Run: 2026-10-13-01M4V1Z5Q0Z7WWKY0G5418HWYZ

Run Details

Duration:
29.1s
Cost:
$0.022522
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid back with a heavy, metallic clunk that vibrated right through Rory’s palm. She kept her foot braced against the bottom of the door, a habit left over from Cardiff and Evan, though if something from London’s underworld really wanted into Eva’s flat, a size-six boot wouldn’t do much to stop it. She pulled the door open two inches. The scent of Brick Lane’s rain-slicked pavement and the rich, cumin-heavy steam from the curry house downstairs rushed into the cramped entryway, immediately colliding with something entirely out of place: expensive cedarwood cologne and the sharp, ozone tang of Avaros magic. Lucien Moreau stood on the narrow landing. For three weeks, Rory had rehearsed what she would say the next time she saw him. She had a whole mental file of cutting, cool-headed remarks organized like one of her father’s legal briefs. Now, looking at him through the gap in the door, every single word evaporated. He looked immaculate, which instantly irritated her. While the London drizzle had plastered her straight black hair to her temples during her evening shift for the Golden Empress, the rain seemed to have politely avoided Lucien’s tailored charcoal coat. His platinum blond hair was slicked back, not a strand out of place, and his mismatched eyes—one warm amber, the other pitch, bottomless black—fixed on her face with an intensity that made her stomach drop. "You're at the wrong flat, Luc," Rory said, keeping her voice steady. "I live above Silas’s bar. Eva isn't here." "I am aware of where you live, *chérie*," Lucien murmured, the low rasp of his Marseille accent curling around the words. "I am also aware that Silas’s wards are currently intact, whereas your friend’s charming little fortress has a courier from the Golden Empress eating leftover noodles in the kitchen." Rory’s fingers tightened on the edge of the door. Her left wrist brushed the wood, the small crescent-shaped scar itching the way it always did when her pulse spiked. "I'm house-sitting. Ptolemy needed feeding." As if summoned by his name, the fat tabby weaved between Rory’s ankles and let out a demanding yowl, entirely failing as a guard cat. Lucien’s gaze dropped to the feline, then rose back to Rory’s bright blue eyes. The faint, professional smirk he wore for the underworld’s worst monsters wasn't there tonight. He looked tired. And beneath the impeccable tailoring, he was leaning just a fraction too heavily on his ivory-handled cane. Rory’s cool, logical brain did the math in half a second. The slight tension around his mouth. The way his left hand stayed tucked inside his coat pocket, pressing against his ribs. The fact that an information broker who guarded his neutrality like a dragon guarded gold had walked into East London unannounced at midnight. She cursed under her breath, stepped back, and pulled the door open. Lucien didn't move for a beat, as if surprised she hadn't slammed it in his face. Then he stepped over the threshold, the tip of his cane clicking softly against the floorboards. The cramped one-bedroom flat shrank the moment he entered. Every surface in Eva’s living room was buried under precarious towers of leather-bound books, unrolled scrolls, and frantically scribbled research notes, leaving only a narrow path toward the kitchenette. Lucien navigated the paper labyrinth with practiced grace, though Rory caught the microscopic hitch in his breath when he pivoted to let her shut the door. She threw all three deadbolts. The silence that followed was thick, punctuated only by the hum of the refrigerator and the distant bass of a car passing on Brick Lane. "Take the coat off," Rory said, turning to face him. Lucien raised a pale eyebrow. "We have not spoken since the docks, Aurora, and you are already demanding I undress?" "Don't call me Aurora, and don't be an idiot. You're bleeding." The amusement faded from his heterochromatic eyes. "It is nothing. A disagreement over a tariff in Soho. Easily resolved." "If it was easily resolved, you would have gone home to your overpriced townhouse in Mayfair instead of climbing three flights of stairs that smell like vindaloo." She crossed her arms, holding her ground in the narrow space between a stack of Latin grimoires and a sagging velvet armchair. "Why are you here, Lucien?" He looked at her then—really looked at her—and the air in the room seemed to thin. That was the dangerous thing about Lucien. With Evan, anger had been loud, a hurricane of slammed doors and raised fists. With Lucien, everything was quiet, razor-sharp, and terrifyingly focused. Three weeks ago at the docks, after they’d barely survived a trap set by a rogue faction from Avaros, he had pulled her against his chest in the pouring rain, his mouth a millimeter from hers, his black eye swallowing the dark. And then he had stepped back, told her she was a liability to his business, and walked away. It had hurt more than she cared to admit to anyone, even Eva. "I received a piece of information tonight," Lucien said quietly. He reached into his breast pocket—wincing slightly as the fabric pulled across his torso—and withdrew a folded slip of heavy cream paper. "A bounty has been placed on a human woman matching your description. Black hair, blue eyes, five-foot-six. The client was rather specific about the scar on your wrist." Rory’s throat went dry. She didn't take the paper. "From the docks?" "Yes. It appears our associate did not appreciate your rather unorthodox method of dropping a shipping container on his brother." "It was out-of-the-box thinking," she muttered defensively, though her mind was already racing, cataloging exits, ward strengths, and routes back to Silas’s bar. "If you came to drop off a warning, you could have sent a runner. Or a text." "A runner can be intercepted." "And a text?" Lucien’s jaw tightened. His knuckles went white against the ivory handle of his cane, right above the seam where Rory knew a thin, lethal blade was concealed. "A text would not confirm that you were still breathing." The words hung between them, heavy and raw. Rory stared at him, her heart hammering against her