Run: 2026-10-13-01M4V1ZQDPF9Y9WSP90AF858E8

Run Details

Duration:
25.0s
Cost:
$0.019564
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Cold rain needles stung Harlow’s cheekbones. She vaulted a toppled wheelie bin, her boots splashing through an oil-slicked puddle that reflected the amber glow of Camden’s streetlights. Ahead, a shadow detached itself from the brick wall of a shuttered pub. Tomás Herrera. Harlow lengthened her stride, her lungs burning with the damp night air. Eighteen years on the Met, and her knees still handled the concrete impact without complaint. She wiped water from her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair, locking her brown eyes on the leather medical bag bouncing against Herrera’s hip. "Stop! Police!" Herrera didn't look back. He vaulted a low iron railing, his short dark curls plastered to his forehead. The collar of his jacket flared open, and a silver Saint Christopher medallion flashed against his olive skin before disappearing beneath his chin. Harlow took the railing in a clean, military-precise hurtle. She landed on the balls of her feet and snatched the radio clipped to her lapel. "Control, this is DS Quinn. In foot pursuit of a male suspect heading north off Chalk Farm Road. Requesting units to intercept at the canal." Static hissed from the receiver, broken and useless. She cursed, releasing the button. A glance at the worn leather watch on her left wrist gave her the time: 02:14. No pedestrian traffic to block him. Just slick cobblestones, overflowing gutters, and the rumble of distant thunder. Herrera cut left into a narrow cul-de-sac that reeked of rotting cabbage and wet soot. Harlow rounded the corner two seconds behind him, her baton already drawn and extended with a sharp metallic snap. The alley ended at a chained concertina gate fronting a derelict brick structure. Faded red tiles lined the entryway, framing a rusted London Underground roundel whose station name had been pried off decades ago. Herrera slammed against the iron bars. He threw a frantic look over his shoulder, his warm brown eyes wide. He tugged at the heavy padlock, his left sleeve riding up to expose the jagged pale scar running the length of his forearm. Harlow slowed to a deliberate walk, blocking the alley's mouth. Rain dripped from her sharp jawline. She kept her baton angled down, ready to strike. "Nowhere to go, Tommy. Drop the bag." Herrera’s chest heaved. He pressed his back against the rusted iron, clutching the leather strap of his kit with white-knuckled fingers. "I didn't steal anything, Detective. Leave it alone. Turn around and walk back to Soho." "You bolted from the back door of The Raven's Nest the second you saw my warrant card. Innocent men finish their pints." "The NHS struck me off two years ago. Carrying suture kits and restricted painkillers looks bad on paper." "You aren't carrying paracetamol in that satchel." Harlow took two measured steps forward. "Three years ago, DS Morris bled out in a warehouse two miles from here. The coroner found traces of an unknown compound in his wounds. The exact same compound forensics pulled from a stained rag behind Silas' bar last week. Open the bag." Herrera swallowed hard. His fingers slipped from the bag's strap and dived into his trouser pocket. "Hands where I can see them!" Harlow lunged forward, raising the baton. Herrera pulled out a flat, circular disc the colour of old ivory. He jammed it into a hollow recess in the brickwork beside the rusted gate. The air pressure in the alley plummeted. Harlow’s ears popped. The heavy padlock didn't click open; it dissolved into a swirl of grey ash. The iron gate swung inward without a screech, revealing a spiral staircase descending into thick, violet-tinged gloom. Harlow froze mid-stride, her boot hovering over a puddle. A tall figure stepped out from the shadows of the stairwell. A heavy wool coat hid the doorman's frame, and a wide-brimmed hat shadowed his face, save for a pair of eyes that reflected the streetlamp like a cat's. He extended a gloved palm. Herrera slapped the pale disc into the doorman's hand. "Bone's good," the doorman rasped, his voice grinding like gravel under a tyre. "Full moon's three nights off. You're cutting your supply runs close, Doctor." "Had an unscheduled detour." Herrera slipped past the giant and started down the steps. "Herrera! Halt!" Harlow sprinted the remaining ten feet. She reached the threshold just as the iron gate swung shut. She threw her weight against the bars, expecting the cold bite of rusted metal. Instead, a jolt of static electricity blasted through her palms, knocking her back a step. Her fingers tingled, numb to the knuckles. Through the iron lattice, the stairwell vanished. Solid brick replaced the empty space, covered in soggy concert posters and fresh graffiti. Harlow stared at the wall. Her breath plumed in the cold air. She dropped her gaze to the wet pavement beside her right boot. Half-submerged in a puddle of black rainwater lay a second ivory disc. It must have fallen from Herrera's pocket when he yanked the first one out. She crouched and picked it up. The material wasn't plastic or wood. Fine porous grain ran through the centre, cold and heavy in her palm. Bone. Carved with concentric rings that made her eyes ache if she stared straight at them. Her radio crackled to life, the signal suddenly crystal clear. "DS Quinn, this is Control. Copy your last? We lost your GPS ping for a moment. Over." Harlow looked from the radio to the recess in the damp brickwork. Morris's lifeless face flashed in her mind—the bloodless skin, the shattered service weapon, the closed investigation file stamped *Unexplained*. She didn't reach for the radio button. Harlow stood, her posture snapping back to rigid military precision. She pressed the bone token into the stone slot. The graffiti-covered brick shimmered like heat haze over summer tarmac. The illusion peeled back, exposing the rusted iron gate and the giant in the wool coat. The doorman looked down at her. His nose twitched, nostrils flaring as he took in the scent of wet wool and gun oil. "Met copper," the giant growled, blocking the stairs. "You're off your beat." Harlow didn't blink. She plucked the bone token from the wall and held it up between two fingers. "Entry requirement met. Step aside, or I'll haul you in for obstructing an officer." The doorman let out a dry, rattling laugh that smelled of sulphur. He stepped back into the alcove, sweeping an arm toward the spiral stairs. "Your funeral, Detective. The Veil Market doesn't recognise the Queen's peace." Harlow holstered her baton, though she left the strap unclipped. She stepped past the doorman and descended into the earth. The spiral stairs wound down far deeper than the standard Northern Line platforms. The damp smell of London clay gave way to a thick cocktail of ozone, burnt sage, and copper. Whispering voices echoed up from the shaft, growing into a dull roar of haggling crowds. She exited the stairwell onto a wide, tiled platform. The abandoned Tube station stretched out before her, bathed in the glow of floating glass orbs filled with bioluminescent green liquid. Rusted tracks ran down the centre pit, bridged by wooden planks that connected two platforms crammed with canvas tents and iron cages. Shoppers brushed past her. A woman in a pinstripe suit haggled with a vendor whose skin had the grey, pebbled texture of river stone. Across the tracks, an apothecary weighed violet powder on brass scales, surrounded by jars of preserved organs that twitched in their brine. Ahead, a flash of dark curls bobbed through the crowd near an archaic brass kiosk. Herrera. Harlow adjusted the collar of her jacket, hiding her radio, and stepped off the platform edge into the press of bodies.
