Run: 2026-10-13-01M4V1T4SPT4A288N5QQMX67G5

Run Details

Duration:
32.3s
Cost:
$0.020244
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain needles lashed Camden High Street, turning the asphalt into a blurred mirror of brake lights and neon. Detective Harlow Quinn kept her chin tucked against the collar of her trench coat, her boots eating up the slick pavement with military precision. She wiped water from her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair and locked her brown eyes on the canvas messenger bag bobbing thirty yards ahead. Tomás Herrera vaulted a row of chained bicycles. His foot slipped on the wet kerb, his left arm shooting out to catch a lamppost. The sleeve of his jacket rode up, exposing the jagged white scar along his olive forearm before he wrenched himself around the corner into a narrow cobbled alley. Harlow unclipped the radio from her lapel, her thumb depressing the transmit button as she took the turn at a tight angle. "Control, this is DS Quinn. Suspect is heading north off Parkway. Male, late twenties, dark curly hair, carrying a green medical satchel. Requesting units to box in the canal towpath." Static crackled in her ear, followed by the dispatcher's tinny voice. "Copy, DS Quinn. Nearest unit is eight minutes out due to the flooding at King's Cross. Hold position and await backup." Harlow let the handset drop against her chest. Eight minutes was an eternity. Eight minutes was how long it had taken her to find DS Morris three years ago in a Rotherhithe warehouse, his service weapon unfired and the concrete walls scorched by something forensics still couldn't name. Herrera had walked out of The Raven's Nest in Soho two hours ago with a bag full of stolen blood bags and restricted surgical kit. She wasn't losing him to the London dark. She lengthened her stride. Dumpsters choked the alley, overflowing with sodden cardboard and the sour tang of stale lager. Ahead, Herrera skidded to a halt in front of a boarded-up brick rotunda—an old Underground entrance left to rot since the twenties. Rusted iron grilles blocked the archway, padlocked with a chain thick enough to anchor a barge. Harlow drew her baton, the metal sliding out with a sharp metallic clack. Her sharp jaw set. "Nowhere to go, Tommy! Hands where I can see them. Drop the bag." Herrera spun, his chest heaving. Rain plastered his dark curls to his forehead. He pressed his back against the iron grille, one hand clutching the strap of his satchel while the other fumbled inside his collar. His fingers closed around the silver Saint Christopher medallion at his throat. "Go back to your desk, Detective. You don't have jurisdiction here." "The NHS trust you robbed in Whitechapel disagrees. Step away from the gate." "Those supplies were written off. Expired." Herrera's warm brown eyes darted past her shoulder, checking the empty alley mouth, before dropping to the heavy padlock at his hip. "If I don't deliver this kit, someone bleeds out tonight. Someone your lot can't put in a standard ward." "That why the GMC stripped your licence? Because you play butcher in back rooms?" Harlow advanced, her left wrist raised just enough to catch the faint streetlamp glare on her worn leather watch. Eleven-forty. "Turn around. Wrists together." Herrera didn't raise his hands. He reached into his coat pocket and pulled out a flat, circular disc the colour of old ivory. "Look at the lock, Quinn. Really look at it." Harlow kept her eyes on his centre mass, trained for the feint, until Herrera pressed the pale disc flat against the rusted iron of the padlock. A low hum vibrated through the wet cobblestones, travelling up the soles of Harlow's boots and settling into her teeth. The smell of ozone and wet dog cut through the rain. The heavy iron chain didn't fall; it rippled like oil on water, the solid metal parting around Herrera's hand. A tall figure in a wax duster stepped out of the black void behind the bars, their face lost beneath the brim of a sou'wester. A pale hand took the bone token from Herrera's fingers. "He's paid," a voice rasped from beneath the hat, sounding like grinding stones. The iron