Run: 2026-10-13-01M4V1W5NSSEQKW1N0NVNYQ6P4

Run Details

Duration:
31.7s
Cost:
$0.022396
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The shimmering distortion of the Veil snapped shut behind them with the sound of a plucked bowstring. Rory stumbled forward, her boots sinking ankle-deep into plush, violet moss. She caught her balance, blinking against a sudden, overwhelming wash of warm amber light. Above them, the sky stretched out in an unbroken dome of liquid gold, devoid of sun or clouds, yet radiating a heavy, drowsy heat that smelled of caramelized sugar and crushed cloves. Against her collarbone, the Heartstone Pendant gave a final, fading throb of heat before settling into a dull crimson ember against its silver chain. Her left hand dropped to her hip, fingers brushing the hilt of the moonsilver blade. Even through the leather sheath, the Fae weapon radiated a sharp, wintery chill, a stark anchor against the syrupy warmth of the air. "Breathe shallowly, little bird. The air itself is fermented." Nyx’s voice drifted like dry leaves scraping across pavement. The Shade towered beside her, six feet of condensed midnight refusing to yield to the amber glow. Where the golden light hit their shoulders, the edges of their humanoid form frayed into wisps of black smoke, curling and snapping back into place. Faint violet eyes narrowed as Nyx scanned the horizon. "Fermented?" Rory wiped a slick film of humidity from her forehead, the small crescent scar on her left wrist catching the strange light. "It smells like my boss's kitchen during the Lunar New Year rush, just... sweeter. Where are the brimstone pits?" Isolde glided past them, her waist-length silver hair catching the amber radiance like spun glass. The Half-Fae’s bare feet brushed the thick moss, yet the violet fronds did not bend beneath her weight. She left no tracks. Her pale lavender eyes dilated, drinking in the sprawling landscape. "A cage does not need iron bars when the lock is forged from appetite." Isolde tilted her head toward a ridge of twisted, bronze-barked trees. "Welcome to the first table." They moved past the ridge, and the true scale of Dymas unfolded below them. Rory stopped dead. Sprawling vineyards carpeted the rolling hills in geometric perfection, but the vines were thick as pythons, pulsing with a rhythmic, vascular movement. Translucent globes of fruit, some the size of human heads, hung heavy from the boughs. Inside the taut skins of the fruit, luminescent liquids swirled in shades of magenta and gold. Further down the valley, an orchard of bone-white trees wept thick, amber sap into carved alabaster troughs that snaked through the terrain like an irrigation system of pure honey. "It's moving," Rory whispered. She pointed toward the nearest trellis. A vine uncoiled from its wooden post, slithering through the dirt to wrap around a fallen, overripe gourd. Thorns as long as her fingers punctured the rind. Within seconds, the gourd shriveled, sucked dry by the parent plant, which then swelled and blossomed with three new, iridescent flowers. The petals opened with a wet, sighing sound that raised the hairs on Rory’s arms. "Nothing goes to waste in the Prince's larder." Nyx drifted over a patch of turf where the soil looked suspiciously like dark, moist cake crumb. Their shadow-stuff rippled, pulling tight against their frame to avoid touching a cluster of pale, gill-less mushrooms that exhaled puffs of glittering spores. "The ground hungers as much as the guests." Rory stepped carefully, keeping to the flat, grey flagstones of a path that wound deeper into the orchard. The silence of the place pressed against her eardrums, broken only by the low, ubiquitous hum of unseen insects and the occasional wet plop of bursting fruit. Yet, beneath the silence, a low vibration resonated through the soles of her boots. Distant laughter. The clinking of thousands of glasses. "Look at the roots," Rory said, crouching beside one of the bone-white sap trees. She drew the leaf-shaped dagger. The moonsilver gleamed with a faint, stubborn luminescence, rejecting the amber sky. Using the flat of the cold blade, she parted a curtain of weeping moss at the base of the trunk. The bark wasn't wood. Up close, the pale surface showed pores and the faint, bluish trace of veins. Where the