Run: 2026-10-13-01M4V1X892Y270BETG9PEDAHN4

Run Details

Duration:
29.3s
Cost:
$0.022522
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid back with a heavy metallic clunk, and Rory yanked the door open, a sharp remark about the hour already on her tongue. It died the instant she saw who was standing on the cramped landing. Lucien Moreau filled the doorway, looking entirely out of place against the peeling wallpaper and flickering fluorescent bulb of the stairwell. He wore one of his impeccably tailored charcoal suits, the wool dark and dry despite the London drizzle misting the window behind him. Both of his gloved hands rested atop the ivory handle of his cane. His slicked-back platinum hair caught the jaundiced light, and that unsettling, familiar gaze—one eye warm amber, the other pitch black—locked onto hers. Rory’s hand tightened on the brass doorknob. Her heart executed a traitorously steep drop into her stomach before rebounding against her ribs. "You're at the wrong flat, Luc. I don't live here." "And yet, here you are," Lucien said. His voice was a low, velvet murmur, rough at the edges with the faint cadence of Marseille. "Cat-sitting for Eva while she chases leads in Prague. Which means you are alone, and for once, not running deliveries for Mrs. Cheung." She didn't move from the threshold, blocking his path with all five-foot-six of her frame. "It's past midnight. Whatever information you're brokering, I'm not buying." "I am not selling." He tilted his head down, his mismatched eyes sweeping over her—taking in her bare feet, the oversized Cardiff University sweatshirt, the straight black hair falling loose around her shoulders. Something dark and heavy flickered in the amber eye. "May I come in, *chérie*? Or shall we discuss the blood on my shirt out here where the neighbors can listen?" Rory’s gaze snapped to his torso. Beneath the unbuttoned jacket, the crisp white linen of his dress shirt was marred by a blooming, dark stain along his left ribs. He wasn't leaning on the cane for show tonight; his knuckles were white against the ivory grip, a muscle ticking in his jaw. Swearing under her breath, she stepped back. Lucien moved past her into the cramped living room, bringing the scent of rain, expensive cedarwood cologne, and the metallic tang of copper. As she shut the door and threw all three deadbolts back into place, the thick aroma of roasted cumin and turmeric from the curry house below rose through the floorboards, mingling with the smell of old paper. "Sit," Rory ordered, gesturing toward the only clear space in the room—a worn velvet armchair wedged between towering stacks of occult encyclopedias and loosely rolled scrolls. Lucien eyed a precarious pile of Eva’s research notes on the side table before lowering himself into the chair with a controlled wince. He rested the cane—which Rory knew concealed ten inches of razor-sharp steel—against the Cushion. Ptolemy, Eva’s fat tabby cat, immediately abandoned his perch on the radiator to weave between Lucien’s polished oxfords, purring like a chainsaw. "Traitor," Rory muttered to the cat, crossing into the tiny galley kitchen. She grabbed the first-aid kit from beneath the sink, wet a clean dishcloth with warm water, and returned. Lucien had already shrugged out of his suit jacket and was working on the buttons of his shirt with his left hand. His fingers were stiff, clumsy. Without a word, Rory dropped to her knees on the threadbare rug between his legs and batted his hands away. "Let me," she said, keeping her voice clinical. Cool-headed. That was what she did best—solve problems, assess the angles, keep the emotion locked behind thick glass. Up close, the heat radiating off his half-demon physiology was palpable, a furnace beneath pale skin. She unbuttoned the linen and parted the fabric. A jagged laceration, four inches long and sluggishly weeping dark red blood, scored the taut muscle over his ribs. The edges of the wound were faintly blackened, smelling of ozone. "Avaros iron?" she asked quietly, reaching for the antiseptic wipes. "A cheap imitation," Lucien replied, his breathing shallow as she pressed the wet cloth to his skin to clear the blood. "A collector in Soho thought he could renegotiate my fee after the fact. He was mistaken." "Clearly." Rory tore open an antiseptic packet. As she reached back toward his ribs, the sleeve of her sweatshirt rode up, exposing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. Lucien’s hand shot out, his bare fingers wrapping around her wrist before the wipe could touch him. His skin was scorching. He didn't grip her tightly—he knew better, knew every ugly detail of Evan and the reasons she had fled Wales—but the contact sent a jolt straight up her arm. Slowly, his thumb brushed over the pale crescent scar. "Why did you come to Brick Lane, Luc?" she asked, her voice dropping an octave. She didn't pull her hand back. She couldn't seem to remember how. "You have healers on your payroll in Mayfair. You have a dozen safe houses between Soho and here. Why come to Eva's?" Lucien looked down at her. In the dim light of the cluttered flat, the black eye looked bottomless, the amber one like molten gold. "You haven't answered my calls in three weeks, Aurora." The use of her given name made her stomach twist. "There wasn't anything left to say. You made your position very clear that night at the docks." "I made a calculation," he corrected softly, his thumb still tracing the small curve on her wrist. "You were drawing the attention of things that belong in my world, not yours. Walking away was the logical choice." "I'm not a law student in Cardiff anymore, Lucien. I'm in this world whether you like it or not." Anger flared in her chest, hot and sharp, cutting through the ache she’d been carrying for twenty-one days. "And you didn't just walk away. You shut the door in my face after—after everything, and treated me like one of your liabilities." "Because you are!" The restraint in his voice cracked, just a fraction. He leaned forward, ignoring the pull on his torn ribs, bringing his face inches from hers. "Do you have