hit her face—a dizzying wave of roasted marrow, star anise, and something metallic that made her teeth ache. "A literal fountain of soup." "Nectar for the hollowed," Isolde murmured, her gaze trained on the bottom of the pool. "Drink to fill a vessel, and find the vessel has become the spoon." Rory squinted through the rising steam. Beneath the swirling, golden surface, pale shapes swayed with the current. Not fish. Long, elegant bones—femurs, ribs, and skulls wrapped in ribbons of translucent kelp, arranged in deliberate, geometric mosaics across the basin floor. A skull near the edge had a cluster of rubies wedged into its eye sockets, glinting through the grease. Unease crawled up Rory's spine, cold despite the sweat beading at her temples. She stepped back onto the salt path, her boot heel striking a raised root. The root twitched. Along the courtyard perimeter, what she had taken for topiary hedges of dark, braided wood began to uncoil. Knotted bark split open to reveal rows of moist, pink gums and flat, grinding molars. No eyes, just gaping mouths etched into the trunks, clacking shut on the empty air with the wet *snap* of bone shears. That was the clicking sound she'd heard. Thousands of them, echoing across the valley. Nyx's hand—solid and ice-cold—closed around Rory's bicep, yanking her three paces back as a whip-thin tendril lined with serrated thorns lashed the spot she had just occupied. "The vintage here is aggressive," Nyx whispered, their violet eyes narrowing as shadows lengthened from their cloak, pinning the thrashing tendril to the salt path. The vine sizzled against the Shade's essence, shrivelling into black ash. "They aren't guarding the path." Rory pointed with her dagger toward the orchard beyond the fountains. Between the rows of snapping trees, figures moved through the amber haze. They wore tall, pleated white hats stained up to the brims in dark ichor, their backs bent as they dragged heavy brass cauldrons through the dirt. Their movements were jerky, frantic, their bare feet sinking into the black mud with every step. One paused, raising a ladle to its own face, only for the ladle to pass straight through a jaw made of flickering grey smoke. "Contracted souls," Nyx said, retracting their shadow-tendrils as the toothed trees settled back into a low, rhythmic chattering. "Master chefs who traded eternity for a flavour Earth couldn't provide. Now they prepare a banquet they can never swallow." Isolde drifted toward the archway at the far end of the courtyard, where the salt path gave way to cobbles of polished, dark seeds. She paused beneath a cascade of glowing wisteria that smelled of seared fat, turning her pale face back toward Rory. "The bell tolls in the kitchen of the sleepless," the Half-Fae said, lifting a finger as a massive, resonant chime echoed from the caramel spire in the distance, shaking a rain of glowing petals down around them. "The first course is plated. Best we are not the garnish." Rory tightened her grip on the freezing hilt of the moonsilver blade, her eyes watering from the sweet, suffocating smoke rolling down the hill. "Lead on, then. I've lost my appetite anyway."
created_at"2026-10-13T16:33:12.936Z" 10/13/2026, 4:33:12 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rory leaned back [back]"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.083
88.15% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1266
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"sharply"
2"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
36.81% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1266
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"velvet"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"oppressive"
count1
5
word"sense of"
count1
6
word"vibrated"
count1
7
word"stomach"
count1
8
word"rhythmic"
count2
9
word"resolved"
count1
10
word"symphony"
count1
11
word"glinting"
count1
12
word"etched"
count1
13
word"echoing"
count1
14
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"velvet"
2"familiar"
3"chill"
4"oppressive"
5"sense of"
6"vibrated"
7"stomach"
8"rhythmic"
9"resolved"
10"symphony"
11"glinting"
12"etched"
13"echoing"
14"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences68
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
94.37% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences76
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0.013
matches
0"It tasted of焦burnt sugar, crushed pomegranates, and old copper."