created_at"2026-10-13T16:37:00.483Z" 10/13/2026, 4:37:00 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.10% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1282
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1282
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"structure"
count1
1
word"measured"
count1
2
word"tinged"
count1
3
word"gloom"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"crystal"
count1
6
word"shattered"
count1
7
word"shimmered"
count1
8
word"standard"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"structure"
1"measured"
2"tinged"
3"gloom"
4"weight"
5"crystal"
6"shattered"
7"shimmered"
8"standard"
9"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences92
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1281
ratio0.001
matches
0"Unexplained"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
75.09% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount1068
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.5
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow16
Camden1
Herrera12
Met1
Saint1
Christopher1
London2
Underground1
Northern1
Line1
Tube1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Camden"
2"Herrera"
3"Saint"
4"Christopher"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.751
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1281
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean24.63
std13.74
cv0.558
sampleLengths
040
12
249
32
441
525
625
746
834
934
1042
1125
127
1321
1415
1522
1618
1756
1816
1912
2026
2141
229
2344
249
2525
2614
278
2847
2921
3024
3126
3241
3310
3417
3531
367
3719
3826
3923
4012
4118
4214
4325
4411
4520
4646
479
4843
4946
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"been pried"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs184
matches(empty)
87.91% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences104
ratio0.019
matches
0"The heavy padlock didn't click open; it dissolved into a swirl of grey ash."
1"Morris's lifeless face flashed in her mind—the bloodless skin, the shattered service weapon, the closed investigation file stamped *Unexplained*."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1081
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"clean, military-precise hurtle."
1"thick, violet-tinged gloom."
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.01572617946345976
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0018501387604070306
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean12.32
std6.57
cv0.533
sampleLengths
06
121
213
32
412
515
622
72
84
914
1023
119
1216
1325
148
155
1616
176
1811
1915
2019
2113
2221
236
2413
2523
2610
276
289
297
303
3118
3215
3322
3418
3513
3643
373
3813
3912
4012
4114
427
433
4414
4517
469
4711
4828
495
62.18% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.41346153846153844
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners43
74.91% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences89
matches
0"Just slick cobblestones, overflowing gutters,"
1"Instead, a jolt of static"
ratio0.022
98.65% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences89
matches
0"She vaulted a toppled wheelie"
1"She wiped water from her"
2"He vaulted a low iron"
3"She landed on the balls"
4"She cursed, releasing the button."
5"He threw a frantic look"
6"He tugged at the heavy"
7"She kept her baton angled"
8"He pressed his back against"
9"His fingers slipped from the"
10"He jammed it into a"
11"He extended a gloved palm."
12"She reached the threshold just"
13"She threw her weight against"
14"Her fingers tingled, numb to"
15"Her breath plumed in the"
16"She dropped her gaze to"
17"It must have fallen from"
18"She crouched and picked it"
19"Her radio crackled to life,"
ratio0.303
44.27% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences89
matches
0"She vaulted a toppled wheelie"
1"Harlow lengthened her stride, her"
2"She wiped water from her"
3"Herrera didn't look back."
4"He vaulted a low iron"
5"The collar of his jacket"
6"Harlow took the railing in"
7"She landed on the balls"
8"Static hissed from the receiver,"
9"She cursed, releasing the button."
10"A glance at the worn"
11"Herrera cut left into a"
12"Harlow rounded the corner two"
13"The alley ended at a"
14"Herrera slammed against the iron"
15"He threw a frantic look"
16"He tugged at the heavy"
17"Harlow slowed to a deliberate"
18"Rain dripped from her sharp"
19"She kept her baton angled"
ratio0.831
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
92.73% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences57
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She vaulted a toppled wheelie bin, her boots splashing through an oil-slicked puddle that reflected the amber glow of Camden’s streetlights."
1"Herrera cut left into a narrow cul-de-sac that reeked of rotting cabbage and wet soot."
2"A heavy wool coat hid the doorman's frame, and a wide-brimmed hat shadowed his face, save for a pair of eyes that reflected the streetlamp like a cat's."
3"Across the tracks, an apothecary weighed violet powder on brass scales, surrounded by jars of preserved organs that twitched in their brine."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"the doorman rasped, his voice grinding like gravel under a tyre"
94.44% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"the giant growled (growl)"
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.056
leniency0.111
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.111
87.2318%