Run: 2026-10-13-01M4V20ZGZ9THE9GGHVBTCXESS

Run Details

Duration:
34.4s
Cost:
$0.018934
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory stepped between the ancient oak standing stones, leaving the damp autumn chill of Richmond Park behind. Silence hit her first. Not the peaceful quiet of a London park after dark, where distant traffic hummed like a low current, but a heavy, pressurized vacuum. It plugged her ears. She swallowed to pop them, her boots crushing bluebells and wild primroses that had no business blooming in November. Beneath the soles of her shoes, the petals didn't just bruise; they released a thick, cloying scent of overripe peaches mixed with copper. She checked the watch above the pale, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. The second hand twitched backward, stuck between the three and the two, before freezing altogether. "Isolde?" Her voice dropped dead inches from her mouth. The air refused to carry it. She gripped the straps of her thermal delivery bag, the familiar weight of unclaimed sweet-and-sour pork cartons and egg fried rice grounding her. The anonymous text had been specific: *Bring the leftovers to the center of the Richmond grove at midnight. Come alone, or the debt doubles.* Rory didn't owe anyone a penny, unless she counted the student loans from Cardiff she had abandoned along with her pre-law degree, yet the text had included a photo of the back staircase leading up to her flat above Silas' bar. You didn't ignore a threat that knew where you slept. She walked deeper into the clearing. The canopy overhead knit together so tightly it choked out the London sky, yet a sour, bruised-purple twilight filtered through the branches. Against her collarbone, the Heartstone Pendant shifted. The thumbnail-sized crimson gem sat on its silver chain, usually cool against her skin. Right now, it held a low, rhythmic warmth. A slow heartbeat that didn't match her own. A Hel portal was near, or something wearing the scent of one. *Snap.* Rory stopped. Her bright blue eyes scanned the perimeter. The sound hadn't come from the underbrush. It had come from directly above her. She tilted her head back. The oak branches were bare of birds or squirrels, twisting into the purple gloom like arthritic fingers. Nothing moved. Not a single leaf trembled in the stagnant air. She lowered her gaze, and the peripheral vision on her left snagged on a shift in the geometry of the trees. One of the boundary markers—a petrified oak pillar carved with weather-worn spirals—stood three paces closer to the center of the clearing than it had thirty seconds ago. Rory stared at its deeply grooved bark. Moss clung to its northern face, slick and black in the dim light. It was an inanimate hunk of ancient wood. Yet the turf at its base looked freshly torn, dark soil heaped against its side like the wake of a ship. "I brought the food." Rory set the insulated Golden Empress bag onto a patch of vibrant yellow buttercups. She kept her tone level, the cool-headed cadence her barrister father had drilled into her at the dinner table. "Show yourself, take the bags, and we're square." From the northern treeline came a wet, rhythmic clicking. *Tak-tak-tak.* Like fingernails drumming against teeth. Rory pivoted toward the sound, slipping her hand into her jacket pocket to wrap her fingers around her keys, threading the jagged brass teeth between her knuckles. The clicking stopped the instant she faced it. Directly behind her, silk dragged across wet grass. She spun. Empty meadow. The wildflowers stood undisturbed, save for the path she had trampled on her way in. Except her path was gone. The crushed bluebells had righted themselves, standing tall and unbroken, erasing her footprints back to the boundary stones. And the boundary stones didn't form a circle anymore. They formed a jagged crescent, crowding the southern edge of the grove as if herding her north. Beneath her shirt, the crimson pendant flared hot. Not a warning pulse—a burn. A faint, deep-red luminescence bled through the fabric of her dark jumper, casting a thumbprint of light onto her throat. Rory tucked her chin, pulling the silver chain over her head to wrap it around her palm. The gem throbbed against her lifelines, its inner glow illuminating the small crescent scar on her wrist. *"...late..."