ribs. "You said I was a liability, Luc. You made it very clear that our arrangement was strictly professional, and that it was over." "I lied." The admission was so simple, so devoid of his usual silk-tongued diplomacy, that it stole the breath right out of her lungs. Lucien took a step closer, invading the small pocket of space she had claimed. Ptolemy chirped indignantly from atop a pile of scrolls and leaped down, abandoning them entirely. Rory couldn't step back without tumbling over a stack of folklore texts, so she tilted her chin up, refusing to cower. "Why?" she whispered. "Because I am half-demon, *chérie*, and my kind are possessive, selfish creatures by design," Lucien said, his voice dropping to a rough velvet purr that sent a shiver straight down her spine. He raised his free hand, hovering just beside her cheek without touching her, giving her the choice. Always giving her the choice. "Because at the docks, when that warehouse came down, my first thought was not of my network, or my reputation, or my life. It was of you. And in my line of work, caring for someone is the fastest way to put them in a grave." Rory looked from his amber eye to the black one, seeing the war playing out behind them. He wasn't cold. He had never been cold. He had been terrified—not for himself, but of what his world would do to a twenty-five-year-old law school dropout who delivered takeaway for a living. Slowly, Rory uncrossed her arms. Instead of leaning into his raised hand, she reached out and took the lapels of his charcoal coat, her fingers brushing the fine wool. "My father is an Irish barrister, and my mother taught secondary school in Cardiff," Rory said softly, holding his gaze. "I know how to spot a terrible argument when I hear one. If I’m already on a bounty list, staying away from me doesn't keep me safe. It just makes us both miserable." Lucien let out a breath that sounded half like a laugh, half like a groan. His hand finally closed the distance, his long, cool fingers cradling her jaw, his thumb brushing across her cheekbone. "You are infuriatingly logical, Rory Carter." "I try." She slid her hands from his lapels to the buttons of his coat, undoing them with steady, deliberate movements. When she parted the fabric, a dark, spreading stain bloomed across the crisp white linen of his shirt, just beneath his left ribs. "Sit down before you ruin Eva’s carpet. I know where she keeps the thread and the antiseptic." Lucien didn't move toward the armchair. His thumb traced the corner of her lower lip, his gaze darkening with a heat that had nothing to do with Avaros and everything to do with the three weeks they’d spent apart. "In a moment," he murmured, leaning down until his forehead rested against hers, the scent of rain and cedar wrapping entirely around her. "Let me look at you first." Rory closed her eyes, her left hand coming up to rest over his wrist, the crescent scar pressing against the steady, rapid beat of his pulse. She didn't push him toward the chair, and for a long time, neither of them said a word.
created_at"2026-10-13T16:36:42.351Z" 10/13/2026, 4:36:42 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
12.50% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Lucien said quietly [quietly]"
1"she muttered defensively [defensively]"
2"Rory said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.344
leniency0.688
rawRatio0.273
effectiveRatio0.188
77.88% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1582
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
1
adverb"softly"
count2
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"softly"
2"slightly"
3"very"
4"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.11% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1582
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"vibrated"
count1
1
word"intensity"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"tension"
count1
5
word"navigated"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"eyebrow"
count1
8
word"resolved"
count2
9
word"velvet"
count2
10
word"racing"
count1
11
word"silk"
count1
12
word"down her spine"
count1
13
word"grave"
count1
14
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"vibrated"
1"intensity"
2"stomach"
3"pulse"
4"tension"
5"navigated"
6"silence"
7"eyebrow"
8"resolved"
9"velvet"
10"racing"
11"silk"
12"down her spine"
13"grave"
14"traced"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
1
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
1"knuckles went white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences76
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences97
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1575
ratio0.001
matches
0"chérie"
1"chérie"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
78.03% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions55
wordCount1181
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.44
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory17
Cardiff1
Evan2
London3
Eva3
Brick2
Lane2
Avaros3
Moreau1
Golden1
Empress1
Lucien15
Marseille1
East1
Latin1
Silas1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Evan"
2"Eva"
3"Moreau"
4"Lucien"
5"Silas"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
4"Avaros"
5"Marseille"
6"East"
globalScore0.78
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.635
wordCount1575
matches
0"not for himself, but of what his world would do to a twenty-five-year-old law sch"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean38.41
std26.24
cv0.683
sampleLengths
055
148
27
348
474
520
650
734
873
955
1012
1196
1230
1310
1420
1511
1619
1754
18106
1913
2060
2112
2220
2340
245
253
2637
2741
282
2922
3050
313
32100
3350
3429
3553
3640
3761
3839
3929
4044
86.80% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences76
matches
0"was slicked"
1"was buried"
2"was concealed"
3"been terrified"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs191
matches
0"was already racing"
25.04% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences97
ratio0.041
matches
0"His platinum blond hair was slicked back, not a strand out of place, and his mismatched eyes—one warm amber, the other pitch, bottomless black—fixed on her face with an intensity that made her stomach drop."