grille swung inward without a squeak of hinges. Herrera slipped through the gap, backward, keeping his gaze fixed on Harlow. "Don't follow me down here, Detective. The badge won't save you. Ask Morris what happens when you kick doors that aren't meant to open." The gate clanged shut. The rusted chain solidified, whole and taut once more. Harlow sprinted the last ten yards and slammed her palms against the iron bars. Freezing metal bit into her skin. She rattled the padlock; it was solid, cold, crusted with decades of corrosion. Down the tiled stairwell beyond the gate, Herrera's footsteps echoed, descending toward the deep levels beneath Camden. She stared at the lock. Her pulse hammered against the leather strap of her watch. "Control," she breathed into her lapel mic, though she didn't press the button. No backup was coming in time, and no constable on the beat would believe the lock had melted. She holstered her baton, unclipped a heavy Maglite from her belt, and examined the mortar around the archway's side hinge. The brick was crumbling, rotted by a century of London damp. Harlow stepped back, raised her boot, and drove her heel into the lower hinge pin. Rusted flakes showered the steps. A second kick sheared the bolt from the wet lime mortar, opening a gap at the bottom corner wide enough for a shoulder. She dropped to her stomach in the puddle, ignoring the filthy water soaking through her trousers, and wedged herself beneath the bent iron. Rust scraped the back of her coat. She dragged herself through onto the dry, dust-choked landing inside and stood, brushing grit from her knees. The stairs spiralled down into the belly of the earth. As she descended, the roar of the rain faded, replaced by a thick, subterranean hum—hundreds of voices murmuring in an acoustic space built for trains. The tiled walls, stamped with faded maroon lettering that read *CAMDEN TOWN*, gave way to soot-blackened brick lined with glass jars. Inside the jars, pale blue moss pulsed with a slow, rhythmic light, casting long shadows across the steps. Harlow reached the bottom landing, where the ticket barriers had been ripped out eighty years ago, and pressed her spine against the tiled curve of the pedestrian tunnel. She peered around the edge. The abandoned Tube platform stretched out for two hundred yards, packed shoulder-to-shoulder with people. Tents of patched velvet and tarpaulin straddled the dry rail bed where the third rail used to run. Stalls constructed from packing crates crowded the platform edge, lit by braziers burning with green and violet flames that gave off no smoke, only the cloying scent of burnt sage and copper. Fifty yards down the platform, Herrera's green satchel bobbed through the crowd. He stopped at a stall draped in dried animal pelts, exchanging rapid words with a merchant whose fingers were far too long, featuring an extra knuckle on each digit. The merchant slid a wooden box filled with dark glass vials across the counter. Harlow's hand drifted to her hip—no firearm, just CS spray and steel cuffs. A man brushed past the mouth of her tunnel, his eyes entirely black from sclera to pupil, carrying a wicker cage that rattled with something heavy and scaled. Near the edge of the platform, two burly figures in butcher aprons stood guard by a chalkboard sign that read *NEXT MOON: ALDWYCH*. Both wore bone tokens strung on wire around their necks, scanning the crowd for interlopers. Herrera tucked the wooden box into his satchel, slung the strap over his head, and turned toward the far end of the platform, where the black mouth of the northbound running tunnel gaped open. Harlow looked down at her left wrist. The second hand on her watch ticked past eleven-forty-five. Behind her, the stairs led back to the street, the rain, and a patrol car that would arrive in three minutes to find an empty alley. Ahead lay the platform, a hundred pairs of inhuman eyes, and the first real lead on Morris's death in thirty-six months. She pulled the lapel mic cord free from her radio, silenced the unit with a click of the volume dial, and stepped out from the shadow of the tiles onto the platform.