* The word didn't travel through the air; it vibrated up through the soles of her boots, rattling the bones of her ankles. It sounded like two flat stones grinding together underwater. "Your text said midnight." Rory backed up a step, aiming for the center of the clearing where she had left the red thermal bag. Her heel struck nothing. She glanced down. The delivery bag was twenty feet to her right, sitting near the base of an oak tree whose trunk was split down the middle in a wide, vertical yawn. The gap in the wood was pitch-black. As she watched, the edges of the bark flexed. In, out. Breathing. Something pale and multi-jointed slipped back into the darkness of the hollow just as her focus landed on it. Not a hand. The proportions were wrong—too many knuckles, bending backward to grip the inside of the wood. Rory didn't run. Running triggered the chase instinct in predators, and whatever shared this pocket realm with her was already playing with its food. She kept her breathing shallow, drawing the air through her nose to avoid the copper-peach stench thickening in the grove. Her straight black hair brushed her shoulders as she turned in a slow, deliberate circle, refusing to give any quarter of the woods her back for more than two seconds. The wildflowers around her ankles began to turn. Their blossoms twisted on their stems, tracking her movement like miniature satellite dishes, even though there was no sun to follow. *Tak-tak-tak.* To her left. Ten feet away. Rory snapped her head around. A shadow detached itself from the base of an oak stone—not cast by any light source, just a two-dimensional smear of blackness across the bright petals. As her gaze hit it, it froze, flattening itself against the grass to mimic the shade of the canopy above. "I don't play games." Rory raised her left hand, letting the crimson glow of the Heartstone spill between her fingers. "You pulled me in here. Step into the light." A giggle answered her. It was her own voice. It came from the hollow tree on the right, using the exact inflection she had used two nights ago when joking with Silas over a pint. *"Step into the light,"* the tree parroted, the mimicry warping at the end into that wet, clicking rattle. The air temperature plummeted. Rory’s breath plumed white, hanging in front of her face like a solid veil instead of dissipating. Through the frost of her own exhale, she saw the standing stones shift again. She caught the motion this time—a jerky, frame-by-frame stutter, like a film reel missing half its celluloid. One blink, they were thirty feet away; the next, fifteen. The clearing was shrinking. The ancient oaks were marching inward, closing the pocket between Earth and the Fae realm with her inside the seam. In the corner of her right eye, a tall figure stood among the buttercups, neck bent at a ninety-degree angle so its ear rested flat against its shoulder. Rory turned her eyes without turning her head. Nothing there but a twisted hawthorn bush. Yet the branches at the top were woven together in a dense, dark knot that hadn't been there a minute ago, shaped unmistakably like a tilted head. Drops of clear, viscous fluid dripped from the lowest twigs, sizzling faintly where they hit the grass. The Heartstone seared her palm, the silver chain biting into her skin as her fist tightened. Beneath the grass, the earth gave a slow, peristaltic heave, like the throat of a swallowing beast.
created_at"2026-10-13T16:37:42.516Z" 10/13/2026, 4:37:42 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.625
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.16% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1303
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
46.28% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1303
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"rhythmic"
count2
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"scanned"
count1
7
word"gloom"
count1
8
word"trembled"
count1
9
word"silk"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
11
word"throbbed"
count1
12
word"vibrated"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"silence"
2"familiar"
3"weight"
4"rhythmic"
5"warmth"
6"scanned"
7"gloom"
8"trembled"
9"silk"
10"pulse"
11"throbbed"
12"vibrated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences99
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords26
totalWords1297
ratio0.02
matches
0"Bring the leftovers to the center of the Richmond grove at midnight. Come alone, or the debt doubles."
1"Snap."
2"Tak-tak-tak."
3"\"...late...\""
4"Tak-tak-tak."
