Run: 2026-10-13-01M4V1W003649P5Y1NAPSEPEMD

Run Details

Duration:
35.7s
Cost:
$0.021298
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked back. Rory yanked the heavy wood inward, prepared to tell the landlord where he could shove his rent hike. Platinum blond hair gleamed under the flickering hallway bulb. Rory’s fingers tightened on the brass handle. She shoved the door toward the frame. An ivory-handled cane shot into the gap. Wood struck bone-white resin with a sharp crack. "That is no way to greet an old friend, *chérie*." "Eva isn't here." Rory leaned her weight against the panels, her bare heels digging into the threadbare rug. "Take your bespoke backside off Brick Lane." Lucien’s palm flattened against the exterior wood. He pushed. The door swung wide, sliding Rory backward two inches before she let go and stepped into the cramped living room. He filled the doorway, a cut of tailored charcoal wool against the peeling wallpaper of the stairwell. Rain darkened the shoulders of his coat, carrying the sharp tang of London smog and expensive cedarwood into the warm air of the flat, which already smelled of toasted cumin and turmeric rising through the floorboards from the curry house below. "I did not climb three flights of rotting stairs for Eva." Lucien stepped inside, the tip of his cane tapping the floorboards. He kicked the door shut behind him. "You don't climb stairs unless someone’s paying you five figures." Rory crossed her arms, her right thumb rubbing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. "And I'm delivering dim sum for minimum wage, so unless Yu-Fei owes the underworld a dumpling tax, you're at the wrong address." Lucien’s gaze dropped to her wrist. His jaw flexed. One amber eye and one pitch-black eye tracked up her oversized cardigan to her face. "You kept the flat." He glanced around the cramped room, taking in the towering stacks of leather-bound grimoires on the radiator and the yellowing scrolls weighted down with takeaway mugs. "And the clutter." "I'm cat-sitting." As if summoned, Ptolemy hopped off a precarious pile of Latin dictionaries. The tabby wound himself around Lucien’s immaculate trousers, leaving a smear of orange fur on the dark wool. Lucien didn't flinch. He crouched, his movements fluid despite the stiff knee that required the cane, and scratched behind the cat's notched ear. "Traitor," Rory muttered to the cat. She walked to the kitchenette—a glorified alcove wedged between a bookshelf and the bathroom door—and flipped the switch on the electric kettle. She needed something in her hands, preferably boiling. "State your business, Luc. Then leave." "Four months, Aurora." He straightened, resting both hands on the ivory handle of his cane. "Four months without a word, and I get two syllables of my own name." "You got what you paid for." She kept her back to him, staring at the water gauge on the kettle. "Nothing." Leather soles whispered against the floorboards. He didn't use the cane for balance when he moved that fast; the demonic blood in his veins made a mockery of human limitations when his temper flared. The air behind her grew warm, thick with the scent of ozone and rain-soaked wool. "You think I left that night by choice?" Rory spun around. Her hip knocked a stack of translation notes off the counter. Paper scattered across their shoes. Lucien stood close enough that she had to tilt her head back to meet his mismatched gaze. "You walked out of the Charing Cross safe house while I was asleep," she snapped, her bright blue eyes narrowing. "You left three grand on the dresser like I was a high-end escort and vanished into Soho. Forgive me if I didn't send a Christmas card." "The money was for a train ticket out of the city!" Lucien’s voice dropped an octave, a low rumble that vibrated in the narrow space between the stove and the refrigerator. "My father’s hounds were three streets away. They had my scent. If I had stayed until dawn, they would have torn through the wards, and they would have torn through you." "I'm not made of glass, Lucien!" "You are human!" He struck the floorboards with the cane. Ptolemy bolted under the sofa. Lucien leaned in, bracing his free hand on the counter beside her hip, caging her against the