| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.375 | | leniency | 0.75 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1144 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 34.44% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1144 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "echo" | | 2 | "gloom" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "rhythmic" | | 6 | "throb" | | 7 | "furrowed" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "lilt" | | 11 | "glistening" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "knuckles turned white" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes narrowed" | | 1 | "knuckles turned white" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 104 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 109 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 8 | | markdownWords | 19 | | totalWords | 1145 | | ratio | 0.017 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde — The Grove, Midnight" | | 1 | "A Hel portal." | | 2 | "Snap." | | 3 | "Leave the bag and go." | | 4 | "pat" | | 5 | "Pat. Pat." | | 6 | "Pat." | | 7 | "zip" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 91.65% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 1114 | | uniqueNames | 19 | | maxNameDensity | 1.17 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | November | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Hel | 3 | | Fae | 1 | | Isolde | 2 | | Silence | 1 | | Rory | 13 | | Welsh | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Roath | 1 | | Evan | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Silence" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Carter" | | 5 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "Golden" | | 4 | "Grove" | | 5 | "Isolde" | | 6 | "Cardiff" | | 7 | "Roath" |
| | globalScore | 0.917 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like dry leaves caught in a grate" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1145 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 52 | | mean | 22.02 | | std | 16.14 | | cv | 0.733 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 53 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 59 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 51 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 33 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 50 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 33 | | 18 | 1 | | 19 | 32 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 44 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 40 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 60 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 42 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 36 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 28 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 34 | | 44 | 40 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 36 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 98.52% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "were flattened" | | 1 | "been dragged" | | 2 | "being opened" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 174 | | matches | | |
| 90.43% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 109 | | ratio | 0.018 | | matches | | 0 | "The receipt taped to the bag read *Isolde — The Grove, Midnight*." | | 1 | "It sounded thicker, wetter—like a green branch twisted until the fibres gave way." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1118 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.024150268336314847 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006261180679785331 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 109 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 109 | | mean | 10.5 | | std | 6.98 | | cv | 0.665 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 2 | | 2 | 8 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 2 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 26 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 1 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 26 |
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| 63.30% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.41284403669724773 | | totalSentences | 109 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the persistent rustle of" | | 1 | "Then, from the opposite side" | | 2 | "Only the pitch had dropped." |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boot heels sank into" | | 1 | "It pressed against her eardrums," | | 2 | "She lifted the insulated delivery" | | 3 | "Her voice died three feet" | | 4 | "She had not expected wild" | | 5 | "They blanketed the clearing, their" | | 6 | "She shoved the phone back" | | 7 | "She walked toward the centre" | | 8 | "She reached inside the collar" | | 9 | "Her bright blue eyes narrowed," | | 10 | "It sounded thicker, wetter—like a" | | 11 | "It moved without bouncing." | | 12 | "It was a long, rattling" | | 13 | "Her heart hammered against her" | | 14 | "She backed up a step." | | 15 | "Her heel struck something solid." | | 16 | "Her boot rested against the" | | 17 | "She hadn't walked backward in" | | 18 | "She had walked straight into" | | 19 | "She slipped the red strap" |
| | ratio | 0.297 | |
| 97.36% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 66 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory stepped between the ancient" | | 1 | "Her boot heels sank into" | | 2 | "It pressed against her eardrums," | | 3 | "She lifted the insulated delivery" | | 4 | "Her voice died three feet" | | 5 | "The air swallowed the syllables" | | 6 | "The receipt taped to the" | | 7 | "Yu-Fei had paid her triple" | | 8 | "Rory had expected teenagers drinking" | | 9 | "She had not expected wild" | | 10 | "They blanketed the clearing, their" | | 11 | "A sickly, overripe sweetness hung" | | 12 | "Rory shifted the strap of" | | 13 | "The beam cut a narrow" | | 14 | "Rory pulled her phone from" | | 15 | "The screen glared, blindingly bright." | | 16 | "The clock read 00:03." | | 17 | "A muscle feathered in her" | | 18 | "She shoved the phone back" | | 19 | "She walked toward the centre" |
| | ratio | 0.725 | |
| 54.95% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "While she watched, the digits" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 69.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 49 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "A slow, rhythmic throb of heat, like a fevered heartbeat, accompanied by a dull inner glow that stained her fingers the colour of a fresh bruise." | | 1 | "Twenty yards away, the bluebells were flattened in a wide, winding trough, as if a heavy sack had been dragged through them seconds ago." | | 2 | "Yet the boundary oak stood right behind her shoulder, its carved, weathered grooves slick with a black moisture that hadn't been there when she entered." | | 3 | "It was her mother's voice, thick with the Welsh lilt of Cardiff, warbling as though spoken through a mouthful of water." | | 4 | "She stared at the wall of blackthorn, watching her own breath plume white in air that had remained mild and spring-like only thirty seconds before." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 25.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "the voice repeated (repeat)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 8 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |