Run: 2026-10-13-01M4V1VA4JZYXV2J9ARGRYSNYG

Run Details

Duration:
30.3s
Cost:
$0.019684
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory stepped past the boundary of ancient oak standing stones, the heavy London fog swallowing the rest of Richmond Park behind her. The air inside the clearing tasted of sweet rot and ozone. She adjusted the thermal delivery bag from the Golden Empress on her shoulder. The ticket stapled to the brown paper read *Isolde's Grove, midnight, leave by the center stone*. Yu-Fei had charged triple the normal fee and told Rory to drop the food and run. Rory did not run. She walked, her boots crushing blooming nightshade and pale bluebells that had no business surviving a November frost. The silence hit first. Outside the wooden monoliths, the distant hum of traffic on the A3 and the rustle of dry leaves provided a constant backdrop. In here, the air hung dead. Not a single blade of grass twitched. Rory pulled her phone from her jacket pocket to check the time. The screen displayed 11:58 PM. The colon between the digits did not blink. She tapped the glass. Frozen. She held down the power button, her thumb brushing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. The screen stayed locked on those four glowing numbers, casting a sterile white light over her fingers. "Right. Brilliant." Her voice dropped straight to the dirt. No echo. No resonance against the towering, petrified oak pillars ringing the clearing. It sounded as though she had spoken into a pillow. She shoved the phone back into her pocket and walked toward the center of the grove. Wildflowers carpeted the ground in thick, tangled mats—blood-red poppies, white lilies, and purple foxgloves straining upward toward a moonless canopy. Their petals looked waxy, too stiff, like funeral arrangements left out in the rain. A dull heat pricked the skin above her collarbone. Rory hooked a finger into the collar of her jacket and pulled out the silver chain. The Heartstone Pendant, roughly the size of her thumbnail, rested against her palm. A faint inner glow lit the deep crimson gemstone. It pulsed once, a slow, rhythmic throb of warmth that matched a resting heartbeat. Hel portal. There was a tear between realms somewhere in this clearing, which meant the Fae were no longer the only things using Isolde's backyard. A dry *snap* broke the stillness behind her. Rory spun on her heel, straight black hair whipping across her jaw. Her bright blue eyes scanned the perimeter. The oak standing stones loomed like jagged teeth against the dark. Nothing moved between them. The wildflowers remained unbroken, save for the narrow path of crushed stems marking her own entry. "Delivery," she called out, keeping her tone flat, clinical. "Egg foo young and two portions of char siu buns. Already paid for. I'm setting it down." Nobody answered. Yet as she stared at the boundary stones, her mind snagged on a discrepancy. When she had walked in, the two largest oaks—the ones carved with spirals that made her eyes water if she stared too long—had been spaced three paces apart. Now, the gap between them looked narrower. Barely wide enough for her shoulders. She blinked. A trick of the dark. Then, from the dense timber beyond the western stones, came a sound. It was not the rustle of a deer or the scurry of a fox. It was the distinct, metallic *clack-clack-clack* of a rotary telephone dial spinning back into place. Rory froze. The sound repeated. *Zzzzz-clack-clack-clack.* Slow, deliberate, coming from the hollow of a dead elm fifty yards away. "Wrong number," she muttered under her breath, backing away a step. Her heel caught on a root. She steadied herself, glancing down to find her footing, and her stomach dropped. The wildflowers around her boots were no longer facing the sky. Every single blossom—poppies, lilies, foxgloves—had bent at the stem, their open faces turned directly toward her ankles. Rory stepped left. A faint, fibrous creaking filled the clearing, like wet rope pulled taut. In the periphery of her vision, thousands of small, pale heads rotated in unison to track her movement. When she snapped her gaze directly at a patch of lilies, they were still. Motionless. Yet they pointed right at her shins. The crimson pendant against her chest beat faster. *Thump-thump. Thump-thump.