humming refrigerator. "You have no claws. You have no Avaros blood to knit your ribs back together when a hellhound crushes your chest. You have a clever mouth and a delivery moped." "And a shotgun under Eva's bed," Rory shot back, her chin lifting. Her chest rose and fell, brushing the lapel of his damp coat. "You didn't give me a choice. You decided what I could handle. Just like Evan did." Lucien flinched. The comparison hit harder than a physical blow. The black eye seemed to swallow the amber one in the dim kitchen light. He pulled his hand back from the counter as if the laminate had burned him. "Do not put me in the same breath as that worm." "Then stop acting like you own the patent on my survival." Rory stepped forward, closing the distance he had just created. The kettle began to rumble, steam rising between them. "I waited at Silas' bar for two weeks. Every time the bell above the door rang, I looked up. Every time." Lucien’s throat worked as he swallowed. His fingers tightened around the ivory handle until his knuckles turned white. "I was in Marseille. Leading them away from the Channel." "A phone call takes thirty seconds, Luc. You speak four languages, and you couldn't manage a text in one of them?" "If the syndicate traced a line to your flat—" "Excuses." Rory reached past him, her forearm brushing the wet wool of his sleeve, and yanked the kettle off its base before the whistle could shriek. She poured the water into two chipped mugs with a steady hand, though her pulse hammered against her collarbones. "You got scared." "I Do not get scared." "Not of demons." She turned, holding out a mug with a dangling Earl Grey tag. Her blue eyes locked onto his. "You got scared because before I fell asleep in Charing Cross, you told me you hadn't slept a full night since I walked into your office." Lucien didn't take the mug. He stared at her mouth, his breathing shallow. A lock of platinum hair had come loose from its slick hold, curving near his temple. "Set the tea down, Aurora." "No. Drink it and tell me why you're here, or get out." Lucien reached out. He didn't take the handle; his long fingers wrapped around her wrist, right over the crescent scar, his thumb pressing into the frantic rhythm of her pulse. He guided her hand to the counter and forced her to release the porcelain. Before she could pull back, his other hand tangled in her straight black hair, tilting her face up. "You want the truth?" His breath ghosted across her lips, hot and sharp with the scent of mint and rain. "I came back to London three days ago. I have spent seventy-two hours sitting in a car across from Silas' bar, watching you load plastic bags onto that ridiculous red scooter, telling myself to drive away." "Why didn't you?" Her voice was a rasp. Her hands came up, gripping the lapels of his charcoal jacket. The fabric was damp, the muscle beneath it rock-solid. "Because some bottom-feeder in Whitechapel bought a ledger with your name in it this morning." Lucien’s thumb traced the line of her cheekbone, his touch trembling with a restraint that looked painful. "And after I broke three of his fingers to get the book back, I realized I could no longer pretend I did not care if you breathed." "You broke his fingers?" "Four, actually. The thumb was an accident." He lowered his head, his forehead resting against hers. The cane clattered to the linoleum, rolling against the base of the stove. "Tell me to leave, Rory. Lock the three bolts. Because if I stay another minute in this room, the hounds will be the least of your problems." Rory looked at his mouth, then up into the mismatched eyes that had haunted her dreams for sixteen weeks. She didn't reach for the door. She pulled him down by his lapels until his mouth crashed into hers. Lucien groaned, a sound torn from the back of his throat, and lifted her by the waist, setting her onto the narrow counter right on top of Eva's translation notes. Paper crinkled beneath her thighs. Rory wrapped her legs around his hips, knocking a jar of pens into the sink as she dragged her fingers through his slick hair, ruining the careful style. His hands burned through the thin cotton of her cardigan, gripping her ribs as he kissed her with four months of starved desperation.
