Run: 2026-10-13-01M4V1RYD8YZ35XQG5YJ39T65B

Run Details

Duration:
26.9s
Cost:
$0.020116
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The shimmering distortion of the Veil snapped shut behind Rory's heels with a sound like a plucked cello string. At her collarbone, the thumbnail-sized crimson gemstone on its silver chain cooled from a searing heat to a dull, fading pulse. She released the pendant, her fingers brushing the small crescent scar on her left wrist as she took her first breath of Dymas. Sugar and roasted marrow coated her tongue. The air hung thick, warmed by a vast, sunless vault of amber sky that stretched over rolling hills of dark purple grass. No wind blew, yet the tall stalks swayed in a slow, rhythmic undulation, parting to reveal soil that gleamed like crushed garnets. "Breathe shallow, little mortal. The air itself ferments if it sits too long in the lungs." Nyx’s voice scraped across her ears like dry leaves skittering over pavement. The Shade towered beside her, six feet of shifting, ink-black silhouette that drank the amber light. Two violet embers burned where their eyes belonged, scanning the ridge ahead. "A little late for health advice. My teeth already ache." Rory spat onto the garnet dirt, trying to clear the syrupy coating from her mouth. Her boots sank an inch into the spongy turf. Two paces to her left, Isolde glided forward, her bare feet skimming the purple blades without bending a single stalk. Waist-length silver hair caught the honeyed glow of the sky, framing pale lavender eyes that widened as she took in the horizon. "The Prince of the Larder sets a grand table, yet no guests sit to dine. Look to the roots, child of iron. Look to what feeds the vine." Rory followed the Half-Fae's gaze down the slope. What she had mistaken for a forest of gnarled oaks was an sprawling orchard of titanic proportions. Trunks twisted upward like braided muscles of dark mahogany, their bark weeping thick, translucent sap that smelled of cinnamon and cloves. From the high boughs hung fruit the size of lanterns, their skins translucent and pulsing with a slow, rhythmic luminescence. They descended into the grove. The canopy blocked the amber sky, plunging the path into a twilight lit only by the glowing orchard and the faint inner light of Rory's crimson pendant. "The shadows here have weight." Nyx dissolved from the waist down, their shadowy form pooling into the dark crevices between the massive roots before reforming a dozen yards ahead. The violet eyes narrowed as a tendril of darkness reached out to prod a low-hanging bough. "They taste of grease and old wine. Something watches from the upper branches." Rory drew the leaf-shaped dagger from her belt. The moonsilver blade bit her palm with its permanent, winter-deep chill, a sharp contrast to the stifling, spice-heavy warmth of the orchard. Without moonlight, the metal remained dull, yet the edge hummed against her skin. She stepped closer to the nearest trunk, squinting at one of the glowing fruits. Veins webbed the inside of the translucent rind. Something dark and curled floated in the golden fluid at its center, twitching once as her shadow fell across it. "Is that a heartbeat?" Rory backed away, her stomach flipping. She bumped into a low stone wall that bordered a narrow canal cutting through the orchard. The liquid flowing within wasn't water. Dark, viscous, and smelling sharply of tannins and iron, it bubbled over smooth cobbles that looked suspiciously like polished molars. Isolde knelt beside the bank, her reflection ripples of silver in the crimson current. "The grape knows the press, the wheat knows the mill. Those who sign the parchment become the harvest still." "Contracts." Rory stared at the pulsing fruit above, her jaw tightening. "Belphegor doesn't just employ the helbound souls. He grows them." A wet, tearing sound echoed from deeper within the grove. The canopy shuddered. Three hundred yards down the canal, a massive, swollen pod detached from a high branch, plummeting into a catch-basin woven from living briars. The impact sent a spray of golden nectar high into the air, followed by a low, resonant chime that vibrated right through the soles of Rory's boots. Immediately, the garnet soil around them began to shift. Tiny, pale shoots erupted from the dirt, uncurling into six-legged root-creatures no larger than terriers. They had no eyes, only gaping maws lined with thorns, and they scrambled toward the fallen fruit with frantic, clicking haste. One skittered over Rory's boot, leaving a trail of warm, smelling of burnt caramel. She kicked it away, raising the moonsilver blade as three more wheeled toward her, drawn by the warmth of her flesh. "Don't strike them." Nyx materialized directly in front of her, expanding their torso into a broad curtain of living darkness. The root-creatures skidded to a halt at the edge of the Shade's shadow, their thorny mouths snapping at the empty air before they whimpered and scurried off toward the briar basin. "Spill blood or sap on this soil, and the entire orchard will wake to drink it. Keep your trinket sheathed unless you wish to become fertilizer." Rory lowered the cold dagger, her heart hammering against her ribs. Her straight black hair clung to the back of her neck, damp with sweat from the cloying heat. Ahead, the trees thinned, giving way to a vast terraced valley that stole the breath right out of her chest. The orchard was merely the garnish. Below them sprawled a labyrinth of white marble viaducts and golden pavilions, all built into the sides of a canyon carved from solid, glittering pink salt. Waterfalls of foaming cream and dark reduction cascaded down the salt cliffs, feeding into steaming lakes where giant, armored crustaceans the size of city buses lumbered through the shallows. Bridges woven from spun sugar spanned the chasms, glistening under the amber sky, while miles of neatly trellised vineyards climbed the opposite canyon wall, the vines heavy with clusters of rubies and amethysts that bled real juice onto the salt below. "It's a kitchen. The whole bloody valley is a kitchen." Rory gripped the salt-stone parapet at the edge of the ridge. The sheer scale of it made her head spin. Golden Empresses' cramped wok station back in London could have fit inside one of the copper cauldrons simmering unattended on a plaza three tiers down. "A kitchen requires a chef, yet the hearths burn unattended." Isolde drifted to the parapet, raising her chin as the updraft from the valley caught her silver hair. The scent rising from the chasm was intoxicating—truffles, seared fat, honeyed figs, and beneath it all, the metallic tang of fear. "Listen to the simmer, daughter of the law. The pot boils over when the lid is lifted." Rory leaned out over the salt ledge. Down on the third tier, near the giant copper cauldrons, movement flickered. Figures in tall white hats and bloodstained aprons darted between the roaring fires. Even from this height, she could see the heavy iron chains linking their ankles to the marble floor, their movements frantic, unnatural, and impossibly fast as they hacked at mounds of twitching, iridescent meat. Nyx’s shadowy hand settled on Rory’s shoulder, cold as a grave. "The Wardens never mapped this far past the rift. Look at the viaducts." The Shade pointed a long, translucent finger toward the sugar-spun bridges. Squads of towering, four-armed figures clad in lacquered carapace armor marched across the spans, carrying bronze platters heaped with the glowing orchard pods. "The feast is already underway."