created_at"2026-10-13T16:33:57.573Z" 10/13/2026, 4:33:57 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.308
leniency0.615
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.42% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1395
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.57% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1395
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"standard"
count1
1
word"vibrated"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count1
7
word"rhythmic"
count1
8
word"velvet"
count1
9
word"constructed"
count1
10
word"scanning"
count1
highlights
0"standard"
1"vibrated"
2"footsteps"
3"echoed"
4"pulse"
5"stomach"
6"pulsed"
7"rhythmic"
8"velvet"
9"constructed"
10"scanning"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences77
matches(empty)
87.20% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences77
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords5
totalWords1392
ratio0.004
matches
0"CAMDEN TOWN"
1"NEXT MOON: ALDWYCH"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount1225
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.06
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Herrera"
discoveredNames
Camden2
High1
Street1
Harlow13
Quinn1
Herrera13
Morris2
Rotherhithe1
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
London2
Underground1
Saint1
Christopher1
Eleven-forty1
Maglite1
Tube1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Herrera"
3"Morris"
4"Raven"
5"Saint"
6"Christopher"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"Rotherhithe"
4"Soho"
5"London"
globalScore0.969
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1392
matches(empty)
89.15% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences86
matches
0"lettering that read"
1"flames that gave"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean37.62
std22.28
cv0.592
sampleLengths
065
152
222
330
411
521
681
757
817
913
1048
1111
1213
1347
1438
1523
169
1726
1885
1913
2022
2124
2213
2350
2415
2513
2649
2743
2847
2974
3033
3164
3255
3379
3434
3563
3632
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences77
matches
0"been ripped"
91.30% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs184
matches
0"wasn't losing"
1"was coming"
2"was crumbling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences86
ratio0.058
matches
0"Ahead, Herrera skidded to a halt in front of a boarded-up brick rotunda—an old Underground entrance left to rot since the twenties."
1"The heavy iron chain didn't fall; it rippled like oil on water, the solid metal parting around Herrera's hand."
2"She rattled the padlock; it was solid, cold, crusted with decades of corrosion."
3"As she descended, the roar of the rain faded, replaced by a thick, subterranean hum—hundreds of voices murmuring in an acoustic space built for trains."
4"Harlow's hand drifted to her hip—no firearm, just CS spray and steel cuffs."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1239
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.01775625504439064
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.004035512510088781
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean16.19
std8.37
cv0.517
sampleLengths
018
124
223
38
416
528
622
730
811
921
108
115
1235
1325
148
154
1615
1722
1816
1913
204
2113
225
238
2423
2512
2611
2713
2828
2919
3033
311
324
335
3418
359
3626
3720
3811
3919
4025
4110
4213
4310
4412
4524
464
479
4814
496
69.77% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.45348837209302323
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners39
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences76
matches
0"She wiped water from her"
1"His foot slipped on the"
2"She wasn't losing him to"
3"She lengthened her stride."
4"Her sharp jaw set."
5"He pressed his back against"
6"His fingers closed around the"
7"He reached into his coat"
8"She rattled the padlock; it"
9"She stared at the lock."
10"Her pulse hammered against the"
11"she breathed into her lapel"
12"She holstered her baton, unclipped"
13"She dropped to her stomach"
14"She dragged herself through onto"
15"She peered around the edge."
16"He stopped at a stall"
17"She pulled the lapel mic"
ratio0.237
58.68% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences76
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn kept her"
1"She wiped water from her"
2"Tomás Herrera vaulted a row"
3"His foot slipped on the"
4"The sleeve of his jacket"
5"Harlow unclipped the radio from"
6"Static crackled in her ear,"
7"Harlow let the handset drop"
8"Herrera had walked out of"
9"She wasn't losing him to"
10"She lengthened her stride."
11"Dumpsters choked the alley, overflowing"
12"Harlow drew her baton, the"
13"Her sharp jaw set."
14"Herrera spun, his chest heaving."
15"Rain plastered his dark curls"
16"He pressed his back against"
17"His fingers closed around the"
18"Herrera's warm brown eyes darted"
19"Harlow advanced, her left wrist"
ratio0.803
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Near the edge of the platform, two burly figures in butcher aprons stood guard by a chalkboard sign that read *NEXT MOON: ALDWYCH*."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
73.08% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.077
leniency0.154
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.154
83.0945%