created_at"2026-10-13T16:34:58.191Z" 10/13/2026, 4:34:58 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He glanced around [around]"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.37
leniency0.739
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.043
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1471
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
72.81% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1471
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"electric"
count1
2
word"vibrated"
count1
3
word"traced"
count2
4
word"pulse"
count2
5
word"porcelain"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"electric"
2"vibrated"
3"traced"
4"pulse"
5"porcelain"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences76
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1469
ratio0.001
matches
0"chérie"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
76.70% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount955
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.47
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien14
Rory12
London1
Ptolemy2
Latin1
Leather1
Earl1
Grey1
Eva1
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Rory"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Earl"
4"Grey"
5"Eva"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.767
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1469
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean30.6
std18.23
cv0.596
sampleLengths
023
19
214
315
410
525
629
758
829
948
1024
1133
122
1353
1442
1529
1621
1734
1815
198
2036
2146
2262
236
2464
2540
2639
2711
2851
2928
3021
319
3248
335
3447
3529
365
3712
3844
3918
4056
4128
4259
434
4456
4538
4663
4723
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs148
matches(empty)
60.44% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences104
ratio0.029
matches
0"She walked to the kitchenette—a glorified alcove wedged between a bookshelf and the bathroom door—and flipped the switch on the electric kettle."
1"He didn't use the cane for balance when he moved that fast; the demonic blood in his veins made a mockery of human limitations when his temper flared."
2"He didn't take the handle; his long fingers wrapped around her wrist, right over the crescent scar, his thumb pressing into the frantic rhythm of her pulse."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount964
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.015560165975103735
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.001037344398340249
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean14.13
std8.96
cv0.634
sampleLengths
05
118
29
37
47
57
68
710
818
97
107
112
1220
1317
1441
1522
167
1726
1822
196
203
2115
2230
233
242
2512
2618
273
2820
296
3022
318
326
3315
3414
3520
361
376
3828
3915
408
413
4211
435
4417
4520
4626
4731
4831
496
56.73% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.375
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners39
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
57.84% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences74
matches
0"She shoved the door toward"
1"He filled the doorway, a"
2"He kicked the door shut"
3"His jaw flexed."
4"He glanced around the cramped"
5"He crouched, his movements fluid"
6"She walked to the kitchenette—a"
7"She needed something in her"
8"He straightened, resting both hands"
9"She kept her back to"
10"He didn't use the cane"
11"Her hip knocked a stack"
12"she snapped, her bright blue"
13"He struck the floorboards with"
14"Her chest rose and fell,"
15"He pulled his hand back"
16"His fingers tightened around the"
17"She poured the water into"
18"She turned, holding out a"
19"Her blue eyes locked onto"
ratio0.405
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences74
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked back."
1"Rory yanked the heavy wood"
2"Platinum blond hair gleamed under"
3"Rory’s fingers tightened on the"
4"She shoved the door toward"
5"An ivory-handled cane shot into"
6"Wood struck bone-white resin with"
7"Rory leaned her weight against"
8"Lucien’s palm flattened against the"
9"The door swung wide, sliding"
10"He filled the doorway, a"
11"Rain darkened the shoulders of"
12"Lucien stepped inside, the tip"
13"He kicked the door shut"
14"Rory crossed her arms, her"
15"Lucien’s gaze dropped to her"
16"His jaw flexed."
17"He glanced around the cramped"
18"The tabby wound himself around"
19"Lucien didn't flinch."
ratio0.959
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences74
matches
0"As if summoned, Ptolemy hopped"
1"Before she could pull back,"
ratio0.027
50.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"He crouched, his movements fluid despite the stiff knee that required the cane, and scratched behind the cat's notched ear."
1"Lucien leaned in, bracing his free hand on the counter beside her hip, caging her against the humming refrigerator."
2"He pulled his hand back from the counter as if the laminate had burned him."
3"Rory wrapped her legs around his hips, knocking a jar of pens into the sink as she dragged her fingers through his slick hair, ruining the careful style."
7.35% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Rory leaned, her bare heels digging into the threadbare rug"
1"Lucien stepped, the tip of his cane tapping the floorboards"
2"Lucien’s thumb traced, his touch trembling with a restraint that looked painful"
3"He lowered, his forehead resting against hers"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Rory muttered (mutter)"
1"she snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.043
leniency0.087
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.087
82.5521%