any idea what you do to my judgment? I have survived in this city for a decade because nobody knows what I value. And then you show up with your bright blue eyes and your reckless mouth, delivering dumplings into the middle of a triad negotiation, and suddenly every enemy I have knows exactly where to aim." Rory stared at him, her breath catching. "That's why you left? Because you were afraid they'd use me?" "I was afraid of what I would burn down if they tried," Lucien whispered. Silence settled over the flat, broken only by the distant rumble of a night bus down on the street and Ptolemy’s steady purring. Rory looked at his mouth, remembering the taste of him in the dark alley behind Silas' bar three weeks ago, the desperate, bruising way he had kissed her right before he told her he never wanted to see her again. She pulled her wrist from his grasp, not to retreat, but to press the antiseptic wipe against his wound. Lucien hissed through his teeth, his head dropping back against the armchair, exposing the long line of his throat. Rory worked quickly, her fingers steady even as her pulse hammered in her ears. She cleaned the scorched flesh, applied a thick layer of burn salve, and taped a sterile gauze pad over his ribs. When she finished, she didn't get up from the floor. Instead, she rested her palms on his knees, looking up at him through the dark fringe of her hair. Lucien lifted his head. The impeccable fixer was gone; he looked exhausted, slightly frayed, and entirely too human. "You're an idiot for someone who speaks four languages," Rory said softly. A ghost of a smile touched the corner of his mouth. "Five, if you count the High Demonic dialect of my father's court." "Five, then." She rose onto her knees, bridging the space between them, and slid her hand up the bare skin of his chest, feeling the rapid, heavy thud of his heart beneath her palm. "And you're still terrible at risk assessment. Leaving me in the dark doesn't keep me safe, Luc. It just makes me angry." His hand came up to cup her jaw, his fingers threading into her black hair. The amber eye burned into hers. "I got into a cab in Soho bleeding through my coat, and I gave the driver this address before I even realized I had spoken it aloud. I tried to stay away from you, *chérie*. I failed." "Good," Rory breathed. She leaned in, and the remaining distance vanished. Lucien groaned low in his throat as his mouth met hers, the kiss neither gentle nor hesitant. It tasted of three weeks of bitter silence and the terrifying relief of giving in. Rory gripped the lapels of his ruined shirt, pulling herself closer between his knees as his other arm wrapped around her waist, hauling her up until she was practically in his lap, careful only of his bandaged left side. When they finally broke apart, both of them breathing hard, Lucien rested his forehead against hers, his eyes closed. "Eva's bed is barely big enough for one person, and half of it is covered in grimoires," Rory murmured against his lips, her fingers tracing the sharp line of his cheekbone. Lucien opened his mismatched eyes, a dark, familiar heat settling into his gaze. "Then I suggest we clear off the books."
created_at"2026-10-13T16:35:39.44Z" 10/13/2026, 4:35:39 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"she asked quietly [quietly]"
1"he corrected softly [softly]"
2"his voice cracked just [just]"
3"Rory said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.545
leniency1
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.222
71.93% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1603
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"loosely"
count1
1
adverb"tightly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count2
5
adverb"suddenly"
count1
6
adverb"quickly"
count1
7
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"loosely"
1"tightly"
2"slowly"
3"very"
4"softly"
5"suddenly"
6"quickly"
7"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
59.45% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1603
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"stomach"
count2
2
word"velvet"
count2
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"palpable"
count1
5
word"tracing"
count2
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"stomach"
2"velvet"
3"flickered"
4"palpable"
5"tracing"
6"silence"
7"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences78
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seem to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen60
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1593
ratio0.001
matches
0"chérie"
1"chérie"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
84.95% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount1153
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.3
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory15
Moreau1
London1
Marseille1
Cardiff1
University1
Lucien15
Eva2
Cushion1
Cool-headed1
Evan1
Wales1
Anger1
Silence1
Ptolemy2
persons
0"Rory"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Eva"
4"Evan"
5"Anger"
6"Silence"
7"Ptolemy"
places
0"London"
1"Marseille"
2"Cardiff"
3"Wales"
globalScore0.85
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
74.45% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.255
wordCount1593
matches
0"not to retreat, but to press the antiseptic wipe against his wound"
1"neither gentle nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean38.85
std21.14
cv0.544
sampleLengths
039
179
232
347
425
563
652
77
860
926
1059
1130
1247
1326
1454
1510
1637
1730
1850
199
2049
2133
2227
2337
2460
2588
2618
2714
2863
2938
3064
3118
3212
3323
3456
3558
363
3779
3819
3931
4021
96.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences78
matches
0"was marred"
1"was gone"
55.07% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs184
matches
0"was standing"
1"wasn't leaning"
2"was working"
3"was scorching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences94
ratio0.085
matches
0"His slicked-back platinum hair caught the jaundiced light, and that unsettling, familiar gaze—one eye warm amber, the other pitch black—locked onto hers."
1"\"I am not selling.\" He tilted his head down, his mismatched eyes sweeping over her—taking in her bare feet, the oversized Cardiff University sweatshirt, the straight black hair falling loose around her shoulders."
2"He wasn't leaning on the cane for show tonight; his knuckles were white against the ivory grip, a muscle ticking in his jaw."
3"\"Sit,\" Rory ordered, gesturing toward the only clear space in the room—a worn velvet armchair wedged between towering stacks of occult encyclopedias and loosely rolled scrolls."
4"He rested the cane—which Rory knew concealed ten inches of razor-sharp steel—against the Cushion."
5"That was what she did best—solve problems, assess the angles, keep the emotion locked behind thick glass."
6"He didn't grip her tightly—he knew better, knew every ugly detail of Evan and the reasons she had fled Wales—but the contact sent a jolt straight up her arm."
7"The impeccable fixer was gone; he looked exhausted, slightly frayed, and entirely too human."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount950
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.03263157894736842
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.015789473684210527
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean16.95
std9.68
cv0.571
sampleLengths
026
113
221
323
413
522
67
715
810
97
1017
1123
1215
1310
1433
159
1621
176
1823
1923
207
2123
2237
2326
2423
2514
2622
2712
2818
2922
305
3120
328
331
3417
3516
368
3719
3811
3910
4021
4116
427
4323
4417
454
4629
479
4815
496
71.28% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.44680851063829785
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners42
90.09% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences74
matches
0"Slowly, his thumb brushed over"
1"Instead, she rested her palms"
ratio0.027
74.05% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences74
matches
0"It died the instant she"
1"He wore one of his"
2"His slicked-back platinum hair caught"
3"Her heart executed a traitorously"
4"His voice was a low,"
5"She didn't move from the"
6"He tilted his head down,"
7"He wasn't leaning on the"
8"He rested the cane—which Rory"
9"She grabbed the first-aid kit"
10"His fingers were stiff, clumsy."
11"she said, keeping her voice"
12"She unbuttoned the linen and"
13"she asked quietly, reaching for"
14"His skin was scorching."
15"He didn't grip her tightly—he"
16"she asked, her voice dropping"
17"She didn't pull her hand"
18"She couldn't seem to remember"
19"he corrected softly, his thumb"
ratio0.365
41.08% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences74
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back"
1"It died the instant she"
2"Lucien Moreau filled the doorway,"
3"He wore one of his"
4"Both of his gloved hands"
5"His slicked-back platinum hair caught"
6"Rory’s hand tightened on the"
7"Her heart executed a traitorously"
8"His voice was a low,"
9"She didn't move from the"
10"He tilted his head down,"
11"Something dark and heavy flickered"
12"Rory’s gaze snapped to his"
13"He wasn't leaning on the"
14"Lucien moved past her into"
15"Rory ordered, gesturing toward the"
16"Lucien eyed a precarious pile"
17"He rested the cane—which Rory"
18"Ptolemy, Eva’s fat tabby cat,"
19"Rory muttered to the cat,"
ratio0.838
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Lucien hissed through his teeth, his head dropping back against the armchair, exposing the long line of his throat."
1"Rory gripped the lapels of his ruined shirt, pulling herself closer between his knees as his other arm wrapped around her waist, hauling her up until she was pr…"
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she asked, her voice dropping an octave"
1"he corrected softly, his thumb still tracing the small curve on her wrist"
2"Rory murmured, her fingers tracing the sharp line of his cheekbone"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Rory ordered (order)"
1"Rory muttered (mutter)"
2"he corrected softly (correct)"
3"Lucien whispered (whisper)"
4"Rory breathed (breathe)"
5"Rory murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.364
leniency0.727
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.364
75.1430%