5"\"Step into the light,\""
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
98.41% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount1260
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.03
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park1
London2
November1
Rory13
Cardiff1
You1
Heartstone3
Pendant1
Hel1
Golden1
Empress1
Like1
Silas1
Earth1
Fae1
persons
0"Rory"
1"You"
2"Heartstone"
3"Pendant"
4"Silas"
5"Earth"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"November"
4"Cardiff"
globalScore0.984
windowScore1
83.33% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if herding her north"
1"sounded like two flat stones grinding toge"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1297
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean30.88
std22.71
cv0.735
sampleLengths
017
173
228
31
414
598
628
749
81
99
1047
1121
1276
1345
1415
1527
168
178
1842
1926
2033
2134
221
2331
2424
257
2648
2737
2874
2929
301
316
3251
3329
349
3544
3662
3724
3828
398
4051
4133
98.17% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences99
matches
0"was gone"
1"were woven"
98.99% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs198
matches
0"was already playing"
1"was shrinking"
2"were marching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences103
ratio0.078
matches
0"Beneath the soles of her shoes, the petals didn't just bruise; they released a thick, cloying scent of overripe peaches mixed with copper."
1"One of the boundary markers—a petrified oak pillar carved with weather-worn spirals—stood three paces closer to the center of the clearing than it had thirty seconds ago."
2"Not a warning pulse—a burn."
3"The word didn't travel through the air; it vibrated up through the soles of her boots, rattling the bones of her ankles."
4"The proportions were wrong—too many knuckles, bending backward to grip the inside of the wood."
5"A shadow detached itself from the base of an oak stone—not cast by any light source, just a two-dimensional smear of blackness across the bright petals."
6"She caught the motion this time—a jerky, frame-by-frame stutter, like a film reel missing half its celluloid."
7"One blink, they were thirty feet away; the next, fifteen."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount242
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"pale, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount7
adverbRatio0.028925619834710745
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean12.59
std8.64
cv0.686
sampleLengths
017
14
223
34
419
523
613
715
81
98
106
1123
1218
1347
1410
156
1622
177
1814
198
208
2112
221
232
247
257
267
275
2817
292
309
3121
3227
337
3413
358
3621
3718
3819
398
409
416
4227
438
448
452
462
4715
485
4918
62.46% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.39805825242718446
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners41
36.63% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"Directly behind her, silk dragged"
ratio0.011
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences91
matches
0"It plugged her ears."
1"She swallowed to pop them,"
2"She checked the watch above"
3"Her voice dropped dead inches"
4"She gripped the straps of"
5"You didn't ignore a threat"
6"She walked deeper into the"
7"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
8"It had come from directly"
9"She tilted her head back."
10"She lowered her gaze, and"
11"It was an inanimate hunk"
12"She kept her tone level,"
13"They formed a jagged crescent,"
14"It sounded like two flat"
15"Her heel struck nothing."
16"She glanced down."
17"She kept her breathing shallow,"
18"Her straight black hair brushed"
19"Their blossoms twisted on their"
ratio0.253
91.87% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences91
matches
0"Rory stepped between the ancient"
1"Silence hit her first."
2"It plugged her ears."
3"She swallowed to pop them,"
4"She checked the watch above"
5"The second hand twitched backward,"
6"Her voice dropped dead inches"
7"The air refused to carry"
8"She gripped the straps of"
9"The anonymous text had been"
10"You didn't ignore a threat"
11"She walked deeper into the"
12"The canopy overhead knit together"
13"The thumbnail-sized crimson gem sat"
14"A slow heartbeat that didn't"
15"A Hel portal was near,"
16"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
17"The sound hadn't come from"
18"It had come from directly"
19"She tilted her head back."
ratio0.736
54.95% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"To her left."
ratio0.011
80.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She swallowed to pop them, her boots crushing bluebells and wild primroses that had no business blooming in November."
1"Rory pivoted toward the sound, slipping her hand into her jacket pocket to wrap her fingers around her keys, threading the jagged brass teeth between her knuckl…"
2"They formed a jagged crescent, crowding the southern edge of the grove as if herding her north."
3"Yet the branches at the top were woven together in a dense, dark knot that hadn't been there a minute ago, shaped unmistakably like a tilted head."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
88.0666%