Run: 2026-10-13-01M4V1TS8PH2NXPR0MQPAB40ZG

Run Details

Duration:
31.1s
Cost:
$0.022644
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Halogen work lights hummed against the damp curvature of the abandoned Camden Tube station. Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under the blue-and-white police tape, her boots crunching on a century's worth of pulverized brick and rat bones. She checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist. 03:14. Above them, Northern Line trains slumbered, leaving the subterranean air thick with the tang of rusted iron and something sharper. Ozone, mixed with burnt sage. Detective Sergeant Miller stood near the edge of the ancient platform, a paper coffee cup steaming in his gloved hand. He gestured with his chin toward the center of the concourse. "Urban explorers, Ma'am. Or a rave that packed up in a hurry." Quinn didn't answer. She squared her shoulders, moving with the rigid posture of her military days, her brown eyes sweeping the tiled walls. Soot coated the vintage advertisements for Bovril and West End plays, except in precise, four-meter rectangles along the platform. The tiles inside those rectangles gleamed, scrubbed clean of grime, though the mortar between them remained rotten. She stopped beside the chalk outline—not of a body, but of a circle. Inside it lay a scatter of violet glass shards and a smear of silver ash. "Show me a raver who sweeps up their own broken bottles while leaving the necks behind, Miller." Miller took a sip of his coffee, grimacing at the taste. "Squatters, then. Dealing whatever synthetic rubbish is making the rounds in Soho this week. The uniform who found the place chased a kid out of the service stairwell two hours ago. Dropped his stash on the way out." "Where's the uniform?" "Up top, logging the perimeter." Miller pulled a clear evidence bag from his coat pocket and held it out. "Found this wedged in the turnstile above. Our runner's ticket inside, I reckon." Quinn took the bag. Inside rested a flat disc of yellowish-white material, notched around the edges like an ancient coin. She pinched the plastic, tilting it toward the harsh halogen beam. Porous trabeculae honeycombed the sheared edge. Not ivory. Not plastic. Bone. Marrow-bleached and carved with a drill bit too fine for standard jewelry work. "You think teenagers are carving femurs to get into a squat?" Quinn's sharp jaw tightened. "Goths, Ma'am. It's Camden." Quinn pocketed the bone token and walked to the nearest clean rectangle on the wall. She crouched, the knees of her trousers popping in the quiet tunnel. The floor directly beneath the clean wall bore four deep divots in the concrete, spaced evenly apart. Heavy timber had rested here. Stalls. She dragged a nitrile-gloved finger through the grit between the divots. The dust didn't smudge like coal soot. It rolled under her fingertip, greasy and iridescent, smelling faintly of crushed beetles and sulfur. Three years ago, she had scraped this exact residue off the soles of DS Morris's boots after they pulled his body from a locked meatpacking plant in Smithfield. The coroner had called it industrial lubricant. Quinn had called it a lie. "Look at the dust tracks, Miller." Quinn stood, brushing her hands together. "Hundreds of footprints. Boots, dress shoes, barefoot tracks. They converge in a central aisle, stop at these four-meter intervals, and never cross into the clean zones. People were queuing." Miller walked over, squinting at the floor. "A pop-up market. Illegal counterfeit goods. Still doesn't explain why SOCO is having a fit over the electrics." "What about the electrics?" "Their batteries keep dying. Three cameras dead in twenty minutes. Damp air getting into the lithium, probably." Quinn turned toward the far end of the platform, where the tunnel yawned black and toothless. A figure in a white forensic boilersuit crouched near the edge of the pit, holding a digital camera that refused to flash. "Stay on the concourse," Quinn told Miller. "Have the uniform pull the lunar calendar for the last six months and cross-reference it with noise complaints in disused Underground stations." Miller blinked. "The moon, Ma'am?" "The dampness in here is tidal, Sergeant. From the Fleet river tributary above. Do it." It was a fabrication, a rapid piece of misdirection, and Miller swallowed it whole, nodding as he pulled out his notebook and headed for the stairs. Quinn waited until his footsteps faded up the spiral shaft before she stepped to the platform's edge. She ran a hand over her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair. The air near the tracks