| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1320 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 43.18% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1320 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "charged" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "echo" | | 3 | "resonance" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "rhythmic" | | 6 | "throb" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "scanned" | | 9 | "loomed" | | 10 | "stomach" | | 11 | "measured" | | 12 | "lilt" | | 13 | "predator" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 116 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 119 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 7 | | markdownWords | 15 | | totalWords | 1313 | | ratio | 0.011 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde's Grove, midnight, leave by the center stone" | | 1 | "snap" | | 2 | "clack-clack-clack" | | 3 | "Zzzzz-clack-clack-clack." | | 4 | "Thump-thump. Thump-thump." | | 5 | "Zzzzz-clack-clack-clack." | | 6 | "Zzzzz-clack-clack-clack." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.40% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 1282 | | uniqueNames | 20 | | maxNameDensity | 1.09 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 3 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Rory | 14 | | November | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Isolde | 2 | | Slow | 1 | | Welsh | 1 | | Jennifer | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Sunday | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Fingers | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Jennifer" | | 4 | "Carter" | | 5 | "Evan" | | 6 | "Fingers" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Golden" | | 4 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.954 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 84 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.762 | | wordCount | 1313 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the crisp rip of a brown takeaway sack, but a slow, wet rending" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 49 | | mean | 26.8 | | std | 18.68 | | cv | 0.697 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 33 | | 1 | 67 | | 2 | 39 | | 3 | 64 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 30 | | 6 | 50 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 52 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 31 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 55 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 55 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 49 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 45 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 52 | | 32 | 34 | | 33 | 29 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 44 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 30 | | 39 | 38 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 69 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 37 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 24 | | 48 | 36 |
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| 93.16% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "been spaced" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "was chopped" | | 3 | "was tilted" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 192 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 119 | | ratio | 0.059 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in thick, tangled mats—blood-red poppies, white lilies, and purple foxgloves straining upward toward a moonless canopy." | | 1 | "When she had walked in, the two largest oaks—the ones carved with spirals that made her eyes water if she stared too long—had been spaced three paces apart." | | 2 | "Every single blossom—poppies, lilies, foxgloves—had bent at the stem, their open faces turned directly toward her ankles." | | 3 | "It did not step out; it stretched, elongating across the grass without a light source to cast it." | | 4 | "It was the sound of breathing—a vast, bellows-like inhalation that sucked the freezing air right past Rory’s ears, pulling strands of her black hair backward toward the center of the grove." | | 5 | "Panic invited pursuit; Evan had taught her that much in Cardiff, and the monsters in London operated on the same predator logic." | | 6 | "As Rory passed, the figure did not turn its head; its entire torso twisted around the spine like an owl's, bone grinding against bone with the dull crunch of a mortar and pestle." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1293 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "thick, pressing against her" |
| | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.028615622583139984 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004640371229698376 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 119 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 119 | | mean | 11.03 | | std | 7.3 | | cv | 0.662 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 28 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 64.99% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.42016806722689076 | | totalSentences | 119 | | uniqueOpeners | 50 | |
| 68.03% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "Barely wide enough for her" | | 1 | "Then, from the dense timber" |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the thermal delivery" | | 1 | "She walked, her boots crushing" | | 2 | "She tapped the glass." | | 3 | "She held down the power" | | 4 | "Her voice dropped straight to" | | 5 | "It sounded as though she" | | 6 | "She shoved the phone back" | | 7 | "Their petals looked waxy, too" | | 8 | "It pulsed once, a slow," | | 9 | "Her bright blue eyes scanned" | | 10 | "she called out, keeping her" | | 11 | "It was not the rustle" | | 12 | "It was the distinct, metallic" | | 13 | "she muttered under her breath," | | 14 | "Her heel caught on a" | | 15 | "She steadied herself, glancing down" | | 16 | "She unslung the thermal bag," | | 17 | "She bent her knees, keeping" | | 18 | "It did not step out;" | | 19 | "It was the sound of" |
| | ratio | 0.276 | |
| 82.45% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stepped past the boundary" | | 1 | "The air inside the clearing" | | 2 | "She adjusted the thermal delivery" | | 3 | "The ticket stapled to the" | | 4 | "Yu-Fei had charged triple the" | | 5 | "Rory did not run." | | 6 | "She walked, her boots crushing" | | 7 | "The silence hit first." | | 8 | "Rory pulled her phone from" | | 9 | "The screen displayed 11:58 PM." | | 10 | "The colon between the digits" | | 11 | "She tapped the glass." | | 12 | "She held down the power" | | 13 | "The screen stayed locked on" | | 14 | "Her voice dropped straight to" | | 15 | "It sounded as though she" | | 16 | "She shoved the phone back" | | 17 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 18 | "Their petals looked waxy, too" | | 19 | "A dull heat pricked the" |
| | ratio | 0.755 | |
| 51.02% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, the gap between them" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 98.21% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "She walked, her boots crushing blooming nightshade and pale bluebells that had no business surviving a November frost." | | 1 | "It pulsed once, a slow, rhythmic throb of warmth that matched a resting heartbeat." | | 2 | "It was the sound of breathing—a vast, bellows-like inhalation that sucked the freezing air right past Rory’s ears, pulling strands of her black hair backward to…" | | 3 | "The exact Welsh lilt Jennifer Carter used when asking Rory to peel potatoes on a Sunday afternoon, except the cadence was chopped up, the syllables stitched tog…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she called out (call out)" | | 1 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 2 | "it murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |