Run: 2026-10-13-01M4V1S5TBSRR7R4P1A1KYGDDK

Run Details

Duration:
38.8s
Cost:
$0.026498
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Green light bled through the rain-streaked glass of the front window, casting emerald shadows across the floorboards of The Raven’s Nest. Rory sat at the corner stool, her fingers wrapped around a lukewarm mug of tea. The scent of sweet-and-sour pork still clung to her denim jacket—the lingering ghost of her shift at the Golden Empress. She rotated her left wrist, her thumb tracing the pale crescent scar there, while her bright blue eyes tracked Silas behind the mahogany counter. He moved with his usual measured rhythm, the slight hitch in his left leg barely noticeable as he polished a row of tumblers. The silver signet ring on his right hand caught the amber glow of the spirit bottles each time he made a pass with the cloth. Around them, yellowed cartography and monochrome faces from a century ago stared down from the walls. The brass bell above the entrance gave a dull clack. A gust of damp Soho air cut through the smell of stale beer and peat smoke. Rory didn’t look up until the footsteps stopped three feet from her stool. "Aurora?" Nobody in London called her that. For three years, that name had belonged strictly to Cardiff, buried alongside law textbooks and the bruising grip of Evan’s fingers on her arm. Rory turned her head. A woman stood there, shaking droplets from a Burberry trench coat that cost more than six months of rent for the flat upstairs. Blonde hair, once hacked into a jagged, bleached pixie cut during their second year at university, now fell in glossed, disciplined waves past her shoulders. Pearl studs sat in her earlobes where safety pins used to hang. "Liam’s sister," Rory murmured, her brain misfiring before locking onto the correct name. "Clara." Clara’s mouth twitched, a curated smile that didn’t reach the corners of her eyes. She stepped closer, the sharp heels of her leather boots clicking against the wood. She smelled of bergamot and expensive rain. "You vanished." Clara gestured to the empty stool beside Rory. "May I?" Rory nodded, pulling her helmet off the seat and setting it by her boots. "I didn't vanish. I moved." "Without forwarding an address. Without finishing term." Clara sat, crossing her ankles. Her gaze swept the dim interior of the Nest, lingering on a framed 1920s photograph of Piccadilly Circus before settling on Rory’s frayed cuffs. "Your dad told my brother you were taking a gap year. Three years ago." "Brendan always was good with a jury. Give them a plausible narrative, let them fill in the blanks." Rory lifted her mug and took a sip. The tea had gone cold. "What are you doing in a place like this? Doesn't look like your usual haunt." "We have clients on Wardour Street. My senior partner wanted a quiet pint away from the finance crowd, then he got called back to the office by his wife." Clara placed a structured leather handbag on the bar. "I stayed to wait out the rain. And here you are." Silas limped over, drying his hands on a bar towel. His hazel eyes flicked from Clara’s tailored lapel to Rory’s tense posture. He rested his knuckles on the wood, the silver ring tapping once against the varnish. "Something to drink, miss?" "Pinot Grigio. Whatever you have open." Clara didn't look at him, her focus pinned entirely on the straight black hair framing Rory’s jaw. "Actually, make it two. Put it on my tab." "I'm fine with the tea, Si," Rory said. Silas gave a single nod and pivoted toward the wine cooler. Clara watched him go, her brow furrowing. "You live round here?" "Upstairs." "And the helmet?" "I deliver noodles." Rory met Clara’s stare without blinking. "Twenty quid an hour plus tips if the weather is miserable. Tonight was lucrative." Clara’s manicured fingers tightened around the strap of her bag. The silence stretched between them, heavy with the clinking of glasses at the far end of the room and the low murmur of two old men arguing over a chessboard near the bookshelf. "You were top of the Tort Law seminar," Clara said, her voice dropping an octave. "Professor Davies used your essay on negligence as the cohort benchmark. You were supposed to take silk before thirty-five, just like your father." "I hated Tort Law. I hated Davies. And I hated the sound of my own voice in those moot courtrooms." "You loved winning." "I knew how to win. There's a difference." Silas returned, setting a single stemmed glass on a coaster in front of Clara. He didn't bring a second. He caught Rory’s eye, received the microscopic shake of her head, and limped back toward the tap handles, leaving them in their pocket of green-tinted shadow. Clara wrapped her fingers around the stem of the glass but didn't lift it. "Remember that protest outside the Senedd? First year. You chained yourself to the railings because they were cutting legal aid for domestic shelters. You had that megaphone, screaming until your voice gave out. I was terrified we’d get arrested and struck off the student register before we even sat an exam." Rory stared at the grain of the bar. "You held my coat." "I held your coat. And now I draft commercial leases for holding companies in the Cayman Islands, and you bring takeaway to people like