didn't just feel cold; it pulled at the fine hairs on her wrists, like the static off an old television tube. A voice drifted up from the service steps behind the ticket booths. "If you step down onto those sleepers, the residual charge will stop your watch. It's a lovely vintage piece. Shame to ruin the mainspring." Quinn pivoted, her hand dropping toward the baton at her hip before she registered the woman emerging from the shadows. Twenty-six, perhaps twenty-seven. Short, swamped in a tweed coat, with a mass of curly red hair escaping a loose clip. A worn leather satchel bulged against her hip, its strap digging into her shoulder under the weight of hardbound books. She pushed a pair of round glasses up her freckled nose and offered a laminated card. "Eva Kowalski. British Museum, Restricted Archives. Your superintendent called us in when the patrol officer mentioned Latin inscriptions on the tilework." Quinn took the pass, tilting it to check the hologram. "The inscriptions are nineteenth-century municipal drainage markers, Ms. Kowalski. And the Superintendent doesn't wake up before six." Eva tucked a stray curl of red hair behind her left ear, her green eyes darting toward the bone token visible through the mesh of Quinn's coat pocket. "Then let's say I monitor the police scanner for keywords. 'Subterranean,' 'bone,' and 'unexplained power drain' usually mean someone has been digging into Roman Londinium." "There's nothing Roman down here." "No." Eva stepped into the circle of halogen light, her gaze sweeping the clean rectangles along the tiled wall. "No, there isn't. They packed up before midnight. The moon peaked at 23:48. By midnight, the leases on the stalls expire." Quinn stepped into the younger woman's space, using her five-foot-nine frame to block the exit toward the stairs. "You're going to tell me who 'they' are, or I'm booking you for obstructing an investigation." "You can't book what you can't write in a report, Detective." Eva didn't flinch, though her fingers returned to her left ear, twisting a red ringlet. "Try telling the Crown Prosecution Service that a subterranean bazaar appears once a month, trades in bottled curses and alchemical reagents, and vanishes into the masonry." "I don't deal in fairy tales. I deal in footprints and chemical traces." Quinn pointed to the violet glass and silver ash. "A runner bolted two hours ago. Left that behind. What is it?" Eva knelt beside the chalk circle, careful not to let her satchel drag in the dirt. She didn't look at the glass. Instead, she reached beneath the overhang of the platform lip, where the brick curved inward toward the dead third rail. Her fingers closed around something metallic wedged into a missing mortar joint. "Leave that," Quinn snapped. "That's evidence." "If your forensic team bags this, they won't know what they're looking at, and the person who dropped it will tear apart Charing Cross Station to get it back." Eva stood, opening her palm. Resting on her glove was a small brass compass, its casing crusted with a green patina of verdigris. Strange, jagged sigils had been etched directly into the glass face, obscuring the cardinal points. Beneath the scratched crystal, a needle of black iron trembled, ignoring magnetic north entirely. It pointed straight down into the concrete between Quinn's boots. Quinn stared at the spinning needle. As she shifted her weight, the iron sliver twitched, tracking the movement of her watch—no, tracking the bone token in her pocket. "Shade work," Eva murmured, adjusting her round glasses. "Forged in the dark between stations. It doesn't point north, Detective. It points toward tears in the fabric. Portals. Rifts." The needle suddenly jerked, abandonar the bone token, and locked onto the solid brick wall at the dead end of the platform. A low vibration traveled through the soles of Quinn's boots, accompanied by the smell of wet dog and ozone. On the brick wall, a patch of soot began to flake away on its own, revealing a hairline crack that glowed like a dying ember. Quinn's hand went to her radio, her thumb hovering over the transmit button. Static hissed from the speaker, loud and rhythmic, like breathing. "Miller," Quinn said into the dead mic. Nothing came back. Above them, the halogen work lights flickered, dimming from stark white to the bruised purple of a winter dusk. Eva shoved the brass compass into her satchel and grabbed the sleeve of Quinn's coat. "Don't call him down here. The rift is venting. Whoever dropped that compass didn't lose it running from your patrolman—they wedged it into the brick to prop the door open from the other side."
created_at"2026-10-13T16:34:18.532Z" 10/13/2026, 4:34:18 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.278
leniency0.556
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.69% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1509
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.24% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1509
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"synthetic"
count1
1
word"standard"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"crystal"
count1
6
word"trembled"
count1
7
word"magnetic"
count1
8
word"rhythmic"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count1
10
word"stark"
count1
highlights
0"synthetic"
1"standard"
2"footsteps"
3"weight"
4"etched"
5"crystal"
6"trembled"
7"magnetic"
8"rhythmic"
9"flickered"
10"stark"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences80
matches(empty)
89.29% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences80
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences106
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1506
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
40.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount1003
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity2.19
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Tube1
Harlow1
Quinn22
Northern1
Line1
Sergeant1
Miller7
Bovril1
West1
End1
Morris1
Smithfield1
Eva7
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Line"
3"Sergeant"
4"Miller"
5"Morris"
6"Eva"
places
0"West"
1"End"
2"Smithfield"
globalScore0.403
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.664
wordCount1506
matches
0"not of a body, but of a circle"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean30.12
std17.02
cv0.565
sampleLengths
047
125
231
312
459
528
617
749
83
932
1041
1114
1215
134
1450
1533
1641
1741
1825
194
2017
2138
2229
235
2415
2526
2653
2736
2820
2956
3021
3127
3253
335
3440
3534
3652
3734
3854
396
4029
415
4257
4328
4428
4566
4623
477
4822
4949
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"been etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs150
matches(empty)
61.99% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences106
ratio0.028
matches
0"She stopped beside the chalk outline—not of a body, but of a circle."
1"The air near the tracks didn't just feel cold; it pulled at the fine hairs on her wrists, like the static off an old television tube."
2"As she shifted her weight, the iron sliver twitched, tracking the movement of her watch—no, tracking the bone token in her pocket."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1017
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.015732546705998034
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.007866273352999017
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences106
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences106
mean14.21
std8.02
cv0.565
sampleLengths
014
122
210
31
420
55
620
711
812
93
1020
1119
1217
1313
1415
1517
1611
1738
183
1919
2013
214
2216
2311
246
252
262
271
2813
2915
304
3115
3212
3317
345
351
3611
377
3815
3928
407
416
4212
4329
447
4518
464
4717
4816
4922
86.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.5428571428571428
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners57
45.66% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"Instead, she reached beneath the"
ratio0.014
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences73
matches
0"She checked the worn leather"
1"He gestured with his chin"
2"She squared her shoulders, moving"
3"She stopped beside the chalk"
4"She pinched the plastic, tilting"
5"She crouched, the knees of"
6"She dragged a nitrile-gloved finger"
7"It rolled under her fingertip,"
8"It was a fabrication, a"
9"She ran a hand over"
10"She pushed a pair of"
11"She didn't look at the"
12"Her fingers closed around something"
13"It pointed straight down into"
ratio0.192
69.59% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences73
matches
0"Halogen work lights hummed against"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under"
2"She checked the worn leather"
3"Ozone, mixed with burnt sage."
4"Detective Sergeant Miller stood near"
5"He gestured with his chin"
6"Quinn didn't answer."
7"She squared her shoulders, moving"
8"Soot coated the vintage advertisements"
9"The tiles inside those rectangles"
10"She stopped beside the chalk"
11"Miller took a sip of"
12"Miller pulled a clear evidence"
13"Quinn took the bag."
14"She pinched the plastic, tilting"
15"Quinn's sharp jaw tightened"
16"Quinn pocketed the bone token"
17"She crouched, the knees of"
18"The floor directly beneath the"
19"She dragged a nitrile-gloved finger"
ratio0.781
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She squared her shoulders, moving with the rigid posture of her military days, her brown eyes sweeping the tiled walls."
1"A figure in a white forensic boilersuit crouched near the edge of the pit, holding a digital camera that refused to flash."
2"Quinn pivoted, her hand dropping toward the baton at her hip before she registered the woman emerging from the shadows."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Eva stepped, her gaze sweeping the clean rectangles along the tiled wall"
1"Eva didn't, though her fingers returned to her left ear, twisting a red ringlet"
94.44% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Quinn snapped (snap)"
1"Eva murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.111
leniency0.222
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.111
85.6632%