1"He looked at her then—really looked at her—and the air in the room seemed to thin."
2"He reached into his breast pocket—wincing slightly as the fabric pulled across his torso—and withdrew a folded slip of heavy cream paper."
3"He had been terrified—not for himself, but of what his world would do to a twenty-five-year-old law school dropout who delivered takeaway for a living."
76.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1201
adjectiveStacks4
stackExamples
0"rich, cumin-heavy steam"
1"cutting, cool-headed remarks"
2"small crescent-shaped scar"
3"usual silk-tongued diplomacy,"
adverbCount47
adverbRatio0.03913405495420483
lyAdverbCount23
lyAdverbRatio0.019150707743547043
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences97
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences97
mean16.24
std10.44
cv0.643
sampleLengths
016
139
27
341
47
516
618
714
87
932
1035
1112
128
1321
1429
159
1620
175
1825
1914
2014
213
2217
2311
246
2515
2623
2712
2816
2916
309
3129
3226
335
3425
3510
365
3715
3811
397
4012
4149
425
4316
447
4514
469
4742
4818
4913
57.04% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3917525773195876
totalSentences97
uniqueOpeners38
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences75
matches
0"Then he stepped over the"
1"Always giving her the choice."
2"Slowly, Rory uncrossed her arms."
3"Instead of leaning into his"
ratio0.053
86.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences75
matches
0"She kept her foot braced"
1"She pulled the door open"
2"She had a whole mental"
3"He looked immaculate, which instantly"
4"His platinum blond hair was"
5"Her left wrist brushed the"
6"He looked tired."
7"She cursed under her breath,"
8"She threw all three deadbolts."
9"She crossed her arms, holding"
10"He looked at her then—really"
11"It had hurt more than"
12"He reached into his breast"
13"She didn't take the paper."
14"she muttered defensively, though her"
15"His knuckles went white against"
16"He raised his free hand,"
17"He wasn't cold."
18"He had never been cold."
19"He had been terrified—not for"
ratio0.333
53.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences75
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back"
1"She kept her foot braced"
2"She pulled the door open"
3"The scent of Brick Lane’s"
4"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
5"She had a whole mental"
6"He looked immaculate, which instantly"
7"His platinum blond hair was"
8"Rory said, keeping her voice"
9"Lucien murmured, the low rasp"
10"Rory’s fingers tightened on the"
11"Her left wrist brushed the"
12"Lucien’s gaze dropped to the"
13"The faint, professional smirk he"
14"He looked tired."
15"Rory’s cool, logical brain did"
16"The slight tension around his"
17"The way his left hand"
18"The fact that an information"
19"She cursed under her breath,"
ratio0.813
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences75
matches
0"Now, looking at him through"
1"While the London drizzle had"
2"As if summoned by his"
ratio0.04
34.16% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"His platinum blond hair was slicked back, not a strand out of place, and his mismatched eyes—one warm amber, the other pitch, bottomless black—fixed on her face…"
1"As if summoned by his name, the fat tabby weaved between Rory’s ankles and let out a demanding yowl, entirely failing as a guard cat."
2"The fact that an information broker who guarded his neutrality like a dragon guarded gold had walked into East London unannounced at midnight."
3"The silence that followed was thick, punctuated only by the hum of the refrigerator and the distant bass of a car passing on Brick Lane."
4"He had been terrified—not for himself, but of what his world would do to a twenty-five-year-old law school dropout who delivered takeaway for a living."
5"His hand finally closed the distance, his long, cool fingers cradling her jaw, his thumb brushing across her cheekbone."
6"His thumb traced the corner of her lower lip, his gaze darkening with a heat that had nothing to do with Avaros and everything to do with the three weeks they’d…"
34.09% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Rory said, turning to face him"
1"she muttered defensively, though her mind was already racing, cataloging exits, ward strengths, and routes back to Silas’s bar"
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
1"she muttered defensively (mutter)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.281
leniency0.563
rawRatio0.444
effectiveRatio0.25
78.5437%