* The silver chain warmed against the nape of her neck. She unslung the thermal bag, unzipped it, and pulled out the brown paper sack. The smell of roasted pork and ginger wafted up, obscene and unnatural in the cold, floral stagnation of the grove. She bent her knees, keeping her eyes up, and set the bag on the turf. Something shifted beside the northernmost standing stone. A shadow detached itself from the bark. It did not step out; it stretched, elongating across the grass without a light source to cast it. Tall, thin as a wire, with joints that bent at three separate angles where a human knee should have been. Rory stared straight at the stone. Empty. The shadow was gone, snapped back into the dark grain of the petrified wood. *Zzzzz-clack-clack-clack.* The rotary dial sound came from her right this time. Closer. Inside the ring of stones. Followed by a low, wet rasping. The sound of someone dragging a heavy canvas sack across gravel. Wait. No. Not gravel. It was the sound of breathing—a vast, bellows-like inhalation that sucked the freezing air right past Rory’s ears, pulling strands of her black hair backward toward the center of the grove. She did not turn around to see what occupied the center of the clearing behind her. She kept her eyes locked on the boundary stones ahead, walking backward, one measured step at a time. The gap between the two entry oaks was definitely smaller now. The massive wooden pillars had crept inward while her back was turned, closing the jaws of the trap. A voice spoke from the exact spot where she had just left the takeaway bag. "Leave the skin," it murmured. It sounded like her mother. The exact Welsh lilt Jennifer Carter used when asking Rory to peel potatoes on a Sunday afternoon, except the cadence was chopped up, the syllables stitched together by something that did not understand where words ended and breaths began. "Keep the bone. Leave the skin." Paper tore. Not the crisp rip of a brown takeaway sack, but a slow, wet rending. The smell of ginger vanished, replaced by the copper tang of an abattoir floor. Rory did not speed up. Panic invited pursuit; Evan had taught her that much in Cardiff, and the monsters in London operated on the same predator logic. She kept her pace steady, her boots crushing the watching flowers. Ten paces to the boundary. Out of the corner of her left eye, a figure stood beside an oak pillar. It wore a dark coat. Its head was tilted back at a ninety-degree angle, throat exposed, jaw unhinged toward the canopy. As Rory passed, the figure did not turn its head; its entire torso twisted around the spine like an owl's, bone grinding against bone with the dull crunch of a mortar and pestle. She kept her gaze fixed dead ahead on the narrowing gap between the two main stones. Five paces. The Heartstone seared her skin. Through the thin cotton of her shirt, the crimson light flared bright enough to stain the grass at her feet red. The air grew thick, pressing against her eardrums until they popped. Right behind her shoulder, close enough to fog the silver chain on her neck, the rotary dial spun again. *Zzzzz-clack-clack-clack.* Fingers brushed the thermal bag strapped to her back. Long, frigid, and possessing too many knuckles, they tapped a rhythmic pattern against the nylon. Rory turned sideways, held her breath, and wedged her shoulders between the two ancient oaks. The petrified wood scraped the chest of her jacket, rough as sharkskin, and she threw herself forward into the London fog.
created_at"2026-10-13T16:34:35.805Z" 10/13/2026, 4:34:35 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1320
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.18% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1320
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"charged"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"echo"
count1
3
word"resonance"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"rhythmic"
count2
6
word"throb"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"scanned"
count1
9
word"loomed"
count1
10
word"stomach"
count1
11
word"measured"
count1
12
word"lilt"
count1
13
word"predator"
count1
highlights
0"charged"
1"silence"
2"echo"
3"resonance"
4"pulsed"
5"rhythmic"
6"throb"
7"warmth"
8"scanned"
9"loomed"
10"stomach"
11"measured"
12"lilt"
13"predator"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences116
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences119
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans7
markdownWords15
totalWords1313
ratio0.011
matches
0"Isolde's Grove, midnight, leave by the center stone"
1"snap"
2"clack-clack-clack"
3"Zzzzz-clack-clack-clack."
4"Thump-thump. Thump-thump."
5"Zzzzz-clack-clack-clack."