created_at"2026-10-13T16:33:18.263Z" 10/13/2026, 4:33:18 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
95.98% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1243
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
23.57% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1243
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"searing"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"rhythmic"
count2
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count2
7
word"stomach"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"vibrated"
count1
10
word"marble"
count2
11
word"glistening"
count1
12
word"simmering"
count1
13
word"flickered"
count1
14
word"roaring"
count1
15
word"grave"
count1
highlights
0"searing"
1"pulse"
2"rhythmic"
3"scanning"
4"weight"
5"chill"
6"warmth"
7"stomach"
8"echoed"
9"vibrated"
10"marble"
11"glistening"
12"simmering"
13"flickered"
14"roaring"
15"grave"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences79
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1242
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
86.77% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount1028
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.26
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Veil1
Rory13
Dymas1
Shade3
Isolde3
Half-Fae1
Nyx4
persons
0"Veil"
1"Rory"
2"Shade"
3"Isolde"
4"Half-Fae"
5"Nyx"
places(empty)
globalScore0.868
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1242
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean29.57
std22.39
cv0.757
sampleLengths
019
144
251
316
440
510
666
728
866
932
105
1140
1213
1357
1428
154
1648
1714
1819
191
2010
2110
2263
239
2450
2521
263
2748
2826
2949
306
3196
3210
3345
3410
3539
3617
3766
3811
3913
4034
415
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs163
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences79
ratio0.013
matches
0"The scent rising from the chasm was intoxicating—truffles, seared fat, honeyed figs, and beneath it all, the metallic tang of fear."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount928
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.017241379310344827
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.008620689655172414
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences79
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences79
mean15.72
std7.86
cv0.5
sampleLengths
019
121
223
37
422
522
616
712
816
912
1010
1115
129
1320
1422
1528
168
1717
1821
1920
205
2127
225
2324
2416
2513
268
2722
2813
2914
308
3120
324
336
3416
356
3620
3714
3819
391
4010
4110
4210
433
4423
4527
469
4715
4821
4914
83.97% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5189873417721519
totalSentences79
uniqueOpeners41
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences62
matches
0"Dark, viscous, and smelling sharply"
1"Immediately, the garnet soil around"
ratio0.032
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount8
totalSentences62
matches
0"She released the pendant, her"
1"Her boots sank an inch"
2"They descended into the grove."
3"She stepped closer to the"
4"She bumped into a low"
5"They had no eyes, only"
6"She kicked it away, raising"
7"Her straight black hair clung"
ratio0.129
89.03% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount46
totalSentences62
matches
0"The shimmering distortion of the"
1"She released the pendant, her"
2"Sugar and roasted marrow coated"
3"The air hung thick, warmed"
4"Nyx’s voice scraped across her"
5"The Shade towered beside her,"
6"Rory spat onto the garnet"
7"Her boots sank an inch"
8"Waist-length silver hair caught the"
9"Rory followed the Half-Fae's gaze"
10"Trunks twisted upward like braided"
11"They descended into the grove."
12"The canopy blocked the amber"
13"Nyx dissolved from the waist"
14"The violet eyes narrowed as"
15"Rory drew the leaf-shaped dagger"
16"The moonsilver blade bit her"
17"She stepped closer to the"
18"Veins webbed the inside of"
19"Something dark and curled floated"
ratio0.742
80.65% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"Even from this height, she"
ratio0.016
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The air hung thick, warmed by a vast, sunless vault of amber sky that stretched over rolling hills of dark purple grass."
1"No wind blew, yet the tall stalks swayed in a slow, rhythmic undulation, parting to reveal soil that gleamed like crushed garnets."
2"The Shade towered beside her, six feet of shifting, ink-black silhouette that drank the amber light."
3"Trunks twisted upward like braided muscles of dark mahogany, their bark weeping thick, translucent sap that smelled of cinnamon and cloves."
4"Dark, viscous, and smelling sharply of tannins and iron, it bubbled over smooth cobbles that looked suspiciously like polished molars."
5"The impact sent a spray of golden nectar high into the air, followed by a low, resonant chime that vibrated right through the soles of Rory's boots."
6"Bridges woven from spun sugar spanned the chasms, glistening under the amber sky, while miles of neatly trellised vineyards climbed the opposite canyon wall, th…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
93.3593%