me." Clara’s laugh was brittle, snapping in the narrow space between them. "What happened to us, Rory?" "You grew up. Got sensible." "I sold out. At least I bought something with the money." Clara leaned in, the bergamot scent thickening. "What did you buy? Freedom? Because from where I’m sitting, it looks a lot like hiding." Rory’s left hand twitched on her knee. She kept it beneath the lip of the counter, out of sight. "You don't know why I left Cardiff." "Evan told everyone you had a breakdown." The name hit the space between them like a dropped glass. Rory’s jaw locked. The familiar warmth of the Nest seemed to recede, replaced by the sterile, suffocating memory of Evan’s flat on Crwys Road—the locked doors, the shattered phone, the way he smiled when her parents came for Sunday roast. "Is that what he said?" "He was devastated. Came to the union bar two weeks after you left, looking like he hadn't slept. Said the pressure from Brendan finally cracked you, that you packed a rucksack in the middle of the night and blocked his number." Clara finally took a sip of the cheap wine, grimacing at the acidity. "I defended him. When Eva started spreading rumours that he'd hurt you, I told her to shut her mouth. I told everyone Evan worshiped the ground you walked on." Rory turned on her stool, facing her old friend fully for the first time. "Eva wasn't spreading rumours. She bought my train ticket at four in the morning at Cardiff Central while my lip was still bleeding." Clara froze, the glass halfway to the coaster. The polish seemed to strip away from her face, leaving her looking younger, paler, much closer to the nineteen-year-old who used to share roll-ups outside the library in the freezing Welsh rain. "No," Clara whispered. "He... he helped you revise for contract law. He brought you soup when you had flu." "He broke two of my ribs because I talked to a lab partner after a lecture." Rory kept her tone flat, stripping the words of melody. "Then he drove me to A&E and told the nurse I fell down the cellar stairs at the student union. And I nodded, because he had my keys and my bank card in his pocket." Clara set the wine glass down. It missed the coaster, the base clinking hard against the mahogany. Her eyes dropped to Rory’s hands, catching the way Rory’s right thumb covered the inside of her left wrist, a habitual shield over an older scar. "Why didn't you come to me?" Clara’s voice cracked. "My flat was three streets over." "Because you liked him. Because my dad liked him. Because Evan was going to be a barrister, and he wore the right tweed, and he laughed at Brendan's jokes." Rory pulled her jacket tighter around her shoulders. "Eva was the only one who didn't buy the performance." Across the room, the green neon sign buzzed, a faint electrical hum that filled the sudden vacuum of their conversation. Clara looked down at her lap, her hands twisting the silk belt of her trench coat into knots. The corporate armour had buckled, leaving behind the weight of three years spent defending the wrong person. "He made pupillage at Civitas Chambers last month," Clara said to her knees. "My brother went to his celebratory drinks." "Good for him. He always looked the part." "I'm sorry, Rory." "Don't be. It was a long time ago. Different life." Clara looked up, her eyes rimmed with red. "Come back. Not to Cardiff—stay here, in London. My firm needs paralegals with brains. You didn't finish the degree, fine, I can get the hiring partner to waive the requirement based on your first two years' transcripts. You can finish part-time. Get back on track." Rory looked past Clara’s shoulder at the wall of old maps. Faded ink showed borders of countries that no longer existed, empires carved up and renamed while the rivers stayed in the exact same place. Down at the end of the bar, Silas reached beneath the counter, his hand resting near the button that released the catch on the bookshelf door. A man in a soaked rain mac had just walked in, bypassed the stools entirely, and stood waiting by the fiction section. Rory had spent the last six months learning how to read the licence plates of diplomatic cars parked illegally in alleys, how to slip burner phones into takeaway bags for Silas’s contacts, and how to spot a tail in the reflection of a shop window. It wasn't the law. It didn't come with a pension or pearl earrings. "I'm on a track, Clara. Just not yours." "Delivering spring rolls?" Clara’s voice rose, sharp with desperation, trying to bridge a chasm that had grown too wide to jump. "You’re brilliant, Aurora. You’re wasting away in a basement pub." "The flat is on the second floor. Great view of the neon." Rory slid off the stool and tucked the helmet under her arm. She reached into her jeans pocket, pulled out a crumpled ten-pound note, and laid it on the bar next to Clara’s untouched wine. "For the Pinot. Tell Liam I said hello." Clara reached out, her fingers brushing the worn denim of Rory’s sleeve. Her grip was hesitant, nothing like the girl who used to drag Rory onto the dance floor at Clwb Ifor Bach. "Let me leave you my card. Just in case." Rory looked down at the pale hand on her arm, then up into the face of a stranger who wore her friend's features. "Keep it. I'd only lose it in the rain."