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1263
ratio0.002
matches
0"thud"
1"snap"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
76.13% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount1083
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.48
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Veil1
Rory16
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Nyx6
Isolde4
Fae2
Piccadilly1
Shade1
Half-Fae1
persons
0"Veil"
1"Rory"
2"Pendant"
3"Nyx"
4"Isolde"
5"Fae"
6"Shade"
7"Half-Fae"
places(empty)
globalScore0.761
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1263
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
85.58% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean37.15
std16.7
cv0.45
sampleLengths
019
136
244
325
470
534
629
749
848
937
1023
1162
1230
1337
1426
1540
1651
1736
1828
1934
2028
2159
2227
233
2469
2527
2636
2716
2878
2938
3044
3148
3224
338
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs171
matches(empty)
30.08% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences76
ratio0.039
matches
0"\"It's broth.\" Rory leaned back, wrinkling her nose as the updraft hit her face—a dizzying wave of roasted marrow, star anise, and something metallic that made her teeth ache."
1"Long, elegant bones—femurs, ribs, and skulls wrapped in ribbons of translucent kelp, arranged in deliberate, geometric mosaics across the basin floor."
2"Nyx's hand—solid and ice-cold—closed around Rory's bicep, yanking her three paces back as a whip-thin tendril lined with serrated thorns lashed the spot she had just occupied."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1103
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.019945602901178604
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.006346328195829556
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences76
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences76
mean16.62
std7.47
cv0.449
sampleLengths
019
17
29
320
411
515
618
725
821
911
1011
1127
1212
1322
1429
155
1615
177
1822
1935
2013
2116
2221
2323
2417
2520
2625
276
2824
293
3016
3118
3215
3311
3425
3515
369
3717
3825
3918
4018
418
4220
4329
445
4515
4613
476
4811
492
97.37% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.6447368421052632
totalSentences76
uniqueOpeners49
49.75% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"Instead of water, a thick,"
ratio0.015
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences67
matches
0"It tasted of焦burnt sugar, crushed"
1"They stood on a ridge"
2"She left the spongy earth"
3"Her waist-length silver hair caught"
4"She took the lead, stepping"
5"She nudged a stray vine"
6"She stepped back onto the"
7"They wore tall, pleated white"
8"Their movements were jerky, frantic,"
9"She paused beneath a cascade"
ratio0.149
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences67
matches
0"The shimmering distortion of the"
1"It tasted of焦burnt sugar, crushed"
2"Rory blinked hard, her bright"
3"Rory rubbed the crescent-shaped scar"
4"They stood on a ridge"
5"Vines the thickness of pythons"
6"Orchards of gnarled, black-barked trees"
7"Nyx's voice drifted across her"
8"Isolde glided past them both."
9"The hem of her dress"
10"She left the spongy earth"
11"Her waist-length silver hair caught"
12"Isolde's pale lavender eyes fixed"
13"Rory drew the moonsilver dagger"
14"The leaf-shaped blade bit into"
15"She took the lead, stepping"
16"Leaves the size of banquet"
17"Every few seconds, a heavy"
18"Rory skirted a split melon-like"
19"Rory's stomach turned."
ratio0.687
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
9.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"No clouds broke the expanse, only slow-moving currents of golden dust that drifted like silt in a river."
1"They stood on a ridge of dark, loamy soil that gave slightly under her boots, rich and springy like fresh cake."
2"Orchards of gnarled, black-barked trees bowed under the weight of translucent fruit that glowed from within, casting pools of magenta and chartreuse light acros…"
3"She took the lead, stepping onto a winding path made of fused, milky crystals that crunched like coarse sea salt under her soles."
4"Leaves the size of banquet tables hung overhead, dripping a viscous, clear sap that smelled of vanilla and rotting lilies."
5"Ancient stone arches, furred with emerald moss that smelled sharply of mint, framed a series of terraced pools."
6"She paused beneath a cascade of glowing wisteria that smelled of seared fat, turning her pale face back toward Rory."
7"Rory tightened her grip on the freezing hilt of the moonsilver blade, her eyes watering from the sweet, suffocating smoke rolling down the hill."
83.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory rubbed, her gaze dropping to the ground"
50.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
1"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.2
83.3846%