6"Zzzzz-clack-clack-clack."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
95.40% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1282
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity1.09
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
London3
Richmond1
Park1
Golden1
Empress1
Grove1
Rory14
November1
Heartstone2
Pendant1
Fae1
Isolde2
Slow1
Welsh1
Jennifer1
Carter1
Sunday1
Evan1
Cardiff1
Fingers1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Heartstone"
2"Isolde"
3"Jennifer"
4"Carter"
5"Evan"
6"Fingers"
places
0"London"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Golden"
4"Cardiff"
globalScore0.954
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences84
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.762
wordCount1313
matches
0"Not the crisp rip of a brown takeaway sack, but a slow, wet rending"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences119
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean26.8
std18.68
cv0.697
sampleLengths
033
167
239
364
42
530
650
79
852
925
108
1119
1231
1326
142
1555
167
1712
1829
1919
2011
2119
2228
2355
2420
2549
267
2745
2821
291
3016
3152
3234
3329
3415
355
3644
376
3830
3938
405
4169
4216
432
4437
4519
461
4724
4836
93.16% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences116
matches
0"been spaced"
1"was gone"
2"was chopped"
3"was tilted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs192
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences119
ratio0.059
matches
0"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in thick, tangled mats—blood-red poppies, white lilies, and purple foxgloves straining upward toward a moonless canopy."
1"When she had walked in, the two largest oaks—the ones carved with spirals that made her eyes water if she stared too long—had been spaced three paces apart."
2"Every single blossom—poppies, lilies, foxgloves—had bent at the stem, their open faces turned directly toward her ankles."
3"It did not step out; it stretched, elongating across the grass without a light source to cast it."
4"It was the sound of breathing—a vast, bellows-like inhalation that sucked the freezing air right past Rory’s ears, pulling strands of her black hair backward toward the center of the grove."
5"Panic invited pursuit; Evan had taught her that much in Cardiff, and the monsters in London operated on the same predator logic."
6"As Rory passed, the figure did not turn its head; its entire torso twisted around the spine like an owl's, bone grinding against bone with the dull crunch of a mortar and pestle."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1293
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
1"thick, pressing against her"
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.028615622583139984
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.004640371229698376
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences119
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences119
mean11.03
std7.3
cv0.662
sampleLengths
022
111
213
316
416
54
618
74
822
96
107
1112
125
138
144
151
1617
1717
182
197
202
2111
2210
2316
2420
2514
269
2716
2813
299
3014
312
3223
338
3412
357
3611
374
3816
399
4017
412
4214
4328
447
456
462
475
4812
4914
64.99% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.42016806722689076
totalSentences119
uniqueOpeners50
68.03% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences98
matches
0"Barely wide enough for her"
1"Then, from the dense timber"
ratio0.02
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences98
matches
0"She adjusted the thermal delivery"
1"She walked, her boots crushing"
2"She tapped the glass."
3"She held down the power"
4"Her voice dropped straight to"
5"It sounded as though she"
6"She shoved the phone back"
7"Their petals looked waxy, too"
8"It pulsed once, a slow,"
9"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
10"she called out, keeping her"
11"It was not the rustle"
12"It was the distinct, metallic"
13"she muttered under her breath,"
14"Her heel caught on a"
15"She steadied herself, glancing down"
16"She unslung the thermal bag,"
17"She bent her knees, keeping"
18"It did not step out;"
19"It was the sound of"
ratio0.276
82.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences98
matches
0"Rory stepped past the boundary"
1"The air inside the clearing"
2"She adjusted the thermal delivery"
3"The ticket stapled to the"
4"Yu-Fei had charged triple the"
5"Rory did not run."
6"She walked, her boots crushing"
7"The silence hit first."
8"Rory pulled her phone from"
9"The screen displayed 11:58 PM."
10"The colon between the digits"
11"She tapped the glass."
12"She held down the power"
13"The screen stayed locked on"
14"Her voice dropped straight to"
15"It sounded as though she"
16"She shoved the phone back"
17"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in"
18"Their petals looked waxy, too"
19"A dull heat pricked the"
ratio0.755
51.02% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"Now, the gap between them"
ratio0.01
98.21% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences64
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She walked, her boots crushing blooming nightshade and pale bluebells that had no business surviving a November frost."
1"It pulsed once, a slow, rhythmic throb of warmth that matched a resting heartbeat."
2"It was the sound of breathing—a vast, bellows-like inhalation that sucked the freezing air right past Rory’s ears, pulling strands of her black hair backward to…"
3"The exact Welsh lilt Jennifer Carter used when asking Rory to peel potatoes on a Sunday afternoon, except the cadence was chopped up, the syllables stitched tog…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she called out (call out)"
1"she muttered (mutter)"
2"it murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
86.1480%