created_at"2026-10-13T16:33:25.848Z" 10/13/2026, 4:33:25 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.317
leniency0.633
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1842
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
64.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1842
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"measured"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count1
4
word"furrowing"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"silk"
count2
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"shattered"
count1
10
word"weight"
count1
11
word"dance"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"measured"
2"footsteps"
3"flicked"
4"furrowing"
5"silence"
6"silk"
7"familiar"
8"warmth"
9"shattered"
10"weight"
11"dance"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences79
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences120
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1839
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions80
wordCount1132
uniqueNames21
maxNameDensity2.39
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Clara"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest3
Golden1
Empress1
Silas6
Soho1
London1
Cardiff1
Evan2
Burberry1
Clara26
Rory27
Piccadilly1
Circus1
Crwys1
Road1
Sunday1
Welsh1
Clwb1
Ifor1
Bach1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Evan"
4"Clara"
5"Rory"
6"Ifor"
7"Bach"
places
0"Golden"
1"Soho"
2"London"
3"Cardiff"
4"Burberry"
5"Crwys"
6"Road"
7"Clwb"
globalScore0.307
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1839
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences120
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs61
mean30.15
std22.41
cv0.743
sampleLengths
080
164
226
313
41
530
664
714
835
912
1014
115
1250
1346
1449
1537
164
1732
188
1911
2011
211
223
2323
2443
2538
2620
273
288
2945
3065
3112
3241
335
3434
3526
367
3751
385
3983
4037
4140
4219
4361
4443
4515
4647
4755
4820
498
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs177
matches(empty)
95.24% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences120
ratio0.017
matches
0"The scent of sweet-and-sour pork still clung to her denim jacket—the lingering ghost of her shift at the Golden Empress."
1"The familiar warmth of the Nest seemed to recede, replaced by the sterile, suffocating memory of Evan’s flat on Crwys Road—the locked doors, the shattered phone, the way he smiled when her parents came for Sunday roast."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1142
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.021015761821366025
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.0070052539404553416
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences120
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences120
mean15.33
std10.76
cv0.702
sampleLengths
021
115
220
324
423
525
616
710
816
913
101
116
1224
134
1423
1525
1612
1713
181
1914
2014
217
2210
232
2414
255
2612
2724
2814
2926
305
3115
3238
3311
3410
3512
3615
374
3823
399
408
4111
427
434
441
453
469
4714
4810
4933
66.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.425
totalSentences120
uniqueOpeners51
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences77
matches
0"She rotated her left wrist,"
1"He moved with his usual"
2"She stepped closer, the sharp"
3"She smelled of bergamot and"
4"Her gaze swept the dim"
5"His hazel eyes flicked from"
6"He rested his knuckles on"
7"He didn't bring a second."
8"He caught Rory’s eye, received"
9"She kept it beneath the"
10"It missed the coaster, the"
11"Her eyes dropped to Rory’s"
12"It wasn't the law."
13"It didn't come with a"
14"She reached into her jeans"
15"Her grip was hesitant, nothing"
ratio0.208
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences77
matches
0"Rory sat at the corner"
1"The scent of sweet-and-sour pork"
2"She rotated her left wrist,"
3"He moved with his usual"
4"The silver signet ring on"
5"The brass bell above the"
6"A gust of damp Soho"
7"Rory didn’t look up until"
8"Nobody in London called her"
9"Rory turned her head."
10"A woman stood there, shaking"
11"Blonde hair, once hacked into"
12"Pearl studs sat in her"
13"Rory murmured, her brain misfiring"
14"Clara’s mouth twitched, a curated"
15"She stepped closer, the sharp"
16"She smelled of bergamot and"
17"Clara gestured to the empty"
18"Rory nodded, pulling her helmet"
19"Clara sat, crossing her ankles"
ratio0.922
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
65.22% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Clara’s mouth twitched, a curated smile that didn’t reach the corners of her eyes."
1"The polish seemed to strip away from her face, leaving her looking younger, paler, much closer to the nineteen-year-old who used to share roll-ups outside the l…"
2"Across the room, the green neon sign buzzed, a faint electrical hum that filled the sudden vacuum of their conversation."
3"Down at the end of the bar, Silas reached beneath the counter, his hand resting near the button that released the catch on the bookshelf door."
4"Her grip was hesitant, nothing like the girl who used to drag Rory onto the dance floor at Clwb Ifor Bach."
46.05% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Rory murmured, her brain misfiring before locking onto the correct name"
1"Clara said, her voice dropping an octave"
2"Clara leaned in, the bergamot scent thickening"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Rory murmured (murmur)"
1"brittle snapping (snap)"
2"Clara whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences60
tagDensity0.1
leniency0.2
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.1
81.2629%