sap bled into the alabaster trough, the bark puckered like a healing wound. "Is this...?" Rory swallowed hard, her stomach turning against the rich scent of roasted meats and vanilla that suddenly wafted on the breeze. "The earth remembers those who broke their fast and never stopped," Isolde murmured, drifting to a halt beside Rory. She did not look down at the root. Instead, she plucked a single, crystalline leaf from an overhanging branch. The leaf dissolved on her fingertips into a fine white powder that smelled of salt and copper. "They signed the parchment in London, in Paris, in Rome. Now they feed the roots, or they stir the pots." Nyx solidified, their towering form blocking the amber glare as they leaned over the alabaster trough. Violet eyes reflected in the slow-moving river of golden sap. "Soul-grafted flora. Belphegor’s botanists have grown bold since the seventeenth century. Touch nothing to your lips, Aurora. A single drop of that sap will rewrite your tongue to crave only ash." Rory sheathed the Fae blade, wiping her palm on her jeans even though she hadn't touched the tree. She stood, her bright blue eyes scanning the winding path ahead. The orchard gave way to a manicured garden of staggering proportions. Topiaries shaped like roaring chimeras and weeping angels towered thirty feet high, their leaves dark crimson. Between them, fountains of dark, bubbling wine splashed into basins of green marble. A figure knelt beside one of the fountains. Rory dropped into a crouch behind a bush of bloated, black roses. Nyx melted into the shadow of a chimera topiary, vanishing entirely save for two pinpricks of violet light. Isolde simply stood still in the center of the path, her ethereal form blending into the golden haze like a mirage. The figure at the fountain wore the crisp, white double-breasted jacket of a head chef, though the fabric was stained up to the elbows in violet juice. He held a silver ladle, skimming foam from the wine basin with frantic, jerky movements. A heavy iron chain ran from a collar around his neck, disappearing into the marble base of the fountain. "Needs salt," the chef muttered, his voice cracked and raw. He dipped a finger into the wine, tasted it, and spat onto the moss. "Too sweet. The marrow isn't rendering. If the third course fails, he takes my hands. Needs salt..." He reached into his apron, pulled out a coarse block of pink crystal, and began grating it into the fountain with a rasp that set Rory’s teeth on edge. He wasn't using a grater; he was scraping the salt block against the raw, calloused palm of his own hand, letting skin and crystal fall together into the dark wine. Rory’s fingers tightened on the moonsilver hilt. She took a half-step forward. A tendril of pure darkness lashed out from the topiary, wrapping around her scarred wrist. The contact was freezing, like plunging her arm into black ice. "Look closer at his eyes," Nyx’s wind-whisper voice hissed right beside her ear. Rory froze, squinting through the crimson leaves. The chef turned his head as he reached for a basket of pale, squirming tubers. His eyes were entirely solid gold, devoid of pupil or sclera. A wide, grotesque smile stretched across his face, completely at odds with his frantic muttering and bleeding palm. He hummed a jaunty tavern tune between complaints, thoroughly lost in the ecstasy of his own torment. "Contracted," Nyx breathed, releasing her wrist. The Shade reformed beside her, towering and tense. "His mortal shell is long dead. That is a helbound shade, drunk on the perfection of his craft. Cut his chain, and he will carve you into fillets for interrupting his reduction." "The banquet halls lie beyond the hedge," Isolde said, her voice carrying clearly, though the chef didn't even twitch at the sound. She pointed a pale finger toward an archway woven from living, thorny briars at the far end of the garden. Through the arch, terraced pavilions of black glass and gold filigree rose against the amber sky, teeming with silhouettes. "The music grows loud. The gluttons gather." Rory looked from the bleeding chef to the towering pavilions, the constant, sweet pressure of the realm's air making her temples ache. She adjusted her grip on her dagger, kept her boots squarely on the grey stones, and stepped toward the briar arch.
created_at"2026-10-13T16:35:04.008Z" 10/13/2026, 4:35:04 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Nyx’s wind-whisper voice hissed right [right]"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.55
leniency1
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.091
89.46% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1423
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"suddenly"
2"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
33.24% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1423
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"throb"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"stark"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"rhythmic"
count1
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"resonated"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"crystalline"
count1
11
word"scanning"
count1
12
word"roaring"
count1
13
word"marble"
count2
14
word"crystal"
count2
15
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"throb"
1"chill"
2"stark"
3"warmth"
4"scanned"
5"weight"
6"rhythmic"
7"silence"
8"resonated"
9"stomach"
10"crystalline"
11"scanning"
12"roaring"
13"marble"
14"crystal"
15"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences83
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences92
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1423
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
88.42% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1218
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.23
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Veil1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Fae3
Shade2
Nyx7
Isolde5
Half-Fae1
Dymas1
Rory15
persons
0"Veil"
1"Pendant"
2"Fae"
3"Shade"
4"Nyx"
5"Isolde"
6"Half-Fae"
7"Dymas"
8"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore0.884
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1423
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs34
mean41.85
std22.73
cv0.543
sampleLengths
017
157
262
39
460
542
647
730
814
93
1082
1110
1263
1356
1467
1514
1637
1733
1823
1975
2057
2169
228
2351
2461
2541
2659
2712
2826
2913
3068
3146
3268
3343
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"was stained"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs179
matches
0"was scraping"
1"wasn't using"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences92
ratio0.011
matches
0"He wasn't using a grater; he was scraping the salt block against the raw, calloused palm of his own hand, letting skin and crystal fall together into the dark wine."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1230
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"twisted, bronze-barked trees."
1"crisp, white double-breasted jacket"
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.022764227642276424
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.00894308943089431
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences92
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences92
mean15.47
std7.21
cv0.466
sampleLengths
017
111
214
332
424
515
623
79
89
917
1025
119
1223
1319
1415
1518
164
1710
1825
195
2014
213
2222
2315
2416
2529
264
276
2818
299
3021
3115
3225
3323
348
3518
3627
3714
382
396
4014
415
4212
4320
444
4514
4615
4723
4819
498
75.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.45652173913043476
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners42
82.30% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences81
matches
0"Further down the valley, an"
1"Instead, she plucked a single,"
ratio0.025
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences81
matches
0"She caught her balance, blinking"
1"Her left hand dropped to"
2"She left no tracks."
3"Her pale lavender eyes dilated,"
4"They moved past the ridge,"
5"She pointed toward the nearest"
6"Their shadow-stuff rippled, pulling tight"
7"She drew the leaf-shaped dagger."
8"She did not look down"
9"She stood, her bright blue"
10"He held a silver ladle,"
11"He dipped a finger into"
12"He reached into his apron,"
13"He wasn't using a grater;"
14"She took a half-step forward."
15"His eyes were entirely solid"
16"He hummed a jaunty tavern"
17"She pointed a pale finger"
18"She adjusted her grip on"
ratio0.235
64.94% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences81
matches
0"The shimmering distortion of the"
1"Rory stumbled forward, her boots"
2"She caught her balance, blinking"
3"Her left hand dropped to"
4"Nyx’s voice drifted like dry"
5"The Shade towered beside her,"
6"Rory wiped a slick film"
7"Isolde glided past them, her"
8"The Half-Fae’s bare feet brushed"
9"She left no tracks."
10"Her pale lavender eyes dilated,"
11"Isolde tilted her head toward"
12"They moved past the ridge,"
13"Rory stopped dead."
14"She pointed toward the nearest"
15"A vine uncoiled from its"
16"Thorns as long as her"
17"The petals opened with a"
18"Nyx drifted over a patch"
19"Their shadow-stuff rippled, pulling tight"
ratio0.79
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences81
matches
0"Even through the leather sheath,"
1"Yet, beneath the silence, a"
ratio0.025
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Above them, the sky stretched out in an unbroken dome of liquid gold, devoid of sun or clouds, yet radiating a heavy, drowsy heat that smelled of caramelized su…"
1"Further down the valley, an orchard of bone-white trees wept thick, amber sap into carved alabaster troughs that snaked through the terrain like an irrigation s…"
2"Their shadow-stuff rippled, pulling tight against their frame to avoid touching a cluster of pale, gill-less mushrooms that exhaled puffs of glittering spores."
3"The leaf dissolved on her fingertips into a fine white powder that smelled of salt and copper."
79.55% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"the chef muttered, his voice cracked and raw"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Rory whispered (whisper)"
1"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
2"the chef muttered (mutter)"
3"Nyx’s wind-whisper voice hissed right (hiss)"
4"Nyx breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.35
leniency0.7
rawRatio0.714
effectiveRatio0.5
89.7582%